SS: DHADKANEIN Part 15 Updated on Pg 139 on 17.10.2016

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Posted: 11 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: jodude
wow!! what a fantastic update...👏
i just loved it a lot...
beautifully written...
raya didnt confessed their love yet..but they feel happy with each other..
i love their nok..jhoks...in restaurant..😆
ram like a hero saved her from that nasty guy...
i love ram's reaction towards that guy and his demands with his MD.

continue ASAP..
waiting eagerly..
thanks for the pm..😊

Thank you so much for loving it.

Yeah they wont say those three magical words but they expressed their words.

Haan hero knows teasing and also saving, caring and loving.

Will update tonight..Thank you again.

Its my pleasure.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
I am loving every bit of the story
Nuts entry in the story as Ram Sis
Priya is feeling very uneasy in presence of Ram and as well as they all are going for lunch. She certainly love Priya as mentor
Ram is behaving very sweetly with her teasing him still Nuts can't make out they both like each other
that Raj is such a jerk how he try to misbehave with Priya i was so happy Ram came on time to protect her
Vik Neha are pillars for both of them who always support Raya
they both are true friend i really like awesome foursome
Ram acted like a RB in front of MD so that jerk can get punishment without revealing Priya's name
Aww they have feelings but still didn't confess
Will be waiting for next part thanx for the pm

Thank you so much Aanchal.

Nuts entry was on right time I feel.Yeah Priya is a spl person in Nuts life. Yeah Ram enjoyed teasing her. Nuts doesnt know yet..

Raj is a jerk but RK was on time.

Vik n Neha will be good supporting friends always.

Yeah RK made MD listen to him..after all he is RK how will he leave.

Yeah their feelings are going to be revealed in next part.

Will try to update tonight. I didnt miss this time sending pm..its my pleasure.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: rajhallur
Hey Doc,
finally i am here again to write something about this upate though knowing i cant giv full justice to it.. thats y this time i didnt call it ss comment...

What a twist to the story dear, only one word came from my mouth after reading is speechless!!!!?!
Really i got numb
i sat few minutes silently closing my eyes..
i felt like everything describd in this update is happening in front of my eyes..
Hats off to writers imagination..
i dont hav the capacity to comment to this update since i m not the writer..
kya kar diya yaar tune..
sucha beautiful writing..
the physical and mental trauma priya faced is very realistic touch u gave..
i loved Nuts~priya~ram convo in hotel..
The way ram teases priya is beautiful.

My god.. finally Ram brushed his lips with his lady but not intentionly..
unknowingly he poured all his love, insecurity to her with that kiss..
He protected her so sweetly calling her "my angel" i just loved that word..
while speaking with MD, he didnt disclosed her name superb.. only a true gentleman can do this..

This was an amazing update.
Very well written, and beautifully executed...
Loved the way their relationship is taking its shape..
Beautiful creation
. just a magic...

and finally The Ram Kapoor.. how did u create such a character.
I m falling in love with that character again and again..

finally before ending this, ek bada sa JAADU KI JHAPPI to the writer from my side..

Dear Doc.. Mein bahut proud feel kar rahi hoon apne aap ko ki mein is story ka hissa hoon as a reader
.
sorry for the late reply.

Again i say yeh dil maange more ..more .. and more..next update plz very soon...
thats it from my side...

love u dear doc.. bye...

Hiii buddy..

AM really touched seeing your comment.

Thanks a tonne for all the beautiful words you wrote for the update..

I have just penned down and it became beautiful because of readers, the praises, the appreciation give me moral support.

Yeah you got it perfectly he poured his love, care and assurance through that kiss.

He will never bring out Priya's name we know that.

It was so sweet of you for finding it amazing.

Thanks a tonne..

RK ..it happened yaar. It wont fall from there..never..

haan Hugs to you too for such a wonderful feed back.

My pleasure gal.

No need to say sorry as I know you cant do it soon and you are doing even in your restricted

love u too dear

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Posted: 11 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: priyajan12
just one word
"speechless"

Thank you so much.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#635

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Sorrry for being late doc

Happy moments: Nutz introducing raya, and both having perplexed , wide mouth open, 😆
Ram and priya fantasizing about each other dil hi dil mein , and the way they met and attracted each other.
OMG ram fantsizing her as "HIS" sounds so good. The authoirty in the voice have two extra pulkas wah wah ramji , irada kya hai?? and the teasing tone like plumpy galz 😆😆
😉 and he was scared and his expression zindagi bhar k liye ghas phus kaise khaana hai awesome, the last part he never leaves a chance to tease her, Chalne ki practice karo 🤣i was like wow , he knows how to irritate her, make her occupied with his thoughts always.

