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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rupalpanchotiya

Plzz Update soon..it's d only way we can connect wd ragna...


Sorry for delay dear... but I had some personal work.. will try to update today. I know this stories are the only way we can stay connected to our RagNa.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rubz1234

Too good ya update soon.



Thanks Rubz. Will try to update today.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee

Had read the update long back ... but commenting now !

I seriously admire ur writing ... Like i always tell u .. it literally pierces through the heart !
This 1 was another example of it ...I simply loved it !!
Kalpana knows Raghav so well... that phone call was mushy ... but thats theway of ur vicious Kalpana😉😉
Poor Raghav & Kalpana ... victims of sefish Paakhi's treachery ... stayed away from each other thinking that the other ditched him/her.
The secret room scene was great as well...
Waiting foer the next part desperately as this is 1 ff which is beyond my predictions. & being unpredictable is a compliment ... isnt it ??😉
Continue asap
MARUSHKAA


Thanks Marushka.. M really happy to know that u like my writing. It motivates me to write more.

Kalpi truly knows Raghav in and out... she knows her anger and that's y used that phone call.

I won't say poor Raghav... it was he who brought Pakhi in their life.

Will try to update soon n i hope it stays unpredictable as almost all of u guessed about Pakhi being the culprit.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singhania

Hi Vish, 1st time Im commenting, its really wonderful👏. Guess Khushi is Sheetals daughter & not Raakhi's😈. Paakhi plays with the lives of so many innocent people to get Rags😡 but Im glad Rags was & will NEVER be hers. RagNa will ALWAYS be❤️❤️. Now that Rags is aware of what Kalpi went thru, he will surely make the culprit pay for it and Paakhi better prepared her...🤬 for the outcome. The mystery of Saahil's death still remains & without doubt its Paakhi's doing. Something beautiful in this story is Sammys friendship to Rags as well as Prem's to Kalpi & RagNa's luv as well as Prem's & Maria. Plz PM me coz it seems the story will soon end & I dont want to miss it. Thx👍🏼


Thank u dear... btw what should i call u??

No comments on Khushi.. 😉

The evil never wins so Pakhi can't get Raghav. Rags is back to his revenge mode but this time it's on Pakhi...

Sahil's murder mystery will solve in an update or two.

I will pm u for sure... but there is a small issue. u might get pm of my all FFs n not only this one. I hope it doesn't bother u.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rishiba

I really love all ur stories they r full of thrill pls update soon eagerly waiting


Thank u dear.. m really glad to know this. Will try to update today.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys...sorry for mistakes as u know I am really trying hard to take out time for this updates and can't proof read it... expect lots of mistake though I will try to correct them tomorrow.
My exam date is out n it's on 12th oct so I might not be able to give update till than or if i get time than it will be shorter update... hope u guys understand. Once again sorry for mistakes.

Kalpi reaches Prem's farm house... Maria and Prem are playing there with Pari.. kalpi greets them and gives chocolate to Pari.. Maria's mom takes her inside and Kalpi starts telling everything to Prem.

"Ok... I agree Rags is innocent in ur case but what about my father's murder" He asked angrily.

"We have to find the culprit and I want to show u something..." She said while showing him the mobile screen. Prem looks at them carefully.

"This are just few lines and digits "or alphabets all scattered... what m I suppose to understand from it??" Prem asked in confusion.

She holds his hand and drags him to the room which was specially designed for their official meetings. Maria too follows them.

"Give me a minute." Kalpi said while connecting her mobile with projector...which was projecting the pictures of her mobile on the white board kept for presentation. She takes out the marker and circles few digits on the picture she captured.

"Look at this four digit... though it is scattered but if u look closely than will see it's sequence... See the first left digit is 2 than coming to right 1, 0, 8. So it's 2108" She said while writing it in the corner of the board. She changes the image and circles the same digits in every picture.

"Look Prem... this four digits are repeating in each picture with the same.. Now let me show u some images as well." She said while opening the first image..

"Look at the image on top of this digit... It has a rectangle and few circles inside it... n this two round switches on the top. Doesn't it looks like some camera?? N look at other images... The box with two wheels... just like the truck... And this child like sketch of a man and women... Doesn't it indicate a whole story Prem?? It looks like something is stuck in aunty's mind which she is not able to convey and trying to say through this pictures... See this particular picture... here the man has beard... may be it's of the driver who caused the accident. " She said while pointing the same pattern in the images.

"Yes... u r ryt. I dint notice it. Whenever I went to meet mom she murmured "All is a lie.. that was not accident..he was murdered" and she has drawn this images so it surely has some connection with it.May be it's the same truck driver who killed my dad,But how mom knows this??" He asked.

