**~{The Legendary Eight}~** (tbp FF) - Page 13

Originally posted by: aishu3003

fantastic part👏

very much interestingg😊

continue soonish⭐️

thank you so much aishu
means a lot

Originally posted by: sneha02

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Mads... missed you loads my long lost sis... WELCOME back...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">N what a bonanza...😃😃...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Loved this treat...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">N it was worth all the wait... so pls do not be sorry at all... glad you just continued...love you</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Coming to this part... well you gave balanced a new name.. i can call it the Legendary Eight from now on😆... yes its that perfectly balanced between them all...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Kd waking up RV ... could actually imagine that scene...yes...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">N the girls...were soo cutesy... miss these dolls yaar..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Then that little eye to eye talk between KD Kia... wanna know how they are connected n why do they get tongue-tied... n loved Kd's friendship with Panchi too... n Juhi samar interaction was well done too...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">N the best part was RV making it a point that Panchi does not misunderstand him... wow... library scene was my fave...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">N well that princi talk got me all intrigued... so bang on girl... you hit the bull's eye..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Its light n relaxed on the fore but something mysterious seems to be lurking too... some secret that's gonna create upheaval... but that's gonna be interesting too.. so bring it on...</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Loved it again... all the small scenes... N dying to read more... but yea take your time... dont stress</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Love you re...😃</font>

Nehaaa I missed you sooo much dear I read your comment four times and every time I read I feel something special.

OK now that's a really big complement ...c'mon yaar it takes time to digest such things . I got the idea of that waking up scene in my maths period when I was feeling very sleepy all credit goes to my maths teacher. ...hehehe.

Thank you so much for your comment Neha it really means a ton. I can't give a detail reply though I want to tell you many things and I don't hope because I am sure you will understand

lotsss of love
Madhura

Originally posted by: priya1101

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Res.😳
Unres.

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">First of all,welcome back sweet-heart,i missed you sooo
much.</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Now coming to the update,It's superb meri madz Maharani,moi loved it.</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Loved the mystery factor,it's getting more and more
interesting with every passing update,you penned everything beautifully,i
thoroughly enjoyed reading it.</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">I can actually imagine everything happening infront of moi
eyes,your works always give that visual effect and they are always a treat to
read.</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Kisha getting visions at the same time in the classroom and
looking at each other and smiling,as if they knew each other since ages,RaHi's
part in library and how Ranveer wants Panchi,to never misunderstand him,Panchi
understanding him and the pain he faced being alone,just looking into his black
eyes,which conveyed so much...Woww...everything was superb.</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Loved Pansh bond also,Hima convo was also a treat to
read,especially the moment where Juhi smiles and Samar's heart literally jumped
and gave a feeling as if he has seen her smiling thousand times,even though they
met recently.Bobby and Piddhi's fights...Miss all the couples
yaar,RaHi,KiSha,HiMa,Amby.This is a well-balanced FF.</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">I am eagerly waiting for the mystery of the room,to
unfold.Few teachers gathering and talking about the
mystery of the room in Ramanujam Sir's cabin was interesting,their tension regarding
that room,and Samar hearing their convo about Fate again playing it's game...etc...,So,Kiya
is going somewhere lately in the night,i guess she is going to that room,to
know what exactly is there in it.Ek aur baat,beech mein 1 hour Kiya kahi gayab
hogayi thi na leisure period mein,jab sab log canteen mein the,tab vo wapas
aayi,beech mein woh kaha chali gayi thi,i think something is cooking in her mind
and she is trying to find out the mystery,kyunki jab Panchi ne poocha ki woh
kaha gayi thi,usne kuch nahi bataya aur baat taal di,she ignored and diverted
the topic,Loving this FF duhling...Very very interesting.</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Continue soon.
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Loads of love.</font></font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#9966FF">Priya.</font></font>

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* A tight hug *
Thats what I want to give you Priya oppss Pyari Priya ;) I missed you soo much dear . Your comment girl how do you manage to bring this smile on my face I am still showing my 32 though I don't have all of them I am small na thats why hehehe...ok it seems you literally learn my chapters hahah its not possible buts it is really a big thing for a writer if the reader remember the little details written by her . Thank you so much . Hmmm mujhe apne dil pe ek bada sa pathar rakhana pad raha he because Kiya is not going to the room .You will get to know soon ...very soon . Tilll then thanks you. I can't write more though I want . Sorry , hope you will understand .

lots of love
Madhura

Originally posted by: Prince6495

amazing update

loved it ..

kisha hearing screams and see vision

and where was kiya and now where is she heading ..

its getting mysterious now ..

and rahi , hima too feeling that weired feeling ..

