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Posted: 11 years ago
hay Kalyani firstly you have 87 buddies & secondly I am more than happy.
well be getting a happy ending
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

hay Kalyani firstly you have 87 buddies & secondly I am more than happy.
well be getting a happy ending



well Kalyani last time when I've cheked ur profile there was 87 buddies but now its only 79.
How did it happen yar?

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Posted: 11 years ago

So here is the other side if the coin.. sorry for disappointed a most of my readers... But I am not sorry for writing that ending.. I kinda of loved it...




part :9

Beach:

A couple were sitting in each other arms.. and their legs strected and entwined, and waves played touch and go with their foot... and they sat in silence... and their heart filled with love , and their face held on to the smile... and their heart and mind replayed what happened an hour back..

An Hour Back:

As they parted outside the caf, zoya took asad for one last hug.. as she pulled away, asad heart constricted... and tugged him to do something... and his mind supported him the first time... saying go for it... his hands raised on his own, and held zoya hands, and pulled her towards him.. and she stood facing him... his hands raised slowly and cupped her face.. and eyes looked at her eyes... and his face moved very slowly... towards... her.. and stood as their nose brushed each others.. zoya tilted her nose, and her lips moved close to his...with a mirco meter distance between them... asad lips crossed the distamce and brushed her...

Tears flowed down her face.. and she crashed on him... and he held her tightly... never letting her go... zoya tears.. flowed.. and they wetted his neck.. he pulled her back, and cupped her face.. and tried her face with his hands... she looked at his face... and she started hitting his chest.. with her hands...

Z: how can u let me go...

A: I am sorry... I am sorry.. he chanted. And then held her in his arms... And she calmed down after some time... And then came out of the hug..

A: shall we... he pointed to the beach...

The sun has set.. and it was the twilight... they walked in the beach.. with the waves kissing their legs... as they walked side by side... their hands brushed.. asad held the her hand.. and tightened around his... and then they sat in a quiet place... next to each other in silence.. asad pulled her close, and she placed her head in his chest, and her hands in his waist...as he held her by the shoulders.. and their stretched legs entwined.. and their heart beating in union.. for each others... and their mind telling them again again... that this is not their dream... it is the real... As real as it could... they are in their loved one arm...and their love for each other is mutual... And the relief it brought to them couldn't be explained in words...

After some time... zoya looked at asad.. and he looked at her... and smiled. And she smiled back...and they know they have talk... both their hearts are filled with a whole of thoughts to share with each other...

A: how come u r this silent.. he teased..

Z: oh really..

A: u r one of the 2 chatterboxes whom I can stand...

Z: u call me chatter box... And wait who is the other one... she nudged..

A: usma... my gf.. he smiled..

Z: ohh.. she is a cutie pie..

A: yeah she is.. he smiled...

A: zoya... when did u ...he took a deep breath... u know that u love me...as he asked looking at her with all his love...

Z: I didn't know when... but I do when I realized that it was love... the day of dance competition... when I danced..all I could see was you.. and whatever I expressed in the dance.. was it felt for u..

A: really... that was nearly 3 and half years back... and never told me..

Z: excuse me.. should I come to u.. and tell that prof I fell in love with u...she questioned..

A: w.oh actually he started...

Z: may be I should.. knowing u...

A: jee..

Z:I being the chatterbox... should have told u... may be after I finished my sturies... u r always the silent one... and with ur postion... it would have been difficult for u..

A: hmmm...

Z: when did u know.. that u love me..

A: the day u went to USA.. for ur project... me heart felt so heavy... and I didn't know why... and I told my appi.. and only when appi pointed out.. I realized that I fell hopelessly in love with u...once I realized.. I felt like the happiest person on earth...u know..

Z: god knows.. how I hated u that day.. u know.. sending me away from u...now I should thank god that u did...

A: I know.. there was something... I feel for u.. I could never point it out.. but that day I realized...

Z: asad... ur a doctorate... in research.. yet u couldn't understand this simple thing... u know.. what...

I know what I felt for u.. the day I felt it...

A: hmmm.

Z: asad... She called... he turned and looked at her...

Z: how can u let me go... Just like that...

A: zoya... he tightened his hold on her... I didn't know what u felt for me... I thought u were asking me as a friend. And guide...u know actually I came here to confess to u about my love.. appi kind of took a promise from me... but when u asked.. I was shocked.. but then when I thought.. for a bit.. I realized haider is a gem of person.. who will always keep u happy... though it broke my heart.. I said that...I always wanted ur happiness..

She put her head in chest.and just listened to his heart beats..and they just sat in silence.. asad broke the silence...

A: what about haider..

Z: what...????//

A: he could have liked u too... now the marriage proposal...

Z: mera haider is not like u.. she smiled and laughed looking at his expression..

A: meaning..

Z: if he feels something for me..he would have declared it long back.. I am sure the whole thing is planned by our parents..

A: now what about the parents..

Z: don't worry.. haider will manage.. he will find a way out.. always..

A: ok.

They sat for some more time.. and looked at the time. Getting close to 8.30.pm. they didn't want to spend anymore time there... they got and walked back to thecafe parking where they parked their 2 wheelers..

A: should I come with u to ur home.. till u reach..

Z: asad I don't believe wasting natural resources ,,, Mr Khan.. and by the way we live in opposite ends..once I reach I will call you...I promise..

A: take care...

Both of sat in their 2 wheelers.. moved slowly outside the parking...and relectanlty moved towards their home.. but their heart was filled with love and hope for the day to come..

Precap;

Ra: zoya get up now.. and get changed to suit now... the boy family is coming to see u...

Z: what...

Note:

Hope u liked this... will be waiting to knows ur views too... and ihope u guys liked hearing the song while reading.. would love it if u leave ur appreciation for songs that come along with most of my update.. the whole work credits goes to by buddy aksasya..

Leave ur likes and loves ur comments...

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so when asad zoya were parting with a hug..he pulls zoya towards him..n they share a kiss
moments at the beach😳 ln each others arms
discussing how they fell in love with each other..
asad worried of how to manage parents..but zoya convinces him that haider will manage everything😉
the precap😲😆
razia waking up zoya saying the boys family is there to see her😉
im pretty sure its asads😆
nice update😊

Maha
Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A heart warming chapter !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update.
So heartwarming and cute one.
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
unress

thank-u for PM
thank-u for continuing the story
thank-u for most a waited AsYa confession
&
thank-u for going give a happy walla ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey... its awesome... I loved it...
thanq so much fr writing a happy walla ending.
I really loved d confession...
precap is interesting ...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kals82




hai,

thank you so much for ur comments...

aray... haider kya kalti hai.. when these 2 are dumbheads... for whatever reason... they had 4 year to confess...isnt..😉

will try for happy ending too..hopefully


haider 😡 man karta hai ki bass uski gala dhabadhu.. 🤢
he knows that Zoya loves asad... n hes her best frnd. so instead of helping her he told her her 2 move on n I love u...I know ASYA r dumb.they r so innocent. bt still I can never forgive Haider..
I read this ending is inspired from raja rani movie.. I love that movie bt in that leads lovers r dead n guy cheats nayantara fr wat so ever reasons..its a lovely movie
bt buddy in show.. Asad n Zoya r two unique characters who had a painful childhood n craved fr love... .so ASYA fans vl never let any1 come in between them at any cost...I agree ending is realistic bt come on its ASYA u need 2 get them married
im so happy that u r giving us happy ending...
I hope i didn't hurt u with my comment..


Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely
But I thought u ended the story
I didn't know that u will continue it
Anyways good gng

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