Coming to Priya , she wanted run off ,but nutz had not given chance , behcari 😆 and her hesitation in tone as if she cannot control herself , if RK is around and can melt any time, she is now scared of herself 😆 girl instincts hihihi
and madam is fantasizing about him without even seeing him , just by Nuts description of her, amazing , she has submitted herself to him b4 itself.😉😆
Ram asking her u will cook non veg na and her immediate reply NO and the tone OMG 😆😆😆 superb doc awesome brilliant writing. Priya's embarrassed look on nutz praises for her that to in front of RK, the great CT surgeon. Madam toh kaafi khush bhi hogayi , inkaar bhi nhi kiya though she was full she had 3 pulkas [lol]😉 actualy she was liking his concern n protection and his authority over her. 😆😆 brilliant doc i can visualize her expressions so very much. only sakshi can fit here , and her embarrassed and perplexed and blushing face . hayye

The heartfelt thing is Raj being the monster , how can he be so , ufff Doctors bhi aise honge toh its really difficult to survive in this world [cry] but the reason behind him being molesting priya is this bcoz he hate RK or is it bcoz priya is accompanying RK, or he as a character always assault female staff??disgusting shit he is😭
Priya and her hurt and pain ,its hard to digest, some where it shaken me the whole incident, priya's cry n her washing away his touch , feeling irritated about herself ,her body and she the victim only can feel its pain and helplessness and frustration, Yes every feeling guilty about him/her being the reason of priay's such condition it often happens, but to be frank its the time not any one of responsible , but some odds bound to happen, unaware. so sad yet true.
the way ram was consoling priya as he had witnessed her breaking down soon finding him and hugging , the belief , faith in a person when you are in a critically bad situation.

uff heart wrenching, u justified the whole drama so well doc, the one being loved , cannot see her pain and getting angry and the girl being molested her condition and pain also her mental disturbance, superb kudos👏👏

No problem buddy dont say sorry you have given comment thats good.

Yeah they know about each other but never met till ow and they didnt fantasize but they feel connected coz of Nuts.

RK is RK he will be teasing always and yeah "his Priya"

You caught her very well she wanted to avoid him as she cant stand his teasing or flirting..

Yeah that was a NO with a glare, still he didnt mind until direct warning. Yeah Sakshi only will perform this perfectly.

Yeah we may not see every doc behaving like Raj but you may find few here and there..

He has bad eye to every female then why will he leave a beauty like Priya upar se she was moving close with RK, so it added fuel for his cheap act.

Am sorry but the pain I wanted to portray was something which so many might have gone through..just hearing/reading will shaken us but the pains he was subjected to is unimaginable.

Thank you so much for such an elaborate and wonderful comment. I am just 😃 seeing it.

Am humbled with your comment.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal
OMG...i was...sooo dead reading this...raya...love them...aaa...that moron...Raj...aaa...kill him...ram was there on time...awww...ram was shattered...shit...kiss...O_O ram confessed finally..that he loves her...chalo ye hypnotism nahi hai...haha...plzzz...continue asap..

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment.

Will post tonight.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: sinalbest
Hi Di...😊
Sry for late...finally read all parts...😊
Superb concept...👏👏⭐️
it reminded me Sanjeevani.. serial based on dr's & Dill Mil Gaye..😉
missing those serials..

overall nice execution.. 👏
loved it...

thanks for pm
once again sry for late...

Hii Sagar..thanks for commenting..

dont say sorry u r busy I know

Thank you and yeah u may feel coonected to those doc series..

thanks bro

my pleasure.

take care.

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Waiting

Originally posted by: aiyathasan
di waiting waiting... Update soon...

