RiMa OS: A Day Without You... (By: Azra and SuRu)

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Hii All...
Its Me SuRu and My Lovely Friend Azra Present You An OS written By Both Of Us...
Also We Love To Dedicate this OS To Our Darling Friend SHRRIYA As Today It's Her Birthday...
MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY DEAR...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🥳🤗
HOPE YOU LIKE OUR LITTLE GIFT FOR YOU...
HERE IT GOES REAADERS HOPE YOU ALL ENJOY IT...
A Day Without You
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Madhu's POV

I closed the door and went to the bedroom , Rk yesterday said me that today he has a very important meeting he would be busy with it whole day and also will return late and he has also said me that we cant have lunch together normally me and rk have lunch together either I go to his office or he comes home , the thought of eating without Rk was making me sad. I was already missing him I blushed remembering the mindblowing goodbye kiss we shared. I decided not to feel bad about it do something I called trishna and asked her to come to my home until trishna comes i decided to complete my household chores there were maids in the house but i liked doing work. Later I completed my work and sat on the sofa at that time the door bell rang Perfect Timing , i thought and went to open the door.
"Hi trishna I am glad you came" i said,"How could I not come its been so long we hang out" "Yes so whats the plan for today?" "Do you have anything in mind" "No" "Okay, So lets go for shopping. Have you bought anything to wear in Deepali's wedding its next week" "Oh it just slipped from my mind I was planning to go for shopping but dint get time" "Ok so we will go to shopping first" "Yes give me few minutes i will get ready" I said and ran to my room to get dressed. Rk dint like to go for shopping but i always drag him with me i always get confused what to buy, So why not give Rk some rest and go with trishna.
Trishna and me reached the designers showroom we were checking out some dresses when Anne came , anne was the designer and daughter of the owner of the shop."Hello beautiful ladies so for what occasion do want to shop"she asked "It is the wedding of a very close friend of our"trishna replied. Anne looked here and there and then she asked me "Madhu rk dint come with you??" "No he is busy in the office today so i came with my friend" "Say my hello to him" " I will" i replied she asked us to move and again i was missing rk why did she have to ask about him, Rk would have surely called or messaged me till now I thought to call him and then decided against it as i remembered he said that he would be very busy and if he would have got time he would have called me , my trance broke when trishna called to come and check the dresses. A new collection of half saris has arrived and we were checking them trishna choose a purple and white one I was confused between two of them. "Trishna which one should i choose" "Simple which one do you like more choose that" "I like both of them so you choose between them" "Ok try them and show me then i will decide"trishna said. I took both of the saris and went to the trial room I blushed thinking of the naughty moments we shared in the trial room. Oh god i was missing Rk so much, what was he doing couldn't he spare a minute and call me I thought to call bittuji and know if rk was free. I so wanted to her his voice , I tried both the saris and showed to trishna. "You look beautiful in both of them" "Trishna don't confuse me more" "I don't know how Rk handles you. You are such a Confused Soul" "Rk's Confused Soul" I said. Rk is always there to sort out my confusion, he would patiently wait and answer all my questions. I love him so much, he is the best. "Madhu if you have finished thinking about Rk , we could finalize your sari. I think you look more pretty in the red and cream sari" trishna said and i decided to go with trishnas choice. Rk would love this sari red was his favorite color. After that me and trishna went for buying some accessories it was so much fun but till the end we were exhausted and famished.
We both went for lunch at a restaurant it was fun spending time with trishna she was my closest friend i remember how she helped me in meeting Rk after our engagement those days were unforgettable days of my life.The food was very tasty but my mind was thinking about Rk only, had he eaten his lunch , has his meeting ended , was he missing me and a lot more."Madhu where do you want to go next" "I want a new haircut trish i have been so bored this one now" "Ok so lets go the beauty spa this office is making me very tired i would love to have a massage."
We went to the spa and had a gala time, I liked my new haircut and the massage made me feel so relaxed and fresh."Madhu why don't you get your eyebrows threaded" "No trishna that is very painful" "Madhu stop being a kid your eyes would look more beautiful if you do it" "No trish I have tried it once and I still remember the pain" "Madhu no more arguments you have to get it done" "Ok lets try again" i said and when the lady started threading my eyebrows i couldn't control my scream or my tears I just wanted to go and kill trishna for this stupid idea and i turned towards trishna to scold her but i got shock of my life trishna was taking my video all the time i was screaming when the lady finished I directly went to trishna and said"Trishna delete the video now" "No madhu never this is worth watching" "Trishna how can you do this i will kill you" "Sorry for doing that madhu still i wont delete how many warnings you give me" trishna said me.
After that me and trishna went to book store I wanted to buy a book of Italian recopies. Rk loved Italian cuisine i was planning to surprise him by cooking them. It was late now so i decided to call Rk and ask him to pick me from here or we could also have dinner outside. I took out my mobile from my bag it was witched off i tried to switch it on but it showed battery low then i thought Rk must have tried calling i should atleast checked my mobile now i have to face his wrath. Trishna dropped me at my home , I was feeling very happy to see Rk's car at the parking I directly wanted to go and hug him.


