FF: The Beautiful and the Condemned (Completed) - Page 21

I like that Paro is unaware of what's going on, that she feels nothing. I feel like that way Rudra will show more of his caring side.

Awww.. he bought her clothes..😳 cutie patootie.

I feel for Paro's unspoken and unfelt pain. But I also feel, this chapter's end was the beginning of something between them.. it showed a while ago but this time, it's more evident with the 'thank you' and the loosen grip on her wrist. Another thing I've discovered as to why I love this FF so much, is because of how it revolves only around Rudra and Paro most of the time. It gives me enough to wait until the next update. It's an FF where other characters are involved foreshadowing affects on the pair's relationship, whatever it might be. You also get straight to the point. The image you paint with your words is clear. The emotions are portrayed by all your characters are fitting to their roles. I'll be writing what I love about your FF with each comment to motivate you to write further. This isn't a bad thing ha, cause I'm being painfully honest.

Anyways, Thank you for writing, updating and PMing. College can be so hectic. We all appreciate your efforts for this FF. I no longer have the option of not sticking to this FF until it's ending!! I'm already eager for chapter 13 😃

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The intensity of this FF and the focus on the feelings of the protagonists is what the original RR deviated from and I am glad that you are bringing it back with your writing!!!!!! 👏

This numbness on Khushi's part, on her failure to process whatever is going on around her, too much snatched away from her too soon - is what makes it for a more interesting read...😉

I am at a loss of words to describe how I feel right now!!! But lemme still try...

The pain and anguish, that feeling of guilt because you think that the only family you had is dead because of your choice to fall in love with a guy and deciding to marry him... There is that void, that fine line between reality and your troublesome thoughts... And right now, Paro is lost, she's on the road to self-destruction!!!!! No wonder she doesn't want to fight anymore, and just wants her soul to be released from this cruel world of hum sufferings!!!!!

And Rudra can transform from the Jallad to a man who has a heart that cares, with a mind that can actually think beyond the point of just being grateful to someone who took you in when there was nowhere you could go!!!!!!

I see the journey towards their falling for each other looming over the horizon...😊 🤗

Loving the updates...Keep them coming!!!!

Great story so far! I'm curious to see how you keep Parvati and Rudra safe from Teju considering that Rudra is ordered to kill Paro but (hopefully) he won't. Keep the updates coming dear, they're just superb 👏

Lovely update. The beginning of the first phase of attraction!

Loving this "Parud" of yours a lot! Continue writing and update fast.😉

I had so much to say in that one... Somehow Thx for the PM...

Wonderful updates in terms of the expressive silence and how sweet he got her a gift... Waitin for more...