Updating now gals.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#639

PART 8

Ram wasn't bothering about the time, place or his needs. He just sat there staring at her. He was lost in his own world.
His thoughts were surrounding Priya only. He wasnt even in a able state to think about his feelings or reactions. Why he was there waiting for her to open her eyes? Why he was so worried about her? In this short span why he was feeling so lost when he saw her crying miserably? Why he felt his life was over if something happens to her... All this questions were trying to surround him but he was shaking them off.
R: Agar issi ko shayad pyaar kehte hai toh Priya, haan main tumse pyaar karta hoon..apne se jyaada tumhe chahta hoon. Tumhare aasoon mere aankhon se nikal rahe hain.. Tumhare khushi mere chehre pe hassi lati hain, tumhe dekhke nazane kyun mera dil pagla jaata hain.. jab tum paas hoti ho tab mere dhadkanein tez ho jaate hai... agar iss sab ko pyaar kehte hain toh haan main tumse pyaar karta hoon Priya. Kyun hua, kab hua, kaise hua main nahin jaanta, lekin ye dil ka doctor tumhare pyaar mein pagal sa hogaya hain Priya..ek baar ek baar mujhe dekho Priya..tumhari ek nazar ke liye..ek hassi ke liye kitni betaabi se intezaar kar raha hoon tumhe maloom hoga Priya.
Neha and Vikram had tears hearing his confession. They silently moved into hall leaving them alone.
Ram'e eyes were glistered with tears. Priya stirred in her sleep. He wiped his tears seeing her move. She again stirred back to sleep. He heaved a sigh. He was just waiting for her to wake up. In the mean while he remembered something and he gave message to Vikram.
Vikram rang some one and passed on that message.
After 30mins door bell rang. Neha attended it. She was baffled to see the bouquet guy (fake Radhe Shyam). She stood before him glaring at him with both hands on her waist
Ne: Tumhari itni himmat ki phir aagaye ho yaha.
Man: Madam ji aap mujhe baksh do, Vikram sir ne dawayi mangayi hain. Dene ke liye aaya hoon, please, Unhe dedijiye.
He sprinted from there after handing over her a carry bag.
V: Neha, kaun hai? Mano aayega dawayi leke, aane do usse.
Ne: Came in, keeping the bag near him, woh aagaya aur chala bhi gaya.
V: Kya.. chala gaya yah bhag gaya.. tum bhi na Neha.
Ne: Maine kya kiya yaar? She went to kitchen to check the rice cooker.
Vikram shaked his head and went to keep a vial in refrigerator.