"May be aunty saw the accident and remembered the number. Now in this condition as well she is not able to forget it??." Maria said.

"No, it's not possible... Mom was with me that day n if mom had knew about it than she might have informed me or the cops in the interrogation. Mom wasn't in such bad condition just after the incident." Prem said.

"Then how come aunty knows about it and why she drew camera on the wall and what that number is about."

"May be, it's the truck number." Prem said.

"But we might find 1000 trucks with same 4 digits.. How to find which one was that." Kalpi said.

"We can try our luck in Mumbai RTO... To our luck it may have Mumbai registration." Prem replied.

"In mumbai only we will find more than one truck n we won't be able to identify the driver... I don't think it's a good idea." Kalpi said.

"U guys r missing one thing... what about the camera?? May be aunty has some evidence in form of photograph or video... n we need to find that." Maria said.

"I think Maria is correct...we need to find this camera." Kalpi said.

"But where it will be?? If there is such evidence than I must find it out... But where to search??" Prem said in confusion..

"Prem remember the happenings of the day when Neetu aunty fell sick for the first time... The day when she fainted and yelled at Raghav. Tell us everything from the start, we might find some clue." Kalpi said.

"It was Khushi's naming ceremony.. she was just 15 days old... Dad had died some 4months back... Everything was back to normal.. mom was trying to cope with changed situation.. That day mom went for purchasing Khushi's dress. She took Dad's car.. I told her not to but she insisted that she want to use the same car in which Dad sat for the last time...She returned back in some 20 mins without the dress... she was very disturbed and went to her room. I understood that she was missing my dad so dint disturb her and gave her some time alone... Mom texted me to meet her but the guests have arrived so I replied that I will meet after the ceremony... I was playing with khushi who was lying in the cradle.. I hold her in my arms n realized that she had wet her clothes so I looked around for Pakhi but she was no where to be seen... Just then mom came down the stairs.. Raghav enters the house at the same moment.. n mom yelled at him saying, "he was my husband and how could u do this to him". After saying this she fainted. I looked at Pakhi who was standing behind Raghav and told her to take her to the bedroom." Prem said while remembering the day.. his eyes were filled with tears. Kalpi notices this and extends her hand to soothe his pain but before she can reach him... she sees Maria placing her hand on Prem's shoulder. Kalpi smiles on looking this and feels happy on realizing that Prem is not alone now. Prem places his palm on Maria and looks at Kalpi angrily and yells... "Now u tell me... Why mom pointed finger at Rags... coz he is the murderer."

Kalpi though for a while and recalls all what Prem just shared with her. "Pakhi was standing just behind Raghav... May be Neetu aunty was yelling at her." She said.

"What the hell Kalpi... just to prove ur love innocent u r blaming my sister... why will she kill her father." Prem yelled at her.

"Prem I mean... I dint... I just want to.." Kalpi stutters while replying..

"Actually she can. When she can plan the fake abortion n make my mom mentally ill than she can do anything" Prem said on realizing his folly of yelling at kalpi. "But y do u think Raghav is innocent??" He askd.

"Coz for Raghav death is an easy punishment n he never wanted to kill ur father... all he wanted was to destroy u and ur family. He can't kill ur father for revenge... If he wanted to kill ur father than he would not have married Pakhi just for revenge." Kalpi replied. Prem nods in yes while Maria trying to understand as she is still not aware of this angle.

"Prem... U said aunty went for shopping but came without purchasing anything... that day only she blamed.." Maria dint took anyone's name as she doesn't want to hurt Prem or kalpi again.

"It think we should check it. But for that we have to go home as no one is using that car now n it's in the garage." He said.

Maria and Kalpi nods in yes... Maria tells her mom to take care of Pari till she returns ad all of them leave the place in Prem's car.

Raghav who has returned to his Singhania mansion is waiting for Kalpi.. he looks at his watch and murmurs, "Where she is?? I hope she is fine... so much happened with her and she dint share it with me.. How could she think that I was responsible for it?? But this Pakhi... she is responsible for everything... god know how she would have felt on seeing me with Pakhi. That day when she came to meet me.. I was so drunk.. I do not know what she might have went through on seeing me with Pakhi.. " He thought. A tear fell down from his eyes on remembering what all Pakya said about the day. "I have to tell Kalpi about my innocence... I need to talk to her... I need to share the pain which she has hidden in her heart... I have noticed the change in Kalpi but gosh.. I failed to read the pain in her eyes. But why will she share it with me?? Why will she trust me?? N who is the guy with whom she talks on the phone... Has she really moved on??" Raghav felt restless on remembering the conversation she had on the call. He feels something pierced in his heart.. He doesn't know what is hurting him the most.. the pain which Kalpi went through or his absence when she needed him the most or the fact that someone else is there in her life.

