MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ]

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anushka Mukherjee

@2019_AnushkaM

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

its superb,amazine,awesome.love this part.thanx for pm me. updet asap.😃

Quote

Nain5000

@Nain5000

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: archakan
i loved the way u portrayed their emotions dear... <font color="#000066">"enough mr. randhir singh shekhawat, you are not YAM, just you behave to
be", I pouted in a large voice making my eyes wide and he stopped.
<font color="#000000">ha ha ha ...It was really fab yaar...I thoroughly enjoyed it... pls update next part asap dear...</font>
</font>

thnx yaar.. I dint knew u read it so carefully everytime... Lv u... Thnx 4 support...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Nain5000

@Nain5000

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

loved it! Finally sanyu will be taking steps to make him realize their love, and will keep him happy and deceive of loneliness! I hope sanyu gets successful, and randhir leaves his ego. Well you did not pm me with this update of part 28. But its okay, I found it out! (I am your stalker, you should know!) :p next time,don't forget to pm me please, when you update, if time permits! Continue soon, keep writing! Love you always! <3

i donno wat hpnd.. Bt I sent pm. Dont get angry sry... 😭

Quote

Nain5000

@Nain5000

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Wat is hpng 2 u guys??? U r nt reading ds??? Shud I discontinue???? I knoe I cd nt rply u all due to mobile version... N if it is da readon dat m nt rplying u all den I accept it n sanying I cant reply u all coz its too diff 2 operate in mobile... M sorry... I really w8 4 ur feedback.. Ok ur wish.. Just tell me 1s n I will stop posting...

Quote

MDKSSM

@MDKSSM

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Thnx for updt nd plzz next prt updt asap ok

Quote

saxena.pranjal2

@saxena.pranjal2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

gud one yaaar... luved it... next part plzzz soonnn

Quote

Nain5000

@Nain5000

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

So guys here wd nxt part...

PART 29 - THE CONFESSION

"enough mr. randhir singh shekhawat, you are not YAM, just you behave to be", I pouted in a large voice making my eyes wide and he stopped.

"look rd I know what we did was not right. It was a weak moment which took both of us in its flow. May be its a mistake from both of us, but can you answer me one thing? Is this the solution for that? You are behaving like a stranger and that in this unknown place. I came with a trust that you will be there. After you shared me your feelings, I thought that we are friends but what did you say I am your employee, right? Good for me, you made me recall my position, sir. Thank you to endure me so long", a flood of tears were continuously flowing from my eyes.

"sanyu listen to me, I didn't had any intension to hurt you", he said forwarding his hand.

"its enough to hear such words from you, I dont have mush syrength to listen more", I replied, turned back and was leaving.

After a few steps, I felt myself in a warmth from back on my shoulders. I closed my eyes and raised my palms to those arms. I could clearly sense that those were the same pair of arms which hugged during his break down.

"and I dont have strength to loose you. I am sorry. Very sorry. I dont know these words are enough or not to satisfy your pain or not but still I am saying. You are my only friend. My first one with whom I shared my whole life with. I was guilty on my act so I said all this", he said rubbing his nose my cheek.

"ae zalim in aansuo ko tu mat gawaa jinhe hum moti kehte hein
thoda to khair kar is nachiz par jin par ye khanjar ki tara waar karte hein"

"good plan sanyu and thank you god for making me an actress. My forwarded my first step. My first victory towards your new life my YAM", I talked to myself. I smiled bitting my lower lip, caught my tear drop from my index finger, threw it away, winked to god looking up to sky and hugged him turning around continuing my acting with tears.

I was satisfied that I threw out the guilt inside him. I sensed everything in that hug, a dreamy life decorated with love. I pecked a small kiss on his cheek continuing that hug. He broke the hug, cupped my face and placed a soft kiss on my forehead.

"never say this that you dont have any position in my life because you were never just an employee to me", he said looking straight into my eyes still cupping my face.

I gave him a questionable look at me to which he answered "yes you heard correct, I like you from the day I had a fight with you".

He explained me everything about his feeling of likes towards me. I was dumbstruck to listen his each and every word. Each time he use to say BUT IT WAS NOT LOVE whereas, I could really sense the same taste of love which I had within me for him. I knew he would admit it so easily.

"so you dont love me", I asked.
"no but when I see your tears, I could not stop my hands to wipe it, I can never see you in pain. I still remember when you I could not find you when you said you will jump from plane", he stopped there.

"who said I would jump, I was just scaring you that you tell me you are my randhir. You thought it when I have my siblings dependable on me. Oh come on rd, you did this much with me viz purposefully hitting, damaging bittu bhaiya's bike, take me club without my permission and most important your sweet side from me. For all these, I think it is a very small punishment. What say?", I said and giggled.

"you lier URL, I will not spare you", he said bitting his teeth and ran behind me.

After a lot of efforts he caught me from my waist, revoved me carrying me in his arms and finally we both fell down. We were lying on sand and he was over me.

"hahaha hahaha", I giggled.
"never say that again, you know how much scared I was. I cannot afford to loose you", he said.

My smile vanished to a serious one, we shared a long eyelock and after few seconds, he broke the eyelock and stood all of a sudden. He moved his head here and there digging it down. He was leaving and I was gazing him from back. I wanted to stop him but could not.
In unconcious state, lost in him, my mouth opened to say I LOVE YOU RANDHIR and he stood still in his position. A minute later, he turned around and stared me. He looked straight into my eyes and I did the same with an expressionless face.

To be continued...

Precap - cutest night and innocent rd...

Thank you 4 Reading...

So guys.. Hope u lkd it... U must hv got idea about nxt part... N 4der parts is going to be fun.. 4 nw I want max likes n cmnts.. Hope u ppl dont dissapoint me...

FEEDBACK PLZZZ...

Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago