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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kajenlife

lovely parts

thanx for pm
update soon

Originally posted by: nilusoni

gr8 parts loved it

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plz pm me for next part
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Originally posted by: -Xpress-

Loved it ...awesome <3


Thanku so much for ur reviews..!!
will continue soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanku so much...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: mish2427

Awesome Nikki...!!! Really...!!!

Loved it...!!!
Now waiting for their marriage...!!!
Update soon...!!!

Originally posted by: priyanka2607

lovely update

riddhima ko toh armaan se pyaar ho gaya i hope armaan bhi uske baare me kuch mehsoos karne lage
waiting for the next part
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Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved AR nok jhok...sweet...who is ringing ridzy...don't like muski's attitude...rishabh is sweet...felt sad 4 him...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm



Thanku so much for ur wonderful reviews..!!
lets see what happens..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fabbb story!!! Very interesting!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update...luvd it...thnx fr pm...
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Originally posted by: cool_sri

Fabbb story!!! Very interesting!!!!

Update soon..
Thanks for the PM!!!

Originally posted by: tv05

amazing update...luvd it...thnx fr pm...


Thanku so much..!!!
I am glad u liked it..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Soo cute armaan riddhima
I love so much ar fight
Finally armaan ne smile kiya
Thanks for the pm nikki
Keep updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting one...thanks for the PM
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#39



EPISODE9

( Riddhima khush hote huye apne room me aati hai...aur moon ko dekhte Huye kehti hai...)
Riddhima- kitna ajeeb hai yeh saB jis insaan se kal tak me ladti thi...aaj me usi insaan se pyaar karti hu...kya kehti thi me armaan ko sadu..khadoos...aur aaj... Usi sadu khadoos se pyar kar bethi hu me...ha..par iska matlab yeh nhi hai..ki armaan sadu aur khadoos nhi hai vo to vo hamesha hi rahega...par sirf mere liye...mera Sadu armaan bankar...
(riddhima smile karte karte blush karti hai...)

MALIK MANSION
Abhay's Room

(abhay...bed par betha hota hai..aur uske kamre me sab kuch bhikrawa hota hai...uski ankh se ansoo girta hai...vo rote huye khud se hi kehta hai..)
Abhay- kyu kar betha me usse pyaar...vo kisi aur se pyaar karti hai..aur mene use apna dil de diya...kyu ro raha hu me vo to meri kabhi thi hi nhi...nhi sochunga ab me uske baare me..vo khush hai..yhi kaafi hai...uski khushi se badkar kuch nhi hai...ab me nhi sochunga muskaan ke baare me...kabhi nhi sochunga...

NEXT DAY
MARRIAGE DAY

(riddhima mirror ke saamne tayyar ho rhi hoti hai..aur blush karte huye sochti hai..)
Riddhima- aaj se me hamesha ke liye tumhari ho jaungi ...Armaan me aaj boht khush hu...shayad aaj se pehle me kabhi itni khush nhi hui thi...aaj raat hamari first night hogi ...aur me tabhi tumhe bta dungi...ki me tumse kitna pyaar karti hu...
(riddhima yeh kehti hai ki tabhi vha padma aa jaati hai..aur riddhima ko dekhkar uski ankhen bheeg jaati hai..vo riddhima ke paas akar kehti hai...)
Padma- kitni jaldi badi ho jaati hai betiyan..abhi kal ki hi baat lagti hai...jab tu mujhse apne doll ki shaadi ki tayyariya kara rhi thi...aur aaj..aaj teri hi shaadi ho rhi hai...ab to tu door chali jayegi... Humse..
(riddhima bhi emotional hokar padma ko hug kar leti hai par phir vo padma ke face par smile laane ke liye usse kehti hai..)
Riddhima- mom please...emotional mat kijiye mujhe kitni mushkil se makeup kiya hai saara... Kahi sab khraab na ho jaaye..aur armaan mujhe aise dekhkar baraat lekar vapas na bhaag jaye...
(padma rote huye hi has padti hai..aur kehti hai..)
Padma- tu kabhi nhi sudhregi na...badi ho jaa ab shaadi hone jaa rhi hai...boht badi zimmedaari hai yeh...
Riddhima- no way.. Riddhima ko badalna mushkil hi nhi namumkin hai...aur rhi badi hone ki baat..to vo to me kabhi ho hi nhi sakti hu..
Padma- pta hai mujhe..are ha. Dekhona tujhe dekhkar sab bhool gyi ki yha ayi kyu thi pandit ji bula rhe hai...mohrat ka time ho rha hai...chale...
Riddhima- ji mom..
(yeh kehkar riddhima ko padma niche mandap par le aati hai...armaan vha pehle se betha hota hai...riddhima akar armaan ke paas beth jaati hai..aur arman ko dekhti hai..phir vo sharmaakar vapas niche dekhne lagti hai..pandit ji mantra padte hai..armaan riddhima phere lete hai..phir armaan riddhima ki maang bhar deta hai..aur use mangal sutra pehna deta hai...aur shaadi ho jaati hai...ananya padma aur shashank dono ko ashirwad deta hai..rishabh dono ko congratulate karta hai...muskaan akar armaan ko hug karkar congaratulate karti hai...par vo riddhima ko kuch nhi kehti aur chali jaati hai...jo armaan aur riddhima dono notice karte hai..par koi kuch nhi bolta hai...vo dono rishabh ananya padma aur shashank ke saath khade baate kar rhe hote hai...ki tabhi ek servant riddhima ke paas akar use uska mobile dekar kehta hai)
Servant- baby ji..yeh aapka mobile...kab se baja hi jaa rha tha...kam se kam 50 baar to baj hi chuka hai...ab zara shaant hua hai..aap his sambhal lijiye ise..
(yeh sunkar riddhima dar jaati hai...aur jaldi se servant se phone cheen leti hai...servant chala jaata hai...rishabh bhi kisi ki call aane par vha se chala jaata hai... Rishabh jaakar bahra kisi se ohine par baat kar hi rha hita hai...ki vo kisi se muskaan ka naam lekar baat kar rha hota hai vo jab paas jaata hai to dkehta hai.vo sameer hota hai vo chuokar smaeer ki baatein sunta hai...)
Sameer-baby dony worry mene kha na...me us muskaan se lyaar nhi jarta hu...vo ..vo to sirf mera ATM hai..use chod diya to mujhe pais ekaise milenge...dont worry me usse shaadi karkar.uski saari property apne naan kar lunga phir hum dono saath honge...aur nuskaan ko khi uthaakat phek denge hum..hahaha..
(sameer baat karte huye aage chaka jaata hai..aur rishabh vhi gusse me vha khada hokar kehta hai..)
Rishabh- me tujhe tere maksad me kabhi kamyaab nhi hone dunga...me muskaan ko kuch nhi hone dunga...ab muskaan ko me tujhse shaadi kabhi nhi karne dunga...

