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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi all, iam back with another part. Please let me know your feedback to continue this story or not. Excuse any grammatical errors / spelling mistakes.

Part 13: First Kiss:

Ishitha looks on with tears welling up in her eyes as Shagun marches towards Raman. Mihika suggests following her, she is confident of her Jiju. Raman is little tipsy as he had couple of drinks by then. He is having Ishitha's image in all his thoughts and sees her wherever he looks at. Shagun comes and stands behind him, she flirts by putting her hands on his shoulders. He is not turning around as he is drinking and smiles. Ishitha seeing him smiling and is hurt. Shagun bends and hugs him from back. He slides his head and moves over her hands lovingly. She says "I love you Raman", he is overwhelmed and says me to and gets up to hug her. Ishitha listens to all this is completely hurt and decides to leave the party. She decides to go and check on the kids and take them with her.

Raman thinks it was Ishitha and when he stood up is devastated seeing Shagun standing next to him. He rubs his eyes twice because he had been seeing Ishitha all over until then. He shrugs her arms off him and says

R: You love me Shagun? Then why did you do all that you had done to me. Cheat on me and with what face have you come back to acknowledge your feeling for me.

S: I felt pity for you Raman, you were mad about me. I didn't recognize your love. Iam sorry. I want to be back with you, for the sake of our Ruhi. I know even today you are mad about me. Come on Raman dance with me, let's vent out our desire for each other. I had missed you for so many years now.

R: He laughs hilariously, you are such an idiot. I was madly in love with you, but not anymore. Do you really bother about Ruhi. Where was your concern 6 years back when you considered her as a hindrance in your new life. But whatever happens in life happens for good, Ruhi has got a best mother in the world in Ishitha. And Ruhi's father loves only one woman that is Ishitha. Thanks for coming and hugging me and make me realize what I feel for my wife. Iam really thankful to you for leaving me and making me realize my feeling for Ishitha. Your touch made me realize who I love in life. Definitely not you. Don't even show me your face again in life. The son whom you killed Ishitha has given me back. She made me his father even though I wasn't his biological father. You separated me from my own son and she built my relationship with her son. You cannot match her in this whole life. She is beautiful inside out, she is the women any man will cherish to live with. She is an angel in my life. Did you meet her by the way she is such a darling.

Meantime other side Ishitha had gone to check her kids, they were happily playing it was time for the dinner too. She didn't want to disappoint the kids and decided to stay with them so that she can avoid seeing Raman dancing with Shagun. Adhi senses something wrong with Ishitha and decides to ask her. She checks with him if they can leave and Adhi runs away saying he will check with Raman.

As Raman completes talking about Ishitha, Adhi arrives.

A: Papa, mama wants to leave. Shall we go, will you take longer shall we go or you will join us?

R: Adhi beta why does amma want to leave, don't you want to see ur appa and amma dance? Where is Ishitha? I need to ask her for a dance.

A: Oh papa dance, do you know amma dances so well. You will have to match her. She is with Ruhi feeding her.

R: Don't underestimate your father Adhi, Iam as good as your mom. Let me show you.

Ishitha completed feeding Ruhi and asked her to wash. She was placing the plate when a hand from back held her waist. She was astonished who can that be. She even more surprised seeing Raman with a loving look for her. Mrs Bhalla are you up for a dance with me. Can I have the pleasure of dancing with you?

His genuine request melted her. She was not able to think and forgot what she heard earlier. He looks into her eyes and requests her with an eye gesture. She gives him a shying smile and accompanies him as he leads her. Raman instructs the DG to play the below song

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb


Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa
Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya
Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Hua ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

There is burning desire in both their eyes. They are careful as the children are around and Raman though desired to cross his boundaries is resistant. The intimacy is driving both of them crazy. They are literally burning the dance floor and also Shagun's ego. She feels very disgusted seeing Raman dancing with Ishitha. She is unable to take it that he has moved on.

The song is over and everyone applaud for Ishitha and Raman. Ishitha is trying to get down the dance floor when he pulls her hand making her fall right on his chest. He whispers in her ears "Once more". She is blushing and becomes pink. Adhi and Ruhi decide to go and be with other kids as they have witnessed one dance of their parents. Raman signals something to the DJ. Post that the music starts and the lights are reduced. The dim environment is turning him more. He pulls Ishitha by her waist and moves his lips over her neck. Ishitha closes her eyes. He is not kissing her, but teasing her by moving his lips over various vulnerable places. Her neck, her bare back and earlobes. Ishitha on the other hand is unable to resist his moves and gives in. She is going weak on her knees and is about to collapse. Raman holds her still closer not letting any distance between them. Both are not bothered about anyone and are in their own world. Mihir and Mihika are delighted to see them. He moves his hand above her waist and touches her chest covered by a satin blouse. She is literally collapsing and he holds her tighter pressing her chest further. He totally turned on and turns her around. Her eyes are still closed and he cares her cheeks. Bends down and goes closer to her ears and asks her to open her eyes. She slowly opens her eyes still with her gaze lowered. He lifts her chin and they have an intense eye lock. He is unable to stop himself anymore and rams his lips on hers and kisses her passionately. Ishitha is pretty shocked by his sudden action, but still responds to him. After all she is head over heel in love with him. She moves her hand over his hair and he holds her waist tighter and tighter with his other hand. After what is eternity they break off the kiss due to lack of oxygen.

