MY LAST BREATH (last part updtd pg3).Anya OS - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome back Silla. ...thanks for writing a new os it's very emotional. .please continue soon. ..
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beautiful os dii...plzz do cont sooon ;)
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LAST PART:

Cont...

u opened ur eyes and i kissed on ur lips removed ur under blouse and made u moan...i went further down...and removed Your Lower Blouse You clutched the bed sheet ..My Hot breath was On your bare Legs and you were getting teased..begging me softly to do Hurry Whatever I want to do..i smiled,and kissed on your lower feminine..it made u breathless ..you tried to move Your legs i opened them and buried my face in your feminine passing you hot breath.. you struggled i peeled that remaining under garment and made you moan..You tasted sweet..though you were in pain,,But still You uttered my name with soo much Love ,,"Anant",,as You were getting Pain In Love ,,tears falled from your eyes ..i saw it ..it made me feel that i m hurting you..i kissed your tears and asked with my eyes " Could i continue Further"..U replied with smile and tears in "yes" with eyes ..and u closed your eyes ...I kept on making you mine ..and you didnt stopped me and it goes On and On ,,with our Passionate Beautiful Night,,of my Life..

<<<<<<>>>>>>

A girl kept hand on anant's Shoulder

Nimisha: Bhai Everything will be fine dnt worry

Anant:Hope so nimii...i have lost all hopes ...Cant You see what those people said..

Nimisha:I know Bhai ..But have Trust On GOD everything will be fine..You wait let me bring something for u

she left...

Anant(in mind): Navya..only few pages left...why you still not showing any sign of being back😭.But i promise i will bring you back

" I remember that Morning How you were feeling Shy and Lil embarrassed..I remember the Happiness in Your eyes That Morning"

Morning...8 Am

Navya opened her eyes..and tried To wakeup..but what stucked her mind was she was all naked in blanket..She looked here and there and found her clothes on floor...she looked back and found anant sleeping..she shyly looked back at herself and hold that blanket from chest...she keppt on looking at him,,

Anant opened his eyes and saw her staring at him

Anant:ehem..mrs Navya Anant bajpayee what Happened

Navya:..Na..nothing (while looking down)

he waked up,,,and whispered

Anant: you are beautiful from inside as well,,

Navya:

Anant:I m lucky to owe You..Thanks for giving me Your Precious Night

Navya;Not mine...wasnt it our precious night

Anant:ahaan..i never knew someone is that much romantic

Navya:ermm let me go for freshup Now

she tried to leave...but was back on same place again...

he asked from eyed what happened,,,

Navya:ermm..anant if you dont mind can you take me till wa..washrom (being embarassed)

Anant;ehem.. IS everything OK..

Navya:i cant..walk due to... pain..

Anant:i m..i m sorry Navya.i didnt meant to hurt You

Navya:No Anant...dont say sorry..its Pain of love...i M Lucky to have it (with tears)

he carresed her Hairs and Hug her...

Anant;I LOVE YOU soo much Navya

Navya:I LOVE YOU TOO

"I remember That event..Which Changed Our Life...I remember That Night You went Far Away From Me ...I remember that Pain In Your Eyes...why Always Third person tries to Destroy 2 People..One soul...My mind is still in search...when we count it starts with 1st 2nd and 3rd..when 3 comes after 2...then How Can ...3 comes between 2 people"

Anant: i am waiting Navya...see its about to end ...Wakeup Damn it (shouted while sitting on seat as she was Resting on hospital bed..her pulse rate is about to end dr's are hopeless..it is about to 72 hours and she is still unconscious)

he cried and cried...and started writing his Last chapter,,

Days keep on passing anant and Navya's life was perfect as beautiful Fairy Tale...everything was perfect but..what made them seperate

Navya (in mind): Anant today i m going to give u a big surprise 😳😳 i am sure you will be on cloud 9..i just need to wait.till engagement of nimisha gets over😳 said navya being ready in Red chiffon sari she wa slooking heavenly beautiful

anant came out after being ready,,,

Anant:ehem..whats the ,matter😉..why r u looking so pretty more then ususal (he grabbed her from waist)

Navya:anant whats this..look its 8pm already..all guests must be arriving let me go now

Anant:No navya..please we will go later

Navya:what? R u mad..comeon now leave me

she pushed him on bed and giggled

Navya;Mr bajpayee see u downstairs (by showing tongue)

and ran from there

Ananat: Navya i m telling you you have to pay for it he smrked

as navya was going downstairs she bumped with Natalia

Natalia Is Anants Cuzn..she is very rude to navya since start..Mnay times she tried to degrade Navya,and have told wrong info to sughanda as well but mot of times her plan gets Backfire,,so she decided to play Big Game as Navya saw her dancing in a Bar in drunken state..when anant and navya went for a secret date

Navya: oh Sorry..(she moved)

Naalia: wait Navya..i wanna say something

Navya stopped and Turn..

Natalia: Dont you think you are playing Hard with me..Be careful next time.and stop black mailing me

Navya: Did i asked something from You ?what i need to do and what Not?

