Adi Ruhi- Rakshabandhan special four shot

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Hello everyone m ankita
i wanted to write something different nd suddenly this idea of raksha bandhan struck me
its a 4 part os. all the parts are posted 2gether
hope u all like it...

Do leave your preciuos comments😳😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Oye simmi rinki..rakhi khreed layi tum dono. Chalo acha hua. Ab kal subah suche muh apne pyare bhayion ko bandh dena or chnge chnge gift v le lena. Thik hai" said Toshi ji.

"Gift..mujhe bhi gift chahiye," exclaimed Ruhi. "Dadi mujhe bhi gift milega naa?" "Are puttar kll to behno ko gifft milne ka din hai. Kl rakshabhandan hai. Jo bhi behne apne bhayion ko rakhri bandeghi gifft to use hi milega."

"Ishima, main bhi Adi bhayiya ko rakhi bandhugi na..fir vo mujhe gift denge. Haina?" Everyone's face dropped listening to ruhi. Since Ruhi was born, she has never tied rakhi to Adi. Infact, she was unaware about any such festival. Raman used to live in Mumbai. Both sisters used to send their rakhi by courier every year an he used to send them money in return. Bhalla house had not celebrated this festival with fun for last six years except for romi's talks who tried to cheer everyone up.

"Ofcourse Ruh bacha. Hum bhayiya ko rakhi bhi bandhege or bada sa gift bhi lenge. ok? Mammi ji Adi yahan par aayega ya fir Raman ruhi ko vahan leke jayege?" She asked toshi casually unaware of the turnmoils going on inside the hearts of everyone remembering their previous years celebrations.

Undoubtedly, This time situation was different. Raman is at home this year. Everyone is happy. Better than atleast last time. Still, everyone in the home had a craving for Adi. Afterall, he is the first child of house in this generation. Everyone was so attached to him. Now that everything is perfect, Raman is happily married, Raman Ruhi relation is improved, everything is perfect except for Adi. In their hearts everyone wishes silently that a day comes in their life when Adi turns out to be at their place and starts living here. He also gets the love and care of Ishita like Ruhi.

"Mammi ji..Aap jwab kyu nhi de rhi? Kya hua?" she asked a worried Toshi. She was confused why everyone went in silent mode suddenly. What happened. "Raman.." she asked him, "Is everything alright?"

"Papa Adi bhayiya kll ayenge na ghr pe? Me unhe rakhi bandhugi na? Btao na papa?" she asked Raman shaking him completely with her small hands. "Ruhi" he shouted "We are not going anywhere and no one is coming. You are not going to celebrate Rakshabandhan. Mind it. Now go to your room"

"But papa me to.." Ruhi said softly. "I said go." shouted Raman. "Raman aap.." Ishita was shocked at his behaviour but he cut her short. "Bas Ishita. Mujhe is baare me koi bat nhi karni." said Raman and picking up his phone, went out of the house. Mr. Bhalla, Romi, Simmi and Rinki retired to their room one by one. Only Toshiji was there trying to wipe the stream of tears on her face. Ishita came to her and asked her the reason of Raman's such behaviour.

She was shocked to know that after Shagun left along with Adi, leaving Ruhi and Raman, on her first rakshabadhan, Raman called her so that atleat kids can enjoy the festival. Afterall, they were realated by blood and each brother deserves to be tied a rakhi by his sister. But Shagun, she never wanted to keep any such relation with father daughter duo. "Even i was shocked Ishita. Ek maa apne hi bccho ko alag kaise krr skti hai. Mainu hun tkk yad hai Ishita, jdo simmi paida hui thi naa, me itni khush hui thi ki mere Raman ko rakhi bandhne wali aa gyi pr wo aurut. Use koi farak hi nhi padta ki uske bcche ek dusre ko thik se bhai behen bhi nhi samajhte. Are Raman baap hokr bhi chahta hai ki kam se kam uske bcche to sath ho lekin wo to maa ke naam pr hi klnk hai woh." She cried and hugged Ishita. Ishita consoled her.

