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Posted: 11 years ago
great update...your story is becoming interesting with each update...
hope so the person who's no. they got is not kalpi...
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
So much mystery in one update? I'm sure it's Pakhi who got admitted in the name of Kalpana. Nobody else can be so cheap. Its all her doing. Is the number Sammy got Kalpi's? You have kept us on hook. Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164

amazing update vishu
bt wat dis ye b koi place thi story stop karne ki?😲
atleast kalpi got to knw abt dr. innocence. Hope sn she wl get all details.
Rammy too get to knw all secret vry sn. Superb.


Thanks Shona.. Yahi toh right place hai stop krne ki.. The suspense element in the story... Time to reveal some past but secrets.. Well wait for the update.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

great update...your story is becoming interesting with each update...

hope so the person who's no. they got is not kalpi...
continue soon..


Thank u Appy.. Well Kalpi is smarter than all but Is is she smart enough to not get caught so early? Wait for the next update.. Will try to continue soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

So much mystery in one update? I'm sure it's Pakhi who got admitted in the name of Kalpana. Nobody else can be so cheap. Its all her doing. Is the number Sammy got Kalpi's? You have kept us on hook. Eagerly waiting for the next update.


Will update soon.. Pakhi is a Kapoor.. So anything is possible but than Prem is a kapoor as wel.. Will update soon to tell u whose number it is.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Interesting updates👏


Thank u..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys.. Sorry for taking so long in updating the story but RagNa accident and than atmosphere in this forum was not letting me complete the story.. Nehow I completed it yesterday but my computer crashed and i lost everything.. have written it again but this time a bit shorter as I really do not have power to continue right now.. i may try to give double update tonight or quick update tomorrow but sorry for now. '

So here is the part 15.. Hope u all enjoy it. max of our frnz have left the forum so tell me if u guys are going to read it or not.. if u all r planning to quit than Iw ill discontinue my ffs.

Raghav is shocked to read message that arrived on Sammy's cell.. He keeps his hand on Sammy's shoulder and explains, "No.. Pakhi can't do any such thing.. she is an innocent girl.. I know I can never love her and what I did with her was wrong but she never complained. She has accepted my love for kalpi than why will she do anything for destroying me.. apart from me her life is also affected by it.. She loves Khushi more than her life.. N this is affecting Khushi's future... Someone is trying to trap her..".

Sammy replies "Are u trying to explain me or urself.. I too know that Pakhi can't do any such thing but why are u looking so unsure.. What is bothering u. "

Raghav : "Nothing, I am just wondering who can use Pakhi.. I just hope it's not Prem as he can have only access to her documents... Neway let's go and ask Pakhi about it.. May be remembers giving her documents to anyone."

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Pakhi is on call with Prem.. She is thanking him for letting her have her share at home and allowing them to stay at his place.. Prem replies "Anything for u little sister..".. In mind he recalls Kalpi telling him to let Rags stay at his place as she doesn't want Khushi to suffer all this..

Raghav enters the home yelling Pakhi's name.. Pakhi is scared to hear him yelling like this.. She rushes towards him and asks what happened.. Raghav shouts, "Do u remember giving ur documents to anyone.. U know the person who is responsible for that fraud deal was using sim on ur name.. Do u have any idea who it can be". Pakhi is shocked to hear it.. Something strikes her mind and she replies "Raghav that day I went to khushi's school when I lost my purse.. I had my driving license in it.. May be someone got it in the school. " Raghav's anger flares on her.. He screams "Stupid lady.. how could u be so ignorant about ur documents.. Why u dint tell me on time.. ". Pakhi tries to cool his anger and says.. "She has already reported about it and requested new license and she is very sorry but he never had time for her so she thought not to bother him." Raghav feels guilty on hearing it as it's true that despite being legally wedded he never accepted her as wife and never payed attention to her talks than why is he expecting her to come and inform him about losing her purse. He leaves the place without uttering a single word.


Prem who was still on call hearing everything.. He smirks and remembers the day when Pakhi went to Khushi's school and followed her.. On meeting her he pretended as if it's accidental and on getting opportunity he just stole her purse..


Prem(to himself) : This Kalpi is really a master planner.. She knew that Raghav may reach to our number to told me to use Pakhi's documents as Rags will never doubt his pretty wife. BTW Prem... u r also smart.. how easily u convinced Pakhi that she left purse in school when it was in coat pocket.. even u took her to the police station so that she doesn't inform Raghav about it..


