Mahabharat Katha:T#2 [DONE]

Semanti Chakraborty

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Proteeti, first of all, I offer my Pranaams to you, O great devotee! 😊 You are a Gopi reborn for me, or a part incarnation of JagatJanani Radharani Herself 😃, otherwise you could not achieved so high level of devotion at this early age! You may be much younger than me in this mortal body's age but as a Soul you are much greater than me! 😊 I am begging your forgiveness for being so late in your FF 😳 actually you know what; I thought to read it regularly after the main story starts 😊 It has been started so now I am here to read & comment 😃

Today I have read from parts 13 to the latest. It is DIVINE, simply DIVINE 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 You did an excellent job by showing HP & Mathura together, seems like I was watching a serial showing 2 different places parallel 😃👍🏼 Beautiful idea! I loved the Janmashtami & Radhashtami updates the most, you poured you whole heartfelt devotion in them, ❤️ and I could feel so 😊 I loved how He glared at Garg when he was about to reveal His true identity to Maa Yashoda Loved Ganga-Yamuna conversation, loved Mother Radha's first sight ❤️ Also I loved Dau-Kanha conversations a lot 😆 How naughty our Kanha is 😆 I loved how Balaram was saying sorry, should I have to touch your feet too? 😆 & oh! Our super naughty Darling caused His Dau's punishment 😳 & yes, how deep Dau's love is for His Kanha

Loved the flute scene, you are using a lot of SK serial I can notice 😃 This made the story even greater 👏👏

Coming to the latest part, I loved the whole vastraharan scene (it reminded me of SK again) & Maa Yashoda's happiness 😊

But alas, the poor Pandavas just lost their father & Chhoti Maa 😭 Poor boys do not even know what kind of welcome is waiting for them in HP palace 😭 I hope you will make that first encounter of Pandav-kaurav alive with conversations as well 😊 & yes I want a sweet brotherly bonding between Pandavas, can you please write one like this? 😳

Waiting for the next update! 😃 Carry on! 👍🏼 May Kanha Bless you always! 🤗

Jai Shri Krishna!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Indu13
Good writeup 👏

Thanks Di !!

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Originally posted by: Urmila11

Proteeti, first of all, I offer my Pranaams to you, O great devotee! 😊 You are a Gopi reborn for me, or a part incarnation of JagatJanani Radharani Herself 😃, otherwise you could not achieved so high level of devotion at this early age! You may be much younger than me in this mortal body's age but as a Soul you are much greater than me! 😊 I am begging your forgiveness for being so late in your FF 😳 actually you know what; I thought to read it regularly after the main story starts 😊 It has been started so now I am here to read & comment 😃
Dhat !! You Are Embarrassing Me Now With All Of Your Praises ! I'm Just A Human, And Not At All Sure Whether I Am A Gopi Or Not, Though I'd Love To Be One !

Today I have read from parts 13 to the latest. It is DIVINE, simply DIVINE 👏 You did an excellent job by showing HP & Mathura together, seems like I was watching a serial showing 2 different places parallel 😃👍🏼 Beautiful idea! I loved the Janmashtami & Radhashtami updates the most, you poured you whole heartfelt devotion in them, ❤️ and I could feel so 😊 I loved how He glared at Garg when he was about to reveal His true identity to Maa Yashoda Loved Ganga-Yamuna conversation, loved Mother Radha's first sight ❤️ Also I loved Dau-Kanha conversations a lot 😆 How naughty our Kanha is 😆 I loved how Balaram was saying sorry, should I have to touch your feet too? 😆 & oh! Our super naughty Darling caused His Dau's punishment 😳 & yes, how deep Dau's love is for His Kanha
I'm Glad That You Liked Them !

Loved the flute scene, you are using a lot of SK serial I can notice 😃 This made the story even greater 👏👏

Coming to the latest part, I loved the whole vastraharan scene (it reminded me of SK again) & Maa Yashoda's happiness 😊
^^That Annapurna Pooja Right ? 😆

Yes, Only You Can Get It, As You've Watched That, And I'm Truly A Great Fan Of SK !! I Even Thought Of Including Some Of Its Songs !!

