'Kashmakash' (Poetry: Kasturi POV)

Hey guys, while observing the dilemma surrounding Kasturi I came up with some lines...

Kashmakash (Dilemma)

Teeh jinse hassi in labon pe,

Looti unhi honton ne har wajah musqurane ki…

Tah jin bazuon mein zindagi ka sapna humara,

Bikher diya unhi panhon ne haqeeqat ka fasana…

Mili hai joh nazar us dil-e-musafir se aaj phir,

Toh kyun nighaon pe pada na girayee koi…

Translation (Rough)

Due to whom there was laughter on these lips,

Seized away those very lips, every reason to smile…

In whose embrace was the dream of life,

The same arms scattered the hopes of reality…

Now meeting eyes with that one who once strode in the seas of love once again,

Why won't someone please drop a veil over the gaze...

Cheers,

dc

Excellent!! Very well said. 👏 👏

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Excellent!! Very well said. 👏 👏

Thank you!😛

Cheers,

dc

neetu very well penned down... 😊

so much depth in these lines and heart touching too..

love this bit..."Mili hai joh nazar us dil-e-musafir se aaj phir,

Toh kyun nighaon pe parda na girayee koi''…

just marvellous and so apt for kasturi's dilemna she is going through ..

your title "kasmakash"suits perfectly and one which will be very dificult for kasturi to sort out "aur shayad kasturi dil ki baat nah maan le iss baar"...

kudos to you neetu for this beautiful poem... 👏

Damn girl........im impressed.....loved it....totally amazing....i heard this type of poetry only in films but wow g8 .......wish you all the best and do write more.. 😊

neetu i luved ur piece as usual!U and sareeta di have a such an excellent talent dat u every word word and phrase touchs a reader's heart and inner soul.neetu ur writing and expecially da words u always choose r excellent and meaningful words which make ur poetry so special and full of depth. 😊
i luv ur piece it totally relates to da delimna kkastauri's is in at the current moment weather 2 listen to her heart or her mind, and to scrafice her luv 4 her family's happiness or find her own happiness in her parents happiness.Especially da title also definately suits da piece and kasturi's state of mind at the moment! 😊

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Neetu keep striving 4 excellence and keep up da gud work! 👏

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haila.. dii kya baat hai,you have beautifully captured kasturi's kashmaksh...

bravo!! 👏

Wow yaar, u hv such a wonderful talent... U shud try for creatives in Ekta's office... Its really very gud.. Iam not able to believe tat there is so much talent in I-F... Really great 👏 👏 👏

Hope to c more of ur stuff 😛 😛 😛

Krishi

awesome yaar. I so love poetry like this that touches the deapth of one's soul...and what a choice of words...wow. Just mindblowing.👏 👏 👏

JC

Originally posted by: 3 angels

neetu very well penned down... 😊

so much depth in these lines and heart touching too..

love this bit..."Mili hai joh nazar us dil-e-musafir se aaj phir,

Toh kyun nighaon pe parda na girayee koi''…

just marvellous and so apt for kasturi's dilemna she is going through ..

your title "kasmakash"suits perfectly and one which will be very dificult for kasturi to sort out "aur shayad kasturi dil ki baat nah maan le iss baar"...

kudos to you neetu for this beautiful poem... 👏

Khayatz,

You're such a sweet soul... thanks for the lovely words... Yes, there is the lingering possiblity that her father's faith in her will override the still towering love she cherishes for her beloved... Lets see what happens.

Cheers,

dc