IN GUOTA HOUSE
(Idhar ananya shashank padMa ek dusre se baatein karne lagte hai..ki riddhima ka phone phir ring hota hai...vo cut kar deti hai...armaan confuse hokar usse kehta hai)
Armaan- kiska phone hai...
Riddhima(darte huye)- kisi ka nhi bas u know na...Credit card bechne waale hai baar baar pareshaan karte hai..aur kuch nhi
Armaan(man me sochta hai..)- yeh jhoot kyu bol rhi hai...koi credit caard bechne ke liye itne phone kyu karega...forget it ..me kyu sochu..iski to har chiz duniya.se different hi hoti..
(yeh kehkar armaan baat ko ignore kar deta hai..ki tabhi ananya khaane ke liye riddhima aur armaan ko lekar ek table par bitha deti hai...riddhima apna mobile table par rakhkar armaan ke saath dinner karne lagti hai...aur dinner karte huye hi kehti hai)
Riddhima- mujhe na tumse kuch baat kehni hai...
Armaan- ha kaho..
Riddhima- nhi yha aise nhi...
Armaan- kyu uska bhi mohrat nikalwaana hai kya..?
Riddhima- dekho mera ladne ka bilkul mood nhi hai...aisa nhi ho sakta hum normally bat karle...
Armaan- ok fine kho kya kehna hai...
Riddhima- vo to me kahungi..par abhi nhi...zara vidaai ho jaaye...hum tumhare ghar chale jaaye phir kahungi..
Armaan(taunt maarta hai..)bta dena jab btaana ho...me to tumhari baat sunne ke kiye hi betha hu yha...
Riddhima- sach...?
Armaan-.shut up khana khao...
(riddhima naughty smilee karkar khana khaane lagti hai..vo khaana finsih karkar hand wash karne chali jaati hain..armaan abhi bhi khana khaa rha hota hai..ki riddhima ka phone ring hota hai..armaan riddhima ko dekhta hai...par jab vo riddhima ko nhi dhoondh paata to vo phone haath me lekar dekhta hai..to kisi gautam ka phone hota hai..vo pick kar leta hai..vo hello bolne hi wala hota hai ki riddhima achanak se usse phone cheenkar cut kar deti hai..armaan usse kehta hai..)
Armaan- vo tumhara phone baj rha tha to mene utha liya tu thi nhi na...par tumne cut kyu kar diya baat to kar leti kisi gautam ka phone tha..
Riddhima(ghabraate huye)- nhi vo itna important nhi hai...chalo na bidaai ka mohrat ho gya hai chale...
(yeh kehkar riddhima bachkar.vha se chali jaati hai...aur armaan use aisa behave karte dekhkar kehta hai)
Armaan- ajeeb hai yeh ladki..pehli dulhan dekh rha hu jise apni bidaai ki itni jaldi hai...
(yeh kehkar armaan bhi aa jaata hai..riddhima ki bidaai hoti hai..shashank padma riddhima sab rote hai...phir riddhime ko shashnak car me bithakar vida kar dete hai...idhar riddhima car me bethkar bhi ro rhi hoti hai..armaan use dekhkar man ne kehta hai..)
Armaan- kuch der pehle tak to bidaai ki itni jaldi thi..aur ab aise ro rhi hai..( vo apni pocket se hankerchief nikalkar riddhima ko de deta hai..riddhima vo lekar aur zor se rone lagti hai...armaan shock ho jaata hai..aur kehta hai)
Armaan- itna ro kyu rhi ho tum...subha vapas yhi aana hai tumhe...pag phere ke liye...phir bhi aise ro rhi ho...
Riddhima- tumna chup rho...tumhe kya pta..bidaai hoti hai..to ladki par kya guzarti hai...
Armaan- acha..nhi samajh sakta ab rona band kro dekho ghar bhi aane wala hai..log samjhenge me tumhe car me maarta hua lekar aaya hu...ansoo pochlo..
(riddhima armaan ki is baat par smile karti hai...armaan bhi has padta hai...riddhima ka MM me grahpravesh ho jaata hai..ananya use armaan ke room me bitha deti hai..aur bha se chali jaati hai..armaan niche hota hai...rishabh ke saath...riddhima room me Yhi soch rhi hoti hai..)
Riddhima- akhir vo time aa hi gya jab me tumhe apne dil ki baat bta dungi armaan...
(riddhima yeh soch hi rhi hoti hai..ki vo table pAr armaan ki photo dekhti hai aur use uthaane ke liye jaati hai...vo frame ko uthati hi hai..ki frame ke piche use armaan ka wallet khula dikhta hai...aur usme sneha ki photo lagi hoti hai...vo shock ho jaati hai..aur frame rakhkar wallet uthaakar kehti hai)
Riddhima- sneha ka photo armaan ke wallet me?ab bhi...shaadi ho chuki hai armaan ki mujhse phir bhi...vo sneha ko ab tak nhi bhool paaya hai...vo aaj bhi sirf sneha se hi pyaar karta hai...aur me pta nhi kya kya sapne dekhne lagi thi...yeh socha hi nhi ki pyaar to sirf me kar bethi hu ...vo to mujhse pyaar karta hi nhi hai..kyu nhi socha yeh mene pehle apne pyaar me itni andhi ho gyi thi ki sab bhool gyi...
(riddhima yeh soch hi rhi hoti hai ki piche se gate khulta hai aur armaan andar aa jaata hai..riddhima apne ansoo saaf kar leti hai..aur ek jhuti smile face par laakar piche mudti hai...aur kehti hai..)
Riddhima- are aa gye tum..lo..tumhara purse yha pada tha..sambhalna chahiye na...
Armaan- oh ha..vo me bhool gya tha...acha riddhima kuch baat karni thi tumse...
Riddhima- ha bolo na...
Armaan- dekho..tum to jaanti hi ho..ki hamari shaadi kyu hui hai..to me tumhe pehek hi baata chahta hu..ki hum husband wife ki tarha nhi reh sakte hai...tum to jaanti hi ho yeh shaadi sirf ek samjhota hai...
(samjhota word sunkar riddhima hurt hoti hai..par vo face se fake smile jaane nhi deti hai..aur kehti hai..)
Riddhima- samjhota...shi kha tumne smajhota hi to hai..u dont worry..mujje koi problem nhi hai isse..i am perfectly fine with it as u know...u dont love me...And I also dont l(riddhima bolte bolte chup ho jati hai..aur baat badal deti hai..)acha suno...tum yha bed par so jaao me yha sofe par so jaungi...
Armaan- tum thik ho na...
Riddhima- ha kyu...?
Armaan- nhi tum mujhe khud bed sone ke liye de rhi ho jha tak me tumhe jaana hu ab tak.. Tumhe is waqt mujhse bed par sone ke liye ladna chahiye...
Riddhima(emotionally)tumhe mujhe jaana hi kha hai abhi tak...
Armaan- kya matlab..
Riddhima(khud ko sambhalte huye)- matlab yeh ki me mazaak kar rhi thi...bed par me soungi aur sofe par tum.. Good night...
(yeh kehkar riddhima bed par soo jaati hai...aur doosri side face karkar apne girte huye ansoo saaf kar leti hai..armaan khada huye use dekhkar I cant believing look deta hai..aur sochta hai..)
Armaan- yeh kabhi nhi badal sakti...
(yeh kehkar armaan apna pillow lekar sofe par letkar so jaata hai)

