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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

Awesome update Akku!
Now story become more interesting!


thanxx...
yaa it is becoming
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashabanerjee

OMG...I was expecting..how come our beloved RK..so cruel aaah...I got it now...woww

UR amazing Akku...now i am counting on for this story...try to update regularly na..plueeesss


yaa he is not cruel at all
thanxx
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uma88

Wow akku, i have no words to say, from last update when you showed that rk is sultan my love for him reduced like snow before the sun , but the moment i read what madhu heard from radha, my love is flowing like ocean..


hayye the change of love😆
well di its true indeed
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uma88

And coming to guess, if madhu escapes from that place, those people would go in search for her and rk may find her and prologue happens.. If madhu decides to stay there, she would be taken by rk for their plan to kill her and prologue wil occur.. I guess the second chance more

prediction section😆
may be or may be not
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zehra_01

AWESOME!! AMAZING & LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST SUPERBBB!!!!! 😉

thanxx
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shriyakadge

ahaan ...awesome update di

prologue is coming soon ...yay! *dancing*
Update soon

thanxx
yaa its coming
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Akku tu jahtke pe jhatke diye jaa rahi hain yaar...story bohut hi emotional twists se bharke super convincing mode pe agayi hain..i was really counting on this type of scene..and it has come..so finally RK urf Sullu bhai ka secret thodi thodi bahar aarahi hain..continue soon grl..

Edit:- you kow what i read the update again..mujhe ek surprising wala doubt ayi...tere itne se cute dimag me itna bada wala khichdi pak kaise gayi yaar...is story ke twists and turns oh god...agar mere dimag mein itna bada wala khichdi pak bhi gayi toh bhi i wont be able to put it in black and white..you really are incredible Akku..fan banti jaarahi hoon main tumhari..👏

P.S: I hope maine laaambi comment dediya khush...😉

yayayayayayayay i got longer waLAL comment
and mere dimag mein khicri hee pakti hai😆
thank you didu
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 29

Now what..to believe her or not...to stay here or now..i should give a try to my love or run from the person you cheated me...god help me!!!

I have two options now only..one run from here and go back to my family there who might be worried for me or might be not who knows..or stay here with lot of uncerainity..to check my love who betrayed me so badly..for hope of love who already faked me so badly..for a mother whose reality is kind of a most for me..what to do..

If I gone from here and later I came to know that ths all was true then ..and what if I stay and this all is a trap again then...then what..i have to think this decision can change my life...

Yaar I m already trapped ..why would they try to trap me again...and also she is helping me she haven't told by her own my frustration made her to say why should she lie..yaa so I should stay

But yaar R.K. also taken same step to make me love him..damm what to do

If I gone then I might ask from myself always that what if I stayed for a day only..if she wanted to help me she will help me yesterday too if not then might sunny come here..so no more querry I m staying here and that's final..no more contradiction...

NEXT MORNING..

I can hear footstep of someone coming inside my room..i can hear shout of R.K. too so I thought lets check hence I hide

"I SAID that she is gone look where is she" he said as he came with two person there

I was looking all from beside..that bhai wala means head looked toward the one who always do my chaukidari

"she is here only sir" he pleaded "I was there for whole noght"

"then where is she" that head shouted "dharti nigal gayi yaa asmaan khaa gaya"

He said that and I came from behind

Other two were relaxed but I can see a WHAT IS THIS expression on R.K. face which he tried to hide as soon as I seen towards him...

"what happen" I asked

"nothing " he said as he left from there with other two

Now I think my decision was right of not leaving was right..

Well lets see what happen next..he came yaa r.k. came

"I thought you ran away " he said looking around the room perhaps searching key of scotee

"really!!!..if I got such a chance I might ran away but yaar I haven't got one" I replied

"really..but I thought we mistaken yesterday by leaving scotee here you might ran away"

"really!! Where??"I gave schoked expression "but I don't have key na...and your mustandey are here how can I go..and ya one more thing..u are one who always leave everyone..i never leave the one I love"

He grinded teeth and lefy from there...well superb acting madhu..and now I m confirm that that oldee aunty wasn't lying...this is a truth indeed

Now my hopes are back I have faith that he love me and I know he wont left me ever...just need a chance to make him say truth...

I can here hustle outside and a lot of sound which was reaching towards me

"mai toh kehti hu abhhi maar dete hain saali ko" said nazma as she dragged me by my neck to the wall nearby.

"pagal ho gayi ho kya..nazma leave her..." shouted r.k. as he makes her to take her hand away from my neck..i wasn't getting anything

"bhaijaan you don't know if she ran then..our plan will fail" she shouted by turning toward R.K.

"but you cant kill her if they came to know she died they also our plan wont succeed" he said in explaining way

"bhaijaan why I feel that you are saving her"

"why should I save her..dont forget this was me who taken her here"

"but something is fishy na bhai..we got proof from radha ma itself na"

"najma don't take mom here"

"why not bhaijaan...if she is culprit then.."

"don't forget she is your mom too"

"no she is not..she is not my mom..and don't even..."

"ENOUGH!!!" shouted that head type personality

"huzur par" said nazma but he interrupted again

"if radha had done something then she would be punished..but I can belive my sultan can do anything like this and he will prove this to you" he said in his deep voice to nazma then he yurned toward R.K.

"SULTAN!!" he said " this is indeed the truth that this girl can be problem for us in near past...so its better to kill her..and to prove that you are not the one envolve in her help you have to kill her .." said that head type personality

No one said even a word..everyone left from there..about what they were talking if that oldee aunty name is radha..if she is trapped for helping me..if this true then she would be punished..and they wanted to kill me dam what to do...

Its late night he dragged me by hand and was taking me to some place

"where we are going R.K." I asked

"1st thing m not R.K. m sultan and second thing you already hear in noon today that you are no need for us and hence you needed to killed by us hence I m going to kill you

We reached a place surrounded by mountains..

''You can't kill me ... We love each other" I said to the person who was pointing gun to me in mid night near these mountains

"need se jago Madhubala " said he " I don't love you ye sab toh ab tum acche se janti ho wake up"

"Nahi tum sirf mujhse pyar karte ho band karo apna drama please R.K. stop it now" said I with my shivering tone but In confident way

"tumhe kitni baar samjhana parega kee mai koi R.K. WARKE nahi hu SULTAAN NAAM hai mera aur ye mera mission hai jiske beech tum aayi ho isiliye kehta hu bhaag jao warna mai tumhe marne mein ek second nahi lagauga" said he is passonate way

Isn't is funny that I m still finding that person passonate who is about to kill me but still I have faith in my love too so in my full faith I said " tum koi sultaan wultaan nahi ho tum mere r.k. ho mere r.k. suna tumne ham ne kitne haseen pal sath bitaye hai ham ek doosre se pyaar karte hai tum mere ho please ye naatak band karo" I can see he was loosing himself so i stepped towards him an then I began again " ham nahi reh sakte na ek doosre ke bina ... u r my r.k. and I love you ... I love you r.k. I love you" I kept repeating the same as I can see him loosing command but he suddenly jerked me and I fallen

Seeing me injured he rushed toward me " tumhe kuch hua toh nahi tum theek toh ho" he asked

I smiled " tum toh mujhe marne wale the na kya hua meri ek chot bhe bardaast nahi ho rahi maro na muhe himmat hai tumm me maro na r.k.!!! sorry sultan miya mariye na hame mariye " I was shouting

And then

BULLET FIRES...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ab bullet kisko lagi?
jaldi update karo

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