MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ] - Page 28

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG! Finally he has started accepting his feelings of love for her! I am so happy! I am loving sanyukta and sid's friendship! The way he is supporting her, I appreciate it warmly! I hope Randhir confesses his love for sanyukta. Continue soon, I can't wait!
Thanks for pm'ing!
Keep writing,
Lots of love,
Karishma.. :* <3

ofcourse its sanyu's challenge.. n c wl win it..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Awesome update

read all parts in one go

nice concept and story

update soon🤗

omg.. my pleasure sweety.. thnk u so mch..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: randhirsanyu014

lovely, intersting update...omg randhir phir se confuse...pls update soon...

thnk u dear.. dont worry its for moments only..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

cute update smiti👏☺️

suzi is that person who really realize rd his feeling

thanks for pm

next part sooon

lots of love

sakshi

yes c was a part of sanyu's plan.. thnk u dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok guys... I know I am hell late.. I was reaaly busy ds week.. anyway here I go 4 nxt chapter but plz ignore my mistakes as was lazy enough to rectify my faults.. So hope u ppl like it...

PART 34A - THE CONFESSION I


Recap: rd realized his love for sanyu by suzi. He did not react looking sanyu and sid together. NEXT...

All sanyukta..
He saw both of us together but this time he did not react at all. His face had some other expression. He was not jelous. I could rectify a confused layout from his pale. His eyes were not red, rather those eyeballs were revolving changing its position from cornors to bottom and top. I knew his expression but I could not catch his state of mind and reason behind it.

"what happened to him? No reaction. Is he fine?", asked sid in a confusion.
"i dont know. I have never found him do confused. He is a lion who never thinks before attacking his prey", I replied.

"and I dont think there would be any result of asking him. He is not going to express anything infront of us"
"you are right. He is very stubborn. He will either make an excuse or simply throw me out of my room, if I take any step. I know him well"

"then what shall we do now"
"not we, I have to do something"

"but what. Any idea"
"leave it on me, I have both idea and solution. But I may need quite more help of yours after this"

"i am always there for you sweetheart"
"now let me leave, I have to know the reason behind it"

He nooded. I stood in a jerk and marched towards suzi's room because non other than suzi was aware of my feelings.

I reached her room. She was busy in her laptop. As soon as she noticed me, she wrapped up the laptop amd attended with a genuine smile.

"heyy sanyu, come. Is everything fine? Why are you looking stressed?"
"aaa..do you have any idea about rd's condition?"

"what condition? Yes, I found him quite stressed in morning"
"did he say anything to you? I mean he is looking confused"

"oh yeah. He was looking jelous tooking you and sid together. I said him that you both love each other"
"what? Why did you say that?"

"no sanyukta. You know how stubborn he is. You have not observed him more, I did from very first day. For every emotion, someone was needed to pinch him because I his behavious shows his pain. I would advice you, dont let him away from him. You brought a change in him. After a long age I have seen him smiling. You know he had never touched any of his girlfriend. Because some were out of his money and some attracted towards him due to his looks. I know this because I myself have given many appointments. Please handle dear. He loves you", replied suzi in one go.

I became silent makibg my eyes wide. I simply took an exit and started dreaming. I had goosebumps in my entire body because I was the first girl whom he touched, kissed, hugged, shared everything. He deeply loved me and I too. My joy had no bounds, I was smiling foolishly and rubbing my arms to press down my goosebumps.

Suddenly, I felt rd blowing in my ears and came infront of me. I unknowingly started singing.

(Namkin Si Baat Hai, Har Nayi Si Baat Mein) - we were staring each other

(Teri Khusboo Chal Rahi, Hai Jo Mere Saath Mein) - He was moving back with a smile and I was forwarding continuing singing.

(Halka Halka Rang Beete Kal Ka, Gehra Gehra Kal Ho Jayega, Ho Jayega) - He moved more back abd huddled my way spreading his arms wide and I stopped.

(Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai, Aadha Ho Jayega) - He forwarded a rose and I accepted it.

(Kadmo Se Milo Ka, Vada Ho Jayega) - We smiled at each other.

(Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai, Aadha Ho Jayega) - He again came close to me

(Kadmo Se Milo Ka, Vada Ho Jayega) - He kissed my cheeks and blushed closing my eyes.

When I opened my eyes, I found myselft blushing but there was no one accpet me.

I hit my head from my fingers and marched forward as I sensed, I was dreaming. A day dream.

(Beshumar Raatein, Behisab Baatein, Pass Aate Aate Gum Ho Jati Hai) - I came inside the room and leaned on wall reasting my head alongwith my crossed arms behind my back with a foolish smile attached on my face.

(Bekhudi Mein Dhal Ke, Bekali Mein Jal Ke, Sau Naazare Yaadein Nam Ho Jati Hai) - I started remembering our fights, care, sobbings, cuteness everything. Result was a happy tear drop with a blush.

(Fika Fika Pal Betein Kal Ka, Behka Behka Kal Ho Jayega, Ho Jayega) - suddenly I opened my eyes when I sensed someone wiping my tear from his thumb placing his palm on my ckeek. He was none other than rd.

(Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai, Aadha Ho Jayega) - he took me in his arms

(Kadmo Se Milo Ka, Vada Ho Jayega) - were rotating with giggles.