EPISODE 10

AR BEDROOM
(riddhima sokar uthti hai...aur sofe par armaan ko sota dekhkar vo use dekhti hi reh jaati hai...phir use kal raat ki sneha ki photo wali baat yaad aati hai...vo use dkehna band kar deti hai...aur kehti hai..)
Riddhima- hamari shaadi ho gyi hai armaan...phir bhi kitne door hai hum...mene tumse pyaar kiya yeh bina soche samjhe ki tum mujhse pyaar karte bhi ho ya nhi...par me ab kya karu..tumse zabardasti to pyaar nhi karwa sakti hu khud ko...
(riddhima yeh soch hi rhi hoti hai...ki armaan apni ankhen kholta hai...aur riddhima ko khud ko dekhta hua dekhta hai..riddhima apni nazar niche kar leti hai...par vo phir armaan ko dekhti hai...par armaan jab use dekhta hai..to vo apni ankhen phir niche kar leti hai...armaan riddhima ko aise behave karta dekhkar confuse hokar kehta hai..)
Armaan- kya...?
Riddhima- kya kya...?
Armaan- kuch kehna hai kya..?
Riddhima- nhi to...
Armaan- to baar baar dekh kyu rhi thi...
Riddhima- kyu.. Aapko dekhne ka bhi tax lagta hai..kya..dekh bhi ni sakti ab..
(yeh kehkar riddhima bathroom me chali jaati hai..aur armaan bahar sofe par betha confused hojar kehta hai..)
Armaan- kya cheez hai yeh ladki...isko kabhi koi nhi samjh sakta...

