Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#441

After sooo lonnggg... Missed you... Lovely update... Loving ArShi cozy moment amidst all these mess... Waiting for more... Thanks for the pm...

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Hey welcome back !!!

I was actually feeling claustrophobic when you were describing that store room and Khushi's situation...

Finally Arnav is feeling inclined towards her...

Continue soon..

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#443

okay...shyam was an unexpected entry and so the actions and reactions following it are also unexpected and impromptu...Khushi did what she had she felt she had to do and ASR did what he thought was the best in the given situation...but if waiting is going to be the escape route then i feel the situation is hopeless...but the one redeeming factor is that both are riding together in the dark of night

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Good to see you back...😊

Shyam's unexpected entry did bring them closer than ever in the dark room...they are feeling each other erupt feelings for each other.She still knows him as Dhruv but wants to save him as always...

Now this is interesting, Khushi is familiar with this place as she has link with it...good twist into this story.

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Good to see you back!

Fab update,loved the intensity!

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

amazngshyam need to b in jail soon

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#447

What a thriller of a chapter! Your description of the store room was so vivid and realistic, I could see the whole layout of the L-shaped room.

I love the bravery of your characters. Anjali is brilliantly sketched. Thanks for the picture of the beautiful princess Grace pen in part 1.

I hope they are not caught out by the nasty Shyam. Looking forward to the next update.

Hope all is well in the asli duniya.

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Good to know that all is well at your end...and looking forward to the next update to know how Arnav & Khushi will plan their grand escape in the midst of the thugs and the dhak dhak of their heart.

Good update and thanks for the pm

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Inspired ... Finally here. Please forgive my tardiness. Loved it! Finally the two together. I am hoping they don't get discoved just as yet. Totally taken by surprise by Khushi's quick reaction, but that's exactly what she would have done ... React first ... Think later. Love the store room scene. The secret chamber ... Complete with a hidden key. And of course the hug that quickly changes. ASR is exactly as he would be ... Quick on his feet ... Decisive ... Calculating. Loved that they did not run out of the house, instead sought refuge in the house only he could know well. Inspired very easy to visualize that he whole scene. I am eagerly wating for next update. Loving the intrigue. And once again, Khushi did not stand by and let him take comple charge. She was as much instrumental in their escape as he is ... True partners ... And true to the original characterization. Thank you Inspired for a very lovely read.

Edited by Ipoona - 11 years ago