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So guys am up again with the next part of A DREAM OR A NIGHTMARE... first of all apologies coz am hell late this time.. guys curse my bad health... also I wanted to know some ppl have requested me to create my writing index ... so tell me guys only if u all want me to create one then only I will put so much efforts.. another thing guys tell me what type of ending u want for this ff.. happy or sad one.. coz I will shape the story as per the end u want from next update...

Part -24

Randhir left sanyu inside the room... she was sobbing continuously..she sat on the bed ... she was shattered with randhir's statements... just then she remembered some of her aunty's words...

Flashback...

Few hours back.. sanyu was getting ready for the wedding.. just then some aunties came inside that room... they started admiring her... one of her

Aunty: oye sanyu tu to bhot sundar lag rhi h.. randhir to aj behosh hojayegaa...(she started giggling... sanyu too blushed)

Aunty 2: pata h vo Sheena h na... her husband doesn't even look at her... I feel pitty for her.. she is so beautiful

Aunty 1: sachii... becharii... Vese ek bat bolo... according to me ese beautiful hone ka kya fayda.. when ur man doesn't even look at u... for me "ugliest woman in the world is who cannot woo her man..."

Present...

These words were echoing in her ears...

" ugliest woman in this world is who cannot woo her man"

she walked towards the washroom and stood infront of the mirror.. and wiped her tears... and looked at herself in the mirror... her khol was all smuged... her cheeks had tears marks...

sanyu to herself: sobbing

isme meri kya galti agar hai bhagwan ne muje esa banaya h randhir... why god,,,, why did u make me so ugly... ??

she broke down... After a few minutes she came out of the room... her makeup was gone... she eyes were red and swollen... khol was smudged... She came to the corridor.. there was no one.. she without thinking much came to the marriage hall.. where marriage ceremony was taking place... she looked around...she really wanted to hide herself from the crowd... coz she was still sobbing... was not in a condition to come in front of anyone...she found a chair at the extreme corner of the hall in the last where no one could see her... she went there and sat on it... She was looking at the mandap,... bride ... groom... all those memories of her wedding flashed in front of her eyes... tears rolled down from her eyes... but she quickly wiped them off... just then randhir came there and took a seat next to her... They both looked at each other... Their eyes were wet...

randhir could see the pain in her eyes... which he gave to her all this while... he was cursing himself... this time he knew he has crossed all his limits... they both looked away... both were watching pheras taken by the bride and groom...

just then randhir heard sanyu's hiccups... she was crying... and was trying to control her cry... He was looking at her like a 5 year old baby look at someone crying... he wanted to soothe her... he forwarded his hand towards her shoulder but before he could do anything.. she got up and ran out of the hall... randhir was shocked... he too ran after her... He followed her to the corridor... she entered their room and before she could latch the room randhir entered there... sanyu looked at him... her sobs became louder now...

randhir: sanyukta listen to me...

Sanyu: (showing him her tiny mahendi filled palms.. taking a few steps back) plz... plz,,,, (panting and sobbing)

Randhir: (taking a few steps towards her) sanyukta am sorry... I shouldn't have said that... plz sanyuk...(before he could complete sanyu interrupted)

Sanyu: me agar badsurat hoo to isme meri kya galti h randhir... (crying bitterely... here whole face became red... her whole face was wet in tears) bhagwan ne muje esa banaya h ... Isme meri kya galti h...(she closed her eyes and bend her head down)

Randhir: I didn't mean that sanyukta... am sorry... mene gusse me bol diya tha... u are not... Dekho plz stop crying... (randhir took a few steps towards her but sanyu took few steps away from him )

Sanyu: mujse ab or bardasht ni hota randhir... me be insan hoo... muje be takleef hoti h... dard hota h... koi muje nahi samajta... koi be nahi... muje kya chahiye...no body is bothered... me koi plastic ki gudiya nahi hoo randhir... jab mann kiya tab pass agye.. khel liya.. and jab mann bhar gya to utha k fek diya...

Randhir: (gulped) look sanyukta don't say like this.. esa nahi h...

Sanyu: muje divorce chahiye randhir... I cant live with u anymore... mere liye it is becoming impossible now... me mar jaungeee...

Randhir: tumhe ho kya gaya h... divorce.. sanyukta m really sorry... mera sach me vo matlab nahi tha...

Sanyu: chhod do muje... kyo nahi jane dete muje... why are u spoiling ur life with me... muje to samaj nahi ata ab tak tumne muje choda kyo nahi... sabko mujse itni problem h... why don't u all kill me... ek bar me sara kam khatam karo na... kill me... sabki problem solve hojayegiii...

Randhir: shut up sanyukta... pagal hogayi ho kya... (he yelled) u need rest... so jao tum... and u dare do something stupid like this ok...

sanyukta looked away and weeping...