Ater sometime, Ishita was in her room thinking what to do. She remembered Ruhi's sparkling eyes when she said she will tie Rakhi. She remembered Raman's hurt face and his outburst. 'No, she can't let it be like this. Shagun aisa kaise kr skti hai. Kuch bhi ho jaye, me ruhi ko yeh khushi dekar rhungi. Kitni khush thi woh is festival ke bare me sunke. Koi ek bacche ko kaise hurt kr skta hai. No, i'll have to think of something.'

She thinks of something and goes to sleep.

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Next morning Simmi and Rinki tie Rakhi to their brothers and get their gifts. Ishu ties rakhi to Bala and gets a beautiful bracellete as a gift. Ruhi sees all this and gets sad. Raman comes to her. "rooh..yeh dekho..waht papa bought for you?" He gives her a beautiful doll. "Agar sab ko gift milega to meri Ruhi ko bhi milega. take it chalo. Papa is sorry beta." He gives it to her and kisses her. Everone has tears of happiness in their eyes seeing the two but Ruhi is not at all happy. She shouts, "NHi chahiye. Mujhe koi gift nhi lena. Mujhe apne bhayiya ko rakhi bandhni hai or me gift bhi sirf unse hi lungi. kisi or se nhi." She starts crying. Everyone is worried seeing her like this. Ishita comes to her and says,"Rooh aise nhi bolte. Dekho papa apke liye kitne pyaar se laye hain. Don't say no baby."

Seeing her doesn't budge, she says "Ok..Don't take it. Ise hum side pe rkhte hain. Chalo stop crying and lets go to school." She wipes her tears. "Mammiji me ise school chorke ati hun." Ishita goes with Ruhi. This time she was going to her school to not just drop her. She wanted to meet someone.

There she saw him, coming out of his car and instructing the driver to come on time to take him back. She went towards his side and called him."Adi". He turned backwards to see who was calling him. Seeing her he got furious and started walking in his direction. She again called him, a louder this time and asked him to stop as she has something really important to talk about. He stopped. She asked him to come and sit with her on the bench. He followed her. She started, " U know Adi, today is a festival."

"Festival? What kind of festival? Mom has not arranged for any party today."

"Festivals doesn't mean partying in a resort or hotel by inviting some fake high standard people. Festivals are celebrated at home also. With family u know."

"You must be joking. How can a festival be celebrated at home?"

"M not beta. It can be possible. Ok let me tell you. You know what is it today? Today is rakshabandhan-a festival of brothers and sisters."

He now looks at her with a curosity.

She continues," On this auspicious day, a sister ties rakhi on her brother's wrist and asks him to protect her for her lifetime. She wishes for the well being of her brother. And brother in turn gifts her something and blesses her. He also promises to protect her always from all odds of life."

"But if it is so, why mom didn't tell me? Ohh..I know, she must be thinking that Ruhi won't tie me rakhi anyways. You won't allow her. Thats why only she chose not to tell me so that I'm not hurt."

"Ruhi wants to tie rakhi to you."she said. "What?" he was shocked,' and you must have stopped her..."

"I want you to come at home today and get it tied on your wrist by your sister." she cut him short and told him. "Will you come?" she asked. He idn't know what to say. He thought she would never allow them to calebrate together but here she was inviting him."BUt mom..i mean" he tried to speak. "I'll talk to your mom. If you want to come, no one can stop you from celebrating this festival with your sister." she assured him.

He was happy. Very happy. For the first time in his life, he was going to celebrate with a family and not in some restaurant, pub or party hall. He was excited to see how it turns out to be. he confirmed,"okk..I'll come but will not stay for more than an hour." "okk..done" Ishita was really happy. After all both her ruhi and ravan kumar will be happy. Moreover, Adi will also learn something good only. "Ok Adi..I'll come to pick you up from school today. You can tell the driver. Now go to your class."

"Ok.." he said and ran to his class. Ishita smiled and left for her clinic to complete her appointments as she wanted to keep her evening free.

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At 4 in the evening, Ishita called Raman and asked him to pick ruhi up from school. "Dekho me meetings me busy hoon. Tum jabra kisi or din nikal lena. pehle jaakar meri beti ko le aao." Raman said in an irritated tone. "Raman please M really busy. Vo apki bhi to beti hai. Ek din agar aap le aaoge to kya ho jayega. Main nhi ja skti. plss"

"ok fine. jata hun" He ended the call. 'Kahan fasa diya is madrasan ne. Chl Raman kumar Bhalla..beti ko school se lana hai.

Ishita was waiting for Raman to come and take Ruhi from school. As soon as they left, she asked Adi to come with her. She wanted to surprise them by taking him directly. On the way, Adi asked Ishita to stop the car. She stopped. He said he wanted to buy some gift for Ruhi. Ishita was really happy. He went to a shop and bought a really expensive video game for his sister. She asked him why are you having so much money. He told mom gave me. She advised him that he should buy gift for Ruhi from his own money and not like this. He must be having some saved pocket money. He can use it. Even if he gets a small gift, it will do because Ruhi will be happy to know that her bro used his own money for her.

He said that he didn't have any money saved. Ishita then said that she can lend him money. When he refused to take, she assured him that he can return it to her later that too from his own savings. He did as he was told.

On the other side, Raman and Ruhi entered home. MRS Bhalla,"Oye Raman tu leke aya Ruhi nu. Ishita kithe?" "Pta nhi maa..koi kaam hai use"

"Achaa..chl tu beth me chai bnati hun.""Haan maa..sir ftt rha hai dard se. Jldi dedo chai" Toshi enters the kitchen to see Neelu making variety of dishes. "Oyee Neelu. AAh ki kar rhi hain. Kya kya bna rhi hai aur kyu?" Toshiji asked surprised. "wo auntyji ishita bhabhi ka fone aya tha. unhone kha yeh sbb bnane ko. Halwa, channa, poori, shahi paneer, chawal, raita, naan, daal or chicken bhi. Sb kuch. Kha koi aa rha hai khas mehman. or mithe me gulab jamun bhi." said Neelu in one go. Both toshi and Raman were surprised. 'Mehman kon mehman?' "Maa mai abhi puchta hun ishita se fone krke."

He calls her but she doesn't pick. She is sure he must have come to know about someone coming from Neelu. 'Hmm..Let Ravan Kumar think who this guest is.' She smiled. Adi was enjoying her company. She was very polite to him unlike what her mother had told him about her. She was asking sweetly about his school, his class, his classmates, his tution, his hobbies, his daily routine etc. He suddenly realised that even his own mother never asked or knew so much about him. Why was she so much interested-in him and his life. He never had the habit of sharing something with anyone so he found it really wierd. Still, he briefly replied to whatever he was asked.

When the car entered Akash Ganga Housing Society, Adi became nervous. He was never afraid of anything in his life but today he was not at ease. After serving in community center for about a month, he saw how people have to face hardships of life and how people crave for as well as enjoy relations and relatives. It had become his wish now to atleast see his family for once as his own. He wanted to know if he could also feel the love of many relatives like Ruhi who had told him enough about her dadu, dadi, chachu, bhua, pati, chitti, periamma etc. Though he never told about this wish to anyone of having relatives as he was afraid he will become a laughing stroke, he always craved for a family full of many members.

Raman saw Ishita's car through balcony. "Lo aa gyi..kanjus khin ki. Isiliye fone nhi uthaya hoga" "Maa..aa gyi Ishita. Ab usi se puchte hain ki kon aa rha hai" he said as he entered living area. As soon as Ishita came on door, he asked her "Ishita tum khan thi. Fone kyu nhi uthaya or kon aa rha hai?" He asked everything in one go. Suddenly he saw Adi entering behind Ishita. He was numb and shocked. For few minutes he stood there only lost in his own thoughts when Ishita called him,"Raman!! see who has come. Come Adi..Come inside beta" He followed her. All bhallas gathered there. They were all shocked and happy to see Adi in there home after six years. Raman had tears of happiness in his eyes.

Adi's situation was not less different. While entering the home, he felt as if it was closely related to him. Everything seemed familiar to him as if he was connected to them. He had some unclear flashbacks of him sitting on the dinning table and whole family feeding him, he and dadu playing on sofa and many more. Though he didn't remeber everything clearly but he was connected to all these persons standing here for sure. He had met them many times but never considered them as his own as his mother had told him but today, on Ishita's advise, he saw them as his family and he could clearly see a lot of love and affection for him in their eyes. He met everyone-his dadi, dadu, chachu and both bhua. They all hugged him tightly and for once, instead of getting angry on them, he too hugged them back and smiled to them.

Raman's eyes filled with tears seeing his son mingle with his family. His respect for Ishita grew many folds. This woman always supports him and gives him something in an unexpected way never asking anything in return. How can someone be so good, so gentle and so selfless. He can never thank his stars enough for bringing her in his life.

Adi came to him and greeted him,"Hi dad." "Hello beta" He blessed him and hugged him. "kaise ho?" "Good Dad" he smiled to him.

"Rooh..come here baby. Bahar aao. Mammiji kahan hai ruhi? Bahar kyun nhi aa rhi?" Ishita asked toshi. Toshi ji replied,"Puttar vo jab se ayi hai kisi se baat nhi krr rhi bss bhaiya bhaiya ki ratt lgaye bethi hai. Na kuch khaya na piya. Roye jaa rhi hai bss."

Adi asked her not to worry and called her,"Ruhi..Ruhi please come outside."


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"Adi bhayiya.." she came running hearing his voice and seeing her adi bhayiya there hugged him tightly. Adi too hugged her back. Raman couldn't thank God enough for finally making him see this day. His both children together that too because of Ishita.

"Bhayiya..aap mujhse rakhi bandhwane aye ho na? Aapko kaise pta ki me aapko miss krr rhi thi?" Ruhi asked him. He replied,"Haan ruhi..actually Ishima ne mujhe btaya." Everyone was shocked to see Adi calling Ishita as maa. Even Adi himself registered his words afterwards. He apologised to her saying it was slip of tounge but she assured him that he can call her maa as Ruhi calls her. She will be happy. He too nods positively and calls her maa again. Everyone is very happy."Thankew Ishima..Adi bhayiya ko lane ke liye." Ruhi kisses Ishita. "O my Roo..come here." She hugs her and asks Adi also to join them. She hugs both her kids lovingly and blesses them.

Ishita,"Chalo ab jaldi se rakhi bandhte hain. Roo have a look. Ishima aapke bandhne ke liye rakhi leke ayi hain." "Wow Ishima its pretty" Ruhi exclaims. Ishita then makes both of them sit and explains them all rituals of tying rakhi, applying tilak and feeding sweets etc. They both do as instructed. Then Adi gifts her. She is very excited to open it. She sees a sweet teddy and is very happy to recieve it.

"Pta bhayiya aaj mujhe 2-2 gift mile. Papa ne doll diya or apne teddy." Ruhi told Adi as they all got seated on the chairs to have food. "Oye Ruhi Chuhi..pehle to doll le bhi nhi rhi thi. Ab bhai aa gya to 2-2 gift." Romi asks her to which she giggles. "Maine to aise hi bola tha." Everyone laughs at her sweet antics. Adi sees how Ruhi is pampered by everyone at home which doesn't go unnoticed by Raman.

"Ishima..aapne to sb khana mera favourite bnaya hai. Aapko kaise pta mujhe kya psnd hai?" Adi asked to which she replied," Beta, your dad told me." "Papa apko mere taste ka pta hai?" he was visibly surprised. "Itna sa tha tu..jb se tujhe pyar krta hun or tbb se hi tere bare me sb kuch janta hun. kuch bhi puchle," Raman told him. He was excitingly happy.

After having dinner, they all sat together to have some chit chat session. Adi came after so many years. They wanted to know about him and he wanted to know about them. After sometime, Ishita Raman along with both the kids head towards Ashok's house. While leaving,m Adi promised everone that he would come again soon to meet them all and waived them goodbye. On the way, Raman stopped the car to have ice cream with his family. The four of them had a great time with each other.

Adi now seriously wanted his custody case to be reopened. Maybe, he could also enjoy the company of a family like Ruhi. Who knows this Rakshabandhan turns out to be a turning point of the lives of four of them.
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So hows it?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohhh wowww!!! Reallyy sweettt.. I just wish if this happens in the show! Brilliant work! Loved it totally!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A very sweet OS...
keep writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a sweet story! And so well written too!

Do write more! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Such a lovely os dear
Good job
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ankita i would like to say ur amazing
d part wen adi enters bhalla house n toshiji says abt ruhi crying and den she comes running i actually got a lone tear coming out of my eyes as it was very emotionnal

do keep writting stories as u have the perfect blend of emotions in them

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