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Continuation next post 😃

Edited by AzraZaidi - 10 years ago
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RK's P.O.V,

I left for Office after our soul searing kiss... it will energize me to spend this busy day without madhu... lift opened at my office floor as bittuji greeted me "Good morning chief!!!" "good morning bittuji... now please brief me about today's presentation..." I made my way to my cabin as bittuji followed me updating about presentation of today's meeting all while whole staff greeted me warmly as always...

Entering into cabin I pull off coat settling on chair as lastly bittuji concluded "means everything is all set chief... we are very well prepared for it..." "great job!! I need this deal to be finalize today only... it is very important for Kundra Empires!!!" bittuji nodded in agreement then left from cabin...

I turn on laptop checking mails "damn!! So many things to be done today only!!" it's good that I yesterday only had informed madhu about a busy day ahead... hope I can tackle with all this asap and can go back home early... my mind still longing at moment when her face fell sad hearing we wouldn't be able to do lunch together tomorrow... but to my good luck I really have a lovely and understanding wife... I thought about what madhu might be doing... ummm!! I started to miss her from now only...

"chief there is one problem!!" bittuji walked in cabin declaring with tense expression... I asked him "what's the matter???" "Actually chief our client which were coming their flight got delayed so we have to postpone today's meeting" I stood up with jerk almost yelling "WHAT??" I ran my hand thru hairs frustratingly I work so hard for this deal and this damn flight has to be delayed today only... calming down myself I questioned bittuji "so what now bittuji???" "there is no problem chief I contacted to their organization and got information they will conduct it within two days again..."

I nodded in yes seating back on chair bittuji excused himself... I thought for some mins now what should I do here no more work is left... everything will be handle by bittuji and I have just go thru all mails... just then an idea click into my mind to go back home and spend time with madhu... to erase this missing feelings from both of hearts...

Very soon I reach back to home maid opens the door first thing I did is to call her "Biwi!!! Biwi where are you??" but no reply I turn back with question look maid understood it and spoke "RK sir Madhu mam is not at home... she left some time before with her friend!!" "ohh... okay fine!!!" I took out my cell dialing madhu's number waiting patiently but to my bad luck it came as to be switch off... I inquired to maid "did she said anything when she will return or where they both went??" maid thought for a moment then replied back "I don't know about it sir but heard them about shopping thing..."

Changing into track pant and t-shirt I lay on bed thanking god for saving me from this shopping thing... I always found it very girly to roam like crazy in every shop... its good madhu got some company otherwise she would had drag me to shopping and I hate it... I giggle thinking about her childishness whatever she took got confuse every time in two ways... then cutely she will ask "RK tell na which one will look good I m confused!!!" my cute confused soul... I pity for her friend that how she might be handling my confuse biwi... god bless her...

I ate lunch alone which was prepared by maid and missed madhu more... after so long I m having lunch alone "missing you so much Biwi!! Please come home soon..." I spoke to myself... after lunch I took my laptop to reply and check all mails...

Shutting off laptop I looked at watch as it strikes 3 o'clock means half day still remaining... I completed all pending works then thought what to do next... a yawn escape my mouth giving me signal time to sleep as nothing interesting is left beside missing my gorgeous Biwi... I thumped on bed soon sleep took over my mind...

When my eyes flicker it caught up withdarkness... I groan rolling to other side taking cell phone I check for time its 7o'clock means I slept a lot... I check for madhu's miss call nd found none so tried her number but in vain still switch off... after freshen up I walk downstairs and heard noise coming from kitchen so checked in... maid turn around asking "RK sir u need anything??" I was going to reply just then an idea click in my mind "nothing moreover u take leave a now..." she gave me confusing look "ya u can take leave I will handle it..." she nodded then left...

