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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is how I imagined Myrah to be.I want Myrah to be an intelligent girl with maturity and sensibility to understand Rudra.
this Os is under the assumption that Myrah is for Rudra.and My Myrah is nothing like the picture.

Major Rudra Pratap Ranawat,coveted hero,pride of BSB and lion heart.These praises just flew overhis head.he did not even think any of these praises are worth thinking.It is just his job,his life,his light.yes light.Yes Life can be so cruel at times.It can take such unexpected turns.his light,His paro ,His guiding light was blown away,Unexpectedly.

Rudra's palms crunched into a fist,ready to punch the first person coming his way.Wisely all his subordinates stayed out of his way,knowing his volatile nature.the only person brave enough to go in front of him is his kakusa.Kakusa always thanks his stars,for being Rudra's kaka, as Rudra just yells at him and not punch him like he does to some of his juniors.kaka always does damage control after one of Rudra's eruption.He pacifies the subordinates,thus getting Rudra out of trouble.

Rudra,just Rudra alone and lonely for the past 5 years,has accepted this loneliness as his way of life.his dour face only breaks into a smile when he sees his son,who looks more and more like his mother.He looked lovingly at his son and to the person next to him,his jeeja.Mythili jeeja is his son's unofficial mother and Samrat his unofficial father.His son calls Mythili Jeeja maasa dn Samrat and himself baapusa.Rudra never thought to correct his son.there was no need for that.Rudra is just thankful that his family stepped in at the time of grief and despair and took over the situation.He thanks them everyday in his mind though he maintained his gruff exterieo which is a perfect cover for his sadness and anger.

"Major Rudra pratap Ranawat can be trusted with any job.he will see to it that the mission is completed with 100% dedication" thought Colonel V.K singh.V.K Singh also knew how even after 5 years,Rudra's heart is still bleeding and why Rudra accepts mission after mission.It is good for him"thought Singh."Our border needs him now more than ever.There is an increase in activity which needs to be checked".

Rudra accepted the mission ,now was standing at the watch tower,with a binoculars in his hands,alert to any small sound or activityin the hot barren desert.Even the animals seem to have disappeared.maybe because of the heat or maybe because of him,Rudra mused.Either way less distraction.
Before long the silence of the desert was broken by low rumbling of a vehicle.vehicle. Rudra looked around trying to figure out from which direction the vehicle is approaching.From the horizon came a four wheeler,approaching his watch tower..It reminded Rudra of himself coming to Birpur after 20 years.The jeep turned left and stopped 200 yards away from the tower.The engine was cut.

Rudra was watching the vehicle keenly.he could make out a silhouette of a girl.The girl had binoculars in her hands.She was checking the area. Rudra felt blood roar in his ears.
Who is she?
Is she on the enemy side?
is she here to get the loot?
Rudra's mind asked her a thousand questions.

He could see her hair flying in the wind and also her dupatta flying in the gentle hot breeze of the desert.

The investigator in Rudra commanded him to find who the girl was.He climbed down the station and walked towards the girl.She is going to get from him.it is sad,she happened to be a girl.If it was a man,Rudra would have punched him just for being there in the desert.

Rudra walked stealthily and quietly.All his army training coming into play.He quietly reached the girl.Took a minute to assess her.she wa wearing a yellow top and a printed bottom and a light yellow color dupatta.
In her jeep,she had a laptop,bottles of water,wafers and a cellphone.No gun,observed Rudra,Maybe she has it on her or under the seat.One cannot be sure.
Scare tactics will work best,decided Rudra.He yelled at her
Who are you?What are you doing here?
Startled,the girl dropped her binoculars and turned to face the angry voice.

As she turned,Rudra's face lost all its color.He turned pale.
He tried to make head or tail of the person in front of hi.
"PARO' he said
and for the first time in his 33 years major Rudra Pratap ranawat Fainted.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was awesome! Loved it.
Please please continue. i wanna see what myrah says
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kidrauhlforever

This was awesome! Loved it.

Please please continue. i wanna see what myrah says

Thank you.
I am working on Myrah and Rudra's first conversation.will post soon.Thank you for your kind words.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DN2012

Thank you.
I am working on Myrah and Rudra's first conversation.will post soon.Thank you for your kind words.


I'm excited 😊 PM me when u update please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woah.. the ending thu! *claps*
I love that their son resembles paro and makes rudra smile.. thats just so sweet.

Thank you for sharing this! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rupao21

woah.. the ending thu! *claps*

I love that their son resembles paro and makes rudra smile.. thats just so sweet.

Thank you for sharing this! :)

Thank you very much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really liked it.
Wondering how Myrah will react.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarita_barun

Really liked it.
Wondering how Myrah will react.

Thank you very much.I am working on Myrah's reaction.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sai1985

Its beautiful loved it

Thank you
Thank you
Edited by DN2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome! Continue soon...you brought a smile on my face in this sad situation!

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