A Prc FF-Prithvi confesses to his mother

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ok um this is my first fan fic so it may not be so good

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Prithvi and his mom and kanha and prithvi's sister pratha

Kamlavati enters prithvi room looking happy holding a message

Prithvi: are maa aaj bohat khush lag rahe hoo

Mum: bete baat hi asi hi hai dekho naa ujjain ki maharaj ne ek sandesh bheja hai

Prithvi: Ujjain ki maharaj ne?-looking surprised

Mum: haan apne beti Indravati ki liya tumhara haath manga hai

Prithvi: Ujjain ki rajkumari indravati?- is in state of shock as he remembers indravati wen he went to meet sanyogita once

Mum:haan woh dekne ne main to sundar hai aur madin bhramini ki ashram mein shiksha le rahi hai

kya baat hai beta kuch gadbadh hai?-looking at her son

Prithvi looks as though about to throw up

Prithvi: kuch nahin

Mum: toh mein haan bol do

Prithvi: woh maa mein keh raha tha ki... mein ke raha tha ki

Mum:haan bolo kya koi aur rajkumari hai, jo tumhe pasand hai

At this point Kanha enters

Kanha: maharaj ki jai ho, maharaj app ki liye sandesh aya hai

Prithvi takes the sandesh and reads it

Mum: kis ne bheja hai

Prithvi: maa woh(pause then takes a deep breath and says) maa ye Kannauj ki rajkumari sanyogita ne bheja hai

Maa: kya.. kannauj ki rajkumari.. sanyogita ne

she drops the message she was holding

Prithvi:kanha tum ja sakte ho(kanha exits) haan ma mein indravati se shaadi nahin kar sakta kyonki mein sanyogita se pyar kar ta hoon aur uske bina ji nahin sakta

Mum:tum jaan te ho ki jaichand use zinda nahin chode ga agar usko paata chal giya toh

Prithvi: kal uska swayamvar hai aur mein use lene ki liya ja raha hoon.

touching his moms feet

Prithvi:maa mujhe ashirvad do

Mum: vijay bhava

Prithvi walks to the door when his sister Pratha walks in and says

Pratha:bhaiya app bhabhi ko liye aur swagat ki tayarian hum kar te hain

Edited by angel4lyf - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz give an honest comment 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so i take it this fan fic is rubbish then 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no its reli gud well i enjoyed it hope u continue it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx guys 😊
Edited by angel4lyf - 18 years ago

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