New FF ~~Itna karo na mujhe pyar~~ part9 on pg32 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NAZIANISAR1

hmmm interesting update ... 😛

very different concept...👏
  pov is too good boss😆 n dhak dhak dhuk dhuk ki kaya baat hai🤣
update update jaldi type se😆... wailting 😊


Hehehe...han jaldi jaldi type se hi kr rhi hu...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

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Kiya tha phir bhi nhi hua..lets see is bar kya hota h...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neema.khudarath

very intresting...nice concept plzzz continue soon


Thank u sooo much...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akilagoud2

different & interesting story
nice update
all are actors
continue soon


Thank u sooo much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

awesome part...loved it


Thank u...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hellooo..woow.. ..m fatak se aa gyi dekho..as I hv gud reaponce..hehehe..kya kare yar..when u want to do smthing diffrent & people appreciate u..ur excitement level increased itself..lol..aur sabse mast wali encouragement thi..someone told me ... jb hero heroine nhi milte to prem kahaniya amar ho jati hai...hayeee ise bolte hain positivity...I like it...anyways..moving on update hope u all like it...marna mt yar na bhi pasand aye to :p ...

part 2

authors POV

things r going to b normal as they hv to work together. ..ram priya ke scene dosti se shuru ho kar pyar tak jane wale the..jbki krishna & sarika already a couple who make them (raya) comfortable with eachother...evrything is smoothly going with in nice atmosphere. .as ram is very funmaking person to sabhi aram se uske sath adjust ho gye..even priya too..she like his company. ..she laughed a lot on his pranks & jokes...she talk him lot...she easly prefer to go with him..as she thougt some time. ..how she can b so easy with him..but then she thought are kam karna h sath to easy to hona padega..ram is also vry involved in making her smile..he actually forgot her girlfrnd too..sometime he is seriously too much..fun krne me ye bhi bhul jata h ki uska anjam kya ho sakta h...khair wo intentionally aisa kuchh nhi krta h nature h uska masti krna...

but everything not as same as every time na...to jane kahan se ram ki girlfrnd tapak padi...


Ram's POV

"oh my god...she is super talented yar..I even forget every time that we r doing shooting. .god may b she dnt hv talent of reading minds. ..wrna tu to gya ram beta..." main ye soch hi rha tha priya ke bare me ki achanak pichhe se kisi ne mera nam pukara..jb mud kr dekha to meri girlfrnd thi...god I am soo socked..jiski awaz 247 mere kano me gunjti thi..aaj pehchan bhi nhi paya...I dnt understand exactly  what happens to me...khair gya m uske pas..she hugs me as always. .& I also but dnt know...feeling vry uncomfortable. ..she is very excited. ..talking too much about her feeling when I was not with her..but my mind was on thinking that what will I say to priya...

This is really a worst thing. ..I know mujhe aisa nhi sochna chahiye pr m ye kr nhi rha tha ye ho rha tha mere sath...abhi to m uljhan me tha hi ki tabse priya ko aate dekha..mujhe kuchh samjh nhi aa rha tha aur priya samne aakr khadi bhi ho gyi...ab hum teeno chup the...to priya ne hi puchh..."is she ur girlfrnd"...I replied. .."yes how u know that"..she said.."anyone cn..look at her excitement" & both r smiling. .but I am not...I am like duffr between them..again priya said "cmmon yar..dnt b shy..we already know that u hv girlfrnd...to ab kyun itne nakhre dikha rhe ho"...ufff ye ladki bhi na...yha mera deemag kam nhi kr rha h...aur ise masti sujh rhi hai...pta nhi m iske bare me itna soch rha hu aur ye tooo...gggrrr...

priya's POV

gooddd...itne thode dino me itni comfortable ho gyi m iske sath ki ye bhi bhul gyi that he has already a girl friend. ..m bewkuf jaise iski bato me uljhti ja rhi thi...aaj isko girlfriend ke sath dekha to bht bura laga mujhe man kiya jake puchhu hr kisi ke sath itna normal kaise rh pata h...kuchh feeling veeling hoti h ya nhi ise...but control kiya khud ko ab khadi hu inke samne aur smile kr kr ke bate kar rhi hu...damn kitna mushkil h dil aur deemag ko ek hi direction me rakhna wo bhi is situation me ki apka dil kuchh aur chahta h aur apka deemag kuchh aur kehta h...khair...we still continue ..

aaj ke shoot ke bad..unit walo ne chhota sa get together rakha tha as ram's grlfrnd is there. .to welcome party type se..inlogo ko to bas bahana chahiye kam ki thakan utarne aur enjoy karne ka...mera to bilkul jane ka man nhi tha..but as ram insists me to come. .to usko mna bhi nhi kar pati hu...to jana hi padega...