Natalia: You didnt. But i though t inform You or else ..You will be outside that door( pointing fnger to door)

Navya: Oh really ?? I think that door is for guests Only..Not for family members..so you are guest here one day Yo have t go from that door Not me

These words of Navya were heard by sughanda..

Natalia: we will see it,,

Navya: try it

saying this navya Left..Sughanda was confused how can navya behaved with her sister's daughter..navya knows Natalia is anant's cusn .she always beleived Navya but what she heard today wasn't pleasant to her ears ..she decided to talk with navya after ceremony.

engagement ceremony begins it was busy evening for everyone anant and navya was also busy i receiving guests...

Anant: what happened someone is looking upset

Natalia: oh Anant dont you think you are changed

Anant: really..how ??

Natalia: like ermm..joru ka ghulam (she laughed )

Anant: comeon natalia..its not ghulam thing...i love her i care for her same does she thats it

Natalia: i know ..But i think a girl like me was perfect for you..nah..i didnt liked your choice of desi girl

Anant; whatever you say dear..but i beleive Navya is perfect for me..😳..i guess you are jealous of her..arent you...well i can understand once we use to be best buddies

Natalia: jealous..comeon anant..i was just giving my opinion..

Navya saw them doing chit chat ..she went there..

Navya:anant lets have dinner now ..almost everyone have left,,,

he hold her from waist,,

Anant:are you hungry baby😳

Navya:yeah..too much..

Anant: lets go,,,oh yeah Natalia lets have dinner..

Natalia :No anant you ppl carry on actually m guest here...so i will eat only with guests,,

Anant: comeon girl; who told u this,,,i never thought you as guest,,comeon u r our family member

Natalia: really,,but i think some people have problem with it,,

Anant: this is all your misunderstanding nothing is like that..lets go,,

it was late night all guests already left,,,,

Sughanda: Navya beta kindly bring food for nimisha,,

Navya:ok maa

she left for kitchen..Natalia followed her,,,,Navya was pouring food in plate...

Natalia; so mrs Navya..what you think of ur exit forever from this home

Navya: impossible..i wont leave you natalia whoever will play with my family and my husband i wont leave her..mind it...i know very well you are the one who made baba have sleeping pills just because you want to leave in mid night,,,Thank to God i saw it or else he was going to be in severe condition,,i know very well you were the one who brought "whisky " on the day of pooja and blamed on sanjay chacha...and i also know this you are here to sign only for will from baba to have 50% of share on ur fathers name ..but mind it i wont let it happen

Natalia;really you think..u can stop this,,i bet you navya i will make anant divorce you,,,i will prove him you are having illegal relationships

Navya(shouted):Natalia ,, Navya slapped her,,,,i told u never ever say anything regarding me and anant..i already warned you..get out from here..outt...

natalia:will see you

she left...

navya came in hall...with food ..

anant: Is everything okk

Navya: hmm..will tell you later

in mean while sughanda was begging natalia to stop

Sughanda;Natalia please stop ..m saying you sorry on behalf of Navya..its midnight where are you going right now

Natalia:No maasi i cant stop here...sorry i need to leave ...i always told u about Navya's behaviour with me and u always ignored my words...i cant ahve further more insult she showed me the door of exit and also slapped me ..i cant stay here further for a minute

everyone came out from their rooms..

Sughanda:i m sorry natalia i never trusted u but today i heard from my ears..never knew it..

natalia:thanks maasi but your daughter in law dont like me i need to leave

Om: whats happening

natalia: uncle u always treated me as daughter..i m thankful for that

Baba: you are not going anywhere rite now

Anant: yeah baba is right...you are not going anywhere...(looking towards navya)

Natalia: thanks anant i know You love me alot and cares for me,,(she sobbed)

Anant:stop crying natalia...Navya will say sorry to you..

Navya:anant😲,,but i didnt said anything to her she was misbeha..(she couldnt completed sentence)

Sughanda: navya dont lie today i saw u while arguing with natalia...i always treated you as my daughter but you should also respect daughter of this family,,

Navya:Maan but i didnt said anything,, (she got tears)..anant trust me i didnt said her anything...

natalia: Lier..didnt u slapped me in kitchen do tell everyone...why u slapped me,,just because i joke with you about anant tells me everything about your and his relationship

Navya:how cheap you are😭😭how can you say like this

Natalia: see maasi she is calling me cheap

Navya: stop your lies natalia i know You very well,,that day i saw you in drunken state ,,thats why you are having problem with me

Natalia: whatt the hell...did u saw maasi😭 how cheap things she is saying about me..how can i do that

Anant:navaya may be u r misunderstood...

Navya: i m not misunderstood anant she was in...that state...

Baba: navyaaa...its enough nowww...end this drama,,and say her sorry she is daughter of this family,,,

navya was in fully tears..

Navya:then who i am baba...wont u ever took me as ur daughter😭😭

Natalia: i know she is stubborn...she wont accept her mistake😭

Anant 9softly): navya..say her sorry..

Navya was having many questions in her eyes she got deeply hurted..that no one was beleving her,,She was having hope in anant only,,but he is also saying to apologize ..

Navya (to natalia with tears in anger): i m sorry..

