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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 20

You are back to be dead Bhatia" RK said angrily as he reached out for his gun from his pocket but just then he felt a gun point at his own head.

Bhatia laughed seeing him shocked. "What do you think RK..? You would lay a trap for me and I would entangle in it like a fish? You were still a baby RK when I had finished with playing all these games.." he said laughing as one of his body guard held the gun on RK's head.

RK looked at him shocked.

"You are guessing it right.. Go on.. I knew that it was you who was trying to bring me back to India.." he said laughingly as he sat comfortably on the chair.

"Whatever you may do Bhatia, I will finish you off.." he said angrily.

"What is all this happening?" Mr. Kapoor asked dreading.

"Ohh you are also here.. I had next to forgotten your presence.. Mr. Kapoor.. This man is no MBA from London nor is he any manager.. How can he be..? He is just a thug of the streets. I was least interested in what is happening in this company except for that which was related to my deal. And when Mr. Kapoor talked to me about coming to India and that his project manager has got some kind of strange clause out of company's policies.. I felt suspicious. Who was this manager so much interested in getting me here.. and that's when I asked him your name... And then.. You can very well understand what went through my mind.. I decided to just once and for all finish this Kundra story..." He said laughing slightly. Suddenly his expression changed to that of disgust "Your father was stubborn but you are a leech... You have just gotten after my life!! Dont you have anything better to do?" He asked in a low penetrating tone.

"If you knew that I am here and still you came.. You are the biggest idiot.." RK said smiling evilly.

"That's your misconception RK. For now.. You are in my clutches.. And in not more than 5 minutes I will finish you off.." he said confidently as he sipped his glass of wine.

"I wont be finished until I finish you.." RK said angrily.

"Last time you said the same but see I am here.." Bhatia spread his arms beside him.

"You were saved because of.." RK suddenly stopped himself. He didn't want to take Malik's name else Madhu might know the truth.

"Yes you are right.. I was saved because of my destiny.. And yes, how can I forget.. Because of Shamsher Malik.." he said.

RK looked at Madhu dreading and saw her getting shocked. Madhu suddenly felt a blow. Was her father's name being taken here. What he has to do with all of this? Bhatia said Malik saved him.. Did he work for Bhatia..? Did he have anything to do with Rishu's parent's murder? She looked at RK wide eyed. RK feared Madhu getting to know the reality. She wouldn't be able to take it and he cant see her broken.

"Because.. Because you used him to save yourself and that's why I killed him." RK said while eyeing Madhu trying to avert the discussion from Malik. He deliberately said that he killed him so that Madhu's attention gets diverted to her father's murder by him and hate him.

Madhu looked at him in shock and then back to Bhatia. She felt something wrong in RK's behavior. His eyes showed a strange fear which she had never seen in him. Not even when she had told him that she didn't love him at all.

RK was held by the two body guards. He looked around to search for Sultan. He could have gotten himself free from those men but he was afraid that if anything out of hand occurs Madhu might get in some danger. He wanted Sultan to come and cover Madhu. But couldn't find him.

"I am indebted to that man you know RK.. He was really the man of his words. He did give his life to save me.." Bhatia said laughing. "but he was stupid enough".

Madhu stared at him dreading. His father worked with Bhatia? She was dreading something bigger and uglier must not be beneath all this. Just then one of the man holding RK fell down. RK looked and saw Sultan standing behind. He had hit him in the head with the back of his gun.

Bhatia looked at him shocked. "Go cover Madhu" RK said in an instant and the next he turned and kicked the other man on his leg. The man fell down and RK stepped on his back and made him lie on the ground as he kept him on place by his weight. He loaded the gun in an instant and pointed at Bhatia.

"You are gone!" He said with a clenched face. He shot the gun but the man below him pushed him aside and the bullet missed the target.

RK involved into a fight with that man while Sultan held Madhu's hand and dragged her to the side.

"Sullu what are they saying..? Papa was with Bhatia? What is all this..? Please tell me.." she asked restlessly.

Sultan smiled hearing Sullu from her even in such a situation. RK is right.. she is really pure' he thought to himself. "Don't worry Madhu.. I will tell you everything later.. You just stay low.. please.. if you get in any danger RK would leave everything to safeguard you.." he tried to make her understand.

