SanDhir FF ll Don't Let Me Go ll Part 1 - Pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanku 😊
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Helloes, Hi, Namastey all my buddies and Mitras 😃 😃 Sorry for this late update 😳 Kya hai ki SH Engagement Special Episode dekhne ke baad mere brain temporary holiday pe chali gayi thi 😆 😆 Isiliye itni late ho gayi update karne mein 😳 😳 And since now it is back here is the 1st part 😃 😃 Enjoy reading 😃 😃

One more thing... No proof read 😳 😳


PART - 1



Sanyukta hit the 'like' button and commented on the update and checked the profile of the new member... To her surprise Sanyukta find out the Newbie was a guy which was very rare on IF... His name was RD...

"That's interesting" she whispered... Curiosity took over her... This would be the first time she found a guy on IF that too an amazing writer... Sanyukta decided to know him little more than his name and brilliant writing quality...

She sent him a scrap... 'Hi' and waited for a reply...

"Hi Saani" He replied back after a few seconds...

"How do you know my name??" 😲 Sanyukta asked and realized it was a silly question... She knows his name too... But never mind, he won't kill her for asking such a silly question...

"Everyone in SH forum knows your name" 😊 He replied...

Sanyukta chuckled reading his reply... Well, that's quite true... She has lots of friends and more than 300 buddies in her buddy list... Her birthday thread on the forum few days back was a big success... She possesses an inborn quality of making friends and spreading happiness everywhere...

"I'm sure everyone will know yours too soon... You're a very good writer" 😊 Sanyu replied...

RD: "Thanks a lot" 😳...

Sanyu: "So RD what's your name??"...

RD: "Lolz!! 😆 You remind me of Big B's dialogue from Sholay... Tumhara naam kya hai Basanti' 😆 You're asking me the same question!! What's your name RD??"

Sanyu: "Very funny 😆 But RD can't be your real name... It must be some short form of your name"...

RD: "Umm actually yes but you can call me RD only" 😳

Sanyu: "Okies"

She didn't ask him or force him guessing he wasn't comfortable sharing his real name... Anyways what's in a name?? Even she has never revealed her real name in the forum... No one knows her as Sanyukta; everyone knows her as Saani... She decided to change the topic...

"You know something RD, you're the only guy in SH forum" She divulged this piece of info proudly...

RD: "I know, but not on IF"...

Sanyu: "And how do you know that??"

RD: "Coz I became aware of this site through a friend and he is a guy"...

Sanyu: "That's something new to me" 😲

RD: "How come??"

Sanyu: "I didn't know guys watches daily soaps too coz in my class every boys believe daily soaps are meant for girls and aunties" 😡

RD: "Umm well to be honest me too felt the same but SH is different... It's about engineering and it's my dream too"...

Sanyu: "Really?? It's my dream too... Even I wanna study ME" 😃

RD: "That's gr8... So in which grade are you now??"

Sanyu: "10th, and you??"

RD: "Me too"...

Sanyu: "Wow we have a lot of similarities" 😃

RD: "Lot of similarities??" 😕

Sanyu: "Okies ri8 now there are only 3... SH, ME and 10th grade... But I'm sure we will find out some more soon"...

RD: "Btw I can give you another similarity ri8 now"...

Sanyu: "Really what is it??" 😃

RD: "Since both of us are in 10th grade, our board exams will commence after 1 month" 😆

That brought back Sanyukta from her IF world and she checked the time at the corner of her lappy... It showed 9.32 pm... Shit!!! She had promised herself not to spend so much time on IF this one month but keeps forgetting her own promise everyday... Time to logoff... Sanyukta scrapped once more...

Sanyu: "Umm RD I guess I'll have to leave now... Thank you so much for reminding me about exams" 😆

RD: "Lolz!! Sure" 😆

Sanyu: "Bye then... TC"...

Sanyukta was about to logout when something strikes her... RD said he will be updating soon!! How come he update soon if he has exams only after one month... She decided to ask him and scraped back...

Sanyu: "RD when will you update the next part??"...

RD: "Maybe day after tomorrow"...

Sanyu: "But you've your board exams too!! How you are gonna write the updates leaving your study??"

IF wasn't Skype or else Sanyukta could have seen the smirk that appeared on his face reading the question that she had just asked him...

RD: "I'm all prepared for my exams Saani, so don't worry... I've always been the Rank no 1... Cya, bye"...

"Rank no 1!!" Sanyukta thought in her mind... "Even I'm Rank no 1 in my class"...

