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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hii guyz.. this iz KanwaL

well i hav taken soo much time to post it.. but its tooo long that it takes a lot of time to write it.. but now i decided ke mai yeh story thori thori karke post karongi.. u know wht i mean!! today i m posting a little..later i,ll post ke uske agar kia hua then..it goes like this.. OK

I hope u guyz will like it..As its my ownn and mainay kahin se churaii nahin hai,....Its completely my own..haan sum of the scenes at from serials!!😉

So there iz starts!!

Firstly the main story..in small words.....

A girl who iz having a tumor wished to live with his love for the last days on her life..and his love doesnt love her and its all abt how they fell in love with eachother and how they end up their relation being married!!

SO here it goes

INTRODUCTION!!

Khushi..a girl of 18 years old studying in college..highly ambitious,full of life and dreams..apne naam ki tarhan Khushi...her waqt khush rehti thi apni family ke sath..apni choti behan se bohot piyar karti thi ghar ki jaan thi!!sab kuch tha uske pass.. per her larki ki tarhan voh bhi kisi ko bohot chahti thi.. per yahan kuch ajeeb hai..voh bachpan se hi apne cozin ko like karti thi..ya yun kaha jae ke jab akal bhi na thi tab se hi kisi ke khayalon mai rehti thi..jo ke uska cousin tha *.. Din raat subhan shaam her waqt uske bare mai soochti rehti thi uske khayalon mai khoi rehti thi..uski her friend ke kam se kam 2 bfs to hote hi the.. voh bhi soochti thi ke voh akhir kiske intezar mai hai.. kuch waqt ke liyey bhatak jati thi per apne khayalon mai hamesha khoey rehna chahti thi..aisa konsa larka na tha jo uske peeche nahin tha per usne kabhi nazar uthake peeche dekhne ki koshish na ki..Uska pyaar tha hi kuch ajeeb..voh janti thi ke Shehry or voh kabhi ek nahin hosakte .. or na voh janne ki koshish karti thi ke * kia soochta hai uske bare mai.. usse malum tha ke usse apni zindagi kisi or k sath guzarni hai per phir bhi she doesnt stop herself dreaming for the one she love!!..bass voh apni khuabon ki dunya mai rehna chahti thi or bohot khush thi..

ab yeh to kahani thi heroine ki.. ab baat karte hain abt the HERo..

Punjabi munda..jitna bara flirt utna hi handsome..her larki ka idol..apne parents ka ek louta..college ki Jaan..aisi koi larki na thi college ki jo ke uski gf na rahi ho..na koi tension na koi pareshani bass apni life mai MASSTT ..usse to shayad malum tak nahin tha ke koi pagal larki hai jo uske khayalon mai din raat khoi hui rehti hai per shayad malum hota tab bhi he doesnt care..jiske peeche ek se ek khobsurat larki ho usse kia kadar apni sharmeeli cozin ki..

Bohot kam mulaqaat hoti thi dono ki.. kafi dooooor doooooooor rehte the..Khushi live in ummm.... Delhi and * live in mumbai..( OR khushi live in Karachi and * live in Lahore)..

Soo now lets Start the STORY!!

Khushi in delhi..baysabri se apni ek cozin ki shaadi ka intezar karahi thi jiske liyey unsab ko Mumbai jana tha..despirately she was waiting for the marriage and just counting the dayz!!... she was very happy or jaise jaise din guzarrahe the uski khushi bharti jarahi thi..Bass samgho Mumbai jane mai sirf 2 din hi bachay thay.. Khushi apne college se Pedal(by walk) ghar arahi thi..the college was near to her home..* ke hi khayalon mai khoi hui ke jab jaenge to mai yeh kahongi usse voh kahongi..usually khayali pillaow banarahi thi.. mousam kafi acha thaa..chalte chalte achanak usse bohot chakkar ane lage . ghar ke kafi kareeb pohonch gaye thi..ke raaste mai chakkar ki vaja se behoosh hogaye..beech sadak pe.....by chance uska koi parosi pass se guzar raha tha to usne dekha or khushi ko ghar pohoncha ne mai madad ki... sab kafi pareshan hogaye ghar mai..per soochne lage shayad stress ki vajah se chakkar agaya.. Khushi ne bhi yeh baat bohot lightly leli..or ignore kardi..

