ARHI FF: WEDDING BELLS CHAPTER 1-8

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arnavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#821

just startd reading and got stuck with it .
its nice one really hope to read all of it.
nice one ...

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arnavini

@arnavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

hey reading it continuously and really butterfies flying in stomach just reading about arnav's arrival. luv it mysterious boy.

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arnavini

@arnavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#823

i qas little scared earlier that arnav will cum or not but thankfully he came and wedding took place. really excitd for further epis. gtting sum probs with like button bt still cmnting to express my viewd. awesme

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Ruby Sk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#824

I m reading it continuously ...

Must say Nice concept...

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yoginna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#825

Just found this FF and its amazing!!Thank you so much! :)

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arsneh

@arsneh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Prologue
so it consist of background of arshi family nice way of introducing character👏
loved the exchange between khushi and buaji
garima and shashi are typical parents mother worried for girls marriage get all excited listening about proposal and shashi loving father who loves and cherish his daughters like princess and don't want them to beaway from her
buaji knows khushi want to marry in same house with payal so bring out the proposal of two brothers is a intresting twist
Intro of Raizada family is good happy that there is no shyam hope Karan be a good person
loved the sweet and a little mischievious anjali it was cute when she teased khushi
u didn't mention how are payal and aakash i wanna know ki woh show jaise sharmile hain yaa kuchh different character hai
may be u tell this later on
Arnav didn't come wd family kuchh to gadbad hai(mami ji style😉) hope arnav is aware of the alliance got fixed else bcoz it can be possible ki family didn't informed him about it and fixing by themselves

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arsneh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#827

chapter 1
Arnav wasn't present even his engagement😲 what's cooking😕
what is wrong with gupta family why didn't they object Arnav absence in his own engagement agree he is a busy person bt kam se kam he should be present in his engagement its weird
also they are ready to marry their daughter to d person they haven't meet even once just meeting d family its not done
as usual Mr.ASR is busy and will come for only 2 weeks bfore marriage expected it
feel for khushi her dissappointement everytime when she unable to meet him
coming to khushi's feeling well written👏
her nervousness, excitement, fear what if he will like her or not its so real
change in khushi's nature that she watching business channel only to know about her future hubby more is excellently written loved it
on d whole a good update yet i wanted gupta family to give some thought over Arnav's absence
hope u will not mind my criticism and will care to explain why dey didn't objected his absence
objecting is far away they didn't even gave a thought to it

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arsneh

@arsneh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#828

CHAPTER 2
[I]hope u enjoyed ur vacation
now coming to update it was good
and consist the answer about Payash nature so they are shy like the show
liked khushi's monlogue her confusion and dissappointment of not meating arnav well written
and blushing khushi listening about arnav so much like to be brides loved it
As u said u like to keep arnav as secret for now so no Arnav in this update too
bt as he came to definitely i am positive about next update
have a question do other Gupta family members already met arnav except khushi ?

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arsneh

@arsneh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#829

Chapter 3
what an shocking surprise u gave😆 i thought it would be Arnav bt nope it was shyam u made shyam khushi's brother🤣
loved the rapport 3 shares also the talks between shyam and khushi the way he was teasing her and she blushing and acting angry it was awesome
so khsuhi started naming Arnav loved all the names she gave to him😆
and d way she stopped anjali and covered up for arnav was nice so she is in love wd her would be husband not wdout meeting
what's up wd aunties and their mature talks🤣
wedding day finally khushi saw her husband bt again she unable to get anything as his emotionless so as us Arnav still a mystry
hope he follow what shashi requested him to though i really doubt