IN MM BREAKFAST TABLE
(sab bethkar brakfast kar rhe hote hai rishabh bhi vhi hota hai..ki tabhi muskaan ka phone ring hota hai...vo phone kaat deti hai...armaan usse kehta hai..)
Armaan- kya hua kiska phone tha...
Muskaan(darte huye)- kuch nhi bhai...credit card...
Armaan- yeh aajkal credit card walo ke phone kuch zyada nhi aane lage hai...
(yeh sunkar riddhima bhi khana band kar deti hai aur armaan kO dekhti hai...par phir vo khana start kar deti hai...armaan khakar riddhima se kehta hai..)
Armaan- acha mom mera ho gya...tum tayyar ho ...tumhe ghar jaana hai na apne pag phere ke liye...
Riddhima- ha bas me apna purse lekar ayi..room se...tum chlo itne..
(riddhima yeh kehkar room me purse lene chali jaati hai...riddhima apne room se purse lekar nikalti hai...to vo muskaan ki awaaz sunkar ruk jaati hai..vo dekhti hai muskaan kisi se phone par baat kar rhi hoti hai...vo vhi khade hokar uski baate sunti hai)
Muskaan- baby kab milna hai...me abhi aati hu...dont worry sameer me hu na..i love u ..ok to aaj shaam 5 pm at blue shine cafe..bye..love you...
(muskaan baat karkar chali jaati hai..par riddhima...vha surprised khari hoti hai..)
Riddhima- muskaan relationship me hai...hope koi acha ladka ho...muskaan abhi itni mature nhi hai...khi usse koi galti na ho jaaye..mujhe check karna hoga...
(riddhima purse lekar niche jaati.hai..to dekhti hai ki armaan car ke paas uska wait kar rha hota hai..vo uski taraf jaati hai..armaan use aata dekh car ka door open kar leta hai..riddhima car me beth jaati hai...riddhima car me bethi huyi muskaan ke baare me soch rhi hoti hai...armaan use khoya hua dekhkar kehta hai...)
Armaan- kya hua kiske murder ka plan bana rhi ho..
(riddhima armaan ko mazaak karta dekh shock ho haati hai..aur kehti hai..)
Riddhima- tumhari tabiyat to thik hai na...?
Armaan- ha kyu..?
Riddhima- nhi vo tum..mr armaan malik..angry young man..mazak kar rhe hai...tumhare dimaag ke sab screw vagera thik haina...
Armaan- tum kabhi nhi sudhrogi na...
Riddhima- never...aur koshish bhi mat karna mujhe sudharne ki..
Armaan- I know..me khud pagal nhi hona chahta hu...
(riddhima kuch bolne hi waali hoti hai ki riddhima ka phone ring hota hai...vo caller id dekhkar dar jaati hai aur armaan ki taraf dekhti hai...phir vo phone cut kar deti hai...armaan usse kehta hai..)
Armaan- credit card?
Riddhima(darte huye) ha..credit card hi.. pareshaan karte rehte hai..
(gupta house aa jaata hai..armaan car stop karta hai armaan riddhima utar jaate hai..aur andar jaate hai..gupta aur shashan gate kholte hai..aur dono ko andar ke aate hai...sab sofe par bethte hai...)
Shashank- kabse wait kar rhe the..badi der kardi aane me..
Armaan- ha bas vo uncle...
Padma- zarur riddhima late kiya hoga..
Riddhima-are riddhima hi late kyu karegi...for your kind information mumma me aaj jaldi uth gyi thi armaan se bhi pehle..puchlo...
Armaan- ha aunty shi keh rhi hai..Riddhima..aaj jaldi uth gyi thi yeh...
Padma- sach...chlo acchi baat hai...jao riddhima armaan ko apna bedroom to dikhao..
Riddhima- vo kyu
Padma(ghoorti hai..)- riddhima jaao...
Riddhima- okk...chalo armaan...
(armaan uthkar riddhima ke saath chalne lagta hai...vo dono corridoor se guzar hi rhe hote hai..ki riddhima ka phone par...message beep hota hai..riddhima. Armaan se kehti hai..)
Riddhima- straight... me abhi aati hu...
Armaan- ok...
(riddhima message padti hai to vo gautam ka message hota hai..vo padti hai..)
Riddhima(reading)- please yaar just pick up the phone na...mujhe sirf baat karni hai...yeh mat bhoolna hum friends hai...please...
