~Zaya FF - Acceptance ~|Update 4/11| Pg 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
very very very very well writtened
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Wow. Ninja it's going very good!! Don't worry, the story and outline is really strong! ⭐️
I really loved this update 😳 Zeeshan ka murder kardo please 😆
Now eager for next chapter 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Finally got time to read it all.. Brilliant update!
I loved the 2nd chapter, their conversation was so cute
Chapter 3 - I couldn't stop laughing at suraya lol
I hope zain doesn't choose Natasha..
Aaliya should teach zeeshan a lesson now
Waiting for next update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: vinu127

hey Ninja DI

maine last chappy pe bhi comment nahi kiya na!
i'm so sorry..
problem is with the damn CET system here...
from past 2 weeks, admission process is on our head!
and will be for another week
if at all, i'm VERY late in unres-ing this post, please don't be mad at me..
hope u understand

RES for reply
UNRES!
i just love the songs yaar!
ok i was really excited abt it .sorry.. now the story
it was amazing
i loved ZaYa convo
but i'm sure zee will torture her about speaking to Zain now! bl***y Psycho!😡he has hurt aliya
and suri is searching for a bride?
hope she does not go against aliya when finally ZaYa decide to become one just coz she is a divorcee
and can't aliya fight back? she does not really seem to be scared of him here...
i'm waiting to see how Zain will finally know what aliya is goin through
really well written di
now yu've left me craving for the next chappy
pls be quick..pls


Vinu! 😃

Yes, Aaliya isn't scared but it is difficult to fight back..esp since he hits her if she tries. She is now tired of the every day fights so a laidback approach seems better with occasional stuff.
I will try adding a part regarding this...

Suraiya could be a typical mom or she could be understanding...yes..lets see if I want to torture you guys😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: preeharsh

very very very very well writtened


Thanks! And..Sorry..don't know your name😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

Wow. Ninja it's going very good!! Don't worry, the story and outline is really strong! ⭐️
I really loved this update 😳 Zeeshan ka murder kardo please 😆
Now eager for next chapter 😛


Zeeshan ka murder karwa doon? 😃
Chal Zain ko bolti hoon😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Shiiya

Finally got time to read it all.. Brilliant update!

I loved the 2nd chapter, their conversation was so cute
Chapter 3 - I couldn't stop laughing at suraya lol
I hope zain doesn't choose Natasha..
Aaliya should teach zeeshan a lesson now
Waiting for next update :)


Thanks! Suraiya is a typical mom..LOL

Let's see how Aaliya gives it back to Zeeshan...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Hi! 😃
Remember me? Ye...?NO. I know you don't😆

First of all, I AM SO SORRY! I went back to college in August and I was getting into the groove of things and..umm..basically Sorry😳

In case you don't remember the story, well..your bad😆 Kidding. Just go back and read..and maybe comment if you havent? 😃 (See what I did there?? Eh? I think you did. It was pretty obvious)😆

Now see, I am not happy with the update. Like NOT AT ALL. So this is short.
But I promise you, things will look better from here..maybe not story-wise but at least the writing So here you go! 😃


!Chapter 4!


It was like a painting. A starry sky as the background and the most beautiful face he had seen in his life lit up by the full moon. She sat on the swing, involuntary swaying slowly, lost in thoughts.

"Meri mehmaan-nawazi nahi huyi" Zain complained, walking up to her.

She looked up surprised, taking in his handsome self, an appreciative glaze flickered through. "Doston ki mehmaan-nawazi nahi ki jaati." She patted the swing removing her splayed pallu.

"Ye baat bhi sahi hai.Friends toh aakar, boring se, serious types mehmaan se bachate hain, kyun?" Zain smirked.

Aaliya grinned.


"Shaadi fix ho rahi hai tumhari suna maine?"

Zain felt a constriction in his heart. "How do you know?"


"Well...when Suraiya aunty called me 4 times just to confirm whether Natasha and her family were coming or not, I figured" she shrugged.

He generally loved the smile that always continuously played on her lips when she was with him, but right now he didn't want to see this face. He wanted to see just a streak of jealousy, a tiny one maybe?


"I don't know what I am looking for" he sighed.

"Hey! That's the easiest part!"

"Easiest? It's about to get tougher?"

"Don't tell me you thought marriage was all about Disney movies and hunky dory fairytale classics"

"Oh please. I am a guy. If anything, I would be simply interested in Mills n Boons and be done with it." He winked.

Her eyes widened as she gestured as to slap him. "Besharam!"

She further continued, "This is the easiest part right now. Because abhi jo tumhare choices hai, you will easily find Natasha to be that kind. But eventually, your expectations grow and your choices fade away. That's when compromise begins and you accept it as compulsion."

"So it is inevitable? Marriages have to suck?!" he said, pressing his feet, putting a hold to their swaying.

She laughed. And Zain felt the atmosphere sprinkled with tiny glitters and her voice tinkling. Yes, a fairytale. With an end that was already written.


"Marriages don't suck unless you think of them as being compromise. When you're in love, you do everything to make that person happy despite how it makes you feel, or what you want to do. So you do change, for them but you also expect them to change. Allah ke saamney hum ussey qubool karte hain aur fir usi mein changes chahte hai..yeh toh cheating ho gayi na?" she added the last part with a smirk, looking at him.


"You make me want to be a celibate for the rest of my life Aaliyaaa" he sighed dramatically.

She grinned. He made her smile, he made her happy. It was easy talking to him, even if it was random, she felt involved. No judgements. All that she expected out of the relationship she shared with Zeeshan. She simply wanted to be happy and he simply didn't want that. She pleated her saree's pallu, wondering.


"Celibate toh tum abhi bhi nahi hoge" She faked disappointment.

"Ouch!" He pointed an imaginary dagger towards his heart.
"Sudhar jao Zain.." she trailed off, shaking her head at his antics.

"Aaliya, I am guessing by all your romantic philosophies, Zeeshan and you are happily married?"

Aaliya looked up sharply. She was unable to read him; curiosity filled eyes?


"Zain! Yahan ho tum?" Aaliya had never been more pleased to see her. Suraiya Aunty came in, a beautiful girl in tow, wearing an equally stunning anarkali and with a pleasing expression.

"This is where I leave you" Aaliya whispered winking at him as she got up. "Hello Aunty!" she exclaimed.

"Aap mere saath aaiye na, main aapko exhibition ke liye Mr Verma se milwati hoon. Zain, Natasha ko thodi der company de do" she was holding back a teasing smile. Zain looked at her, his face still holding that inscrutable expression but he did look slightly confused right now.




"Hi" Natasha almost whispered. Zain got up and shook her hands. "Hi, I am Zain. Baitho?"
He now took Aaliya's seat while she made herself comfortable on a side chair.

"Well, we both know why we have been left together'" Zain did a sign of quoting for the last two words. She giggled.

"Few days ago you came back from London, how come you agreed just like that?" she asked. She had a sweet voice but it didn't remind Zain of tinkling and chimes.

"To be honest, I didn't agree. My parents asked me to meet you and see if we can take this further.."

"So there is no typical girl you are looking for or expectation?"

"Expectations is a clever word..it goes two-ways.."

"Umm..I simply want a marriage into a happy family. I have immense respect for Usman Uncle and Suraiya Aunty and Fahad bhai toh mere Sir' ho jaate hain office mein. But he is a gem of a person. I am hoping you are one too" she smiled at him.

Zain chuckled. "What are your hobbies? Anything that we might have in common?"



Their conversation continued for a good half hour before Nafeesa Bhabhi peeped in.

~.~


"Zain, Natasha? Agar baatein ho gayi ho toh andar khane ke liye aa jao dono?" They made their way in. Zain was immediately surrounded by Suraiya aunty and another lady he didn't know.


"Zain beta, meet Noorie Aunty, Natasha's mom."

Zain wanted to talk to his mother alone first, so he was not particularly happy on seeing her, yet his manners weren't misplaced.

"As-salamu alaykum Aunty..."

"Wa alaikum assalam beta...Natasha se baat ho gayi?"

"Jee jee bilkul.." On seeing their expectant faces, he added, "Bohot khoobsoorat hain!"

"Humein toh mann tha tum dono aur baatein karte, jaante samajhte lekin achanak se Aaliya ne dinner ke liye bula liya. Puchna toh chahiye tha.." Zain gauged Noorie Aunty didn't really seem fond of Aaliya.

"And I continue disliking her" he made a mental note.

As Natasha, Shazia and Nafeesa too joined them, Zain made an excuse to look for his Dad quickly getting away from the girl gang.


His eyes scanned the entire room for her, but she was nowhere to be seen. He was losing interest in the food as well. "I guess I do have to look for Dad" he muttered before finishing his plate quick, making his way towards him and Fahad.

Usman thumped him on the back as he exclaimed on seeing Zain. "Mubarak ho, humney suna aapko ladki behad khoobsoorat lagi?"

"Jee dad.."

"Zain gale toh milo bhai se" Fahad pulled him into a hug.

"Bhai maine.."

"Ab toh tum bhi bhai ki category mein aa gaye! Bhool jao wo din jab tum mujhe henpecked bulate the..ab main dekhoonga tumhara haal!"

"Bhai seems to be extremely happy about my suffering."

"But Dad, maine abhi kuch mom se pakka nai kaha hai.."

"Haan koi nahi..tum log aajkal wo thoda dating karte ho na, wo waqt ley lo." Usman smiled indulgently.

Trust his mom to come up at the worst moment.

"Abhi toh 1 mahine waise bhi engagement ka scene nahi banega. Lekin haan, June 15th ko hum Natasha ko partly" she cupped Natasha's cheeks, "apni bahu bana lenge."

Zain looked at his mom and his supposedly future wife, Natasha..His mind seemed to go blank.



"Congratulations.."

~.~


I will update soon this time! Pakka😳 Love!



Edited by NinjaInPyjamas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
awesome update.
ZaYa part was really nice one.both getting along with each other.i hope zain get to know about zeeshan and aliya married life.zain marriage fix with natasha poor boy.thanks for pm.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
loved it
pls continue ASAP
really well written
plZ pm me next time

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