By saying this she ran to her room with sooo much tears and hurt...anant also got hurt while seeing her in this condition...he went to his room ..he saw her no where...she came from washroom after long time with swollen eyes,,,...their was silence in all over room when she came back she was amuse dto see him in sleeping position..she sat on bed

Navya:anant trust me i didnt said anything😭..yes i slapped her because she said me u will divorce me.. i couldnt controlled my anger

he was silently listening her and was in tears..

Navya: dont u trust me anant...

he waked up..wiped her tears..

anant:navya its late night...Sleep now..

Navya with questioning eyes

Anant: we will talk about this in morning ok..

navya (with tears):hmm morning...

he slept back...she couldnt sleep all night it was around 3am she was still in sitting position..in deep thoughts..she thought to gave him goodnews tonight..but event turned as hurting for her,,she was deeply hurted that anant actually made her say to apologize that 3rd person who have always supported his navya...today said her to apologize just a simple girl..how easily everyone trusted natalia's words,,but no one trusted Navya's words

Navya:Anant you are right i should sleep now.. (with teary smile) she closed the lamp


"i remmeber That worst darkness i remember that worst moment how u falled in my arms how i couldnt stopped you..why navya didnt you trust me..why didnt you wait for my side of story did u think i beleived natalia's words..No Navya...u even didnt gave me time to discuss matter with u...I just wish i wasn't slept..for 2hours only...May be i could have saved you"

it was about 4am..

Anant eyes opened..he was amazed to see room all dark..he was amazed..because navya never slept in darkness she always need..dim light...he waked up and opened the lamp..he saw she wasnt on bed...

Anant(in mind):I guess she is in washroom..after few minutes he knocked the door

Anant;Naya...

no answer from another side ..he opened the door no one was there..he opened terrace door and he sighed releif with her back...he went near her..

Anant;why r u still awake..

she didnt said word only look towards him with smile her eyes were red..he holded her hand..she was all cold.

Anant;navya...why r u so cold,,lets go inside..your body temperature is not fine

she didnt moved...

he hold her face in palms...

Anant:I m sorry (with tears) may be i over reacted,,but you know what i have many things to discuss with you

Navya (smilingly with tears):but its late anant,,

Anant:comeon Navya arent we the king and queen of night

Navya:but u said me to sleep..😭

Anant:i said you ..but you are still awake...

Navya:dont worry i will sleep forever in 5minutes,,

Anant;what are u saying..what type of joke it is😡

Navya:I love u anant..I love u sooo much

he got tensed he never saw her yes blood red,,,

Anant:what have u done navya,,,

Navya: want to sleep..

Anant :look at me...whatsin ur hand...

Navya:ur love😭

Anant:😭 Navya show me damn it...

he opened her hands and saw empty bottle of poison😭😭😭

Anant: (shouted): have u drunk it damn it...

she smilingly

Navya:will miss you...take care of urself...😭

Anant9shouted):and shaken her shoulder:Navya have u???😲😭😭

she nodded in yes,,,he thought his life is ended,,,,,

Anant;whyyy????????whyyy??

Navya:😭😭

she falled in his arms wth blood from her eyes

he shouted: NAVYA😭

<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>

and in actual also he shouted same 😭😭and cried...

here comes the movement in her fingers...replying

Navya;anant...An..ant

Anant: drrr drrr... (he shouted)...she is responding..

Dr: yes she is responding😃😃...Nurse please have her oxygen mask,,,,

Anant was overjoyed in happiness..

Anant;navya😭wakeup see m here..ur anant is here she started opening her eyes lill...and was happy to see her anant infront of her

Nimisha came...

Nimisha:bhabiii😃😭😭 welcome back...i missed u sooo much

Anant:Navya..r u..ok..

she noded smilingly...in yes

Nimisha:let me inform everyone...

Nimisha went from there and anant made navya sit...while caressing her hairs...he hugged her so tightly..she responded him..

Anant:m sorry navya,,😭😭

Navya;anant..M sorry..😭😭

Anant;shhh...let have this juice now,,,

she kept hand on her tummy...

Anant:Navya our baby is absolutely fine

she was overjoyed...😳😳,,,

Anant;drs were in deep thoughts wht type of miracle is this..but i know,,its our true love only,,,not any miracle,,

Navya;anant...i never knew what m leaving behind...m sorry for all this

anant:now have this juice

her eyes catch that diary...

Navya:anant how u got this..

Anant: i found it under your pillow..btw i have mentioned our journey in it..and see ths diary wll have new begining now...i was knowing it cant have any last chapter😳😳

she hugged her...he caressed her hairs and tried to kiss on her lips,,

Navya;no u cant😳

Anant:Why..

she kept hand on her Tummy...

Anant;comeon he and she only came by doing this and furthermore things...

navya giggled he kised on her lips..and they start their new Journey

THE END


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Too good dear thank uu soo much for this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww di...beautiful ending ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome it was... I would like it if u star writing a ff story.. U write it so gud... So plz it's my request...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank so much silla emotional updates
Edited by khoobsurat1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Too emotional updates dear loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a lovely OS thanks a lot for this. Please come up with the new one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome updates silla thank u very much please come up with new OS dear

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