(riddhima yeh pad hi rhi hoti hai ki...gautam ka phone aane lagta hai..riddhima thoda sochti hai phir utha leti hai...)
Gautam- thank god tune phone to uthaya yaar...
Riddhima- kya bolna hai bolo...
Gautam- yaar kya hua aise kyu baat kar rhi hai...me saari puraani baate bhula chuka hu..like you...aur me bas ab tera friend rehna chahta hu...jaise hum rha karte the like best friends...
Riddhima(suprisely smile karti hai..) really...sirf dost..
Gautam- ha yaar sirf dost me apni best friend nhi khona chahta hu...
Riddhima-me bhi...acha mujhe ab jaana hai..thoda kaam hai...
Gautam- chal ok...par hum ab dost hai...aur tu mera phone uthayegi...ok..
Riddhima- ok fine...and I am sorry mene tumhara phone nhi uthaaya ...me kuch aur hi samjh rhi thi...but ab sab thik hi hai...to phir aao kabhi india milte hai like before...
Gautam- zarur aunga...tujhse milne...
Riddhima-hmm..chlo bye... See u...
(riddhima tension free room me enter hoti hai...to vo dekhti hai ki armaan uske room ko dkeh rha hota hai...vo thodi der armaan ko dekhti hi reh jaati hai.. Aur alag hi world me chali jaati hai..par phir use kal raat ka incident yaad aata hai.. vo reality me aa jaati hai..aur normal hokar armaan se kehti hai)
Riddhima- kaisa laga room...
Armaan- nice...vaise tum designer banna chahti thi...?
Riddhima(shock hokar kehti hai..)- tumne meri sketches dekhe...? How could you..
Armaan- are yha table par pade the mene dekhliye...whats so big deal...vaise tumhare sketches designs boht acche hai..
Riddhima- I know..college me bhi sab yhi kehte the..ki me ek din boht badi designer banungi...
Armaan- acha..to tum try kyu nhi karti meri company se start kro na...u are very good...hume bhi tumhare jaisa designer hi chahiye...and I love ur designs...
Riddhima- really...i can...
Armaan - ya ofcourse...
Riddhima- wow... mujhe to ghar bethe bethe hi job mil gyi..vaise mere paas kuch aur designs hai me tumhe dikhati hu..
(yeh kehkar roddhima apni cupboard open karti Hai...armaan uski copbpard me short dresses dekh kar thoda surprise ho jaata hai..aur kehta hai..)
Armaan- tum aisi short dresses bhi pehnti ho...
Riddhima- ha...foreign me to me yhi pehenti thi...but mumma u know her na..unhone kha...jab tak shaadi nhi ho jaati only indian...
Armaan- ab to tumhe in dresses ki zarurat nhi hogi haina...
Riddhima- kyu nhi hogi..?
Armaan- I mean ab tum yeh kyu pehnogi...ab to tum married ho..na..
Riddhima- to..married girls yeh sab nhi pehen sakti kya...me soch hi rhi thi..aaj yeh dresses bhi saath le jaau...
Armaan- Riddhima tum smajh nhi rhi ho..
Riddhima- kya nhi smajh rhi hu main..?
Armaan- ok...clearly I Dont like..ki meri wife aise short kapde pehne...
Riddhima- what..? Ok fine gussa mat karna ..mujhe pta hai..tumhe aise clothes ache nhi lagte hai...sneha ne btaaya tha..me sirf tumhare saath mazaak kar rhi thi...
Armaan- mazaak? Tum yeh kya.karti rehti ho..forget it... Me abhi office jaa rha hu kuch important work hai.. aaj shaam tak me tumhe lene aa jaunga..aur aaj raat...hume party...me jaana hai...
Riddhima- party...wow kiski..?
Armaan- mera friend hai...usne hamari shaadi ki khushi me party di hai..so hamara jaana important hai...
Riddhima- ok fine...par aap shaam ko jaldi aa jaana..varna phir raat ko late huye na..to mujhse mat kehna...
Armaan- ji madam aa jaunga.. Kuch aur..
Riddhima- nhi aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai...
Armaan(irritatingly)- thank you..
(armaan yeh kehkar chala jaata hai...riddhima use iratingly jaata dekhe naughty smile karti hai..)

