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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

superb teaser !!!
waiting for d update😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Awesome concept
Chapter 1 was fab..
Golgappa sounds cute lol
So friends but no friends :/
chugal khor Bark at >_<
excited for next part :)
update soon :)

PS: Add me in ur PM list plz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
amazing teaser
cont soon...thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

Awesome concept
Chapter 1 was fab..
Golgappa sounds cute lol
So friends but no friends :/
chugal khor Bark at >_<
excited for next part :)
update soon :)

PS: Add me in ur PM list plz 😊


Thanks and I will...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Barbievishi20

interesting teaser 😊


Thanks...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

amazing teaser
cont soon...thanks for pm


U r wlcum...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Hey buddies...
I am back...
Sorry for the late update but I had so much of physics and maths assignments to do and then had to prepare for ntse ...
Updating part 2A..
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Part 2A
Aliya in front of barkat and other friends vowed that she will never that that zain Abdullah win over her and will stay away from him...Barkat smirked because she always wanted to be close to zain but zain never wanted and considered her as a friend...
NEXT DAY...(fancy dress competition)
Aliya entered the class wearing red micromini and white top on which a print of one boy and girl was there doing something under the umbrella in the rain...
Each boy had his eyes fixed on her...girls were jealous of the beauty standing in front of them...Zain was drolling seeing aliya in this avatar and said in his mind "haawt"
Before he could go towards aliya a boy from back said sexy which made zain to make his eyes blue...
Zain started moving towards aliya...
As decided by aliya yesterday she did not played heed to zain...
Zain was awestruck what happened to aliya...
Aliya was going towards auditorium when zain came to her and holded her wrist..
Aliya:zain choodo mujhe...
Zain: naaahi...
Aliya:I said choodo..
Zain :Maine kaha naa nahi...
Aliya:mujhe tumse koi Baat nahi karni...(and pouted)
(Zain was mesmerised and wanted to kiss her but now he wanted to solve what happened to her)
Zain: tum mujhe nahi batoogi kya huva...
Tumne mujhe apna dost mana hai Aur ussi dost se chupaogi ...bolo kya hua...
(Aliya could not hold her tears and she started crying..)
Aliya: voh mujhe barkat be bataya ki ..(and tells him all the story)
Zain:toh yeh Baat thi...tumne mujhe Kal kyun nahi bataya main uski toh...Aur tumne USS pe trust bhi karliya...she is a bloody ditcher. He makes boyfriend and make him spend all his pocket money for her and other day she is after some other boy who is also foolish like herand rich who can fulfill her demand...that's why every boy in dps call her chipkali and begger...
Aliya:I am sorry zain..I will never trust that creep easily know ..sooory and cutely pouts...
Zain: it's OK mam..
Both of them bursted into fits of laughter..and now they were friends again..kicking that chipkali out of the frame...
Zain: waise ek baat kahun..
Aliya:kaho..
Zain: tum aaj bahot se(before he could complete that word he realised what he was going to say and changed it into sundar)
Sundar lag rahi hoo...
Aliya blushed and said thanks..
Suddenly thunder was there and aliya hugged him tightly...zain was first surprised but soon realisation hit him and secretly thanked Allah and his stars for doing this...
Following day night...
Both were in their room waiting for sleep to take over but their mind started playing what happened in auditorium passage...
Aliya POV...
Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai... mein usske baare mein itna soch kyun rahi hun... we r just friends...then why this attraction towards him...hey Allah help me...

Za in POV
Thank you Allah for that thunder...apki wajah se meri wish poori huyi but wait what the hell I am saying..we r just friends...phir yeh attraction kyun..
So Jaa zain beta lagta hai tune jab se aliya ka yeh avatar dekha hai toh pagal ho gaya hai...Aur phir Kal fresh bhi toh dikhna hai...otherwise kal kya sochegi gi voh jab mein class mein soo raha honga...

Both decided to sleep but could not ...
Soon both of them slept dreaming about each other...
Time started passing..the attraction started becoming strong and both did not realised when their friendship turned into more than that..


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Next chapter teaser is same as teaser on page 7...
Will update next part by tomorrow...

Sorry for any silly mistakes...
So kaisa laga...
Don't forget to comment and like...
For pm buddy me..
And happy ganpati festival...
- PRIYA 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Amazing update 😃
awww both have feelings for eachother 😳❤️
❤️ed it..
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
sooo... Lovely update
beautifully penned!!
Pls cont ASAP
thnx 4 d pm:)
Edited by jazly_zayafan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
awesome
brilliant
u r superb
really uff iam speechless

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