But alas, the poor Pandavas just lost their father & Chhoti Maa 😭 Poor boys do not even know what kind of welcome is waiting for them in HP palace 😭 I hope you will make that first encounter of Pandav-kaurav alive with conversations as well 😊 & yes I want a sweet brotherly bonding between Pandavas, can you please write one like this? 😳

Yes I'll Try That !!

Waiting for the next update! 😃 Carry on! 👍🏼 May Kanha Bless you always! 🤗

Jai Shri Krishna!

Thank You So Much Di !!

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@Urmila11 :-

And Semadi ! Congratulations For Becoming A Goldie !!

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Part 20

Pandavs In Hastinapur--Vatsasur Vadh--Raadha-Krishna Kund

As The Chariot Drew Up To The Grand Gates Of The City Of Hastinapur, The Five Brothers Stared At The Huge Gates Of The City In Awe. This Was The City Were They Were Supposed To Live In ! Massive Structures With Golden Statues Of Elephants, And The Flag With The Picture Of And Elephant Sewn On It, Held Its Head High On The Shikhar Of The Gate. They Could See A Tall Figure Standing At The Gate, Along With A Number Of Other People. But They Were A Bit Confused. There Weren't Any Children There. They Had Heard That They Had A Total Of Hundred Cousins. Where Were They ?

In Mathura, A Secret Meeting Had Been Arranged By King Kans. The Meeting Consisted Only Of The Most Efficient Ministers And The King Himself. There Was Another One Too. Kans Spoke To Him, "Vatsasur, That Boy Lives In Gokul, That Nandagraam. He's Called Krishna. He, I Know, Always Moves Around With A Flute. Go. And Remember, This Should Be The End Of Him."

"Yes, Maharaaj."

Kunti Gestured The Five Brothers To Touch The Feet Of Bheeshm, And Introduced Them, "Jyeshth Taat, They Are, In Order, Yudhishthir, Bheem, Arjun, Nakul And Sahdev. And Boy, He Is Your Pitamah, The Father Of Your Father."

"Good. Come With Me Now. Let Me Show You Your New House. Are You Missing Your Old One ?"

"Not At All, This One Is Sooo Big !" Giggled Sahdev. Everyone Looked On Amazed, As, Instead Of Scolding The Boy, As He Mostly Did With Duryodhan Or Dushhasan, He Bent Down And Picked Up The Boy In His Arms, And Smiled, "Yes, But I Believe You'll Get To Know Every Nook And Corner Of This Place Very Soon." And Soon It Was Seen That Bheeshm Rolled On The Dirty Floor, Laughing Heartily, While Arjun, Nakul And Sahdev Jumped On Him Simultaneously. They Had Not Yet Fully Understood The Full Impact Of The Tragedy That Had Struck Them.

Duryodhan Had Not Taken The Incident Well At All. He Had Thrown A Tantrum And Kept On Making A Fuss Even After They Arrived. Yudhishthir And Arjun Had Been Holding The Hands Of Bheem Very Tightly To Stop Him From Pouncing Upon Duryodhan. Duryodhan Made Them All Feel Very Guilty For Actually Having Come There. That Night, As They Tried To Sleep, Bheem Asked, "Maata, How Can We Sleep Here ? So Many Beds ? For Whom ?"

"Bheem, There Is One Bed For Each. Go To Sleep Everyone. Hurry Up. Go !"

In The Morning, Kunti Woke Up To See A Wondrous Sight, And As She Wondered About The Possibilities, The Night's Maid Came In, Asking For The Permission To Leave. Kunti Asked Her. She Explained That Bheem Had Fallen Off From His Bed, Arjun Had Deliberately Jumped Off And Landed On Bheem, Nakul-Sahdev Had Rolled To Them In Sleep And Yudhishthir, On Seeing The Drama Had Come Down To Join Them. The Maid Said As Kunti Exclaimed That She Had Been In A Deep Slumber, "Raani Maata, Your Sons Seem To Know How To Get Together Without Letting Anyone Else Know." She Was Deeply Impressed By The Five New Princes.

In The Afternoon, As Gopal Was Busy Mimicking Various Animals, He Sensed The Presence Of Some Demonic Power Around Him. He Looked Around, And Immediately His Eyes Saw Vatsasur Hidden Inside A Calf. He Whispered To Balraam Pointing At The Demon, "Dau, You Take The Boys A Little Far, I'll Take Care Of This Specimen." As Balraam Did As He Was Told, Kanha Slowly Advanced Towards The Demon. The Moment The Children Were Out Of Sight, Krishna Got Hold Of The Tail Of The Calf And In A Moment Picked It Up On The Air And Started To Rotate It In A Speed. The Demon In A Moment Took Its Colossal Form, But Krishna Just Threw It On The Ground. As The Demon Breathed Its Last, Krishna Whispered In A Tedious Voice, "Yogmaaya !" And The Body Of The Demon Vanished And Its Soul Was Taken To The Heaven. Krishna Whispered To His Brother In A Moment Of Leisure, "Dau, When Will I Finally Get To Fight A Good Opponent ?" "Not Before Our Revered Uncle Kans, I Think !" He [Dau] Whispered Back.

No Friend Of Kanha Had Seen This. But A Little Girl Had Seen Everything. The Sweet Little Girl Who Had Been Born Blind, "Hmm...So Now, After Those Poor Creatures, You Killed A Bull ? A Bull ? A Breed Of The Cow ? Don't You Know That The Sin For Killing A Cow Is Equal To The Sin Of Killing A Brahman ? Now You Will Be Punished In Hell !!"

"A-w-w-ell, You Saw Everything -"

"Why Wouldn't I ? Oh, The King Of Gokul Should Also Know, That His Son, These Days, Goes About Killing Cows !"

"Uff, Raadha, That Was A Demon ! I Had To Kill It ! Or It Would Have Caused Harm To All Of Us !"

"So What ? And Well, How Did You Know That It Was A Demon ? It Was A Mere Calf When You Touched It First !"

"Aah,Raadha, Well, I-I-Knew, Yes, I Knew, Yes, But How Did I Know ? Aah, Yes ! A Sage, Yes, Sage Told Me Today Morning, And Yes ! When I Counted Them This One Was An Extra, So I..."

"Well, I Have No Interest In Knowing How You Knew It, But The Main Thing Is You Committed The Murder Of A Cow ! And Now, You Will Have To Go And Bathe In The Seven Holy River ! Oh, What Peace, No One To Steal Our Butter, No One To Break Our Pots, Right ?"

"Wrong. You Wanted To Know How I Knew About This One ? Then See For Yourself. You Want Me To Bathe In The Seven Holy Rivers, Right ? So Now You See, How I Wouldn't Be Going To Them, But The Rivers Will Come To Me. Yogmaaya !"

Raadha Watched On In Sheer Amazement As One By One The Seven Goddesses Appeared. Krishna Gently Tapped The Ground With His Foot And A Large Basin Appeared And The Rivers, Naming Themselves Poured Their Waters Into The Basin.

"I Am Ganga !"

"I Am Yamuna !"

"I Am Saraswati !"

"I Am Sindhu !"

"I Am Narmada !"

"I Am Godavari !"

"I Am Kaveri !"

Krishna Said, "This Kund (Lake) Will Be Known As Raadha Kund. Why Raadha ? Will You Still Tell Maiya About That Demon And Now This ?" Raadha Said,"I Won't, If You Create Another Such Kund And Name It Krishna Kund !"

Tapping The Ground Again, Krishna Said, "Okay, Goddesses, Now Go Ahead And Pour Water In That Basin."

"I Won't About This, But The Vatsasur Is Bound To Be Told !" Saying Thus Raadha Ran Off To Find Her Friends.

Edited by Radhikerani - 10 years ago

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