EPISODE 11

GUPTA HOUSE
(riddhima apne room me bethi huyi apni shaadi ki album dekh rhi hoti hai ...tabhi album me muskaan ka photo dekhkar use kuch yaad aata hai..aur vo kehti hai..)
Riddhima- me to bhool hi gyi..muskaan ke piche bhi to jaana hai..abhi 5 banne me 15 mint baaki hai me pouch jaungi...
(riddhima album close karkar apna bag lekar ghar se car me bethkar nikal jaati hai..vo blue shine cafe ke aage car se utarti hai..aur andar jaati hai..to vo dekhti hai..miskaan pehle se hi kisi ladke ke saath bethi hoti hai..vo pillar ke piche chup jaati hai...vo dekhti hai...ki muskaan apne purse se kuch paise nikalkar us ladke ko deti hai...aur uske cheeks par kiss karkar vha se jaane ke liye uth jaati hai..aur bye kehkar chali jaati hai...Riddhima vha khadi hikar kehti hai..)
Riddhima- ho sakta hai me kuch zyada hi soch rhi hu... Shayad yeh acha ladka hai muskaan ke liye... Mujhe isse baat kar leni chahiye...
(riddhima sameer ki taraf badhti hai...vo uski taraf jaa hi rhi hoti hai ki usko ek phone call aa jaata hai..aur vo uthakar baat karne lagta hai..riddhima uske piche hoti hai vo usko phone pe baat karta dekh wait karne lagti hai..aur vo phone par bat karta rehta hai..)
Sameer - abe yaar vhi thi muskaan malik... Nhi yar itni jaldi nhi chod sakta... Sone ki murgi hai..paise boht hai uske paas...aur pagal hai vo mere piche jab bolu jitna bolu utna deti hai...ha..bechari jaanti nhi haina abhi tak mujhe..hahahaha...
(baat karte karte vo aage chala jaata hai...aur riddhima vhi shock me khadi reh jaati hai...aur shock me kehti hai..)
Riddhima- shit...muskaan is insaan se kaise pyaar kar sakti hai..no way mujhe pehle muskaan se baat karni hogi phir me armaan se baat karungi...
(tabhi riddhima ka phone ring hota hai..vo dekhti hai armaan ka call hota hai..vo pick karti hai aur kehti hai...)
Riddhima- hello...
Armaan- kha ho tum...?
Riddhima- kyu...
Armaan - kyuki me abhi tumhare ghar par hu..aur tum yha nhi ho..party ke liye mujhe der nhi hona hai..lene aaya hu me tumhe..
Riddhima- ohh...sorry 2 mint wait kro..me adhe ghante me vha ayi...
(yeh kehkar riddhima phone cut kar deti hai..aur armaan confusingly kehta hai)
Armaan- 2 mint wait karu..aur adha ghanta.. Yeh ladki pagal hai kya... ?
(Armaan adhe ghante se sofe par betha wait kar rha hota hai..ki riddhima bhaagti huyi gate me enter hoti hai..uske saare baal bikhre huye hote hai..vo armaan ko dekhkar kehti hai..)
Riddhima- sorry sorry sorry...late.ho gyi...
Armaan(taunt)- really tum jaanti ho...ki tum late ho..
Riddhima- ab taunt mat kro..chale...mom dad to mehra uncle ke yha chale gye hai... Meri unse phone par baat ho gyi hai..chale..
Armaan- me isiliye aaya tha..
Riddhima- to chalo...
(armaan riddhima car me beth jaate hai...aur MM pohch jaate hai..)
AR ROOM
(armaan tayyar hokar room ke bahar khada hota hai..aur soch rha hota hai..)
Armaan- kar kya rhi hai..yeh 2 ghante se...room mein...
(armaan andar jaata hai..to vo dekhkar surprise ho jaata hai..riddhima red colour ki chuddidar pehni hoti hai..vo riddhima ko dekhta hi reh jaata hai..riddhima piche mudti hai..aur armaan ko dekhkar kehti hai)
Riddhima- me tayyar hu chale...
(par armaan riddhima me khoya hota hai...aur bas riddhima ko hi dkehta rehta hai..armaan ko yu khud ko dekhta dekh riddhima apni ankhen niche kar leti hai...use ankhen niche karta dekh armaan dream world se bahar aata hai..aur kehta hai..)
Armaan- mm...vo..mm sorry..chale..
Riddhima- ha..chalo...
(armaan aur riddhima saath nikal jaate hai...armaan aur riddhima party venue me pohchte hai...aur andar jaate hai..to armaan ke friend akar armaan ko greet karte hai..)
Friend- congrats armaan congratulation bhabhi..
(armaan aur riddhima party enjoy karne lagte hai..tabhi ek ladki mini skirt pehenkar armaan ke paas aati hai..aur kehti hai)
Girl- armaan..
(armaan piche mudkar dekhta hai...aur smile karkar kehta hai..)
Armaan- nisha...how are you..
(dono ek dusre ko hug karte hai...riddhima thoda awkward feel karti hai..par vo kuch nhi kehti hai bas fake smile karti hai..nisha riddhima ko dekhkar armaan se kehti hai..)
Nisha- your wife?
Armaan- ya..my wife riddhima..
Nisha - oh hi..riddhima vaise ek baat btadu...college mr aapke yeh husband na..mere piche piche ghumte the...kyu armaan..
Riddhima(armaan se thoda gusse me aur fake smile karkar kehti hai..)- really armaan..
Nisha- isse kya puch rhi ho me btati hu na...ek mint mera picha nhi chodta tha yeh... But college ke baad to aisa gayab hua..ki khi dikha hi nhi...
Armaan- bas busy ho gya tha.
Nisha- ab to busy nhi ho na..lets go..college ki tarha aaj thodi gup shup ho jaye...tumhari ijazat ho to tumhare husband ko thodi der ke liye le jau...
Riddhima(fake smile ke saath)- ya sure...
(nisha aur armaan jaakar baat karne lagte hai..aur riddhima unhe haste haste baat dekhkar gussa hoti rehti hai...vo bar counter me jaakar wine uthakar gusse me unhe dekhte huye pee jaati hai...aur baar baar wine peeti rehti hai...riddhima ke legs bhi ladkhadane lagte hai vo gusse me ek wine aur peeti hai..aur phir vo Or zor se glass table par rakhkar thoda nashe me...armaan ke paas jaati hai..aur nisha ka haath armaan ke shoulder se jhatak kar kehti hai..)
Riddhima- you..you stupid girl..how dare you to touch my husband..he is mine..ok..mine..(armaan ko dekhte huye)uou are mine ok armaan...
(armaan riddhima ko aise dekhkar shock ho jaata hai aur kehta hai)
Armaan- riddhima. ...tumne sharaab pee hai..you are drunk..
Riddhima- ha...i am.. Riddhima is drunk..hahah...
Armaan- tum.. Pagal ho kya..kyu pee tumne..tum kitne nashe me ho..
Riddhima- ha hu nashe me main...nasha hai... Par sharab ka nhi nhi...bilkul bhi nhi ..yeh to tumhare PYAAR ka nasha hai..armaan malik...
(armaan yeh sunkar shock ho jaata hai...aur kehta hai. )
Armaan- what..??
(riddhima nashe me...kehti hai..)
Riddhima- I na..i.. I love you armaan...pta nhi kyu..par ho gya tumse.. Tumse mujhe pyaar ho gya...mene bola mene bola..apne heart se...ki tum to..tum to sadu ho...par phir bhi ho gya tumse pyaar...riddhima Gupta loves you armaan malik...nhi nhi nhi..its wrong...riddhima malik love you armaan malik..yeh right hai haina..ha...yhi right hai...
(riddhima behosh hone lagti hai..aur bolte bolte hi armaan ko hug kar leti hai..armaan vhi confused aur shock khada reh jaata hai armaan party me se riddhima ko apni arms me uthakar aone friends se sorry bolkar MM aa jaata hai..aur use bed par letakar kehta hai..)
Armaan- yeh kya keh diya tumne riddhima kyu kar bethi tum mujhse pyaar jaante huye ki me tumse pyaar nhi karpaunga..