"Yes" Madhu nodded her head. "Please take his care.."

"Don't worry I am around.. As soon as you feel any danger.. Just stay close to me.." he said as he patted her head.

Just then there was a sound of gun shot. Sultan and Madhu both turned to the source of sound dreaded and saw Bhatia standing with the gun while pointed at RK. They looked at RK in shock but found him still fighting with the man. They heaved a sigh of relief while Sultan ran in an instant to cover him.

The other employees present in the meeting had by now ran away hearing the gun shot. Sultan ran to Bhatia and kicked his hand which made his gun fall at a distance. Bhatia lookd at him shocked.

"This has nothing to do with you Sultan.. Stay out of it.." Bhatia said angrily.

"Thats none of your concerns.." he said as he tightened his elbow around Bhatia's neck.

Bhatia tried beating him off but couldn't. Sultan looked at RK who had by now kicked the man on his neck while the man fell off. RK pointed the gun straight at his head. He was about to pull the trigger when he remembered Madhu. He had destroyed her life because he killed her father. He didn't want to destroy anymore lives. RK closed his eyes and controlled his anger as he took in a deep breath. "Whoever you are.. I don't know you.. and I don't want to kill you.. This war is between me and Bhatia.. Just stay out of it." He said.

"Its my duty to save him.. I am paid for that.." the man replied strughling to get out of his hold.

RK breathed with frustration. "Fine.." he said and raised his gun and hit him on the head with the handle of the gun. The man fell unconscious and RK stood up.

He saw Sultan holding Bhatia while they both were in a struggle. He ran to him and kicked Bhatia to the ground. He was taken aback.

RK pointed the gun right at his forehead. "Enough of your talking.."

"Havent you got your revenge by killing Shamsher Malik? He was the one who... " Bhatia said helplessly seeing death so close to him. RK screamed both in anger and fear and shot Bhatia on his chest before he could utter anything about Malik. One after the other he shot 4 bullets right in his heart.

There spread a strange silence all over the hall. Not a sound. RK sat there like a statue as he stared at the lifeless body of Bhatia. He felt as if something big was taken off him, like a weight that left his body. The storm that was unsettling him for 15 years had finally come to stop, that too in an instant.

He screamed with all his might. All his emotions were poured in that scream, a tear fell down his eye. Sultan watched him from a distance. He felt a relief seeing him finally unburdened. And even he was unburdened of the guilt that because of him Bhatia had escaped from RK last time.

Madhu who was till now shocked with all the turn of events was shook to senses on hearing his scream. She stared at him for a few seconds and saw him crying as he knelt on the ground. Madhu walked closer to him and sat beside him. She sat there for a few seconds not able to decide whether she should console him or not. Her father was Bhatia's associate. He might have not done any wrong but still he was with such a man and she felt as if she didn't have a right to console RK anymore.

She was confused as she looked around. Her gaze fell on Sultan and she looked at him hopefully. She didn't know what for but she felt like searching for an answer. Sultan nodded his head at her and somehow that gave her strength. She kept her hand on his shoulder. RK looked at her for a second and then threw himself on her as he hugged her tightly. He cried like a child. The child who wasn't able to cry on his mother's blood pooled body. A child who wasn't able to cry at his parent's loss. Madhu patted his head and as she cried along with him.

After a few minutes Madhu felt he had quitened down. She felt a relief that RK was unburdened after but shhe had a lot of questions in her mind now that she wanted to be answered. She was about to break the hug to face him when she felt RK's body limping over her. Her expression changed to dread. "Rishu.." she said in a husky fearful voice.

But there was no answer. She tried to seperate to see him but RK's weight was on her. She looked dreadfully at Sultan.

"Rishu!!" she screamed looking at Sultan. She couldnt get anything out of her mouth now.