I peep in refrigerator to make out what I can prepare for dinner... my eyes caught with spinach then I search for paneer... "madhu's fav palak paner I will surprise her today..." taking my cell phone I google recipe of it... then going step by step I started to cook it... after an hour of war finally I won... taking a spoonful I tasted my own prepared dish of first time "ummm!! It's quite yummy... madhu will love it..."

I did all arrangement of candle light dinner on our open terrace a perfect and romantic dinner after this long missing day... I came down in living room turning on TV I fidgeted with channels again and again stealing glance on wall clock... "Ting Tong!!" I jumped up finally she is here...

Continuation below...

Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Writer's P.O.V

Madhu rang the bell and was waiting for Rk to open the door. Rk opened the door and hugged madhu tightly , madhu also hugged him back " I missed you ..." before madhu could complete her sentence Rk took her lips in his and started kissing her passionately they stopped kissing when they were in need of breath. Rk hugged her again and said " I missed you more" "Rk lets go inside first" "Ok let me take the bags looks like you have done a lot off shopping" "Yes" madhu replied they went inside and sat on the sofa cuddling up with each other."Madhu with whom u went for shopping" "I went with trishna. How was your meeting??" "My meeting got canceled madhu and i came back home planning to spend time with you" "Awww... I didn't knew that or I would have surely come back , Why didn't you call me ??" "I tried calling you many times but your phone was switched off and why didnt you call me?" "Yes i didn't check my phone whole day, I didn't call because you said it was a very important meeting you would be busy whole day so i didn't wanted to disturb you" "Madhu nothing is more important than you , You could have called me or at least checked your phone" "Sorry Rk from next i will check my phone" "Biwi you have no idea how much i missed you. Every few minutes i was checking the time but the time doesn't seem to pass it was a very long day" "I also missed you , I was thinking about you all the time" "Ok let's leave it now . Guess what I did" "Hmmm... I don't know you tell" "I made your favorite Palak Paneer" madhu exclaimed happily "I love you come let's eat" "No you are not going to eat it" "Why??" "Because today i am going to feed my beautiful wife" Rk said. He has already set the table on the terrace and with a candle in the center. Madhu was surprised to see it , she was loving this she never knew that Rk will become this much romantic missing her "Rk this is beautiful" "Come let's eat now" Rk said... RK feed her nd curiously waited to know her views...

First madhu made weird face looking at which RK's face fall then madhu spoke lovingly kissing on his cheek "its really yummy just like you my yummy Hubby..." RK smirk at her naughty comment... after that both feed each other happily as madhu narrated her whole day to him...

After changing into comfy cloth madhu lay on bed beside RK... she turn off night lamp just then RK hugged her from back "I miss you Biwi!!" "I miss you too my hubby!!" RK nuzzle her neck... madhu giggle saying "RK stop it u tickling me... I want to sleep now I am tired..." "not so soon biwi... I m not sleepy and its because of u so time to pay back..." madhu turn around facing him with questioning look she asked "why because of me??" "as u left me alone today making to sleep in noon... so no more question time to pay..." "but RK..." her voice cease as RK took her lips into his kissing her passionately... very soon their room filled up with sweet moans filling the void of A DAY WITHOUT YOU!!!



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Edited by AzraZaidi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happy birthday Shreya agin 😉 Hope you like our Surprise !!!!

Coming to the OS , Suru your idea was awesome !!! I remember you said me that u are gng wit ur frnds so I went to shopping and then ur plan got cancelled, I missed u and u missed and this is how the idea came to you 😉😉 I still cant believe it , you got such an awesome idea wit our situation why doesn't my mind get such ideas !! And I am glad you liked wat I wrote I was so nervous while sending you 😆😆😆 and then wen u liked wat I write , I felt so good . I was so busy I thought I wont get time to write but see I did it 😃😃
Edited by AzraZaidi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Azra and SuRu😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres!!!
firstly Happy BIRTHDAY shriya dear!! hope u like the OS!!
second I really enjoyed writing this OS wid u azra dear!!! u wrote madhu's pov awesomely nd that candle light dinner idea!!! hope in future will write more stories in combo pack!!!
Edited by My_VivJaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
nyc update and also a nyc bday gift
Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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res/unres
aww...thank u so much for dedicating it 2 me...u all really made my day 2day ...love ya loads ! ❤️
beautiful os ...it was sweet as well as passionate...n d title is beautiful ⭐️
d banner as i already said ...is just so WOW 👏
truly loved it ! thank u so much once again ...so happy tht u both r my friends ! ❤️
Edited by shriyakadge - 10 years ago
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Lovely & Romantic OS, Azra & Suru!

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