I am soo hooked to it ...

plzz update nxt part soon ..

cant wait .😊

thanks Stavan
and sorry I didn't leave comment on many of your work
I am so sorry for that
OMG its a big thing I am able to gain your interest
thank you so much

lots of love
Madhura

Originally posted by: RAKA_

Awesome part. Update soon😃

thanks dear

Originally posted by: hangok

owww great part,

like the scene in class with kd, kiya and panchi,

panchi was angry because he solve the problem first😆

and the scene in library with panchi & ranveer were just great,


thanks for pm

thanks dear 😃 😃
I am sooo happy you liked it 😳 😃

lots of love
Madhura

Originally posted by: Kishafan_4ever

Hey Madzy 🤗

Update Soon 😊

yes captain updating
thanks

I want to update on next page

Corridor



She clutched the stole around her tightly and walked towards the side door of the school building steadily. A tear trickled down her cheeks as she recalled the scene in her room a hour ago.

They got in their room tired throwing their bags on the bed they changed . Kiya adjusted her pink night dress when she heard Panchi shouting outside the bathroom. She quickly opened the door and saw Panchi holding three letters in her hand .
"Letters!!" Panchi again shouted holding the letters up. All four of them had written letters to their family like every year (mobile phones are not allowed in RA as the authorities think it will distract the students ) and now she was holding their reply. Panchi gave the letters to their respective receivers and opened her letter. Like every year this year also kiya didn't got her reply . Even though she knew she will never receive a letter from her mother or Sister , she wrote to them every year hoping one day the will care about her existence that she is alive or dead.

No she didn't care, she never did and she will never care , another tear trickled down her cheek . She reached the door and looked back to make sure nobody saw her. Even the security was not there. She went inside meanwhile Ranveer climbed down the steps of boys hostel at his top speed and reached the door . Grills were tightly shut it was hard to open the grills and the big lock . However if you are a friend of Samar and Piddi the biggestpranksters than its not hard to break rules and locks .Ranveer saw the keys hanging from the pocket of the dead security guard only his big tummy moving up and down as he snored loudly proved he was alive. Ranveer put his hand from the gap in the grills and took the keys from his pocket , the guard snored more loudly .Ranveer opened the lock quickly and opening the grills a little slipped through the small space. He ran towards the door from where Kiya disappeared .'Why was he taking so much risk just to see where she was going?' thought Ranveer 'may be because she is my new friend or...a old one ' .

Ranveer reached the door panting he went inside , he walked in a corridor his steps echoing .He turned and faced another corridor from where he saw Kiya turning and disappearing into another corridor .Walking in Royal Academy's corridor is like doing a route march . Following the sound of Kiya's footsteps he reached the last corridor , the extreme back of the school , he never came to this side . Ranveer saw Kiya sitting on a bench at the middle of the corridor sticking to the wall.Her head leaning backwards touching the wall her hands still clutching the stole and her eyes closed . He tiptoed there and saw tear stains on her cheeks . He suddenly felt a urge to do what she was doing he sat beside her and saw the pillar standing strong holding the roof, the sky was dark black and the ground was covered with the carpet of green grass.

Ranveer leaned backwards his head touched the cold surface of the wall he closed his eyes. He had the wonderful feeling of having parents , having a family. He felt loved and cared. He felt like he was sleeping in his mother's warm lap and was safe in father's shadow like a five year old child. The feeling for which he craved for he felt it . He had his parents . He wanted to sit there for years , but that was not possible because he had to open his eyes when he heard a low shriek. Kiya was looking horrified.
"What are you doing here ??" Turning her whole body towards him
"I can as you the same question "said Ranveer now sitting straight
" No you can't I ask you first answer me "ordered Kiya
"Ok...chill . Actually I saw you walking towards the school from my room's window , I followed you and reached here" said Ranveer shrugging "Now will you tell me what were you doing here"
Kiya felt that Ranveer is the right person to share her feelings and she was quite comfortable with him though they met today only.
"Today before the lunch I was roaming around the school and I reached here and for one hour I just sat here closing my eyes. I felt that I have a mother who loved me who cared for me . I felt like she called me , how I crave for mothers love she craved for her daughter. She made me sit here for an hour" said Kiya blinking her tears
"Oh...I remember Panchi asking you about this and...you didn't told her" said Ranveer
"Hmmm ..you must be thinking I am mad "said Kiya looking in his eyes.
"No not at all I believe you"said Ranveer confidently
"Ranveer...did you felt the same" asked Kiya . Ranveer fidgeted and nodded blinking his tears.
Ranveer and Kiya knew each others family problem and understood them.They sat there for some time and then went back to their respective rooms.
Next day at breakfast Piddi was eating like a jungle and Bobby , Panchi were glaring at him irritated .KD cam there with his overloaded plate, Panch's bag fell down by him by mistake e picked it up and said " whoa..Panchi your bag is quite heavy" but before Panchi could explain Bobby piped in and said "Obviously because she carries the whole library in her bag" KD and Piddi controlled their laughter and Panchi glared at Bobby.Kiya , Samar and Booby came there kiya unknowingly pulled a chair beside him and sat on it. KD who was laughing realise Kiya's presence and became serious and started eating his food .However Kiya was too happy and nobody's presence bothered her.She looked at KD and whished him "Morning "in a pleasant voice. KD looked at her surprised .Kiya took a bite of her omelet and again whished him "KD Morning"
"Oh..ya ...Morning " said KD surprised by the sudden change in Kiya's behaviour .Kiya smiled and said "oh c'mon KD don't look so surprise I can be good sometimes" and kept a hand on his shoulder .KD felt warm at the place she touched he felt like a fourteen year old when his crush touches him.
"Where's Ranveer" asked Panchi
"Must be flirtingwith some girl in a corner ?" said Samar .Panchi cut the bread with the knife unnecessarily and a image of Ranveer snogging a girl came in her mind which annoyed her. 'Why is it bothering me if he is with a girl 'thought Panchi.

