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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: archakan

I am archana from kerala ... Pls update next part asap dear... I am a genuine fan of ur writing skills...

omg my pleasure sweetheart... I decided to.post both ffs today bt donno hw 4got... Like fools I was thinking I hv posted...

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#172

Originally posted by: k.kalyani
Awesome update...
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update asap..

sure i will update 2moro... Thnk u

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#173

Originally posted by: Param_love
Hey! Smiti
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely update dear😳😳

Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Very well you've described the scenario👏
lovely you've pinned the emotions👏😳
love you🤗
Ur an amazing writer👏⭐️
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon plz
eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
AND plzzz don't try to disconnect it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: cuteparsh

omggg rd ne confess kar diya😲😲
its awesome smiti
and precape mar dala👏👏
thanks for pm me
next part soon
sakshi😊

nopes sanyu ne kiya...

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Originally posted by: SWA1992
ohhh such a beautiful update, and plz plz pm me when u update next part...

I do it everytime...

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#176

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

yes girl, i got your pm! Just came active on IF, now i know i am very late, sorry! Today was my mom's birthday, so i was busy with the celebrations! Coming to this update, you always leave me dumbstruck ! Why cliffhanger again? OMG! I loved it! And sanyu acted very well in making him to feel guilty! Loved it to the core! Thanks for pm'ing, love! Continue soon, keep writing, love you always! <3

its ok... Thnk u so mch... Lv u...

Smiti

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Originally posted by: randhirsanyu014
no no no...pls don't discontinue...i loved it...it's beautiful...innocence of randhir & sanyukta is the main usp of this ff... eagerly waiting for ur next update

easy easy dear... I wl nt discobtinue it... Ds mobile version creates a lot of prblm... Das y I can c cmnts... Thnk u so much... Lv u

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So guys... Here wd nxt... Many of u askd 2 gv 2 parts.. Bt uts literally nt possible.. Bt still its a long one.. Here I go..

PART 30 - THE CUTEST NIGHT

Only my mouth could utter these I LOVE YOU RANDHIR. My emotions were out now. I dont know why it came out, why did I say this. I really do love him but I never thought this would reveal in such a situation when he opened his heart out infront of me completely. Although I knew he too has feelings for me but due to his bitter past he had disbelief in love, so I was pretty sure about his answer.

Within my trance, he turned around towards me and stared straight into my eyes. I did the same with an expressionless face as I was not in my sense.

I could sense all the pain in his eyes. His lips cuddled and a lone tear drop escaped from his eyes. It became a stream flowing from his eyes. I lost control over myselves and my eyes flooded.

I ran towards his and hugged him tightly as tighty as I could. To my surprize, he hugged me back and started sobbing loudly. His weeping tears, his sobbing sound were washing my neck which made my eyes wet. I circled my arms more tightly around his shoulders and kissed his cheek.

"i love you randhir", I said coming back to my position of hug.
"i cant love you sanyukta, I cant. Forgive me", he said.

With this he released me back and cupped my face.

"i am rejected, ignored. I cant", he said wiping my tears through his thumbs.

He left without sharing a glance at me. I sobbed hard even more louder than him and fell on my knees, although I knew his reaction. I was remained there weeping few minutes. Suddenly I recalled what I promised myself. I had decided to bring him back not to break down. I stood up wiped my tears and rushed to his room.

As expected he was crying holding his GM's photo frame. With a lot of courage, I entered inside and sat besides him.

"she was the only person who loved me sanyukta. After her, I never got anything, no love, no care, no affection. I was ignored, rejected, left alone. I dont want to loose you. Please sanyukta please. You are my only friend. The only person infront of whom I uncovered my heart, even it was invisible to GM. I can never love sanyukta. Its not a word meant for me. I know I like you from earliest moments I saw you. Still sanyukta still I am an animal, I dont want to hurt you", his teary voice splat a huge amount of pain.

I cupped it face and raised it towards me.

"look at me. Look at ne rd", I demanded.

He raised his vision towards my face. I wiped his tears and said "i love you rd, I am not demanding your love. Look into my eyes. Do they demand anything? Do they force you to be mine? Its selfless rd. One more thing, I promise I will not ask you anything, never. I will bring back that love in your life".

I finished and he was still staring my eyes with those tear drops. I brought him closer and kissed his forehead. I was feeling like feeding a hungry child. His innocence, his purity, his pain was taking me deep inside him.

I dried his face and placed his head on my lap. He lied there without any hesitation. I tapped his head and caressed his hair. I smiled at his innocence when he was clutching my skirt benith his fingers. He had stopped crying and was looking to the stars through window.

"missing GM", I pouted caressing his hairs.

"hmm", he said nodding his head.