He laughs on his plan but than wonders why Pakhi dint inform Raghav about his presence in the school when she lost the purse.. He again convinces himself saying "Pakhi might have forgot on seeing Raghav's anger."


He takes out his phone to inform Kalpi about the same but than remembers how she told him to take out information from city hospital.. He puts the phone back in his pocket and takes out his car keys to reach hospital.

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With the help of Kirti's friend who is a nurse,Prem reaches the place where documents for old patient were kept.. He requests her to take out the document for Kalpana Jadhav and gives her the date and other details written on it.. To their surprise the documents were lost.. Nurse wonders how is this possible but Prem realizes that it's some big plan in which Kalpi was trapped and all the evidences are being destroyed.. he requests nurse to find some other way to find it out but nurse tells it's not possible to find 5 year old record like it. He requests to check the soft copy but was informed that they have only 3 years old data in computer as due to some serious virus attack they lost all. Prem calls Kalpi in disappointment and informs her about the situation.. Kalpi pauses for a second but tells him to check the appointment register as it may have some phone number or something.. Prem agrees and tells the nurse to find out the appointment registers.. Nurse takes him to one store room which had lots of stationary in it.. Nurse shows it to him and tells him whether he thinks that whether they will be able to find needle in this hay.. he encourages her that they will and we should at least try.. Nurse agrees and they start searching the particular register. After 2 n half hour Pem was able to find it. He goes through it but his bad luck, there was only Kalpi's name and number.. He kneels down in disappointment.. and thanks nurse for her help.. He gives some money to nurse but she denies saying "I would have taken it if u have found some clue regarding it." He was about to leave the hospital when his eyes fall on cctv camera placed in front of the reception.. he turns back and call nurse back asking "Till when this camera is placed here..". Nurse replies, "7 years". A smile appears on his face, "I wan to see footage of 5 years back.."


Nurse : But how will u recognize the person who came in place of Kalpana..


Prem : We have the date and time of appointment.. We will recognize her with it's help.. Can u just tell me where I will get this footage..


Nurse(pointing towards a room) : From there... But I dnt think they will give u the footage.


Prem : Leave it on me.. I will manage..


Prem leaves from there and calls Kalpi to come to the hospital so that they can see the footage together.. Kalpi agrees. Prem goes to the monitoring room and requests them to let him have the footage of the particular date.. The staff denies saying they do not have permission of doing so.. Prem handover them some money and tells him that no one will be able to know.. Man agrees and takes out the cd which had the info.. He inserts it into the computer and gives data in pen drive. Prem takes it and leaves from there... he sits in car and inserts pen drive in his laptop.. kalpi too arrives by now.. they looks at the cd and fast forwards it to the time when appointment was taken.. They look at two girls approaching reception.. One was wearing burkha while other's face was turned towards camera so they are not able to recognize them.. Prem looks at th burkha girl filling the form.. He sees ring at her finger and feels he has seen it somewhere.. Than the other girls turn all of a sudden and Prem is shocked to see her... Kalpi looks at his expressions.. "Do u know this girl". Prem replies in negative but his face is not supporting his words.. Kalpi pauses the video n claims that this are the only girls who planned everything against them as they look suspicious and apart from them no other lady come for check up in next half hour. Prem nods in agreement bu his eyes still staring at the girl in laptop..


P.S. : Sorry for all the mistakes.
Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Vishhh.. day by day u r making this ff so intrestng gal..😉
I'm becumng vryy curious to know abt d next update n I dunno y bt it feels lyk even pakhi has done sumthng.🤔. n seriouslyyy I was abt to pm u to know wen r u gonna update then instlantyyy I got ur pm.. n abt d next update tak ur tym n update it..😉
And yeahhh I was d first one to comment..😛🤣
Edited by vasishna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update:)) A mystery again.. 😲😲😲... Ring, Burkha girl.. Prem's expression..!!!😲 Wah Awesome.. I don't know why but my gut feeling telling me that Its PIG's plans...😆😆.. Any ways continue soon dear😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh, why you stopped at the moment?I am dying to know who is behind all this. And I am not leaving this forum now. I am here to read the updates of many FFs.
Please update soon.

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