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Tisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
superb concept
loved it
do continue soon and pm me

Thanks!!!😳

glad u liked it...😊

will try to update Asap...😃

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Tisha

@Jiana.ArSHa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: k.sweet
amazing concept
update soon
thanks for the pm

thanks a lot for commention!!!😳

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Anvesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Hey Intresting concept...

Continue soon n pm me :)))!!!!!!!!!

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awww it was wow cs
loved it Rey is bed boy
i love to see him like that
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kya intro h yr totaly loved it can u
pm me pls

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Tisha

@Jiana.ArSHa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

CHAPTER - ONE { A SNEAK PEAK OF HER LIFE}

" YOU STUPID B*TCH" came an angry voice.

Hearing the voice, a GIRL started to run toward the source of voice as if her life is dependent on it. Perhaps, the fear of the outcome of reaching late made her run like an athlete, A Feared Scurvy Helpless Athlete.

< CONFUSED>

Well, let me give you introduction about our Feared Scurvy Helpless Athlete. " When I say Cinderalla and the image that comes in your Mind thats what Kria is like." Just her condition is much more worse. She lost her parents when she was ten and Since then her life became a Dungeon. Her world is restricted to the darkness and numbness. She is trapped in her own house, tortured by her own friends living a life no less then HELL but...

Yup, There is a big BUT in her story. You know what they say,

" When all the doors got closed then God shows the path of freedom and happiness."

She is living with a secret deep inside her heary, A Secret which can change everything.

NOW COMING BACK TO THE STORY

Upon reaching toward the Source Of Voice, an Intense blow made her fell on the ground and a loud striking soud made her ears bleed simuntaneously thats when She relized someone had slaped her. A Normal person will Normally freak outin this not-so-Normal situation but the key word is NORMAL. Well in the case of Kria, she is just immunue to all these things thats the reason, She didn't reacted to the Slap at all.

"Do you know, Why you get that Slap" the loud shrienking voice made her tremble.

Kria shook her head. * sigh* She shouldn't have done that.

Again a loud striking Blow made her double over the pain and this time it was a Punch.

"You Filthy Sl*t, you should Clearly know that the Punishments you get is simply because you exist, Your Existence is a Mistake and next time if I ask you a question, I need an answer, A proper one."

She twisted her hand and pushed her and my dear ladies and gentlemen thats how her face once again met with the almighty floor.

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She is in Heaven, yup definetely Heaven after so many preyers God has finally heared her.

Oh! such a pleasant feeling, After being tortured in God Knows how many ways, She is feeling good, Extremely Good.

This has to be Heaven. Everthing is perfect, Everything is Soothing... Just some sensation of Pain..

WAIT... PAIN!! But pain do not exist in Heaven Right?

"Wake up Sweety" came an sothing voice.

Involuntary, A huge yawn escaped from her mouth followed by a mewing sound as she streched her limbs too far.

"Easy!! Your Injuries are Healing. Don't put too much pressure, it'll hurt."

INJURIES... WHAT HAPPENED TO HER???

Looking around, She find herself in a Cubicle, a small one with bluish colored wall, small window covering with a white coloured Curtain,A table beside the bed... It was simple, too simple for her liking.

How did she end up Here?

As She put some pressure on her Brain, she went into Flashback...

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Flashback in Next Chapter till then... do whatever you want!!!

Edited by Jiana.ArSHa - 11 years ago

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sneha-arsha

@sneha-arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

1st 1 to comment..😊

Awesome concept jiana...I loved it😛... I dnt know how u all write such a gr8 story wid emotions...n dis concept is very new..lyk a fairy tale...cmg to d chapt its... lovly ...it was on kria ..how was she getting totured...n d beast...por kria feeling bad for her.. :( bt d update was too small...wen will give nxt update...will wait for nxt 1 bt updqte soon...I knoe I talk much😆😉... :v I wud luv to read ur all works on kr...can give me d link jiana??😳😆😃

Edited by sneha-arsha - 11 years ago

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Tisha

@Jiana.ArSHa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sneha-arsha
1st 1 to comment..😊
Awesome concept jiana...I loved it😛... I dnt know how u all write such a gr8 story wid emotions...n dis concept is very new..lyk a fairy tale...cmg to d chapt its... lovly ...it was on kria ..how was she getting totured...n d beast...por kria feeling bad for her.. :( bt d update was too small...wen will give nxt update...will wait for nxt 1 bt updqte soon...I knoe I talk much😆😉... :v I wud luv to read ur all works on kr...can give me d link jiana??😳😆😃

Thanks for such a lovely comment...😉

m happy that u like my work...

will try to make chapter longer!!!😃

Here's the link of my 1st ff...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3906419/a-kriyaansh-n-swaron-ff

Hope u enjoy reading it!!! Thnks once again...

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sneha-arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Jiana.ArSHa

Thanks for such a lovely comment...😉
m happy that u like my work...😳
will try to make chapter longer!!!😃
Here's the link of my 1st ff...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3906419/a-kriyaansh-n-swaron-ff
Hope u enjoy reading it!!! Thnks once again...

Ur welcum dear.😉😉... n thnxx for d pm n gving me link...I wud luv to read all ur work...jst running to read😆😆