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Posted: 10 years ago
wow maan met the kids
he feels happy seeing them
n supriya too can feel it
maan rem geet seeing meher
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan's meeting with children,and he feeling instant connection with them,with meher's presence he is remembering geet,hope it will bring them close,waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
They are your kids only
You just don't know it
She tried to tell you
But due to what she did well you didn't know
And after that she went in coma
Though how soon after don't know
Well after she gave birth to them
Awww meher is like geet
Well kinda
You don't want kids
But you already have kids
What can you do now
Nothing at all dude
They sure made him happy
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!
maan met with his kids!!!
helped them to buy a gift for their mother!
hope maaneet too meet soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

lovely update! Maan meets his children n feels a connection! update soon! Well written

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
maan meeting with his kids
n help them to buy a gift for geet
he is ur kid whom geet want to told u before but u did not let her
waitng for next plzz next one soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part ..maan k dil ne kuch feel kar hi liya bachcho se mil k i hope maan jaldi geet se bhi mil le
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan wish they had a child like meher.Meher is his daughter,thats y she reminds him of meher.cant wait 4him 2 know d truth
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

It's. Superb priyanka. Maan met with his children. He felt something special for mehar. I hope maneet togetherness come soon.


thanks dear

pa rmaaneet kb sath honge abhi maine decide nhi kiya hai so wait
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 11

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Flashback In

She kissed on his cheek & snuggled close to him, encircled her hand around his waist...

Maan : geet

Geet : hmm

Maan : geet I want our baby

Geet : maan ye kya kh rhe ho

Abhi humari shaadi ko ek saal bhi nhi huya hai

Maan : geet take your time

Mujhe koi jaldi nhi hai

Mein toh bs tumahre sath apni khawaish share kr raha tha

Geet : maan please

Bacho ke baare mein aap char panch saal bhool hi jaaiye

Uske baad mujhe chaiye ya nhi

I think about this

Flashback out

*********

Maan : maa ye aapke liye

Supriya : flowers kis khushi mein

Maan : happy mother's day

Supriya : aapko ye sb kbse yaad rhehne laga

Maan : maa maine aapko phone pe abhi aur mehar ke baare mein batya tha na

Unhi se pata chala

Supriya : thanks bte

Chaliye daadi aapka wait kr rhi hai

Maan : daadi koi kaam hai mujhse

Supriya : wo toh mujhe pata nhi

Aap khud hi puch lijiye

Hum sb ne pucha

Par kuch bataiya nhi hum sbko

Maan : hmm

***********

Maan : daadi

He sees Mr. Sehgal also present here...

Mr. sehgal aap is waqt yaha

Sehgal : wo savitri ji ne bulaya tha mujhe

Maan : daadi

Savitri : Mr. Sehgal hume paper kal tak mil jaane chaiye

Mr. Sehgal : ji

Mr. Sehgal left the place...

Maan : Daadi aap mujhe please batayengi yaha kausne paper ki baat ho rhi thi

Aur koi kaam tha toh mujhe bata deti

Mein aaj hi pura kra deta

Aapko pata hai na hume aaj raat ko hi nikalna hai

Daadi : phli baat Maan

Ydi aapko us kaam ki fikr hoti

Toh wo kbka pura ho chukka hota

Aur dusri baat

Hum sb khi nhi jaa rhe hai

Hum yhi rahenge

Maan : daadi

Hum jaa rhe hai

Daadi : hum nhi jaa rhe hai

Humne phle hi sbki tickets cancel krwa di hai

Aur ha

Jaaiye jaake tyaar ho jaaiye

Kuch guests aa rhe hai

Aaj dinner pe

Maan : daadi ye sb kya hai

Daadi : dinner pe guests aa rhe hai

Maan : daadi mein wapas jaa raha hu

Aap yaha rhehna chahti hai

Thik hai

Mein aapko force nhi karunga

Daadi : bs ab yhi dekhna baki rh gya tha

Humare bache hume is umar akela chodke chale jaaye

Maan : daadi please

Asa mt khiye

Aap jaanti hai na

Mein aap sbse kitna pyaar krta hu

Daadi : schme hum sbse pyaar krte

Tu yu jaane ki baat nhi krte

Hum nhi jaante aap yaha se durr kyun bagate hai

Itna hi miss krte hai usse

Pyaar krte hai usse

Wapas le aaiye ussi apni zindagi mein Maan

Pr yu khudko

Hum sbko sja mt dijiye

Maan : daadi mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa raha

Aap kya kh rhi hai

Daadi : bniye mt maan

.

.

Hum aapko one week ka waqt dete hai

Sochne ke liye

Aap is ghar mein ya geet ko waps leke aayenge

Ya fir

Maan : ya fir

Kya daadi

Jb aapne fasla le hi liya hai

Toh apna pura fasla sunaiye

Daadi : humne aapke liye ek ladki pasand ki hai

Aaj uski puri family dinner pea a rhi hai

Aap shagun se mil lijiye

Maan : daadi mujhe koi interest nhi hai

Daadi : Maan jaake ready ho jaaiye

Bs wo aane wale hai

Maan : mujhe kissi se nhi milna hai

Daadi : Maan aapko humari kasam

Without saying any word, he left the place...

**********

Arohi : daadi ye sb kya tha

Daadi : humara plan

Ab Maan ko geet ko dundna hi honga

Aur usse yaha laana hi honga

Hum humare pote ko achi tarah jaante hai

Wo geet ke alawa kissi aur ke sath Rishta nhi jodenge

Bs ussi ke liye ye sb

Hum simple khte geet ko leke aaiye

Toh wo nhi maante

Par ab toh manana padenga

Arohi : daadi apne jaise shagun se milne ke liye kasam di

Waise geet ko lane ke liye de deti

Daadi : fir wo ye sb aapne dil se nhi krte

Isliye humne wo nhi kiya

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