That Night she was sleeping .. and watching herself and * being married in her dream..suddenly she woke up..she feels a very bad ache on her head.. uske jaldi se paani piya or phir lait gae,..per achanak dard bohot barhne laga ahista ahista dard bardasht ke bahar hogaya .. uski halat dekh uski behan ne mom dad ko bulaya.. sab bohot pareshan hogaye...dard bohot tez tha .. bardasht nahin horaha tha.. per kuch der baad dard halka hona shuru hogaya... Sab bohot pareshan hogaye.. or tab dad ne faisla ke subhan hi doctor ko dikhana parega.,.

They came to doctor's clinic and told him abt the problem and the doctor takes sum tests..

her dad buying sum medicines.. and she was standing with the FISH TANK ;) watching fishes.. suddenly the pain starts again.. and this time again they r out of control.. her dad was buzy buying medicines.. a nurse saw her and then dad also finds that she iz again havin pains.. they took her to the clinic quickly.. and their doctor gave her an injection and she faints..

Her dad gets too much tensed and asked the doctor whether her girl iz fine or iz their any problem.. the doctor sadly says that it seems like she iz having sum big problem.. but its not confirm untill we get those test reports..Dad gets too much tensed but he doesnt told anyone..

In the Home..

Khushi saw his father very tensed and she tells him "dunt be nervous dad i,ll be Ok..mainay kisi ka kuch bigara nahin hai ke mere sath kuch aisa vaisa hoga..so dunt worry everything iz gonna be fine" but dad was still tensed but being very tensed he still gave khushi a smile.. and says "kisi ke bigarnay ya na bigarne se kuch nahin hota beta..Apni apni kismat ka khel hota hai sab.." but khushi sayz "Dad.....cum on think positive..mughe kuch nahin hoga.. itni jaldi apka peecha nahin chorongi" and the conversion ends up with smiles on boths face!

Next day.. Khushi woke up very happily..bcoz the next day they hav to leave for mumbai..voh apni ghari dekhti hai to usse malum parhta hai ke aj uske college ki chutti hogaye hai kyunke alarm nahin baja.. voh gusse se bahar jati hai or apni mom se poochti hai..."Mom....aj mera alarm kyun nahin baja..raat ko lagake to soi thi..??"..Mom said "i dunno..maybe dad ne band kardia ho".... she asked where iz dad then mom replied that he already left to collect ur reports!!...

She was waiting for her dad..then after waiting soo long she sitted on Net..!! She opened her id and their she stucked..she start watching *'s Id.. and again apne khayalon mai kho jati hai!! after sum time dad came.. and she despirately go to him and asked him whts in the reports..and Dad with tears in his eyes gave the reports to khushi's mom.. Everyone gets tensed.. then mom doesnt understand whts in the reports.. Khushi gets the reports in her hand and then when she read it.. she gets shocked!!...and dad told everyone that She MAYBE having a terminal tumor ..

Mom starts crying and khushi was still shocked.. she calls the doctor and asked him whether the reports are correct or not.. but the doctor told her that thats true but... its still not confirmed.. we hav to take another test to confirm it..she asked when did she hav to come for that? and the doctor said if possible then At the evening..

She goes outside where everyone was crying..she also in a crying manner told everyone that doctor said its not confirmed...so she hav to give another test!!.. and she goes to her roomm...

She was thinking and thinking that What would happened if this will become true??.. while thinking another time the head ache came into her head.. but she doesnt go outside her room.. the pain was again a very bad one.. but usually it goes after sumtime... She goes outside and told everyone that she iz going for the test!! and she doesnt want anyone to join her...! everyone agrees!

She goes to the hospital..and...........!!....

To be COntinue....!!

I hope u guyz like it.. and dunt forget to COMMENT

thank U

i,ll post the next part SOOON!!

CHao!!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi i read some of your ff havent finished readin it yet just wanted to say so far it sounds good and taking time to read the hindi (i am not so good at that)

plse continue soon

Edited by sweet @s candy - 18 years ago

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