Vidarth OS : Just deserts - Page 8

Originally posted by: sweetbutbroken

THEY'RE MARRIED!!! I'm liking this OS a lot already... heheh "always worn out by the time he was done with her" ... very subtle yaar, very subtle 😆 I'm the queen of being subtle 😆

Burst into tears... from burning a cake? Why do i suddenly get the feeling that Vids is pregnant... unless she's just acting out of character... either way I'm loving it!! She has a lil secret!

Awww married Parth is too adorable...the way he automatically hugs her and then she so lovingly says (thinks?) that he makes her a better person... so much sweetness I'm going to get diabetes (that was my pathetic attempt at a joke 😛) I don't like fluff to be honest. But I had fun writing this😆

I love how he doesn't even care that there's some random burnt stuff in his kitchen, but he automatically checks Vidushi to make sure she hasn't injured herself... can he get any more adorable? purple and white are my favourite colours too... just saying 😛 Purple= Royal. White= Peace. That was the logic. Btw, I like purple a lot 😛

I like how you focused on the way in which they're opposite to each other... i feel like a lot of OS's focus on how they're so good for each other because they're so similar and have been through rought times... which is all well and true... but it was nice seeing this aspect of their relationship where they're so different yet so perfect for each other... you get me? (did that make any sense at all?) You are making perfect sense! I'm glad that the contrast was noticed!😳

"Papa ka shop nahi hai" hahahahah nice line there... trust Parth to be sarcastic like that... and what's with the obsession with cake? It's cute but I feel like it's somehow supposed to be a hint or something... she's pregnant isn't she? Is it her pregnancy cravings? Hmmm..

P.S. I should probably mention that I'm reading this while writing at the same time so i don't miss anything... 😊

Love the line about how the fact that Parth had grown to love her was enough for Vidushi... I really hope that their relationship (on the show) reaches a point like this sometime soon because I do feel that Vidushi loves Parth despite all his faults and it's about time that he recognised that and reciprocated that love for her. I always feel that Vidushi loves him with all her heart. I have different theories for that.

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Vidushi as an interior designer? i always felt that Vidushi is not interested in engg. Dance is her passion. I mostly think of her as a fashion designer though! Never imagined it but somehow I think it would suit her. "Feisty hellcat" that's something I've never heard before but I LOVE IT!! We should all call Vidushi that as a nickname from now own... feisty hellcat 😆 Wait for it in TPT . Funny that the 17 chappie has little hints!

"She wanted something. And something was not the cake"... this is turning more into a mystery than a fluffy OS... WHAT IS GOING ON? "She's already grated the chocolate"... oohhh maybe she has a surprise for him... maybe it's his birthday or something and he forgot?!? we are getting warmer!

Hehe i really like this bubbly and excited Vidushi... she reminds me a bit of a little child when she was trying to each the chocolate without Parth noticing... but she's so different from the Vidushi on the show, it's refreshing. I always thought of Vidushi as a spontaneous, think later act first person

THE KISS!!! Too cute and the way Parth is so impatient ... no words ☺️ and the banter between them is really adorable too... it's like they go from being a grown married couple to a young teenage couple in just a matter of seconds... the tickling was really adorable as well by the way 😆 I always thought that they will be playful and open once they accept each other.😳

I like the little Sandhir reference as well and the fact that Randhir knew that Vidarth were endgame all along... it's a small part of the OS but i really liked it.

Awww Parth's masterpiece isn't the cake but the happiness in his wife's eyes... seriously where do you find a husband like this? tell me so i can buy one (in the future of course) but he is absolutely perfect. The way he handles a vulnerable Vidushi by saying all those sweet things about her... lost for words once again... Parth is, afterall, a sugar factory. Plus I think he would handle Vidushi very well (pun implied)

IT'S THEIR ANNIVERSARY??? Oh gosh why didn't I see it earlier, all the signs were there... lol and here i was thinking that Vids was pregnant. Awww now Parth's vulnerable and Vidushi's comforting him... seriously, cutest couple award goes to Vidarth (in this OS) without a doubt.

Hahaha "I'll just have to take you as my gift. And unwrap you"... looks like that baby is coming anyways 🤣 YES. The next os will be about that 🤣

Absolutely loved this OS... It took me ages to read just because I kept stopping every 10 seconds to re-read cute scenes and fuss over the Vidarth romance... awesome work, you're seriously a great writer so PLEASE write more soon 😳😳😳 Thanks for ur adorable comment Rae!

- Rae

Originally posted by: sweetbutbroken

^^ hehe glad you liked the comment... waiting for tomorrow so i can read the next chapter of The Plot Thickens