at party...

everyone is there...having lots of fun together. .pr priya ek taraf khadi thi..uski nazare ram pr thi...aur ram ki uspr...thodi der bad lights off ho jati h..sabhi pareshan hote hain tabhi priya ka hath pakadkar ram ek trf le jata h aur bolta h

ram...I need u

priya...what?

ram...iii...ii mean...I need ur help yar...glti se nikal gya..u know me na...

priya...god tum bhi na...to ye wha bhi to bol sakte the..aisd yha lane ki kya jarurat thi...

ram..are wha nhi bol sakta tha...

priya...achha theek h bolo kya chahiye...mtlb kya help chahiye..

ram...I hv doubt

priya...on what. ?

ram..on her yar

priya...gggrrr...whom?...clear bolo

ram...are meri girlfrnd yar..I thought she ditch me...

priya...kaise?

ram...yhi to pta krna h kuchh idea do na..

priya...are m kya idea du...m ye sb nhi janti...uski harkate notice karo peechha karo ya phone check karo whatevr I dnt know yar..

ram...hahaha...kya filmi ideas de rhi ho

priya...very funy actor hu na kya karu filmi ideas hi aate hain

ram exactly mean nhi kar rha tha ye bate...bas wo priya ka reaction dekhna chah rha tha..pta nhi kyun aajkl uski attention priya pr hi rhti h..dono bat hi kr rhe hote hain ki light aa jati h aur ram ki girfrnd bhi..

gf..aye tumlog yha kya kar rhe ho.?

ram...kuchh nhi search kr rhe the ki light ko kya hua...

priya..tumlog bate karo m aati hu

ram..are hum bhi chalte hain..

gf...nhi ruko I hv to talk to u...dekho ram I know u love me so much...but I cnt take ur so kind nature with everyone yar...u hv to b with me whenever u r wit me..understand. .

ram...excuse me...tum dhamki de rhi ho mujhe..?

gf...abhi to samjha rhi hu pr de bhi sakti hu..as u force me..

ram...oh dnt try to rule on me...mne kabhi tumhe koi shikayat ka mauka nhi diya I am always behaved very well with u as bf ..& u think like that about me...

gf..han bcz u r like that..flirty. .

ram...ok what u want

gf...I dnt want u..I dnt want u...I dnt want anything...jst leave. .

ram ko bhi gussa aa jata h aur wo eha se chala jata h..party to khtm ho jati h pr dono kr beech bat band ho jati h ram disturb to rhta h qki wo kuchh samjh nhi pa rha tha..use ye chahiye bhi aur nhi bhi..qki gf ko wo bhale hi itna serious na leta ho pr feelings ki kadr to krta h...khair shooting continuesly chal rhi thi..aaj ka shot bht achha tha...ram is sooo happy..he really want to praise her persnlly bcz its a last day of shoot...but mauka hi nhi mila...khair drama ke premier ka din aaya..evrything is set for a celebration bcz they know it would be a huge hit defently ..premier hua..sabki bht tareef hui sabhi ne ekdusre ko appreciate kiya...ram ki gf bhi aayi thi premier ke liye pr congratulate krke ke jane lagi..ram bhi priya ke sath jane laga..aaj to use priya ko bolna hi tha..

ram priya se kehta h...u r fabls yar...I dnt believe hw u do so naturally ..really u r too gud jan..

priya...excuse me...apki jan m nhi..apki jan wo ja rhi h...hamara to koi rishta bhi nhi h...jan kaise bol diya apne?

aur priya jane lagti h..ram use awaz deta h priya priya pr wo nhi sunti...to ram aakr uska hath pakad kar rokta h...

to b continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
i missed it kyunki aap ne pm nhi kiya 
concept is exciting ⭐️
mai bhi first part padh kar hi over excited hogayi hoon sarika ki tarha 😆
ram ki already Gf hai 😆
krishna likes or loves Priya may be 
Priya loves her preofession 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
first part last mai padha aur second part first 😉😆
itna jaldi drama khatam bhi hogaya 
may be aagey aur bhi shows karenge 😉
gf bhi bada jaldi aagayi 😆 thoda ruk kar aati na 😆
i really liked this concept ⭐️
ram priya ko kya bolne wala hai 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
[QUOTE=peeyara]first part last mai padha aur second part first 😉😆
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Hahaha...are btaya to pm ka locha ho rha h...kounsa bhi kabhi padho samjh aa gya na...ye mere liye bht bht bht h...thanku for instant reaction...without my pm...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb part...beautifully written..😊
pls continue soon