Priya felt someone tugging her closer and was babbling Ram..dont leave me, please Ram, mujhe darr lag raha hain.
She was able to hear her beloved man's hoarse voice calling out her name from some distance.
P: (Babbling) Mujhe apne paas hi rakho Ram, dont go away from me, please.. he will hurt me again, please Ram save me.
R: (Tears running down) Haan Priya main hoon na, dekho Priya ek baar meri taraf dekho. Priya..Priya..am here right before your eyes, look at me Priya... open your eyes Priya.
Priya slowly opened her eyes and scrunched again to adjust herself to the light. When she opened fully the blurred image was getting more clearer.
P: (Smiled) Ram...
Ram was elated to see her smile.
Priya slowly got the reality to her senses. She was puzzled and got up after observing the surroundings.
P: Aap..yaha..mere ghar mein??
R: Haan. Tumhe kuch yaad nahin hain??
P: Neha... what is she doing.
R: She might be outside.
P: Was trying to cover herself with duvet. She was embarassed that she was in night suit and that too seeing Ram so close to her she felt her heart skip a beat.
She downcast her eyes and gave a blushy smile.
In mean while the harsh incident struck her memory chord and her face expressions suddenly turned into a mixture of hurt, hatred and fear. Ram main.. main waha..woh..ussne mujhe yaha..she brought forward her wrist and seeing bandages her eyes welled up with tears.
She hid her face in her palms and started crying bitterly.
Ram was perplexed with the sudden change and he was out of clue what to do then. Neha rushed in and Vikram too followed.
Ram signaled with his hand to leave the matter to him. Neha wasnt willing but Vikram pulled her back.
Ne: Common yaar waha Priya ro rahi hai and why the hell you are stopping me.
V: Please Neha thodi der unhe akela chod do. I can understand your pain but Ram wants to
Ne: She is my friend Vikram.. get that in your mind. She stormed off from there to her room.
Vikram ran behind her but she shut the door on his face.
He stood there puzzled and helpless.
R: Priya..Priya.. dekho mujhe. Main hoon RK.. tumhara Ram. Please dont cry see me Priya. Please.
He tried to pull her hands cupping her face. He finally succeeded and he saw that her eyes were red and swollen. He felt his heart squeeze with pain.
He pulled her into his embrace and comforted her palming her head.
R: My angel, please suno meri baat. Main hoon na tumhare paas. Tum mehfoos ho mere baahon mein. We are at your home darling. Neha and Vikram are in hall. Now I am breaking the hug okk you will not cry okk.
Ram slowly pulled her from his hug and cupped her face.
She was gazing into his dark eyes. She was mesmerized for that intense look. She stopped crying but tears were smearing her cheeks.
R: You know Priya ab tak in 33saalon mein jab se main college mein aagaya bahut saare ladkiya woh bhi Mumbai and Pune ke fast gals mere zindagi mein bahut sare aaye. Lekin palat kar maine kisi ko nahin dekha. Meri zindagi mein pyar ka chapter I thought God has forgotten to write and I had no complaints for that. But jab maine dekha ki tumhare aankhon ne mujhe poocha "tum mujhe kaise chot pahuncha sakte ho Ram" tab se nazane kya hogaya hain mujhe. I am unable to understand what's happening with me. I wanna stare at you entire day, wanna tease you, wanna talk with you, wanna be with you but.. still have a fear about your feelings.
He paused and stared at Priya, she was just lost in the magical flow of his words. He continued..
Till now I lived for my ambition, jab papa guzar gaye tab main 16 ka tha. I was interested in medical profession so I didnt think about our business. Pata nahin maa ne kaise sambhala. Lekin main AFMC mein join hone ke baad meri duniya ek dum si badal gaya. Studies were my utmost priority so I seldom used to come home. Nuts too was a kid then. When I was in my internship some how I felt I should do something for the needy and poor. So I was having so many thoughts and I used to share with my friends. They used to mock at me. Except Vikram everyone used to call me male version of mother Theresa. I used to despise that. (In due respect to the great mother I have used her name for my story, its not to mock) Am not so great like her but I want to do something from my side. So later I have thought to build hospitals for needy which provide the best care totally free of cost and when I shared it with my friends they started laughing on my face. I was like deeply hurt with their behaviour, since then I started staying alone and aloof. How much ever Vikram tried I just couldnt get back to normal. Since then friends started to comment that am arrogant and gone case. They thought that I was trying to behave like mahaan but how I should tell them that I was trying to be an Insaan.
A lone tear escaped from his eye.. Priya was totally lost in his confession.
R: Tab se...tab se Priya, I tried to avoid friends, gals and every other relation. I was successful in that till now..but nazane kab aur kaise tumne mujhme kuch feelings jagaya. I thought it was your magic or some thing else but no it was your love towards me, inspite of my attitude, arrogance and anger you behaved good with me. And even if I hurt you, you didn't hurt me back or hate me. So from that day I felt Yes she is mine, I can be myself with her, I can share my feelings with her, so now I have told everything about me Priya. Now you can decide whether you feel same for me or not.
I don't know why am telling you all this now but I am happy I told.

Priya was looking into his eyes..

R: I can't face the humiliation of rejection, after seeing my friends' behaviour regarding my ambition, I was fixed that no one will understand me, so I never thought of going for a relationship..magar tumne..tumne mujhe badal diya jaise hypnotize kiya ho(Priya smiled at this). Pata nahin tumhara response kaisa hoga, ab soch ke darr lag raha hain... why..why I was pulled towards you when I know, you too may laugh at me..

He left her face and held his head placing both hands in his hair and collapsed on bed.

Priya was in pain but seeing him so vulnerable she couldn't control herself. She rushed to him and placed her hands on his shoulders.

P: Ram, I promise you that I am never ever going to restrict you or expect anything from you. You need not worry about me, I am always with you in every step of yours. I just l... She controlled herself and tugged his head closer to her.

Ram was over whelmed with her words and hugged her placing his hands around her waist and dug his head into her tummy. He was letting out his pain in the form of tears. He knew that they were coming out of joy.

Priya stood there pacifying him. Minutes passed by and Priya stood the same way till then. Ram lifted his head and saw her face. Her gaze was fixed on Ram. She looked into his eyes and gave a radiant smile.. as if she was promising him. He blushed seeing her smile.

P: Hayee cutie pie.

R: Ladkon ko cute nahin kehthe..

P: Toh kya kehte hai..

R: Handsome, dashing, manly etc etc..

P: Haan I am lucky that along with these my man has one more quality.. (blush) Cute Golupan.