Randhir left the room... and came to hall... everyone started asking about sanyu ... he made an excuse that she is not feeling well so she is sleeping in the room... soon the marriage got over and he came to his room... He saw sanyu laying on the bed...she was sleeping...she looked like a baby on a huge king size bed... he came near her... he saw her wet eye lashes.. pillow below her head was wet due to her tears... saw her tiny fists near her face... he covered her with a blanket and came to his car and sat inside it... and started crying.. each and every word of her was echoing in his ears...he was too crying bitterely... And dozed off don't know when...

Next day...

Randhir came to his room.. and saw sanyu was not there... he came out of the room... and saw sanyu sitting with dadi... she was wearing her normal kurti patiyala... he came back to his room... and got ready to leave... he came out with his bags.. and saw sanyu coming towards him...

Sanyu: am also leaving today.. I have to join office...

Randhir: but tum ne to chhutti lit hi naa...

Sanyu didn't give any reply and came inside the room and took her bag and came out... they bid bye to everyone...and came out of the guest house...

Randhir: tum ruko me car leke ata hoo...

But before randhir move sanyu took an auto and left the place leaving randhir dumbstruck...

At office...

They both were busy in themselves... sanyu was busy in preparing a software for the new project... she wanted to show it to randhir so that he can tell her if any changes he wants... with a lot of hesitation she went to his cabin... knocked the door and entered in... randhir looked at sanyu and he passed a smile... sanyu just ignored and went to his desk... Randhir got up from his chair...

Sanyu: sir vo.. actually I wanted to show u this software for the new machine...mene codes complete kar diye h... if u can see yourself... so that koi changes h to let me know... (she forwarded her lappy)

Randhir came close to her and stood next to her...he was just lost in her... in her innocence... her eyes were still swollen...he really wanted to hug her... soothe her... but didn't...

Sanyu: sir... if u can plz...

Randhir : (came out of his trance and kept his right hand on her left cheek cupping it and said softly) sanyukta... am sorry... muje ek urgent meeting me jana h... ye me plz ghar pe delk loo...??

Sanyu quickly jerked his hand away off her... she was shocked by this reaction of his..she gave him a confusing look...whereas randhir really wanted to soothe her... he himself didn't know how he kept his hand on her cheek...

Randhir: sanyukta am sorry... but I really need to go... I will see this at home...

Sanyu just nodded and left the cabin...

At night...

It was 9:00 pm... sanyu came out of her room and went to randhir's room... and knocked the door... and asked him to have a look at the software... he asked her to wait in her room and after half an hour he came to her room...

Sanyu: bethiye sir... (she asked him to sit on the bed.. )

Randhir nodded and sat... : dikhao kya banaya h tumne...

Sanyu: vo naya machine ka software h... agar koi changes h to bta dena...

(she showed him the software...he was very much impressed by her work... he was very happy with her progress... more than the software he was looking at her... )

Sanyu: is it fine sir?/

Randhir: hmmm... its good.. u do one thing iska ek copy muje dedo me parth and aditi ko be dikha dunga..

Sanyu just nodded and randhir came out of the room...

Next day... sanyu's birthday...

It was 6:00 am... sanyu had already switched off her mobile.. coz she didn't want anyone to wish her... then door bell rang... sanyu thought randhir will open the door.. but they bell was continuously ringing... she had enough... she came out of her room and looked here and there in search of him.. but there was no sign of him...she went to the door and open the door... she saw a delivery boy standing in front of her... with a bouquet and a rectangular box wrapped in a red gift wrapping paper...

Boy: miss sanyukta??

Sanyu nodded in a yes..

Boy: this is for u mam...

(he handed her those items )

Sanyu: who sent these??

Boy: mam... we cant reveal the identity...

With this he left the place... sanyu was confused... she came to her room and saw the bouquet first... she couldn't find any note in it... And then she looked at the box... it has a note saying just "happy birthday" nothing more... she removed the wrap and saw a beautiful saree in it... she dropped the gift... her eyes were brimming with tears... she recalled a night before incident which she had with randhir... he doesn't like her in saree... she wiped her tears and kept the saree aside... she really wanted to know who had sent this saree to her... she knew randhir can never do that... coz first of all he didn't even remember her birthday... he had never wished her birthday... And he wud never send her a gift... that too saree...

She got ready for the office and came to office... sanyu went to her cubical and sat there... her mind was still wandering that who has sent that gift/... just then abhi came from behind and wished her... Sanyu smiled back and said thanks to him...

Abhi: so madam aj ka kya plan h...??

Sanyu: nothing abhi... can u tell me one thing...

Abhi: bol na...

Sanyu: subha subha vo gifts tune muje beje the kya...

Randhir was looking at them... he was not liking this at all... he really wanted to know his answer...

Abhi: vo gift.. mene hi to beja tha... kesa laga tuje...

Randhir clenched his palms into a tight fist... he left for his cabin... he was hell annoyed...

Randhir to himself: kitna bada jhoota h... mere gifts ko apna bta k credit legyaa... bloody @E$#%R^%^&%^*&^*%##& ... meri biwi ko gifts dega... I wont spare u abhi... this time u have crossed all ur limits... she is all mine... u cant take her away from me...

Sanyu's cubical...

Sanyu: tune vo kyo beje... listen I cant keep them//

Abhi then suddenly started laughing... sanyu was confused...

Abhi: sanyu mene vo gifts nahi beje... pagal ... ese gifts kyo bejunga me tuje...(he winked...)

He left the place leaving sanyu confused...

Precap: dhamal...huge fight... lol...

I know this was boring... but next update will going to be full of surprises... actually guys these details are necessary for my next update...

So guys this is it... hope u all liked it... guys plz do leave ur comments and feedbacks below.. coz without ur views how will I get to know how am I writing... where am I going wrong... I never demand for long comments... its just not in me... for me person commenting in a single word or person commenting in a bundle of words are all equal... I just need ur comments.. I appreciate everyone... also many of my silent readers are shy about commenting here... so guys its my humble request.. plz open up... don't remain silent... also guys do read my other story.. 'I just wanna spend my life with you''PART 4... hope u will like it too... Last but not the least guys plz plz plz unres ur comments soon...

Edited by samridhigoodiez - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sammy...this one was a rocking update...loved to see sanyukta standing up for herself finally... ok i feel really weird why does randhir gets so aggressive..gosh he needs to calm and rethink...oh oh oh that abhi wala twist was good... arey yrr ab kya hoga...too excited to knw the next part...kb tk update kroge???

jaldi krna...

and the way u show their emotions ...specially sanyukta's misery... i feel so sad...she is going through much...

plss already bhut sad tha sanyu ke liye...

sad ending dend ki sochna bhi mat... pls darlo

Edited by Gunseerat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me second... *glares* at gunseerat...
Thank god! sanyu atleast stood for herself... and i just loved it ... Randhir understand ur emotiin stupid... otherwise teri biwi ke peeche bahut pade h..lolz...
m waiting for the big fight... plzz iss baar jldi update karna...
Edited by TheKanwalKaur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Boring ???
No, Not at all, Never
it was amazing Sam 👏👏
Bechari Sanyu 😭
She's too much heartbroken😔
Why the hell did Randhir say all those harsh things to Sanyu ???😔
and now what ???
Sanyu wants a divorce 😲
No, no, no
NO DIVORCE
and Randhir is regretting his deeds...
Good for him
but now Sanyu is ignoring him
arey inki prem ki naiyaa kabhi age badegi bhi ya nhi ??
and Randhir sent her boquets & Saree for her birthday☺️
Awww
that was so sweet
but Abhi bechara phash gaya🤣
Ab tera kya hoga Kaaliya oops Abhi ??? 🤣🤣
Randhir toh iski band bajane wala hain ab😃😃

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and precap:- Dhaamal 😃😃
eagerly waiting for this dhaamal chapter
continue soon

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P.S - I WANT A HAPPY ENDING !!! ❤️❤️❤️ I HATE SAD ENDINGS 😔
Mujhe sad endings padh k ya dekh k bohut rona ata hain...
toh mujhe toh HAPPY ENDING hi chahiye
*PUPPY FACE*

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and you're a super duper awesome writer Sam👏👏
thanks for the PM darlo🤗
with loads of love
Sudeshna
Edited by gossipgirl12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Firstly let me do a happy dance...😆😆😆
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Oh it feels like ages I have been waiting for your update.😆
What to say I am left dumbstruck with your writing.
I always try to guess what more will you add , how will you propel your story, but as usual you come up with a story which is so unique and of-course interesting.👏⭐️

Coming back to the update.
sherni sanyu gave back to randhir .
I liked sanyu's dhamki to RD about the divorce.
but i hope that it just to scare him .😆😆
wow and that gift , RD is seriously trying to make up with sanyu.
Poor fella but I guess sanyu is not in any mood to reconcile with him.
Waiting for the next update i mean the next dhamal episode 😃😉




Edited by manalee - 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Update next part asap

Edited by malgudi - 11 years ago
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Samriddhi...
The update was jst awsome
The way u penned sanyu's emotions...amazing...
I love ur writing skills...
And pls tune puri ff me sanyu ko bahot rulaya hai
Now end to happy hi hona chahie...
So HAPPY WALA ENDING HI CHAHIE...
And the other thing...
Congrats for compliting 50 pages of this thread
Thnks for pm
Wid all love and respect
Dhruvi
Edited by dhruvi_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update...
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
itna late!!!!!!😡
next update jaldi coz precap is killing me😡
n update ac6a tha.. sanyu's outbrust was very nice😭
cont soon
thnk for pm

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