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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story..👏.
love premeer scene
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one of the cutest and bst story i read in recent time <3 lovedthis.. pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tarannum6

Wiwww Superb update... i m in love with this story... reading again and again... plsss update soon...

Thank you !! 😃 It means a lot. will update very soon.🤗

Originally posted by: nauty168

Its was a reallyyy great update 👏
Wonderfulll nyccc now whats heer going to do 😉
And prems behaviour is superb ⭐️
And big thanks to spider 😛 even i hate spiders
Eeewww 😕

Thanks sweetie!
Haha yeahh thanks to the spider😆

Originally posted by: nauty168

Waiting for the next update plzzz
Zzz continue sooon

Thanks😃 Will do so soon! :)

Originally posted by: tarannum6

plsss update next part... 🤗

Soon sweetie! 🤗
Will soon sweetie!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

Lovely story..👏.

love premeer scene

Thank you darling!😃

Originally posted by: Alina...

one of the cutest and bst story i read in recent time <3 lovedthis.. pls continue

Thank you soo much year. Means a lot😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome update I'm just loving it .. plz update soon waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Meko nhi pta meko update chahiye bus...😒
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

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Hi 🤗 (Hello darling!❤️)

pg 6

It's just wow yaar it's too good. I could so imagine scenes as though watching live show.
Y'know when you started to describe Heer's activities at her house, I was expecting Prem's to walk in anytime,😆 (😆😉)
Tadaa - bell rang! Look who showed up.😎 This is totally cool. I was happy my instinct was right,😆 I think it's the way you wrote that made me think this way.😆 (lol, I had fun writing that bit)
Heer's thoughts are so hilarious.🤣 I bet Prem's noticed everything she did. (Prem notices everything related to Heer😉)
Wow there's gona be another date.😃 This rocks! Ok Prem couldn't ask her out bluntly so he used business dinner as excuse. I want yo know how this goes. Hope they enjoy this one.😃
Heer is seeing a diffeent face of Prem at her hosue - he offered to do dishes :P V friendly. This is a good start in their relationship. (We'll have to see how this pans out. will it be a disaster? will it be a success?)
Woah who new Heer's this scared of spider huh! (Eek Spiders🤢)
I had to say this - Prem's very caring in this scene. A 180 degree turn from the Boss whom we knew before. He was caring like Heer's mom. (I wanted show a kinder side of Prem. Heer usually see's a kadoos boss, so I wanted to show that this is completely different from what Heer is used too)
I was as confused as Heer when Prem mentioned about compliment as he was leaving her house.😕 (😆)
We got the answer in next scene woot!
Mr. Sexy's text - woah that was unexpected.😃 Poor Heer's shocked. I mean she had quite an eventful day and night! It was stressful/ tiring/shocking all in one.(bechari ke life main sab ulta ho raha hai😆)
Woohoo Heer's got nick name - Princess,❤️ Too sweet yaar. (Thank you!)
NK - Prem's character drastically changed from intro scene till now. Lot of unexpected things. However Heer is very consistent from beginning. Very interesting PH.(I want to keep Heer's character as consistent as possible..for the time being. Prem always had a soft side to him, he just never showed it. Heer brought out the happiness and life in him again.

I enjoyed reading it. Thank you. 🤗
Please don't forget to post next chapter in your other busy life.
Can't wait to read what happens in the office and then later at a party.😃
(Thank you SOOO much yaar! I always wait to read your comments! Love them!!😳🤗 I will upload very soon.) Thank you doll!❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: heena..

wow awesome update I'm just loving it .. plz update soon waiting for the next part...

Thank you henna! 😃

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Meko nhi pta meko update chahiye bus...😒

Bas abhi ho raha :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🤗Hello all you lovely people!!
I said one my first post that this is going to be a 3-4 shot story...but I'm going to add a few more shots. This next one is not as good as I wanted it. not a lot of Prem/Heer. but promise there will be lots in the next update😉.
Thank you to Every single person who read, liked, and commented on this. it really means a lot to me :)
Without further ado.. the next shot😃
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Time
The Pause

The next morning Heer got to the office extra early. She called the tow company and set up a time for them to pick up her car and take it to the auto body shop. She'd forgotten all about her broken car until she realized she didn't have a ride this morning. Catching the first taxi she could, she made it down to the office.