EPISODE12

NEXT MORNING

(riddhima sokar apna sar pakadte huye jaagti hai...aur kehti hai..)
Riddhima- ohho...yeh mera sar kyu dard kar rha...(phir acahanak riddhima ko raat ka sab yaad aata hai..aur vo darte huye kehti hai..)
Riddhima- kal raat to gadbad kar di maine..kya kar diya riddhima yeh tune..armaan ko sab bta diya..shit...
(riddhima yeh bol hi thi hoti hai..ki vo dekhti hai..uske saamne koi pani ka glass le aata hai...vo upar dekhti hai...to.armaan hota hai..)
Armaan(gusse me)- raat ka hangover kam ho jayega..peelo...
(riddhima darte huye glass pakadne hi wali hoti hai..ki armaan achanak gusse me vo glass phek deta hai..aur riddhima dar jaati hai..vo shockingly armaan ko dekhti hai..armaan gusse se riddhima ko shoulder se pakadkar bed se utarkar kehta hai..)
Armaan- how dare you...kaise kar sakti ho tum mujhse pyaar... yeh jaante huye bhi...ki me sneha se...how could you riddhima...
(riddhima kuch der tak armaan ko confusingly dekhti rehti hai... Phir vo armaan ka haath apne shoulder se hatakar gusse me kehti hai..)
Riddhima- kyu nhi armaan kyu nhi kar sakti hu me pyaar...dil hai mere paas..kar betha tumse pyaar...
Armaan- kyu kiya..yeh jaante huye bhi ki hamare beech kuch nhi ho sakta...
Riddhima- ho sakta hai armaan agar tum chaho to..ho sakta hai..
Armaan- shut up riddhima...
Riddhima- nhi armaan kyu rhu me chup...kab tak jeeyoge apne ateet me..kyu nhi bahar aa sakte ho tum apne ateet se...
Armaan(gusse me...)i said shut up riddhima
(armaan itni zor se shout karta hai..ki dar kar riddhima ki ankh se ansoo nikal jaate hai..par vo phir bhi himmat karkar kehti hai)
Riddhima- nhi rahungi me aaj chup...kyu rahu...kuch galat nhi kha mene...tumse pyaar karti hu me...me chahti hu...ki tum mere saath apni beeti kadvi yadein bhulakar ek nyi life start karo..to kya galat hai...isme...
Armaan- bus riddhima boht ho gya...
Riddhima- nhi armaan abhi bhi boht kuch kehna baaki hai par is baar hosh me...i love you armaan pyaar karti hu me tumse..
(riddhima yeh bol hi rhi hoti hai..ki achanak gusse me armaan riddhima ko thappad marne ke liye apna haath uthata hai..par hawa me hi rok deta hai..aur riddhima darkar piche ho jaati hai...par vo shockingly armaan ke haath ko dekhti rehti hai...armaan apna haath niche kar leta hai...par vo gusse ko control karkar kehta hai..tumhe aisa nhi karna chahiye tha riddhima nhi karna chahiye tha tumhe mujhse pyaar...ab bhool jao... Bhool jao mujhe..
Riddhima- kaise keh sakte ho armaan yeh tum mujhe...jab tum apne mare huye pyaar ko abhi tak nhi bhool paa the ho..to me kaise apne us pyaar ko bhool jau...jise me har roz apni ankhon ke saamne dekhti hu...itna asaan nhi hai armaan I love your armaan...i really love you...
Armaan- to thik hai mat bhoolo mujhe...par ek baat yaad rakhna mujhse yeh ummeed bilkul mat rakhna ki me bhi tumhe vhi pyaar de paunga...because mujhse pyaar karkar tumne boht badi galti karli hai...aur ek baat aur...ab me tumhari shakal bhi nhi dekhna chahta hu...samjhi...
(yeh kehkar armaan room se chala jaata hai...aur riddhima rote huye bed par beth jaati hai aur kehti hai..)
Riddhima- pyaar hi to kiya hai..armaan sirf..kya galat kiya hai pyaar karkar maine...me yeh nhi kehti ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karo...par tum mujhe khud ko pyaar karne se nhi rok sakte ho...me tumse pyar karti hu armaan aur ab tum bhi yeh jaante ho par iska matlab yeh nhi ki mujhe tumse pyaar karne ki bhi saza mile..yeh shi nhi hai armaan tum galat kar rhe ho...

