ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED updated PART 5 on 16-9-2014/Page 118 - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww soo cute...
geet mad behind MSK ...😉

loved tht pic at the last..
pura upd me feelong aa gaya usse 😃

and the way they met 👏
geet ka party wala scene yaad aa gaya 😆

poor geet abb MSK ki badi-badi gusse wali eyes dekhne k liye ready ho jao 😛
first day blunder kiya 😆

wil b waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well this was mah frst activity on if...beside liking...was trying from long how to comment on if..successfully did it😳
Loved the part ...

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Posted: 10 years ago



PART - 2

MAAN bend to pick his papers and saw a girl in white top and blue jeans was sitting there. Her glasses covered her innocent and beautiful eyes. Maan first shocked and then grew angry. Both's eyes met. She passed funny smile to him but when she saw his stern and rude face her face turn pale and smile vanished.




'Come out. Come out.' Maan commands her.


Geet crawled to come out but his her head against the edge of his desk. Poor soul rubbed her head and Maan staring her. She come out and Maan burst on her. 'who are you and what the hell are you doing under my table? Who allowed you to come inside. Wait i call the security and they will teach you. But before i will teach them better for their negligence.', Maan was shouting on her but she gazing him which rosed his anger. He clecnched her forearm and jerked badly,which brought her back to reality.


'sorry sir wo main apke pen...' she saw his glaring eyes and try to speak up.


'mere pen? You came to stole my pen?' He asked strongly and she nodded no quickly.

'no sir main to apki coffee..' Maan threatned her so badly that she cant even speak up properly.


'are you mad? Coming straight from some asylum?' Geet is fumbling and his patience give up.


She shook her head pacly. Meantime Dev came for some work. 'bro ye file...' he passed a file to him which Maan take without glancing him.

'Dev whats going on in our office?' Maan shouts on him to.

'what happened bro?' he was not getting the reason of his rage.


'cant you see? See this mental patient is trying to stealing something from my cabin.' Maan burst on both.


'bro just relax. She is not mental neither she came here to stole something. She is Geet Handa your new secratary.' Finally Dev cleared the misconception.


'ye? This girl? You and Mrs Maria select this out of mind girl for this job?' Maan doubted.



'she is very qualified bro. I think kuch misunderstanding hui hai. Let me clear first. Geet what are you doing under the desk?' Dev asked politely and Geet told everything without any hesitation and fear. 'Geet you may go now.' Dev send her first. Geet start moving and hit her knee against the chair and Maan glared again to both Dev and Geet 'kya bro. Kitna dara diya apne usko.'


'Dev ye ladki khud ko to sambhal nahi sakti files ko kya khak sambhalegi.' He wasnt approched by his appeal.


'bro aaj uska first day. She is a bit nerveous or apke samne t waise bhi sari ladkiya hi nervous ho jati hai.' Dev said in a teasing way and smirked.


Maan glared him in return. 'she is not my type. Shakal dekhi hai tumne uski? Waise wo dekhegi b kaise.' Maan cut him down by mocking her.


'comon bro dont be so rude. Anyways mere liye sirf ek hi girl beautiful hai and she is my wife. I am happy with her,my son and the coming one.' Dev's eyes filled with all love when he is talking about his lady love Meera.


'ya ya how can i forgot. You are from the tamed category.' Maan again make fun of him.


'and i am happy with myself.' Dev said proudly and left his cabin.


At 12:30 Maan asked her to order lunch for him. Geet wants to make sure that she wont do any mistake this time. She ordered food for him as told by Mrs. Maria. At 1pm his lunch arrived and Maan summoned her in his cabin. Geet prayed and went inside. Maan is again in angry mode. He is standing and glaring her.


'tumse koi kaam theek se hota hai?' he scold her.


'par sir ab maine kya kiya?' she asked innocently.

'tumse maine lunch order karne ko kaha tha...'


Before he completes Geet open her mouth which rosed his anger more. 'par sir maine woi to...'


Maan came and put his finger on her lips. 'no one is allowed to intrupt till i finished. Understood.' suddenly he start sneezing badly. Geet wont get what happened to him suddenly. 'you fool see what you had done.' he sneezing more and she get confused why he is blaming her.


Again Dev come as her saviour. 'oh no. Bro ye delivery boy ne galti se lunch order mix kar diye. Ye apka lunch hai. Or wo mera order hai.' Dev quickly wrapped the box laid on Maan's table.


Geet glancing innocently. 'sir trust me maine to pasta hi order kiya tha.'


'its not your fault Geet. Actually bro ko vinegar ki smell se allergy hai isliye wo chinese food prefer nahi karte.' Dev cleared the air again.


Geet pouts as she got scold without any reason and left his cabin. She come and sit on her chair,resting her head on her hand. 'ye kya babaji kaise hai ye. Mujhe to chineses kitna pasand hai. Upar se ek no k khadus. Sunte hi nahi hai. Pics me to kitne achhe se smile karte hai. Hayee' she went on drmland. 'par actual me pure dust danav hai.' Geet cribbed.
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Loved it . I was smiling while reading 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part first day he blander kar diya geet
dev is a suviour
maan dats not fear u cant say like that
one day u will bow down infront of her honesty n beauty
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update loved jahli geet b4 no any thing maan get angry on geet I hope he will fall 4 her simplesity
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part di maaneet met nd maan startd his habit of scoldng geet poor geet witout her mistake she listend 😭
dev is such a swtheart helpng geet 😃
one day maan ill be runng behind geet nd geet is gonna refuse him 😉
waitng 4 d nxt part di
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update. what a dhamakedar meeting of maaneet 😆 dev saved geet twice from maan s anger & first day geet named maan dd 😛 eagerly waiting for next
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
i didn't know about this story😡
tune muje first part pm nai kiya😡😡
anyways congrats
nice story
geet is cute
looking forward to read
dev ko acha bna diya
toh villian kaun ? maan🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsem update maan angry on geet

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