Sanyukta smiled while signing out from IF and kept her laptop aside... But his thoughts failed to leave her mind...

He is the 1st guy she had met on IF...

He watches a daily soap unlike the boys from her class who keeps taunting the girls about their interest in silly fictional characters and the actors...

He is still the class topper and an equally amazing writer...

What quality else does he possess Sanyukta wondered!! She felt a tug of curiosity towards this RD...

She had lots of queries maybe because this would be the first time she was meeting a guy who was different from the other general guys whom she knew...

Brushing away his thoughts from her mind Sanyukta tried to concentrate on her studies...

At the same time in Shimla a boy of fourteen was sitting alone on the terrace of a posh bungalow with his laptop... He had his earphone put on that was playing Sorry seems to be the hardest word...

"Randhir Baba" an old man called him from behind... "Dinner is served"...

"Where is Mom and Dad??" Randhir asked taking out his earphone...

"Saab and Memsaab are busy now"...

"I'm coming in 5 minutes Kaka"... He replied to which the old man nodded and left...

Busy!! Randhir smirked hearing this word... He knows exactly what they must be busy with... Fighting as if they were each other's biggest enemy... He was feeling better till now on the terrace chatting with an unknown girl...

Randhir smiled recollecting his first chat session with that girl while collecting his laptop and other belongings... He prefers to be alone on the terrace everyday only to avoid his parents but today he was actually feeling happy...

And the reason was Saani... Randhir remembered her name... But at the same time he was sure it wasn't her real name... She was hiding her name too just like him... Randhir smiled recollecting her words about finding out more similarities between them, seems like he had find out another similarity just like she had wanted...


Okeis I know it's boring 🥱 Kahan tha na mere brain chhutti manaying 😆

Jo bhi ho is Chudail ke boring update pe hi cmnt kardo kuch bhi 😳 😳

Love - Soniya aka Chudail 🤗

Edited by -Isabella- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing concept chudail di😆😳
Loved it till core...especially sandhir IF talks😉
Beautifully written...wanna read more⭐️
Update soon n thnxx for pm

Moi waiting for future updates😛

Love
Neha❤️
Edited by Fairystar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey... its a unique concept and intresting also..
Plz accept my buddy request and update soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!! I still don't believe that I'm unreserving it now... Damn it! I'm so late!!
Khair meri bakwaas baaton ko maaro goli... Coming to the update.

Now, this is certainly interesting that I've read for the first time in any fiction. The idea of promoting a fiction in the fiction itself is indeed a very uniquely innovative method.
The prologue had me laughing fits while chapter 1 had me thinking.
Portrayal of SanDhir's characters is beautiful with the flavours from the show intact making the fiction more adorable. Yes, adorable, the story is very cute. Atleast, I felt so.
Hmmm... It'll be interesting to see SanDhir's recations when they meet..
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Do update this soonish!!

Regards
Keya
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: shwetarandhirho

Hey... its a unique concept and intresting also..

Plz accept my buddy request and update soon😛

Thanku 😃 buddy req accepted 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg !! Firstly hell annoyed with u ...u did nt pm me the prologue 😭But koi baat nai ...firstly omg itna acha concept yr ..isme like parsh are the onscreen couple in sadda haq and sandhir in real life 😆That's very interesting 😉...and if haan interesting..very interesting ...vaise i wonder agr sachin mai kisi ko if pe aisa koi ladka mil jaye 🤣But srsly i m in luv vid dis ff ...m telling u updte soon plzzz ' puppy face ' and thnq fr d pm ..😳 Aur haan agli baar mai first hongi ..dekh lena ⭐️
Edited by Sagl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Chudail tu pagal ho gi h Jo itni maast update ko boring keh ri h

I luved it
It was superb yr

Hmm rd sanyu ki frndship.ho gi bt dey both r hiding dere names
Rd kabhi ni bdalega waha b rank no.1

Sanyu too kbhi kbhi bhut silly behave krti h

Wtng for nxt
Update soon

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mainu pm kyun nai send kiya? 😔
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Amazing update behna 👏
ahaan chatting bhi start hogyi 😉
Dono Rank 1 😉
Hiding real names 😉
Tumhara naam kya hai Basanti 🤣
RD k parents yahaan bhi fighting..
Wanna read more...
Continue soon..
Here are my stars ⭐️⭐️.⭐️⭐️.⭐️5/5
Edited by Barbievishi20 - 10 years ago

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