He continued "its 1st time after her death, I am on someone's lap, someone caressing my hairs, someone talking to me with so much of care, someone wiping my tears".

"this someone wants to take all your pain rd. This someone will always do these for you without any deal", I replied with a smile.

"why so much for me sanyukta? I dont desserve it. I am worthless, thats why everyone leave me alone", his voice again in an urge to cry.

"you do desserve rd. You dont involve any mistake in this entire situation", I stroke my palms on his forehead.

"you will not get anything from this sanyukta. I cant love you back", he repeated.

"i said its not a deal. Now come one, no further discussion on this. Keep quite and sleep. Have you forgot, you are not a kid and you have to handle the entire film. We both need to wake up early in the morning"

"but I thought I can be more than a kid infront of my only friend"

"oh hello. mr. YAM, use these dialogues in your movie. Not infront of me. Sleep now"

"hmm you are right. If I will not sleep, ms. URL is gonna kill me"

I playfully hit his arms few times and closed his eyes through my palms.

"now no more discusion, sleep", I ordered.

He nodded, circled his arms around my waist and changed his position digging his face on my thies. Soon he dozzed off.

As he slept, my lips curved for a smile. He was sleeping peacefully just like a baby. I stroke his nose and noticed it was watering. I picked up a tissue from nearby table and wiped it. His eyes were still wet, I dried them and smiled at his innocence. I planted a kiss his forehead and soon dozzed off.

All Randhir...
When I woke up next morning, I was still on her lap. She was there for me in the same position whole night. I sat and placed my palms on her cheek. She was looking just like an angel. I was loosing myself for her. Her every words were buzzing in my ears. For the first time, I was not missing my GM. I recalled every incident of last night, when she hugged me, when I lied on her lap.

"har lamha sukun bhara tha
aankho se jab dard beh raha tha
thehera raha tab teri aagosh me
bepanah pyar jahaan baras raha tha"

She described everything in such a simple way. She did not get me wrong. The biggest thing was she loved me and her love was so pure, so soothing, mesmerizing with no complains and demands.

I know I too loved her but I did not have belief on myself as yeas earlier I killed the love inside me. With my thoughts, a tear drop escaped from my eyes and I came out of my trance. I picked her up in my arms and placed her on bed without disturbing her sleep.

I got fresh n up and when I came out drying my hairs after taking a shower, she was smiling in sleep vlutching the pilow. Her innocence made me blush. I went near her and sat besides her. She turned towards me and wrapped her arms around my thies.

I again smiled and caressed hr hairs.

"wake up sanyukta, its neen morning we need to go set", I said in a low voice.

Slowly she opened her eyes and stared me. She was still in sleep.

"baba. You have come, where had you been. 5 mins please. I promise I wont be late", she voiced like a kid and placed her head on my lap.

My curve bent down as I realized her loneliness. She too was alone nut not broken unlike me. A tear lone tear drop escaped from my eye and fell on her cheek. She woke up with a jerk and stared me.

"you have again started crying. I said na I am there for you", I could clearly identify her concerned voice.

"no. I am not crying. Actually a water drop went into my eye. My hairs are wet na", I lied.

"oh show me. I wipe it out"
"its ok. I will manage"

"i said na show me", she demanded and wiped my eyes with a tissue.

In the very moment I was just gazing her.

"how can you be so strong sanyukta. You have so much pain within you and you want to tackle my problem. I wish I could also be so strong like you. I wish you were in my life from its start, I would not have been so alone", my mind was repeating those and I was lost in her.

She was more beautiful in mornings.

"are you fine now? Is it burning", she queried.

I did not answer and she shook me. I came out of my thoughts and said "yes, yes I am fine. You go fresh n up. We cant be late".

She nodded and left to her room.

On set..
We both stared each other. She was looking mire than beautiful in a knee length faded orange frock stlye backless gown. She shared glance at me and blused as I raised my eye brows signing PERFECT. When she blused, automatically I did the same. I did not know what was happening to me.

A week passed like that and I had started regaining myself. But the very unsuccessful task was I could not confess her my feelings. The reason behind which was I still did not realised it.

To be continued...

Precap - jelous rd...

So guys... I hope u all liked it..

Thank you 4 reading... Lv u all...

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Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago

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k.kalyani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Hey smiti
amazing update...
eagerly waiting for nxt...

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Karishma Sewani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

hey smiti, loved it yaar! They are having a great bond! Sanyu loves him unconditionally, and so she doesn't expect him to love him back! This is so deep and absolute! I really am falling in love with this story! Thanks a lot for pm'ing! I am very excited after reading the precap! It was awesome! Randhir will feel jealous, I guess this is a part of sanyu's plan! She will definitely make randhir realize his love for sanyu! Lets see hoe it goes, I can't wait! Keep writing, lots of love! <3

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