Panchi and others moved towards there first class , History. Shamira came running from behind and started walking beside Panchi
"Guess what Panchi!!!"said Shamira beaming
"What??" asked Panchi. Shamira remained silent for some dramatic effect and than said
"He proposed me " and jumped her hairs jumping with her
"Who?"asked Panchi happily
"Ranveer Shergill" said Shamira and jumped again
"Whattt" said Panchi shocked
"Are you not happy for me??" askec Shamira
"Oh...no of course I am " lied Panchi and gave her a fake smile
'Now it bothers me if he hurts my friend because I am damm sure he is not serious about this 'thought Panchi angrily

Panchi sat beside Bobby and waited for Ranveer to come. After some time when Ranveer and Professor Oersted both didn't came Panchi took out a library book from her bag and started reading it , it was about history of famous places . She opened the large dark green colour book and saw Royal Academy's name in index she opened the page and started reading it

Nearly 150 years ago the work of the magnificent building of Royal Academy began. Two people from two different parts of the wrold left their land and reached the shores of India . They met a Intelligent and clever man who had abundant knowledge like them. They became friends. They decided to spread their knowledge and idea of this Institution crossed their brains. The idea became their mission and they put their all efforts and time in building this institution. The founders were Miss Suzanne Coissard, Mr George Yeltsin and Mr Corkbeck . Miss Suzanne Coissard , a woman who loved discipline and rules, her brain use to run like a detective and loved languages. Mr George Yeltsin a friend , calm, intelligent man, a good leader , a decision taken by him can be never wrong. Mr Corkbeck had abundant knowledge and physically in his 70's his body was strong like his 30's , brave and a good mentor . However the story doesn't end here , Miss Jane Lachenal a mathematicians and a great researcher who helped these three founders in building this institution once said that this institution is not just a source to spread knowledge but also to hide something a big secret. The school was checked but no proof of something wrong was found and hence these words of Miss Lachenal were covered by saying them as rumours.



Panchi knew everything about founders but the 'rumour' she read it first time and found it weird.
Professor Oersted entered the class followed by Ranveer .Ranveer quickly sat beside Panchi in boys row , he was late but Professor Oersted was too sweet to scold him, he was Panchi's favourite teacher and Panchi was his favourite student . Panchi decided to ask him about Miss Jane Lachenal afterwards first she need to speak with Ranveer.
"Ranveer you Proposed Shamira??" whispered Panchi
"Who is Shamira? " asked Ranveer taking out his book.
"Whom you proposed this morning " said Panchi disgusted
"Oh her name is Shamira ...wait a minute did you just said I proposed her "said Ranveer surprised. Professor Oersted had started teaching ' Right from the day of grabbing power Hitler had decided to convert Germany into a Nazi nation' he read from the text book.
"Yes you heard it right " said Panchi
'He got rid of his opponents , by using spies.
"Noo I was just flirting with her " explained Ranveer
'The owners of the industry were not allowed to shut down' read Oersted
"You didn't said I love you to her " asked Panchi confused
'Hitler adopted several economic reforms'
"Noo "said Ranveer
Both of them looked back at Shamira who was looking at Ranveer dreamily , she suddenly gave him a flying kiss .
'Lakhs of jews were killed '
"She will be very upset if you leave her and I will not let you hurt her" whispered Panchi
"But I didn't proposed her she just assumed it" said Ranveer shrugging
"I don't care you will not hurt her " said Panchi
"I don't want to , Panchi please help in getting out of this "
'Hitler was in great problem'

Author's Note : OK guys I know I am veryyy late nearly a month...but I can explain :\ . Unit test , School and tuition my common reasons , this time also the same .However you can throw whatever you want to (not eggs plz they are very hard to wash ) . Sorry for the short chapter . If you like this and want me to continue please give your precious and most valuable comments and if like this plz hit the like button and if you don't like...than also hit it ;).

well written Mads !!
and,,, the topic that u chose was also quite sensible