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I liked the way you showed Raghav's bond with Kalpi. Hope they meet soon! 😉
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Chapter 4

In Pune
Everyone smiled
Mira- And kalpi you'll get you gift
Jai and Ajay watched them
Jai-What gift?
Mira-Kalpi don't tell him it's a surprised
Kalpi smiled
At Night at Raichand's Residence,Kalpi sat on her bed and got blurred Flashes of the Chawl"Why Am i seeing a chawl,Have i been there before"
Kalpi layed on her bed and thought"I wonder how Aai and Baba are,I miss them,But I'm very Angry they didn't look for me"Kalpi slowly fell asleep.
In Ajay's room
Jai-Bhai Kalpi is getting back her memory
Mira and Ajay watched him
Mira-Why are you worried?
Jai-I'm not worried,I just don't want kalpi leaving us
Mira smiled and watched Jai
Mira-Jai, Kalpi isn't ours to keep,Kalpi has a family,she has loved ones,we can't just force her to stay.
Ajay-Your Bhabi is right Jai
Jai sat down Feeling broken,Mira sat next to him
Mira-Jai watch me
Jai looked at Mira
Mira-You have gotten close to kalpi right,You like her,But we can't force her to love us Jai,Ask kalpi if she loves anyone,If she doesn't then go for it,If she does Back off with Respect to kalpi's love,Promise Me.
Jai smiled
Jai-I Promise
In Mumbai
Kamla stands outside by the balcony"Why do i feel something good is going to happen soon,That My family's happiness will be back"Kamla closed her eyes and smiled
In Pune
In Morning Kalpi and the Raichands were heading to Mumbai,In the car everyone sang and made funny jokes,Kalpi watches them and smiles she thought"I'm forever Grateful to this Family,Their took good care of me,Lord Please always give them Happiness"Kalpi smiled and sang along.
In Mumbai
Raghav walked into the office and watched kalpi's desk,He went into his Cabin and sat down,Sammy came
Sammy-Raghav,Mr Methra told me you cancel all Meetings,Are you okay?
Raghav watched him
Raghav-It's holi i want everyone to be with their families and not working.
Sammy smiled
Sammy-I'll get going,see you
Sammy left,The Raichands Reached Mumbai,Kalpi looked out the window and felt the breeze hit her face,In the Chawl Kamla was cutting Vegatables,In The Office Raghav was on his phone,The Raichands Drove up to a hotel,
Mira-this is it
Kalpi look out the window and wad Amazed
Ajay-Come on let check in quickly.
Everyone came out the car, Jai help kalpi out the car and her feet touched the soil of Mumbai,Raghav looked up at kalpi's desk"Kalpi",Kamla stoped cutting and turned and watched kalpi's photo,Kamla was shocked"Kalpi"
Kalpi came out the car and watched the hotel.
Kalpi-Wow it's so Beautiful
Kalpi and the Raichands head to check in,Prem entered the hotel and passed by the Raichands,Prem checked in and left.
Mira-Ajay you and Jai check in,Us girls are going for a surprise
Ajay-Suprise?Now?
Mira-Yes,Plus i Promise kalpi something
Kalpi smiled
Kalpi-Really now?
Mira-Yes,And shall we go?
Kalpi went by Jai,Mira and Ajay watched on
Kalpi-Jai,Do you need anything?
Jai-No Kalpi
Kalpi-Okay,Take care
Kalpi,Mira and Khushi left,Jai watched kalpi and smiled,The girls went into the Beauty spa.
Mira-Kalpi are you sure,You want this
Kalpi-Yeah,I want something new and Different
Mira-So want do you want?
Kalpi-Short hair and a tattoo
Mira-Tattoo,Kalpi why?
Kalpi-Because it's cool
Kalpi watched A sad Mira's face
Kalpi-Fine i'll get a stick on,But I'm cutting my hair
Mira-Okay
Kalpi got her new makeover she smiled
Kalpi-Do you think Jai will like this look?
Mira-I'm sure he will.
Jai and Ajay waited for the girls just then,Jai saw kalpi walking out in a Black Jumpsuit,with short hair all decked up,Jai was shocked and Happy,He ran to kalpi,Mira,ajay and khushi smiled
Jai-Woah,Woah Woah, where's Kalpi?
Kalpi smiles
Kalpi-She's here just had a little Makeover.
Jai-You look hot kalpi
Kalpi smiled
Kalpi-Thank you
Mira-Kalpi we need to go out
Kalpi-Again
Mira-It's holi in 1 day so we need to buy colours
Kalpi-Okay
The guys went to the rooms and
Mira and Kalpi were heading out
Mira-Kalpi let me check out,you go and wait there
Kalpi-Okay
Kalpi saw a hall so she deciced to Roam,Prem came out of the Room from a meeting,He put on his ear plugs and was busy on his phone,
Kalpi was roaming around in the halls
when she and Prem bounced into each other,Kalpi fell down,Prem kept on walking,Kalpi got up and watched him walked away
Kalpi-Oh hello!
Kalpi was angry" Idiot"kalpi then wondered"Why do i feel like i knew that guy"Kalpi folded her arms"Anyways i don't want to know a guy like that"Kalpi was angry


Precap
Holi HAI
Kalpi was wearing a white Dress with a Jacket,Kalpi walked up to a chawl and watched in a gaze"This is the same chawl I've been seeing"