Everyone around them clap and they get back their senses. Ishitha runs away from the dance floor feeling shy and Raman looks on rubbing his lips looking at shy Ishitha. He is also blushing at the most romantic encounter of his with her their "First ever Kiss" The thought of the same was driving him insane and he was wanting more. He was surprised that she gave in to him without any resistance. As Ishitha leaves, a disgusted Shagun begins to leave. Ishitha sees her and she remembers all that happened. She feels sad and tears start rolling down her eyes. She thinks to herself "So Raman must have done all this to show his ex-wife oh god why did I even give in to him. He will heartlessly come and tell me that he did it for his ex-wife. Oh god what am I going to do now. How can I let him know that I am falling for him?"

The rest of the part was full of stealing glances of each other and Ishitha shying away from him. Their journey back was mostly the kids experience about the party. When they reach their house, the kids, Mihir and Mihika go to the house Ishitha is waiting for Raman to come. She stops him saying she needs to speak to him.

Raman looks at Ishitha enquiringly.

I: Raman I know whatever happened today in the party was just to show your ex-wife. Please for god sake don't do anything of this kind. I don't react today considering your respect in front of everyone. Please don't do anything like this again

R: He was very irritated by her notion and was upset that she couldn't read his emotion. Why JSKR, control nehi hotha kya, mai jab tumhe chootha ho toh?( Are you not able to control or what when I touch you) You didn't resist because of my respect. But why did you respond to my actions then? Jayada uddo math, apne apko ayene me dekaha hai kya. Apne apko pari samjthi ho kya. Dekha na Shagun ko, kise stunning hai. Tumhe lagtha hai ki uske saath do bachho ke baad tumhare saath who sab karne ka sochunga. (Don't fly, have you ever seen yourself in the mirror. Do you think you are a pari. Did you see how is Shagun, after having 2 kids with her do you even think I will look at you". He taunted her.

She was very hurt by his words. She knew he will not love her but the direct comparisons with his ex-wife literally put her off. He saw a lone tear in her eyes and realized that he had hurt her beyond limits in the pretext of hiding his feelings for her. She leaves home without looking back. Mrs Iyer had been listening to all their conversation and is very upset with Raman. She walks up to him and confronts him to hurt her daughter like that. She tells him about Ishitha's rejects in life, the way she was treated by Subbu just like a source of money and not being loved. She also tells her about her inferiority complex. She requests Raman not to hurt her by these kind of words.

Raman feels terrible about his act and apologizes to Mrs Iyer. He takes solace in her and confesses his genuine feeling for Ishitha. Mrs Iyer is very happy and encourages him to express his feeling to Ishitha. They leave home. He comes to his room and sees Ishitha sleeping with Ruhi in their room. He is surprised that she is sleeping in their room. She is sleeping in sitting position with a book and pen in her lap and other hand on Ruhi's head.

He takes the book out and makes her lay down and covers her with the blanket. She had been crying, he did realize that. He wipes her tears and places a gentle kiss on her forehead not to wake her up.

When is about to put the notebook back, he understands that she had been penning down her inner feelings. He is not able to stop himself from reading it. What he read in the dairy made him dance bangada. She had confessed her true feeling for him and expressed the disgust of giving in to him due to lack of control. He was in cloud nine

So JSKR love me he thought to himself and smiled. JSKR, I will not leave you now. You are going to confess your feeling first to me and I will confess then. He says to himself in a determined tone.

Part 14: The Touchy Touchy game

Raman & Ishitha are staying all alone at home as all the family members have gone to a family vacation for 2 weeks with the kids during their holidays. Ishitha's semesters have just started and she is unable to take leave. Raman purposely avoids the trip to take advantage of their solitude to make her confess her feeling for him. He starts being very touchy with her and starts touching her delicate feminine spots in every possible situation. Ishitha is finding it very difficult to handle his touches.

Edited by iloveyhm - 11 years ago
avni_19 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum updatee!!! loved the song selection! i hope they both confess soon! do continuee soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
update was nice
BT I dont like Raman's taunt
hope they will confess soon
Thanx for d pm
Divi.C thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
When i had read the 1st part of story i didn't like it so much but now i saily wanted to read du Nord her... Superb...
felciya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely. He talked to her very rudely.It was not good to compare her with her x.Dil tod diya na Ishu ka.
iloveyhm thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

update was nice
BT I dont like Raman's taunt
hope they will confess soon
Thanx for d pm

I know, but RKB is RKB. His rude male ego. He doesnt have control over his tounge. There will not be such kind of tunts hence forth in the story. It is going to be full of Ishra moments.
iloveyhm thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

awesum updatee!!! loved the song selection! i hope they both confess soon! do continuee soon!!!

Confession will be in the next part or the one after that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mindblowing update Nithya Di!Thanks fr pm!Luved Raman taunting Shagun!Luved Ishra dance!Luved Ishra kiss!But hated Raman taunting Ishita!Waiting eagerly fr precap!Pls continue soon!
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Originally posted by: felciya

Lovely. He talked to her very rudely.It was not good to compare her with her x.Dil tod diya na Ishu ka.

I know, but RKB is RKB. His rude male ego. He doesnt have control over his tounge. More so he was drubk, he was trying to hide his inner feelings in his taunt. That made the taunt go over board. There will not be such kind of tunts hence forth in the story. It is going to be full of Ishra moments. Our Ishitha is no less, she will give cold shoulders to him for his taunt.
iloveyhm thumbnail
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Originally posted by: Divi.C

When i had read the 1st part of story i didn't like it so much but now i saily wanted to read du Nord her... Superb...

glad that I could make it up to like the story. Thanks for the comment

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