Her 2 main reasons for getting to the office so early: 1. she had tonnes of files pending that she wanted to get done. And 2. she was still pretty embarrassed that Prem found out her nick name for him and didn't know how to face him. She sighed, this wasn't the time to be lost in thought of Prem, and she had to finish her work. "Alright Heer, thinking about Mr. Sexy isn't going to finish these files any faster. Time to get to work!" she told herself.

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It was lunch time when Heer finished most of her files. She very impressed with herself. She decided to go for lunch. Picking up her bag she headed out the cabin to find Veera. She definitely didn't expect to see Veera chatting with Prem by her cabin door. Not wanting to face Prem just yet, Heer wondered whether she should just go back to her cabin.

Too late.

"Hey Heer!"Veera greeted cheerily.

"Hey Vee, Mr. Juneja" Heer smiled awkwardly.

"Hello," Prem smirked. "Ready for tonight's meeting Miss. Mann," he emphasized.

"Of course Mr. Juneja. I'm as ready as I ever will be." Heer countered back.

"Good," Prem's smirk grew. "You better be ready, you've had an extra day."

Heer glared, " Sorry sir, are you implying I'm usually not prepared for things?"

"Sometimes things happen, and they completely throw us off our feet...no matter much we've prepared for it," he said softly looking into Heer's eyes.

Heer stared back until, Veera cleared her throat.

Heer looked away clearly annoyed at herself for staring so shamelessly at her boss, in the office! Prem turned his gaze to the floor mumbling an excuse and walking away.

Veera followed Heer into her cabin and looked at her best friend with a suspicious smile. "So what was that back there? I thought I was going to have heat stroke."

"What are you blabbing about Vee?" Heer opened her lunch box and began eating

"You and Mr. Sexy!! What the hell was that? You guys were...dare I say...Flirting?!! That is if you can call it that."

Heer looked at her guilty, "I got to fill you in on some minor details."

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Prem walked around the entire office grinning like he won the lottery. He loved teasing Heer. The way her eyes got bigger, or the way her hand start to fiddle with the edge of her shirt. Prem especially loved it when Heer made shots back at him. The feistiness made him sigh dreamily.

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"MINOR DETAILS??!!" Veera yelled.

"Stop yelling," heer shushed.

"No! Way! In! Hell! OH wow. SO that confirms it Heer. He does like you!" Veera exclaimed jumping up.

"Will you relax," Heer said. "That great and all. But he's my boss Veera."

"So? I know you like him. Heer don't you dare turn him away. He really cares for you. I've been working for him for the past 4 years. I've never seen him the way he is before. He's happy, smiling, laughing. I know it's because of you. You think you don't understand him, but I think you understand him more than you give yourself credit for.

"I never said I liked him."

"You never denied it either."

There was silence between them as Heer thought about what Veera told her.

"Ask yourself Heer. Does he make you happy?" Veera asked softly. Not waiting to hear Heer's answer she walked out the door.

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Veera saw Prem standing around a group of interns. He was smiling, and laughing. He had a twinkle in his eye she never seen before. She had to do something. Her friend was hopeless in this matter, and her boss seemed just as clueless. Sighing she decided to do something about it.

1:03pm, Prem finally walked into his cabin after a great lunch break. He had wonderful people working in his office. They were very insightful and honest workers. He sat on his favorite chair and faced the computer when the door burst open.

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"Sorry for bursting in like this." Veera began. Closing the door behind her, she sat on the chair directly in front of Prem. "I have something very important to tell you."

"Miss. Rampal, is everything alright?" Prem asked concerned.

"How do I begin?" she paused. "She likes you too."

Prem was taken aback, "excuse me?"

"Heer, she likes you too. Yeah, I know what happened last night," Veer explained when she saw Prem open his mouth.

"Miss. Rampal, I don't believe this is appropriate to talk about. This is between me and Miss. Mann."

"If it's between the two of you, maybe you should do something about that," Veera countered back.

He silently studied her then, softly asked her, " I'm at a loss at how to deal with this. What do I say? I can't even tell her how much I care about her. When she didn't pick up any of my calls yesterday my heart just about stopped."

"What do you mean?"

"I was the one who moved the meeting to tonight. Because I was going to her house. I thought she need my help," Prem confessed

Veera softly smiled, "you did that?! Why haven't you told her?