R: Haaww, you called me Motu..

P: Noo (bit her lip), I called you Golu.

He let out a laugh, she hid her face in her palms. He got up and was staring at her bewitching beauty.

They both forgot the pain they had gone through at that moment.

R: Bhook lag raha hain..

P: Controlling her blush.. chaliye.. Neha ko bhi dekhna hai. Pagli she might be crying.

Both came into the hall. They stood there seeing Vikram sitting alone in the sofa with a sullen face. Priya searched around the hall. She went towards kitchen. Ram went and sat beside Vikram. He placed his hand on his shoulder and at the same time Priya asked "Neha??"

Vikram looked at her and pointed towards Neha's room.

P: Is she taking bath?

V: Nodded his head as no.. She is crying.. He was feeling bad about the situation. He didn't know what to tell and how to tell.

Priya went and knocked the door before she could call out for her Neha's voice echoed from the room.

V: Don't disturb me Vikram. I am fine. Aap ka friend ka permission milne ke baad hi main Priya se milungi. Let her sleep till then and let me have some peace.

Priya was perplexed with those words. She looked at Vikram with a puzzled look.

Ram reacted for this. She might be hurt as I waved them off from coming to you. I didn't do intentionally Vikram.

V: Main jaanta hoon, lekin..

R: Haan Neha bhi sahi hai yaha, they are best buddies after all, uff kya kar diya maine.

P: Gave a smile of assurance.

Ram and Vikram were staring at her. They know that Neha will respond to Priya.

P: Nehaaa...(knock)

The door sprung open with in a minute and Neha was surprised to see Priya standing before her.

N: Priya tum..yaha..kaise..

P: Kya karoon ruthe dost ko manana hai na..toh aagayi.

N: Am not angry with you, pata hai uss fatty ne mujhe roka tumhare paas aane se. You were crying and I so wanted to be with you but uss..

R: OYEEE

Vikram hit his head.

P: Oh my baby.. she spread her arms, Neha gladly rushed into those arms.

Vikram and Ram gave each other a look.

P: Am feeling hungry.

N: Everything is ready, chalo.

Priya stumbled while taking a step. Neha held her in time. Ram got up from sofa but he didn't move.

N: You are weak, why you came out, you can call me on my mobile na. Chalo will make you comfortable on bed.

They went into Priya's room when Neha was supporting her while walking. She made her seat on bed adjusted the pillows and leaned her back.

N: Don't move, I will get food and feed you.

P: Shall I ask you something??

N: Yeah poocho.

P: Are you J??

Neha shrugged off her shoulders and
came out and went to dining table to serve food in a plate.

N: Guys Priya ke khaane ke baad we will have our dinner. Please bear with it for some more time.

She arranged everything neatly in a plate and was about to take the plate.

R: If you don't mind, may I have the honour of feeding my lovely lady.

Neha gaped at him. Vikram was baffled, yet he was awaiting to see Neha's reaction.

N: Hmmm, if I give a second thought, ofcourse you can man. Go and do the honours.

R: Thank you so much. I am sorry for what happened, but I wasnt rude.

N: Its ok, hota hai kabhi kabhi. I will try to forgive you.

Ram smiled broadly and said 'kamaal hai yaar, tumne mujhe fatty kaha aur tum hi mujhe maaf karne ki KOSHISH karogi. Vikram tussi great ho.

N: How mean.. and Vikram you...,have you complained about me??

V: smiled at his luck, chakke mein aata ki tarah piss raha hoon yaar. Mujhe baksh do thodi der.

Ram took the plate and moved towards Priya's room.

V: Ram, tera dinner?

R: Grinning at him, aata hoon beta, aake tere haath se khaunga, he glared and left.

V: Ufff.. mere naseeb main aaj pitna likha hai shayad.

N: Don't worry Vikram, I am there na.

V: Tum kya karogi.

N: I will tell fatty to hit you very gently.

He howled at laughing Neha.

Ram entered the room with food plate and saw that Priya was leaning back on the pillows and was relaxing with closed eyes.

R: (Cough)..

Priya opened her eyes and saw Ram standing with a plate. She adjusted herself and sat properly. Ram sat beside her on the bed. Then she saw that he has brought food. She was searching for Neha, seeing that Ram smiled and said.

Ussne mujhe permission diya tumhe khilane ke liye.

P: AAP... aap mujhe khilaoge..nooo, Neha ko bhej dijiye please.

R: Why you, mere haath se khilaunga toh khana nahin jayega kya?

P: Woh baat nahin hain.. she was wondering what to say.

R: Then..

P: Aap jyada khilayenge.(puppy face)

Ram laughed at that face. Its ok tum jitna khaogi utna hi khilaunga. OK.

P: Still hesitating.

R: Ab kyaaa.. khao. he tore a pulka and kept a piece in her mouth.

Priya ate from his hands when tears were pooling up. She was feeling choked with his care and love.

R: Why are you crying now? Come on eat.

She just gave a smile and ate slowly and Ram fed her patiently. Once she finished Ram gave her water and he waited until she finsihed.

R: I forgot to tell you but I have got TT for you. I will give it later. Now you sleep. Neha will be with you soon.

Priya lied down by herself and he covered her with duvet. He waited until she closed her eyes. He adjusted AC and swtiched on bed light and left the room keeping the door ajar.

Seeing Ram coming, Neha rushed and asked did she eat? What's she doing now?

R: She ate. Dunno whether I have force fed her. But she ate with out objecting.

Neha opened the door and saw that Priya was sleeping, she was relaxed now.

Ne: Chalo RK, we will have our dinner.

Ram and Vikram sat side by side while Neha served them, she too joined them a little bit later. Vikram was more than happy that Ram wasn't yelling at him.

R: Ha ha khush hoja abhi main tired hoon, I don't have mood to yell at you.

Neha laughed at this. You know, you two fight as if you are husband and wife. She giggled at her own words.

R: Thank God, yeh ladka nahi hain, warna... Ufff.

V: Neha main tumhara honewala pati hoon, remember that.

Ne: Nahi honge toh bhi mujhe koi problem nahi hain. Am happy being single.

V: Kya yaar, Ram see how she is talking.

R: Suits you. Bhugtoh.

They finished their dinner in a lighter mood. Neha cleared everything from dining table and she came into hall after 10minutes.

R: Neha, Priya ko injections dena hain.

Ne: Yeah, shall I help you?

R: Fridge mein ek injection hain, can you bring that?

He checked the other medicines in the cover. He washed his hands and came. He rubbed the vial Neha got from refrigerator and once it warm enough, he loaded that in a syringe. He broke am ampoule and loaded another injection.

R: Chale.

Neha and Ram went in while Vikram sat in hall. They went to Priya. Neha tried to wake her up. Ram said its not needed as he had told her already and let her sleep.

He went to her side and called out 'Priya, TT dena hain, thoda ek side ko turn karogi.' Priya didn't stir. So Ram asked her to turn Priya to her right. He wiped the inj. site with spirit swab and gently poked the needle. Priya didnt move to the poke but when he was injecting the medicine she stirred a bit as she felt burning pain. But as it was a 0.5ml injection the job was done in seconds. Priya went into deep slumber again.

Ne: I think you have to give one more, shall I turn her to other side?

R: No, its pain killer and its 3ml so I will give in gluteal region.

Ne: Kaun sa region???

R: Glu... I mean waist pe.

Ne: Haan waise bolo na, bum pe doge. But how will you give there? (keeping her hands over her waist)

R: Tum dedo, mujhe koi problem nahin hain.

Ne: How mean, you are the expert not me. Okk.

R: Then, come help me. If you have any problem then I will turn this side, you can adjust her dress.

Neha once she was done she called him. Ram turned towards Priya and adjusted her as per the need and swiped the area with spirit and gently gave the injection. She didn't even stir in her sleep. Neha smiled seeing her.

Ne: So you are a good doctor RK.

R: What? Why now?

Ne: Haan, you gave injection with out pain so I have certified you as a good doctor.

R: Laughed at her bachpana and asked her to safely discard the syringes and came out.
Vikram chale.

V: Haan yaar, chal.

R: Neha, please take care of her, don't leave her alone.

Ne: Haan mujhe pata hai. You don't worry.

Vikram glared at her but he had to seal his lips as he knows about Neha.

R: Smiled, haan I know that, still take care of her. Okk. Dont eat her brain.

Ne: FATTY...

Ram shaked his head as impossible.

Vikram couldn't suppress his laughter.

Ne: Now you don't laugh okk. I know you are enjoying and might be feeling happy that some one is there who can give back.

R: Chalo we will go, I have cases now.

Ne: Ab? Its going to be 10.30. Now you will...

V: Yeah, he postponed the elective cases to night. He will not have sleep tonigh. He has two cases.

Ne: You could have gone in the evening na RK. Why...

R: He cut her off in the middle. I cant go leaving Priya in pain. Saying that he moved out of the house. He stood in the corridor waiting for Vikram. He was getting tears even now.

Vikram hugged Neha, gave a peck and told her goodnight. She hugged him back tightly and said all thanks to RK, he saved her in time.

V: Patted her back and broke the hug. I have to go, Ram will be late again.

Neha came to close the door. Ram wiped his tears and wore a smile to bid bye to her. His act didnt go unnoticed.

Ne: Dont worry, she will be fine. Goodnight.

They went towards lift and Neha closed the doors and locked them securely. She checked all the lights, windows and went into Priya's room. She had some pending work. She sat at the study table and started working under table lamp.

Ram and Vikram got out of the building and they bid bye and drove away in their cars. RK reached hospital in time and apologised the family for postponing and went into OR. He was now totally focussed in the surgery.

Neha finished her work after an hour and got up to sleep. She lied down on one side if bed after checking with Priya.

Priya stirred in her sleep and tried to move her hand. "Ouch.."
Neha startled hearing her yelp and asked Priya worriedly.. Kya hua Priya? Is it hurting?

P: Nodded as No, I tried to stretch my left arm, but its heavy and painful.

Ne: Ohh okay, thats coz RK gave you injection there.

P: Haan, he told me. I slept I think, I didnt even know.

Ne: Yeah you were in deep sleep ans upar se he is very good doctor. He gave two injections so swiftly. You didnt even wince.

P: Two?? Why? He told TT as I didn't take booster, I said ok.

Ne: Another one is pain killer he told.

P: Ohh okay, yeah it was cool, I didnt have any pain in my right arm shaking her right arm.

Ne: Waha kyun pain hoga? Ussne toh doosra injection bum pe diya.

P: WHAT? She sprung into sitting posture. The look on her face was clearly telling that she was shocked to the core.

Ne: Haan, bum. He told haath mein nahi de saktha so I said okay and I helped him.

P: Oh really, thats very sweet of you. Who the hell are you two to expose my body with out my consent.

Neha too got up. Oyee hello madam go and ask your boy friend. Why you are yelling at me?

P: Neha, samajhna yaar. Aise kaise he saw there and.. she was embarrassed.

Ne: Kuch nahi hua, aagey jaake wahi sab kuch karne wala hai tumhare saath. So, ab se aadat daallo. Saying that she turned other slide and slept.

Priya howled at her words but she couldnt suppress her grin. She too lied down to catch her sleep.

TT: Inj. Tetanous toxoid

Edited by armanz - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#640

Stupendo fantabulous

will come with my detail comment

😉

Another wonderful update .. I was so mesmerized the way story flowing with one end to other end .

so beautiful narrating with all the characters very well done played out in their role. 👏

Ram was so saddened seeing priya like this and he himself questioning him what happend to him why he is thinking about her and why he felt that if anything happens to her his life may go away .

is this love and he got it as this is called love 👏

Agar issi ko shayad pyaar kehte hai toh Priya, haan main tumse pyaar karta hoon..apne se jyaada tumhe chahta hoon. Tumhare aasoon mere aankhon se nikal rahe hain.. Tumhare khushi mere chehre pe hassi lati hain, tumhe dekhke nazane kyun mera dil pagla jaata hain.. jab tum paas hoti ho tab mere dhadkanein tez ho jaate hai... agar iss sab ko pyaar kehte hain toh haan main tumse pyaar karta hoon Priya. Kyun hua, kab hua, kaise hua main nahin jaanta, lekin ye dil ka doctor tumhare pyaar mein pagal sa hogaya hain Priya..ek baar ek baar mujhe dekho Priya..tumhari ek nazar ke liye..ek hassi ke liye kitni betaabi se intezaar kar raha hoon tumhe maloom hoga Priya.

Just brilliant confession .. Oh my how easily and gracefully he confessed her

no words re just spell bound confession

Tumahri ithni himmat ki phir se aagaya 😆 bechari fake radhe shayam again fussed 😆 lovely scene ..

the transofrmation from sad to jovial was clearly written

Aww my queen still had that fear and she is mumbling Rams name . and she elated to see him there and she blushed and emabarased as realising her state

immediately that harsh incidnet took over the charge again and she cried remembering the incident ..

Oh my Ram just waved off Neha from there

bechari she wants to be with her na .. poor girl 😆

Wow loved Neha's outburst

poor vikram was struced between two most imp persons in life

Awww Ram just pulled her in his embrace and slowly telling no requesting i will break the hug you should not cry

hayeee kya pyaar hai angel mai ... too good

and she found the love in his eyes

"tum mujhe kaise chot pahuncha sakte ho Ram" 👏 👏

I loved this line ..heart touching ..simply superb

and you know what the great mother teresa word . bcz everyone usaully teases and they will use yaar so no worries

wow wow what a confession and the thought of rejection from her is just skipped his heart beats and he shatterd on the bed and priya immediately held him closer

Both are unknowingly without telling "I love you " they confessed their love

in last update Ram said hugging her "Im there with you everytime "

and now "priya also said the same "

simply superb confession yaar

im witnessing infront of my eyes .. lovely

awww he hugged her on stomach .. aww that so beautiful ...

and the way RAM SAid ladkonko cute nahi kehatee ..and she said Golu pan

awww such a beautiful way you presented their cute teasing

and loved priya that she knws neha must be crying awww super cute

Lol i so expected Neha's behaviour

hearing Priyas one word she just rushed in her arms

OMG

Lol when these two girls hugged how Ra & vik are looking .. friends man they will be like that

and Lol Fattyyy .. Good one

I so loughed at this one .. how easily she calls him off .. and the way he said OYEE

and vik hit his head

wonderful yaar

bhagwannn again Ram is asking to feed her

i so can expect Viks reaction ..he might be scared what This neha will repulse but thank god hse didnt say anything

Ram smiled broadly and said 'kamaal hai yaar, tumne mujhe fatty kaha aur tum hi mujhe maaf karne ki KOSHISH karogi. Vikram tussi great ho.

and Im ROFLEd at this 😆🤣

V: smiled at his luck, chakke mein aata ki tarah piss raha hoon yaar. Mujhe baksh do thodi der.

LoL this one also .. Good na

aatha hu ,tere hath se kahuanga 😆😆😆

Why you, mere haath se khilaunga toh khana nahin jayega kya?🤣🤣

God how he is teasing her

and she is like aap jyada khilayenge 🤣🤣

You know, you two fight as if you are husband and wife. 😆

what a description and tat is so apt

and vikram is sulking telling im your future huby

how sweet 😆

and God how Ram and neha teasing each other while giving injection to priya

waise bolo na bump pe 😆😆😆 lol

i so loved neha re

haha yeah if anyone gives injection with out pain imeediately i will als call them good doctor and how ram laughed at her remark

the way Ram teling her take care

and neha etorted telling .. muze patha hai

again vikram was silent 😆😆😆

awww vikneha bonding also so cute . he hugged and pecked her telling to be strong

goood

ram went to attend cases poor Ram is so sad 😭

Ne: Waha kyun pain hoga? Ussne toh doosra injection bum pe diya.🤣

P: WHAT? She sprung into sitting posture. The look on her face was clearly telling that she was shocked to the core.

Ne: Haan, bum. He told haath mein nahi de saktha so I said okay and I helped him.

P: Oh really, thats very sweet of you. Who the hell are you two to expose my body with out my consent.

Rofls🤣 .. who the hell are you Two to ecpose my body without my consent ..oh god 😆
Neha too got up. Oyee hello madam go and ask your boy friend. Why you are yelling at me?

Lol go and ask your boy friend .. wokya puchegi 😆

P: Neha, samajhna yaar. Aise kaise he saw there and.. she was embarrassed.
Lol .. priya was too embarssed to know it .. 😆
Ne: Kuch nahi hua, aagey jaake wahi sab kuch karne wala hai tumhare saath. So, ab se aadat daallo. Saying that she turned other slide and slept.

and see nehas answer was staright to the point 😆bechari priya

aage jake wahi sab kuch karne wala hai tumhari saath 🤣🤣

oh god neha bhi na .. impossible

Priya howled at her words but she couldnt suppress her grin. She too lied down to catch her sleep.

I was literally laughing at this para ... lol ..

Frankly my stomach is paining like anything

tooo good you know

brilliantly penned down

Thank you thank you so very much

Love you

waiting for next part soon

Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago