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Kuku: wowww princess u look so cute...

Geet: ahhh thanksss kuku and u look also cute...

Kuku: chalo kuch peetay hain...

Geet: I dnt drink..

Kuku: cold drink yrrr...

Geet: ohh achaaa,,,,, Chalo

Kuku and geet goes towards bar

And maan's eye is on geet coz he is protecting her

Kuku: tm wahan behto tmhari cold drink laata hun

Geet: ok...

Kuku to shopkeeper geet went: hey is cold drink main yeh mila do.

Shopkeeper: whatz this I cant do thisSir

Kuku: (gives money) abhi b nahi???
Shopkeeper: ofcourse I cn do this

maan is dancing on floor with sasha...

kuku comes towards geet and gives her cold drink

geet: thanksss

kuku: mza a raha hai!!

geet: (didnt drink) chalo dance floor pr chaltay hain

kuku: pehlay cold drink pee lo phr chaltay hain

geet: ok (she drinks) and ab chalo!!

kuku: ooopppsss main abhi aata hun (drink fell down on his clothes)

geet: sure!!

kuku: (comes back) geet main nain kuch daikha ao dikhaon..

geet: kia daikha???

Maan is watching

Kuku: ao naaa!!

Geet: ok chalo!!

They goes in the room

Maan sees and leaves sasha and follows geet and kuku!

Geet becomes tensed to see room and remind maan's voice

Maan: geet mjhe tm say kuch baat krni hai!

(kuku gets angry coz maan saved geet coz maan knows wht he wanted to do)

Maan: kuku tmharay kuch frnds wahan bula rahay hain (points) us taraf!!

Kuku: (with anger) main abhi aata hun!!

Maan: chalo

Geet: maan yeh kia kr rahay ho!!

(maan took her to dance floor)

Maan: kia krnay ja rahi thi..pta hai kuku nain tmhain kahan le kr jana tha (he does step)

Maan: daikho mt geet mjhe jawab do!

Maan and geet do a step.

Maan: tm jaan booch kr yeh kr rahi ho naa? Main nain tmhain sb btaya tha laiken phr b!!

Geet: main nain koi ghalti nahi ki??

Maan: acha to koi ghalti nahi kii???? Wo drink or phr kuku k saath jana???

Geet: drink ki baat mt kro wo cold drink thi or wo main nain khud order ki thi!!

Maan: acha aik ghaltiyaan krti ho or mjhe taiwar dikhati ho???

Geet leaves maan: main taiwar dikha rahi hun???? (maahii) Taiwar tm dikha rahay ho meray saath jo b hota u shuldnt have any problem

Geet is leaving floor and maan holds her hand and kurbaan huaaa adaon pe jafaon pr!!!!!

remind kurbaan hua same is there maan is tunn and geet is surprised

KURBAAN HUAA!!

Same end of this kurbaan hua geet maan k hands hatati hai and maan ko hosh aata hai and sasha is totally jaeloused pinky: wowww geet MK k saath!!

Maan goes and sasha decides to play a prank!

Sasha: tasha is geet ko main sabaq sikhaun gi tasha follow me..

Tasha: silly me pr aap krnay kia lgi ho??

Sasha: dnt ask questions jxt follow me..

Tasha:ok!

Tasha and Sasha tear apart her saari!

Maan is leaving hall but he didn't know geet k saath kuch aisa hua hai!!

Maan is exited from hall and geet is crying standing on the floor

Maan: mjhe geet k saath dance nahi krna chahiyae tha wo kia smjhe gi??? Or ab main usay wahan chor ayah un kahin kuku wapis agaya!! Mjhe wapis jana chahaiyae or sorry b kehna chahiyae haan maan tmhain wapis jana chahiyae

He decides and steps back

Maan enters in the hall he sees geet is standing in center of dance floor with pieces of saari and and crying and spot light is on her..

Maan quickly goes and gives her jacket

Geet sees maan and start crying

Maan: geet chalo yahan say...

Sasha is shocked k maan kisi ki help kr raha hai...

Geet: maan ghr chalo nahi rehna mjhe yahan

Geet: theek hai

They leave hall and maan hires a room

Maan: tm yahan ruko main ghr say tmhara dress magwata hun

Geet: (with cry face) jaldi ana!!

Maan: hmmm or rona mt!!

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Precap

Geet and maan in car maan is driving and geet maan k kandhay pr sr rakh k so jaati hai and maan is in maaahi condition.

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Edited by -KitKit- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update!!!
yes missed ur updates!!!!!!
maan saved geet from kuku's trap!!!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part maan is protectng geet 4m kuku nd kurbaa hua
sasha's plan backfird her coz maan helpd geet👏
waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice.. cont soon hun.. finally maneet comming closer..
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Nice update
Kuku angry kn maan as his plan failed
Kurbaan hua
Ye sasha😡
Precap...interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for pm n update
very nice
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