Aadha Ishq..

(Intezzaar Sa Hai, Imtehaan Sa Hai, Itminaan Sa Hai, Kya Hai Na Jane) - he now stopped and we had a long intense eyelock.

(Itraa Rahi Hai, Intehaa Hui Hai, Itraa Rahi Hai, Kaise Na Jane) - he put me down. My palm was still on his chest and he placed his one palm on my waist. On the other held my other palm.

(Chalka Chalka, Pal Beete Kal Ka
Tehra Tehra Kal Ho Jayega, Ho Jayega) - the next moment we were dancing, I rotated catching his fingers.

(Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai, Aadha Ho Jayega) - I revolved around him with continuous rotations still clutching his fingers

(Kadmo Se Milo Ka, Vada Ho Jayega) - finally I dropped in his arm creating a small cute eyelock

(Adha Adha Adha Adha Ishq) - he left me, clutched my right palm with his left one and we fell leaning flat on bed facing each other.

Suddenly I felt his palms on my arms shaking me. My facial expressions changed and I confusingly stared him. I found sid sid shaking my arms when I was leaning on bed. I gazed him and them besides me. No one was there and I realized I was once again in my trance.

"where? Where are you lost?", asked sid making symbolising why from his fingers.
"aa..nothing..j
ust", I stammered.

"just what? You found whats the reason? You know tomorrow is last day here", he showed concern.
"i know. I know what is his state of mind. You just need your help. I will tell you when time will come. Okey?", I said leaving the room.

"yeah, but where are you going?", queried sid.
"i need the help of one more person", I replied and left.

Once again I reached suzi's room. Without any other topic I started blabbering.

"suzi. Please can help me"
"sure sanyukta. Anytime. Tell me"

"just do what I am saying", I paniced.
"hmmm", she nodded.

All randhir..
Next Morning..
When I opened my eyes after a sound sleep, again I came into the world of confusions. I stroke my forehead with my fingers and sat. I dug my head in my palms and then found someone tapping my shoulder. I raised my face and found sanyukta with a cup of coffee.

"take it, you will feel better", her voice concerned.
"bbb...better what has happened to me", I said removing my vision from her to floor.

"if you will not say that does not mean I will not come to know", she eyed me.
"what you came to know?", I said taking the coffee.

"oh god has suzi informed her about our convo", my mind punched and I got more tensed.

"you have not talk to me from yesterday neither any fume on sid. I can easily identify something fishy is going on within you"
"nothing like that, you go abd get ready. We have to finish everything today", I said in 1 go placing the coffee, taking a towel and moved into the bathroom just to escape from her question.

When I came out of bathroom, she had already left. I reached set and again found them together. I felt a quite pain beneith my heart but I did not react.

Just then suzi came with scripts.

"sir", she called but I was grossed in myself gazing them.
"sir", she said shaking me.

"han yeah suzi. Sorry. I was"
"i know you are thinking about her. Again some pain you are getting finding them together. This time you are not able to tolerate a friend with her. But if someday, she will be with someone else, what will you do? You love him sir. Admit it and confess her, otherwise you may loose her", she said and left handing over the scripts.

She was right. I cant see him with someone else. But does it really meant I loved her. Still I did not want to loose her, so finally I decided to open up that may be love or not I would talk to her. The whole day I was thinking the same and within this our work got over.

Next was the party time. I reached the party and this time I could not find her. I had a seat and waited for her. Finally she appeared.

She was in a shing black backless overgown with a chain bracelet with small stones hanging from it. Her hairs were curled from down and adjusted on a single shoulder with low unmarkable make up on her face. She was dazzling like a star in a moonless sky. She came in and took a seat besides me ignoring my presence. I guess she was angry on me due to morning incident.

I tried to talk to her but music started and nothing was audible. Meanwhile sid came and asked her dance. She forwarded her hand and started dancing. As it continued my ire had no bounds and I left the party room. I took a seat outside near the pool and had a drink. After a few minutes sid came and acquired a seat besides me.

"heyy bro", he tapped my back.
"can you leave, I wanna be alone", I digusted.

"so this trick works on everyone", said sid leaving me even more confused.

To be continued...

Thank you 4 reading... Lv u all...

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Edited by Nain5000 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres.
i'm first.
its awesome lovely lovely lovely amazine part.
finaly Rd propose sanyu(yup).
he is jelous.fab,fab,fab,
song awesome tha.
updet asap.😃
Edited by sudipto-69 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow! it was awesome! so u finally updated ha!!?? after such a long time!?? well i can't even get angry with u after this amazing part! ur exams finished!? well update soon!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
its finally happened
rd is going to propose her finally
he was jealous omggg
its awesome smiti
thanks for pm
next part soon
lots of love
sakshi
(ojashvi)
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb & cute update...ye randhir bhi na argghhh...i hope next update me wo kuch bol paye...pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg! The aadha ishq song sequence was perfect! You really are very good,at bringing out song sequences! Loved it to the core! I love the song too! It is one of my faves.
Now, coming back to the update, this phase really is going great!
The way Sid and Suzi are helping her to make Randhir realize his love, is remarkably amazing!
I really loved this chapter! This was the best chapter of this fiction, till date!
Thanks for pm'ing! Please continue pretty soon this time! *puppy face*
Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3

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