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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK YOU!!!😳😛
I AM FIRST TO COMMENT!🥳
Stupid computer. It shut down by itself, just when I was about to post my long comment. I will never forgive you for this. 😡😡😡😡😡😡😭😭😭😭😭😭 Now I have to write it all over again. NEVER EVER EVER WILL YOU GET FORGIVNESS FROM ME!!!😡 Sorry for the delay on the comment, I will try to remember everything I wrote. 😭😭😭😭
Okay first off. That was an exceptional update. 👏👏👏👏 I am speechless. It was and had everything and beyond that. 😳👏 I am thankful that you posted it and enable for me to be the first one to comment. 😳 Thank you again! 😳😳 I am not sure if I can give you a comment on such an update.😳😕😆 But I will try my best, cause you deserve nothing less.😆 Hopefully this idiot here won't shut down again, right when I try to post it. 😡 If it does.🤬 Well I am still angry.😡😡😡 Now I am sure, that maybe you guys like my long comments but this one here is protesting and hates them. 😡 Well you aren't getting a break pal. DEAL WITH IT!😡 If not. Well tough break. I am your owner, you have nowhere to go and no one can save you from me. 😆🤣
Now, continuing with commenting the story. 😆 It was alternative C, an unknown guy that held RK at gunpoint. And it wasn't Madhu. Now I do wonder when did Madhu get inside the room. 😕 Well it doesn't matter. All that does matter she knows the truth. 😆 Bhatia revealed everything to her. Well not completely everything, but he left bits of information here and there. 😆 Enough for us to get even the tiniest little hope confirmed that it was her father who killed RK's parents. 😳😆 Now I am overecstatic that RK fulfilled the first part of his revenge by killing Shamsher and that my hope and assumption turned out to be true. 😳😳 Thank you for that. 🤗 Now Madhu will regret what she has done to RK. But RK and somehow she will be happy. Cause if she didn't do what she did they would never would have met. And the story would never have been called Villainous Love. 😳😆 Now since Madhu didn't understand everything about the connection Bhatia, RK and Shamsher. I am hoping that our beloved Sullu will reveal it all. ☺️😆 And later there on our little naive Madhu will tell everything to her equally naive mother. How couldn't Madhu know what her father did for a living? Okay it was six years ago he got killed by our Right Kameena. 😳😆 But still? And how didn't Padmini know? Afterall she was his wife? Didn't she ever ask about the blood on his clothes he would get? What was his excuse. I am a doctor. 🤣 Or I helped a poor guy find some peace. 🤣
Next on the list, Sullu. 😳 I love that guy!😳😛 He is a hero in disguise of a goon. 😆 And he has a annoying lady named Trishna that loves him. 🤣 He came in a perfect time. Knocking that guy's head and enable RK to start the fight of his life. 😳 Now that was a perfect Kodak moment. Capturing Bhatia's facialexpression when he realised that one of his guards was down. 🤣 That smile of his when Madhu said Sullu. 😳 Even in a such situation she manages to stay a little naive and well they called it pure. 😆 I am glad Sullu noticed it. Even I noticed it. 😳😆 Sullu, Sullu, Sullu.🤣 I love that nickname, will never grow tired of it. 😆 And the way Sullu took Madhu in order to protect her. He even told her that to he would be close to her and if she feels insecure to come close to him. But to stay down. Not letting herself into any danger. Cause RK would drop everything in order to protect her. 😳 That statement of his really shows how much RK truelly and deeply loves Madhu. ☺️ Well that and the scenes where he didn't let Bhatia disclose the truth about her father. And when he falls unconscious. Cause I am hell bent he won't die any time soon. As much as I am a sucker for tragical endings 😆 I am also for the happy ones. Especially given the history RK has. He deserves one big HAPPY ENDING. Now don't go and think I am finished. I am not. 😆 I haven't even come to the good parts yet. 😆 I wonder if my comment will be longer than your update. Now that would be something, wouldn't it? 🤣
Now when those two were smooching under the table. 🤣 And I heard the gunshot. I was thinking. NO! RK CAN'T GET SHOT! HE HASN'T GOTTEN HIS REVENGE YET! HE ISN'T FINISHED! AT LEAST KILL HIM AFTER GETTING HIS REVENGE! I DON'T CARE FOR THE HAPPY ENDING! JUST LET HIM GET HIS FREAKEN REVENGE! 😆🤣 Then I heard the tune of the latest Bond movie Skyfall in the background.
This is the end
Hold Your breath and Count to ten
Feel the Earth move and then
Hear My heart burst Again

For this is the end
I've drowned and dreamt this moment
So overdue I owe them
Swept away, I'm stolen

Let the sky fall
When it crumbles
We will stand tall
Face it all together

Thank God you didn't finish him off.😆 RK fought with the guy, and didn't finish him off. 😳 Now that's admirable of him. 😳 Even in that moment he tought of Madhu. 😳😛 And later when Bhatia was about to reveal the last information about Shamsher. RK shot him in order to protect Madhu from the truth. 😳 He got his sweet, sweet, sweet revenge. And I thought. YES! FINALLY! HE GOT HIS REVENGE! DIE BHATIA DIE! And then came the shout and cry from RK. All those years, all those feelings cocooned up deep inside him was now out in that moment. 👏👏👏 Just beautiful written.
And then as I expected, RK while hugging Madhu fell unconscious. Do to the shot, previous received from Bhatia. 😡 Well RK held his end of the bargain. I will not die until you do. 😆 Now that, right there is a true fighter. 👏👏👏 I applaud to you RK for your fighting spirit. Even though you are only in a story. 🤣
You finished him off first and then collapsed. 👏👏👏 Now I hope he will be okay. Maybe in a coma or something, during the time our Sullu tells Madhu everything and Madhu to her mother, as previous stated. But that he will recover. Cause our Right Kameena needs his Jungli Billi to be his Biwi. 😆
Thanks for this incredible update Maryam. 👏👏👏👏 And thanks for making it possible for me to snatch the first place. 😳 And thanks for the PM, which I guess by now I have received 😆 But didn't need to. I res before I got it. 😆
Now enjoy my long, long, long comment like essay. I think they are becoming longer and longer for each update you give us. 😆 Well you would have gotten this before if it weren't for my computer shutting down out of nowhere. 😆 Now I can laugh about it. Nothing like when I was at the beginning. Do update the next part soon. 😳 Pretty, pretty please. 😳😳 I want to know about RK. I know there are only 2 updates left. But I am hoping on a epilogue.😳 And for you to write other Rishbala stories similar to this one.😳
Edited by Ni33 - 11 years ago
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I was waiting for Nina di to comment and take the first position off soon so I could take the second one as she wanted the first one.. As soon as I saw her post that was very quick I posted mine..😊
Yayyy!! I am second today!! Even second is good!! 😛
Coming down to the update, the update was out of the world as ever.. An update that kept you gripped throughout.. 👏
I am glad it was some bodyguard who held the gun on RK's head and not some other important person of the story.. Bhatia knew about RK and his plans came as a shocker.. But obviously RK can never lose!! 😆
I loved the concern RK had for Madhu.. Even though he knew he was right and the only person whom he loved more than his life thought of him to be the worst person ever he didn't want Madhu to know that her father was the bad one because that would hurt her.. The person for whom she and her mother had mourned for years, had worshiped so long was the one who was bad from the starting.. I wonder what else Shamsher Malik had done that RK cut off Bhatia before he could reveal those things out.. 😕
Poor Madhu.. She must have felt the ground beneath her feet moving.. The person whom she respected, loved and trusted was not worthy of any.. 😭
I am glad Sultan came on time otherwise RK being RK wouldn't have taken even one step to save himself until his beloved Madhu was covered. I am glad RK remembered his previous deed and didn't proceed to kill Bhatia's men.
I have a feeling that Shamsher Malik killed RK's parents on Bhatia's instructions..
You have very well portrayed RK's, Sultan's and Madhu's feelings after Bhatia was killed. 😳👍🏼
I hope Sultan will tell her everything and Madhu would work on correcting her mistakes soon. 😊
I wonder what happened to RK.. Was he shot? Or was the emotional trauma too much for him to take? 😕
One more question- I am wondering how RK will save himself from the clutches of the law?? 😕
I am very eager to read the next update and do PM me when you update!! 😃


Edited by drashtifan1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update loved it Tfs for pm 😊
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So no one betrayed RK it was just that Bhatia turned out to be very clever.
But what happened to RK. So both the favourite places of RK are on its way; hospital & jail.
Hope everything turns out to be fine in the end.
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Posted: 11 years ago
now what happened? plz make rk ok
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hope now madhu will know the full truth
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally rk took his revenge n what happened to rk
Superb update
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Superb update, loved reading it.
Thanks for d pm...
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superb update...
wht happened to RK hope he is fine...
i want sullu to tell madhu the truth...is ur story come to ending??

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