Ashlok ff - My love is you- Part 11 - Pg 39 18/12 PM LATER - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Hi friends... sorry for making you wait for a long time. Here is the next part. Its more like a filler. Will try to make the next update soon... This update is especially for hp-2006 who was asking me to update soon...


PART 3

"Namaste Asthaji. Hope you know who I am. I am Rahul with whom your marriage was planned. You will be thinking what I am doing here without preparing for our marriage. But, I am here because I know it is not right to say too late. But, its better a late than never. Actually, I am in love with some other girl. I tried to convey this to you but, I didn't find any means to contact you."

Astha was taking in all the words he is speaking in her mind. What does he tries to convey? That he is interested in someone else and he wants to marry her? But, why didn't he tell that before? Ya. He notified that too. That he couldn't contact me. It was me who tried to avoid him"

Rahul : "I made many efforts to convince my parents to stop this marriage. But, they were so adamant to get me married to you. Finally, not able to bear anything, I just walked out of my home. I thought of going somewhere. But, not by spoiling your name. I know what the society will speak about a girl if the groom doesn't show up during the wedding. So, I am here to take the entire fault on my head so that your life will not be affected. Now, I think I have cleared everything between us. Thank you for patiently listening to me. Sorry, Good bye and all the best for your future Asthaji..."

Saying this, he walked towards Kalindi and Avdhoot who by now, had broken down crying. He folded his hands in front of them and said in a low voice, "I know what I have done has hurted you a lot. But, instead of binding your daughter in this unwilling marriage, it is best to make way for someone better. Isn't it? That's why I have taken this decision. Sorry for breaking this marriage. Bit, I am not suitable for your daughter"

Rahul then touched their feet for blessings. But, they were in no mood to bless him as they were thinking about their daughter's future which is in stack now. Knowing some time is needed for them to realise what is going on, he took small steps towards the door with his bag. Suddenly, he stopped sensing a voice behind him. "Rukhiye Rahulji"

He turned around to see the owner of the voice. It was Astha. Her face was so determined and it was not looking like a bride who's wedding has stopped. She walked hastily and stood before him and spoke, "How could you say that what you have done is correct? Do you know what will happen after you went?" Rahul was about to speak, but stopped when Astha signalled with her hands.

"I know it's not your fault in falling in love with someone. But, your fault is that you didn't take a measure when the right time came. Now, you can't stop this wedding. Yeh shaadi hogi"

All in the mandap were shocked to hear Astha's decision. But, they knew why she took such a choice and hence, they silently agreed. Within some hours, the couple were married and are bound for lifetime.



I am sorry. coz, I donno to write lambi lambi baatein. I am a girl of few words. So, I couldn't make the conversation long..😕 Comments and critices welcome...

Edited by .logs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Ohhh Nooo Yaar...

What did she dooo...??????
😲
Yeh Shaadi Hogi..??!!!

I thought that the wedding is going to be cancelled...wowww!! and She will be able to marry Shlok if he comes back..But nooo..This wedding will happen..

Ohh God ..What Next...😲

Plzzz continue...

By the way thank you soo much for dedicating this update to me
😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Oh NO!
Nahi*rhetorically*
Has Aastha lost it?
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

beautiful update I want to know how the story will progress now so waiting for next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nice update...
still hoping 4 smthing else...
i think as u hv not mentioned girl-boy name...
u said couple so it means astha made rahul marry with d girl of his choice & not astha-rahul marriage...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
lovely part,written beautifully 😊
.logs thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Ohhh Nooo Yaar...

What did she dooo...??????
😲
Yeh Shaadi Hogi..??!!!

I thought that the wedding is going to be cancelled...wowww!! and She will be able to marry Shlok if he comes back..But nooo..This wedding will happen..

Ohh God ..What Next...😲

Plzzz continue...

By the way thank you soo much for dedicating this update to me
😃😃


thnks yaar... what next????🤔 lets wait and see...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: NatashaRia

Oh NO!

Nahi*rhetorically*
Has Aastha lost it?
Update soon...


situation yaar...🤢 thnks for commenting...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: mayabharathi

beautiful update I want to know how the story will progress now so waiting for next update


thnks for commenting...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice update...
still hoping 4 smthing else...
i think as u hv not mentioned girl-boy name...
u said couple so it means astha made rahul marry with d girl of his choice & not astha-rahul marriage...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...


thnks for commenting dr... u made me think a little...😆

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