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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 8:

It was simply adorable! 😳

Asad "What? Are you mad cause I stole your first kiss?"


Zoya denies it by shaking her head.


Asad "Do you want some more?"


Zoya looks away shyly.


Kya baat hai Asad? Finally got a guts to flirt with her eh? 😉

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Finally Zoya is able to talk. Asad hugged her in contentment. It was so pure. Everyone is so relieved that Zoya is fine. 😃 Haider's hand is healing too! 🤗

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They're gonna sneak into the Moldor? 😲 OMG! Asad's past is so bitter! Poor guy has seen alot of hardships in life!

Asad "You always make a lot of noise, but you're quiet now."


Zoya "I know that you'll prefer this."


Asad "You are really strange."


Asad hugs Zoya tightly and stays like that for a while.


OMG! This was magical! ⭐️

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The entire Moldor adventure was so intriguing that it kept my eyes glued to the screen and I continued to clutch onto my bedsheet with every twist that came along! Fantastic job Mahi! 👏

Hahahaha.. The way JS escaped was Epic! 🤣

Zoya "This is either madness... or brilliance."


Captain Jack Sparrow "It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."


True fact! 😆 ⭐️

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Ooh! Matthew trying ake Zoya realize the fact that Asad is her boyfriend eh? 😉

*Scroll down*

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 9:

Ooohhh!! Asad is jealous! Me likey!

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OMG! Did I read that right? Matthew played cupid between Arjun and Riya to solve the issues going on between them? 😲 That was something new! 😳

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And Zoya get's into trouble again! And Asad comes to the rescue!

Asad "She is mine."


Zoya (...mine)


BEAUTIFUL! ❤️

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The confession and the the teasing session were truly my favourite part of the update! ❤️ The way you have written both the scenes have that spark in them which makes me want to go and read it again and again. ❤️ Truly perfect! ⭐️
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Zoya "Yes, I am a pirate now until the end."

Fantastic line! ⭐️ 👏

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Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Epilogue:


Zoya finds Asad standing alone on the deck and walks to him and holds his hand. The others are all working on the ship and singing a song.


Asad "You can go back home after we find the treasure."


Zoya "This is home only. Everyone here is like a family."


Asad "But..."


Zoya "Let me stay. I love it here."


Asad "You sure?"


Zoya "It is not only because of you and the others."


Asad "Then?"


Zoya "I have always loved the clod breeze touching my face, hearing the sound of the waves and watching the sun rise as well as set."


Asad "You never told me that."


Zoya "I never understood why I loved it but now I do."


Asad "It's the freedom isn't it?"


Zoya "Yes, the sense of freedom just like the Captain says it."


Asad "I am glad that you are staying."


Zoya "And I am glad that you don't see me as a kid anymore."


Asad "You still are a kid but you have matured a lot."


Zoya "The experience here has been the best thing that has ever happened to me."


Asad "And you are the best thing that has ever been mine."


Asad and Zoya hug as the sun sets on the horizon. They can clearly hear everyone else on the ship.


Captain Jack Sparrow "Now... bring me that horizon."


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Now what do I say about this Epilogue! 😲 Truly, the most beautiful, intriguing and the most mesmerizing Epilogue that I have ever read! I'm so in love with each and every line of this that I have read this a 100 times already! ⭐️




Mahi baby, this is undoubtedly your best fiction ever! 🤗 Thank you for this story! 🤗 Really, dil se! ❤️


What ever comes around in your life, you'll find my by your side. I'm just a phone call away and I would take the first flight out to be with you. ❤️


You and I, Together... Always! ❤️


Love you so much ❤️ 🤗 See you soon! 😃 🥳

Mina di

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well its a best Chapters&Epilogue ever
Just Loved It

Edited by -ABI- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh dear it was amazing
I am sad it ended but a happy end😃

pls write more ASYA stories when u got time

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely...

nd Al D Bst mahi.. 4 ua carear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Lo e it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome !!! I can understand u ended it so soon!!!! AsYa confessed!! Loved it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome + Cute Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Beautifuly Written...👍🏼

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