Pakhi who has noticed Raghav pacing in his room gets furious on realizing that he is waiting for Kalpi... She has seen him asking maid about kalpi more than twice.. she fumes and takes out her cell to call someone.

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Maria, Prem and Kalpi reaches Kapoor mansion... Prem guides them to the garage where the car was parked... they start searching the car... Maria opens the hood and looks into the bootspace while Prem was searching in the front seat.. Kalpi was moving around the car in circle..

"There is a hidden camera on the interior rear view mirror of the car." Prem exclaimed... he looks at the takes it out... a thin wire was attached to it which was going to the roof and hidden inside the car lining... Prem follows it and finds a device attached below the back light which has one memory card slot inside... "Someone has taken out the memory card of the camera" He yelled in anger.

"It must be Neetu aunty... I am sure this is the evidence we are searching for." Maria said while calming him.

Kalpi was silent throughout and watching wipers very keenly.. Prem and Maria wonders what s catching her attention... kalpi takes the closer look of the wiper and finds another camera attached to it... she follows the thin wire and finds another device attached below the car body which is paraller to front tire... The wire was easily hidden coz it was painted in the color of car and was too thin to notice. She takes out the device and the memory card is missing from it as well.

"PRem... I think 2 cameras were installed in the car... one to capture the inside view while other for capturing the front. Do u know anything about it?? I mean was ur dad's life on stake or someone was spying on him??" Kalpi asked while showing them the device she got.

"I do not know Kalpi but I think the memory cards are in mom's room only... I think we should find it there." Prem said while running towards his mother's room. Kalpi and Maria follows him. Ther search the entire room.. Prem opens all the closets and throws the stuff on the floor but he finds nothing... Maria searches the drawers and side tables while kalpi looks around the shelves which had some books and decorative items... After sometimes they feel exhausted.

"I do not think memory card is here." Maria said while sitting on the bed. In anger prem blows his fist on the wall... the photo hanged on it falls down... They notice a security locker hidden behind it..

"So this is the little secret of ur parents. I am sure aunty has kept the memory cards in it only.Now punch the secret code." Kalpi said while smiling.

"I do not know it's code... I wasn't aware of its existence." Prem said in a worried tone.

"Then guess it... it must be some special date or number which u r aware of. May be ur mom and dad's wedding anniversary or birthday." Maria said.

"No that would be easy to guess... I think it will be something which no one apart from them can guess..." Kalpi said.

"2108... 21 and 8.. mine and Pakhi's birthday date... ohh yes... mom gave us the clue.. The password is 2108.. That was not a truck number but the password of this locker." Prem said while punching it. Locker opens... It has a little cash few files and a small plastic box.. Prem takes out the plastic box and finds two memory cards in it.. They sighs breath of relief. Prem takes out his laptop and card reader and attaches memory card with it... The one worked perfectly fine which had the clipping of Saahil driving the car and talking on the phone regarding some project.. he fast forwards it and watches the clip of next 2 n half hours in half only.. but all the time it was either showing Sahil driving or the empty car.

"I think u should attach the second memory card.. " Kalpi said. Prem nods in yes and tries to open the video of 2nd card n feels disappointed on reading the screen.. "Unknown error, the device u r attaching is corrupted."

"What will we do now??" Prem said in disappointed tone.

"Data recovery tool... We can purchase data recovery tool and extract the data from the card." Maria said. She snatches the laptop from Prem and browse the data recovery tool saying, "Don't worry, last year my hard disk crashed and I had used this option to recover the data... it might takes few hours but I am sure we will be able to retrieve it."

"Few hours??" Kalpi asked.

"Kalpi... have patience... when god has brought us here than he will help us further." Prem said while keeping his arm around her and making her sit beside him on the bed. Kalpi looks at Maria who was looking uneasy while staring at them.. she gets up and leaves the room while Prem helps maria in purchasing the software.

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Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update!!! Kalpi is finding many things now to prove Raghav's innocent and Raghav feeling restless for Kalpi which is interesting. Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏👏
Gosh I just love the way you have led us through the clues... U r an awesome writer... Mwah

I look forward to the final unveiling... Omg who did Pakhi call... Please let Kamla not be on it... I hope Pakhi has not emotionally blackmailed her or threatened her... Ooh can't wait for the next update... Take ur time no rush...

Gosh I could go on gushing😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update Vish!! 👏
Love the way ur unraveling the story... I simply love crime thrillers...
Will be w8ing for the update...

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