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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story till now 👏👏👏👏👏
i read 1-5 part n thy are superb😉
surprise element is maan entry with the fct tht he love geet😉
update soon whnever u r free😃
im waiting😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update

waiting for the next
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear...due to civil exams that will be on 3rd aug , I was busy from 17th to 26th july...hope u will understand...Now I am free again as my preparations finished...I have just finished reading ur pending updates & commented...coming to the updates , it was awesome..loved the unique concept...😃...by the way if u are planning to update within 1st week of aug, I want u to know that I am planning to format my laptop , so may be for 1-2 days my laptop will be not with me...sorry..
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi

mr handa

ab kya kahu typical father jaisa reaction
and its natural

but in one week eng and next month shadi
but mr handa mahi want to ask where is dulha



he have beautiful family who don't over react on
his anger he lost his relation because of love marriage
so he is against love marriage
but you cant do it na you just
rejecting maan because he
say he love geet that not fair




aur ye Maan sing khurana
aise kaise ek father ko jake bolta hai
hi hello my name is msk and i love your daughter
gayi bhaise pani main , he himself put mr handa
against his own love life poor maan
what you done in your strata forward
ans hu ...






my innocent pari , geet away from all
she just respect maan as teacher
and poor soul to koso dur hai
love se ab kya hoga , i just
love this geet , so true and inocent
like my pari



till now best update pari 👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
just perfect you write all emotions very beautifully
waiting for next ,please update soon

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks to each and every reader alot..😃
and apologies for delay...
just 2 more days to go
then updates will be regular.😃
keep showering your love to the story 😳


Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

(banner credit to gunjar 🤗)


Part 6

Geet was again sleeping like a caterpillar on her bed, when her alarm went off.
she frowned n mumbled..."now this alarm also has to become dushman of my sleep"
she picked her phone up to put the alarm off and sleep again when she saw it was saturday...! The conference day and it was the 5th time poor alarm was ringing, trying hard to break the sleep of the princess. She sighed and got up as Pari would kill her if she didn't attend the conference and going late was something she hated...!


She got ready in and her cell buzzed with pari's call
she picked it

pari (very excited) : geeettt...! guess whoz coming for the conference...?

geet closed her ears due to her high voice, smiled at her excitement but was in no mood of geeting into the guessing game right now...though she had already guessed with her tone but decided to play with her...

geet (faking a yawn) : don't be over excited your BF is not the ICAI president...!

(ICAI is Institute of Charted Accountants of India and our GOD 😆)

geet mocked...it was her accumulated frustration of attending the morning conference on TAX...!

pari pouted and cribbed

pari (st) : babaji aapko rehem nahi aaya apni iss nanhi si bachhi parr jo aisi zaalim frnd di mujhe ...now even i am not excited to see my BF after 3 years of long distance relationship.

geet smiled at her cribbing

geet : don't try that...he is my babaji he won't listen to u 😛

pari : whatever 😳

geet : acchha yarr relax ...was just teasing u ...i'm very excited to meet Mr. MEET my dear pari's bf n before that my very good frnd..

pari smiled no..no actually blushed...!

pari : hmmm...

geet : chal abb blushing band karr n see u at venue in 20 mins..

pari : hmmn (n cut the call)

she was already in MEET world...geet knew it n smiled...


pari was geet's neighbour n chilhood frnd but both were in different schools
while meet was geet's schoolmate...both parimeet met in CPT classes n were instantly attracted to each other...still it took them another year to be officially committed. now they r very much together and geet is very happy for them...
before geet's thought's could go to her own marriage and all the drama that happened 3 days back...she heard her mom call her for brkfst n realized she needs to leave too...

At the conference hall...


geet reached the conference hall n looked around to search for her group...n spotted ayush,
he waved at her..n she joined them n greeted ayush, shruti n disha ignoring the girl standing there in salwar...

geet (to shruti) : yarr...where is pari i asked her to reach in 20 minz..


all looked at her baffelled while the gal in salwar looked at her with red eyes n smoke coming out of her ears...

geet couldn't hold more n her smile could be seen at her eyes if not her face...n the group instantly got her idea...

ayush : i also thought she will be here b4 time as "someone special" is back ...but she is nowhere to be seen..(he said, playing along with geet)

shruti n disha were just hiding their smiles as they knew if they open their mouth they will end up laughing like mad peoples


finally the gal in salwar lost her patience n shouted
(any guesses...? yes she's pari only)

pari : geeettt...!! you r so dead today..!

But geet was in no mood to leave pari today.

While pari was occupied with this, geet saw MEET entering the conference hall as she was facing the door while pari had her back to it...geet immediately eyed ayush for the next scene...which he understood and got ready for attack.


While meet reached near them n was about to tap pari's shoulder to gain her attention, ayush spoke up getting geet's sign..

ayush : ohh pari..!! ...is it reallly u...? i meaan u and INDIAN FORMALS...m having hard time to digest...is it because ur Mr special is coming today...?

