SS - A Birthday to Remember! Last Chap - P 17

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

perfect ending bike wow nice gift n d ride was fab obviously finally they spend time together isse achha gift aur kya hota ishita ke liye great now write new story soon n do pm m I'm waiting :)

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Divan_Sashona

@Divan_Sashona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

last part is beautiful written bike is only vehicles,in which u can sit very close to ur partner loved the idea its very romantic

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vani_prem

@vani_prem

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

seriously awesome, what a pleasure to read!

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Rinki

@IshraMiNeholic

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

nd tq 4 d pm..

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Outstanding ending Hima Di!Thanks fr pm!Luved Ishra's bike ride!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

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greenie

@greenie

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

amazing... Loved the way u end this...

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sweetnoori

@sweetnoori

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Happy ending aww such a cute update dear loved it ❤️...
Fab job...

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DiVa

@Dihiva

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest
loved this final part ! beautifully written ! ishita and raman both look so young and full of life!

they were really cute together as a new couple !

Thank you so much for your support and encouragement. Yes, I wanted to show Ishita and Raman as young at heart.. how they enjoy these little things at times when they can let them be themselves and not act all mature for their families!😊 And I think its a natural progression of their relationship which makes sense to me. I cannot fathom them jumping into bed together at this stage. They need to establish physical comfort with each other first. That is what I tried to depict in this SS. THanks again for liking it.