Raghav and Sammy was driving heading to the Chawl







Edited by -AriaRai- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Awesome update!! Kalpi is starting to remembering certain places in Mumbai now and she even got a makeover that would surprise Raghav and rest of the family. Its truly amazing. Continue soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kalpi is remembering. But what does she remember about Raghav? She's got a makeover now. Will he recognise her or will he think she's a lookalike. I think he will know it's his Kalpi as he got some feeling when she landed in Mumbai as well. What will happen to Jai once Raghav comes into the scene.
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Aria its awesome as always loved it
CONTINUE SOON
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Thank you guys so much for the lovely comments 😃
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Lovely update
Like u gav kalpi cool look...
Eager for ragna meet
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Chapter 5


Kalpi went back by the lobby.
Mira- Where were you kalpi?
Kalpi-Some idiot bumped into me and left
Mira smiled
Mira-Didn't i tell you to stay here kalpi?
Kalpi-Yes, Yes shall we go?
Mira and Kalpi drove around,Both stoped by the Traffic Light,Raghav drove up next to them,Raghav felt this werid feeling,Kalpi leaned over in the back seat,Raghav looked across and saw Mira,Raghav then drove off
Kalpi-What colours are you going to buy?
Mira-Blue?
Kalpi-Blue?Why blue?
Mira-Because i like blue,What colour do you want?
Kalpi smiled
Kalpi-Red
Kalpi and Mira drove around,Morning Came,The Raichands were heading to Mira's Family,Kalpi sat in the front seat and watched all the colours
At the chawl,Suhana and her family came,She coloured Kamla and Pakya,Vithal watched on from upstairs,Kamla looked up and watched him,Vithal went inside,Kamla was sad.
Suhana-Mausi Maa whats wrong?
Kamla smiled
Kamla-Noting
The kapoors came,Paakhi saw kamla and smiled,Paakhi then walked up to kamla and saw suhana hugging kamla
Suhana-Mausi Maa give me one minute?
Kamla-Okay
Neetu-Kamla,The chawl looks beautiful
Kamla-Thanku Memsaab.
Kamla watched Paakhi who was smiling at her,Suhana came back and hugged kamla,Paakhi watched on and thought"Who is this"
Paakhi-Kamla Maa who is this?
Kamla watched Paakhi
Suhana-Hi I'm Suhana Masui Maa's Daughter
Paakhi was shocked and irritated,Kamla caress Suhana's Face
Kamla-Yes This is My daughter
Paakhi was shocked,Suhana left
Paakhi-Kamla Maa I'm your daughter
Kamla Smiled
Kamla-No,Your'e Neetu and sahil kapoor's Daughter.
Paakhi was sad
Paakhi-Kamla Maa Please don't be angry at me
Kamla-I'm Not angry,I'm Disgusted,That i raised a girl like you who killed off my kalpi and Raghav Baba.
Paakhi was heartbroken,Kamla tooked some colour and gently wiped it on Paakhi' Face
Kamla-Happy Holi,May you always be Happy
Kamla wish paakhi sarcastically,Kamla watched Paakhi sternly and left,Paakhi was hurt,Neetu watched from afar.Raghav Came with sammy,Raghav looked at the chawl and remembered his memories with kalpi,Paakhi turned and watched him she smiled,Paakhi was walking towards raghav when suhana rushed to him,Paakhi was irritated"First it was kalpi now this suhana"Paakhi watched on sadly as raghav and suhana walked away and talked.The Raichands stoped by the road to get some more colours,Kalpi saw a little girl crying she came out the car and went by her.
Kalpi-Hello Beta why are you crying?
Girl-Momma
Kalpi-Oh you want your mother,Beta tell me your name?
Girl-Preeti
Kalpi smiled
Kalpi-Okay Preeti let me help you
Preeti smiled,Kalpi held the girls hand,Preeti leld kalpi to the chawl,
Preeti-Thank you
Preeti left
Kalpi was wearing a white Dress with a Jacket,Kalpi walked up to a chawl and watched in a gaze,"This is the same chawl I've been seeing"Kalpi stood in a gaze She watched all the decorations,Colours and love in the Atmosphere then her gaze fell at kamla she smiled"Aai" kalpi slowly was walking towards kamla when suhana hugged her Aai,Kalpi stoped and watched on Kalpi watched Vithal,Pakya and Manda Tai coloured suhana
Kamla hugged suhana
Kamla-Your'e my beti
Kalpi was in tears,Kamla and everyone were dancing,Kalpi watched on Crying,Kamla stoped dancing she slowly turned at the gate and saw kalpi standing there kamla was shell shocked she droped the colours on the ground,everyone watched kamla then looked at the gate everyone was in disbelief,That kalpi was standing before them,Kamla starting feeling light-headed,Kamla fainted everyone rushed to her,Kalpi stood there and slighty smiled seeing her mother down,Suhana and Paakhi watched kalpi shocked at her reaction,Vithal and Pakya carried kamla upstairs,Paakhi and suhana went upstairs,Paakhi was irritated,Kalpi then looked up and saw Raghav she watched him,Raghav was beyond shocked,seeing kalpi's look and hair Raghav was surprised,Kalpi watched him.


Precap

Kalpi went up into the jadhav's home and saw kamla on the bed
Kamla-Kalpi
Kalpi watched her,Kalpi kneeled down next to kamla and whispered to her
Kalpi-You have Paakhi and your New daughter,you don't need me
Kamla watched her shocked,Kalpi watched her,Kalpi got up and when she turned Raghav was behind her ,Kalpi watched him and went out Raghav followed behind her.




Edited by -AriaRai- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good update I liked what she said to Kamla! Continue soon interested in her and rags convo
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Nice update Aria. Kalpana saw Kamala hugging Suhana. She must be thinking first Pakhi, now this girl. I thought she will see Raghav talking with Suhana and misunderstand that he also forgot her. Now that everyone has seen her I wonder what will they do. Accept her or says since she looks different it's a lookalike and not Kalpi.

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