Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

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cosmina

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: rulama
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ara_000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

wat can i say abt dis story aftr reading such a marvellous update,i mean i alwaz wanted anjali to knw dat involving of arnav in her every prblm can never b d solution nd arnav also has his life,he cannot alwaz b d one who will solve her prblm nd its indeed very strange to see her sharing her doubt wit arnav abt her husband but not wit her husband but i must say dat dis update goes to shyam manohar jha,ahhh i love it how he handles d whole matter nd how he spoke to anjali,kudoos to him nd smitu di,u r an awsu writer,trust me..!
U alwaz make me fall in love wit ur writing nd d way u describe each nd evey scenes,cannot get more perfct actually 👍🏼

wanna see wat will arnav do now aftr bhaving like utter sh*t wit khushi..!

Waiting waiting nd waiting...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Khushi needs no words, her actions defended her well.
This was a brilliant way of telling Arnav who she really is.
What a revenge, Khushi!

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cosmina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

what a cold shower for the great businessman!! now,please make Khushi ignore him for the next update😆

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pia surve

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

i hope nw arnav will fill guilty!

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pia surve

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

i hope atleast nw he will say sry to khushi.

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pia surve

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Payal and buaji r soo sweet.

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sheshnag1952

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Nice updates. Now arnav is feeling guilty for his actions. But use. What is dine is done. Why did khushi bring him home. Waiting to read more.

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incarnadine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Awesome parts Smita!!

I'm so happy with the way Khushi is handling this situation. Loved the way she determinedly took Arnav to her home and made sure he knew about Buaji and Payal after his heinous accusation. And he is already so ashamed of himself that he's rendered speechless. Besides, Khushi is giving him the silent treatment he so deserves.

But I still want to strangle Anjali 😛

And I'm so glad that you made Payal to be earning income on her own means instead of wholly depending on Khushi's job. Precisely what I wanted to see in the show.

Loved it. Looking forward to the next parts :)

Thanks for the email Rashmi :) x