Prem looked at her incredulously, "I can't exactly go to her and just tell her. Besides, I don't really want her to know anyway."

"Why not?" Veera sighed deeply.

"I don't know..." Prem trailed off. Prem looked at Veera, "What do I do?"

Veera smiled mischievously, "Well, now we're talking aren't we."

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"What are you smiling about?" Heer asked grumpily.

Veera was driving her home with a wide grin, "oh nothing. Heer, you think too much."

Heer threw her an uneasy glance. What is going in that head of hers?' She closed her eyes and leaned into the seat hoping to ease her busy mind.

"Heer! Heer, you're home," Veera shook her.

"Huh?!" Heer woke up with a start. "Thanks Vee," She got out and began walking away.

"Oye Heer!" Veera called back.

Heer turned her head.

"Call me when you get home after the meeting tonight," Veera giggled.

"Sure," she replied. Then added to herself, "If I don't fall asleep."

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Mr.Sexy: Be ready at 7pm. I'll be coming by to pick you up.

Heer: No thanks. I'm taking the taxi.

Mr.Sexy: right. So I'll see you at 7pm. Be ready on time Heer.

Heer groaned. It was so frustrating trying to deal with him.

Heer: Fine.

Mr.Sexy: :D

Heer: :@

Mr.Sexy: Are you swearing at your boss Miss. Mann??

Heer: Oh shut it.

Mr.Sexy: Haha

Heer threw her phone on the bed and went to change. She came back wearing her favorite dark blue business shirt and black skirt. Tying her hair up into a casual French bun, she completed her simple outfit with silver earrings and a pair of black stilettoes. Staring back at her in the mirror was a gorgeous woman that exuded confidence in her every step.

6:50pm, Heer kept checking up on her makeup and outfit making sure she looked just perfect. What is wrong with you Heer? You're getting ready for the meeting, not for Prem. Who cares what he thinks about? You got to concentrate on your work,' she thought.

7:00pm, the doorbell rang just as the clock struck 7pm. Heer jumped up, a little too enthusiastically, and opened the door. The teenage girl in her was having a hard time breathing. Men looked amazing in suits. Prem Juneja in a suit was a completely different category. He looked like he'd just walked off the ramp. His hair was gelled up again, he was wearing a Navy blue suit with a white shirt and navy blue tie. "Hi," Heer greeted.

"Hi," Prem greeted back. Prem had similar feelings brewing inside him, but he caught himself before Heer did. He smirked, "Checking me out Miss. Mann?"

Heer's jaw dropped at the comment, "Wha? Ha. No."

Prem's smirked grew wider, "hmm. I'll accept that answer for now." Unconsciously he admired her, staring shamelessly

Now, Heer smirked locking her door she turned around and faced him, "You'll have many moments to stare at me Mr. Juneja. But we should really be getting to the meeting," and walked away leaving a grinning and embarrassed Prem behind.
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So how was it?😳
Next update: the meeting, locked, and darkness😉😆
Love,
NK❤️
ps.. Im loving HC as Sahir ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi 🤗
pg 9 wow interesting title for the ch, I wondered what that meant.😛
😆 Heer now remembers her car needs to be fixed.😆
Glad she got her pending worl done.👍🏼
Hey Heer calls her friend Vee - that's so cute.😛 I loved it.
Hehe Prem's teasing Heer for getting ready in time. Me too like this feisty Heer and her replies. :P
Oh lol Veera is the Cupid - PH as always are duffers. They won't take initiative and always some has to push them.😆 I gotta say "the star of this ch is Veera". You created her so beautfullyl. Bubbly, caring, intelligent and a go getter.! What more anyone needs in a friend - PH are lucky to have her around.
Love the way Prem releases and confessed to Veera he is at a loss, I mean ppl don't usually admit that. Heer is confused and she's honest about this to Veera as well.
Prem has capable employees huh. Well that's great.
Veera noticed the change in Prem after Heer arrived at the office. Awesome!
I just love PH text scene. You always make this fun. 😎
So PH admired each other and Heer was nervous while getting ready. How about Prem?
Earlier when Veera drops off Heer, Heer was thinking she may fall in sleep in the business meeting. I guess due to her long hours at work. Veera was grinning so she knows something. Hmm
Wonder what will be next. Very excited. Please continue.
Thank you for the awesome ch.
Edited by AASUS - 11 years ago

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