BREAKFAST TABLE
(riddhima tayyar hokar niche ati hai..to vo dekhti hai ki armaan vha nhi hota hai...vo ananya se puchti hai...)
Riddhima- aunty...armaan ...kha hai..
Ananya- are beta vo..pta nhi use kya hua aaj bina nashta kiye hi chala gya..aur tumhe yeh kya aunty aunty laga rakha hai..betho yha...(ananya riddhima ko bithakar kehti hai..)ab aunty nhi hu me tumhari mom kha kro mujhe...ok..
Riddhima- ok aunt...mom...
(riddhima aur ananya smile karte hai..tabhi riddhima ki nazar muskaan par jaati hai..aur use sameer yaad aata hai...ananya nashta karkar chali jaati hai...muskaan bhi uthkar jaa hi rhi hoti hai ki riddhima piche se bolti hai..)
Riddhima- me tumhare aur sameer ke baare me jaanti hu..
(yeh sunkar muskaan shock se ruk jaati hai...aur piche mudti hai)
Riddhima- aur mujhe yeh lagta hai..vo tumhare liye bilkul thik nhi hai...
(yeh sunkar muskaan ko gussa aa jaata hai...vo kehti hai..)
Muskaan- yeh aap koun hoti hai faisla karne wali... Me pyaar karti hu sameer se samjhi aap..
Riddhima- yeh pyaar nhi hai muskaan...yeh sirf ek pagalpan hai...vo acha ladka nhi..hai.
Muskaan- please me sameer ke khilaaf kuch nhi sun sakti..
Riddhima- to thik hai...phir ab yeh sab tumhare bhai hi tumhe samjhayenge...unka to haq haina tumpar...
Muskaan- aap mujhe dhamki de rhi hai..
Riddhima- jo samajhna hai samjho...par me tumhe galat raaste par nhi jaane dungi...aur tumhe ab armaan hi rok sakta hai...
Muskaan- bhai mujhse boht pyaar karte hai..vo meri khushi ke liye sameer ko zarur apnayenge
Riddhima- vo tumse pyaar karte hai isiliye me keh rhi hu..vo sameer jaise ladke ko kabhi nhi apnayenge...
Muskaan- vo dekha jayega...
(yeh kehkar muskaan gusse me chali jaati hai...)

CAFE DAY
(armaan client ke saath meeting me hota hai..par use riddhima ki kal raat kha confession aur subha huyi baat yaad aati rehti hai..meeting ho jaati hai armaan clients ko bye bolkar jaa hi rha hota hai ki vo kisi ke munh se muskaan ka naam sunkar ruk jaata hai...aur piche dekhta hai..to sameer kisi ladke se baat kar rha hota hai..)
Sameer- abe vo muskaan meri so called girlfriend... Abe pagal ho gyi hai mere piche vo jo bolu jab bolu tab lakar deti hai..aur paise to lutati hai mujhpe..aish hi aish hai mere..
(yeh kehkar vo apne dost se baate karte karte chala jaata hai..aur armaan use dekhta hua sochta hai..)
Armaan- muskaan?..nhi yeh me kya soch rha hu...aur bhi to muskaan naam ki khi ladkiya hogi...aur muskaan kabhi aise ladke se pyaar nhi kregi..
(yeh sochkar armaan chala jaata hai..)

IN EVENING
(riddhima niche hall me armaan ka wait kar rhi hoti hai ki muskaan use wait karta dekhkar gussa hokar uske paas akar kehti hai..)
Muskaan- boht jaldi hai na..hum dono bhai behen ke beech ladai karane ki aapko...
Riddhima- ha jaldi to hai..but ladai karane ki nhi tumhe samjhane ki..jo sirf armaan kar sakta hai..
Muskaan- dekhiye...me smaeer se pyaar karti hu...aur me uske liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu samjhi aap...
Riddhima- tum kyu nhi smajh rhi ho muskaan...vo acha ladka nhi hai...
Muskaan- shut up...
(muskaan bolne hi wali hoti hai ki tabhi gate se armaan ki awaaz sunai aati hai..)
Armaan(gusse me)-MUSKAAN...
(riddhima aur muskaan door ki side dekhti hai...to vha armaan aur rishabh door par khade hote hai..)

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Originally posted by: yoga123

Interesting one...thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: PINky733

Soo cute armaan riddhima
I love so much ar fight
Finally armaan ne smile kiya
Thanks for the pm nikki
Keep updating


Thanku so much..!!!
I am glad u liked it..!
will update soon..!
take care..!
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