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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#251

Amazing story,

keep it up,

Gosh what has happened to Khushi,

where is Tarang??

Gosh what has Arnav done!!!

Loved Kinara, she is just so sweet!!!

Hope everything is okay!!

Waiting for your next update,

loved your story, the way it has progressed,

Take Care!!

😊

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Hello Zee , when are you planning to update ?

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@aamir18

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#253

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Zee

@aamir18

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#254

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

this is the 1st time i am commenting first...
All the events happening were like slap on arnav's face...
Seriously yar...
How much more is there for him to witness??
I just hope arnav doesn't take any other hazy step this time...
He was still talking to her in bad tone nd language...
Kinara wala doubt clear kar do jaldi... ;)
But seriously zee , cash??? He he i litrally laughed at it...

Cash on delivery will work??? :D

Edited by piyaarshi - 10 years ago

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#256

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oh god i am speechless!
I can't describe how i am feeling right now.
Arnav,i hate him so much.loath him for what he did with khushi.
Today he got one reality check.khushi is not his any more.
Waiting for next one.

Edited by -BROKEN_ANGEL- - 10 years ago

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shimerrr

@shimerrr

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#257

love you zee
thanks for dedicating this chapter to me ...and you totally stunned me with what you wrote...i am unbelievably happy with the context of it ...gosh asr ur so delusional honey ...cant believe a day would come when i will see khushi as bold as this ...i just love d way u have potrayed her ...strong and bithy for people like arnav and warm ...loving for her loved ones ...
I dint think i will read something so amazing about khushi cos all we get to read is about how khushi has forgiven arnav or how even after arnavs condenmable sins khushi had accepted him back in her life after some rabba veys and eyelocks...but reading this ff gives a realistic view about how her life should be shown cos no man should have the power to make u feel unworthy of urself ...and i am sure i am gonna love all d future updates of this story as well ...
I will once again commend u for writing such an amazing fiction which is so addicting and after reading it ur heart says "I WANNA MORE"...u r a fabulous writer zee so keep writing and keep posting.

Edited by shimerrr - 10 years ago

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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#258

I always wanted to read a story where Kushi is strong and hits right back at him.. always..

Then why is it that when I read this one where Kushi is as strong as I have ever wanted her to be, I feel bad for ASR? Must be my undying love for ASR... This man can get away with murder as he is the king of my fantasy land..

Just tell me one thing.. is there hope for Arshi in this story? I desperately need something to hang to hope here...

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#259

@Bold-- Yes.

I can't say anything else. 😊

Originally posted by: FLGirl
I always wanted to read a story where Kushi is strong and hits right back at him.. always..

Then why is it that when I read this one where Kushi is as strong as I have ever wanted her to be, I feel bad for ASR? Must be my undying love for ASR... This man can get away with murder as he is the king of my fantasy land..

Just tell me one thing.. is there hope for Arshi in this story? I desperately need something to hang to hope here...