(he spoke giving a foolish smile...n meet was also stunned at his question n waited for her reply)

But before pari could open her mouth...

geet : arre nahi...!! it is to impress the speaker today...tumhe nahi pata who is the speaker today pari told me he is so young and handsome n dynamic even better than pari's MEET...

(suddenly she paused for a sec, looked behind pari, and said little more loudly)

arrey meet when did u come..? we were talking about you only..! (said geet innocently)

At this pari turned around baffelled with the turn of events and her eyes met with meet's equally baffled eyes

Looking at their both expressions 4 of them cracked up loudly as they couldn't hold it anymore and laughed like crazy people, parimeet finally understood their prank and joined them in laughing but not before planning a sweet revenge from geet n ayush in their eye talks 😉 😳

All took their seats around a round table as conference was about to begin, finally geet spoke

geet : chal pari abb bata bhi de ki speaker kon hai...?

pari : abb kyu itna intrest aa raha tujhe...m not saying now see urself

shruti : arre geet chhod na yar...ye pari aaj zyada bhav kha rahi...waise bhi abb isse humlogo me kyu intrest aaega...iska object of intrest toh aaj koi aur hai..

geet : haan...!! u r right...see m soo hurt...this MEET took my friend away from me...

All were just enjoying their time teasing parimeet...while both poor souls were dying to get away from devils and steal a moment of privacy but pari knew geet won't let them get away.
They were lost enjoying their re-union. not listening the announcements


Suddenly the lights went dim and the hall was filled with silence, their moment broke and they looked around to find every pair of eye's on the stage, finally their attention went to stage towards the speaker...and all were enthralled by his personality...!!

(any guesses..?? Its MSK offcourse 😉)

But most shockked was geet...as soon as she saw him, she thought "spects kaha hai..?"


And all turned to see her like she is some ghost...geet got diverted n saw all looking at her with wide eyes...she realised that she thought a bit loudly n all heard her...she got embarressed to blurt like that about the speaker who was also their teacher once..!

Only she knew how she spent those torturous 2 mins of embarressment which finally came to end with the start of speech in Maan's voice.

Maan : a very goodmorning to all present here...as u all know we have assembled here for the conference on "impact of tax on society". I would like to first introduce myself to all, I am Maan Khurrana Charted Accountant practicing since 6 yrs...your speaker for the day...


THUD...!


pari fainted and was abt to fall...but her hero held her on time

Meet : pari what happened..(sprinkled water on her face)


geet rolled her eyes she knew its her nautanki and shouted

geet : pari yaar...pls...we r here to listen him not see ur drama...so get up and be serious else your result will be stopped. (she threatened)

hearing this pari instantly straightened herself...she cannot afford to take risk with results...so much of hard word...upon that result delayed means shaadi delayed...!

NO....! shouted her mind...! and she too...thankfully maan's voice was loud enough and other's didn't hear her, only her group heard...!


All shook their heads at her nautanki...next 2 hours were spent listening to the speaker...till the interaction sessions started...!

Students started to question the speaker one by one..finally the session came to end and it was lunch break.

Ayush : guys chalo...lets greet sir..we are meeting him after 3 years...and m sure you haven't forgotten that 3 years back we could pass only because of him.

All agreed...and moved to greet Maan, he was sitting with other CA's in another round table discussing on some matters, they were waiting for him to get free with his discussions or "never ending chat" in geet's language, as she was very hungry and getting impatient. As they were standing facing maan's back, he could not see them.

Geet (st) : babaji...couldn't we do that later...I mean abhi lunch break khatam ho jaega and I'm soo hungry...!

And finally after waiting for 10 mins she decided to interrupt as they were now having casual talks.

Geet (softly but loudly) : EXCUSE ME SIR...!!

At which maan turned instantly to see who called him, and their eyes met for few seconds.

Maan broke the eye-lock sensing her dis-comfort, and turned towards ayush...

Maan (smiled at them) : how are you all..?

Ayush : good noon sir...we are good...how r u..?

Maan : I'm good too. Nice to see you all here.

At that time an announcement was made "All are requested to please take their lunch soon as the next session will be starting shortly"

Maan : did u all take lunch..?

Ayush : Not yet..!

Maan : then please...you carry on...see u all latter..!

And they moved to take their lunch, while geet's mind was still stuck at the "accidental eye-lock".

All were back to the table with their respective plates...and were in mood of talking, more than eating(except geet)...now pari got best chance for revenge from geet as she remembered what geet blurted seeing maan sir..


Pari : geet...! What was that..?

Geet who was busy attacking the food got startled with her tone...

Geet : what was WHAT...?? 😕

Pari (hit her head) : that what u said seeing sir...!

Geet got was confudsed with all the that's and WHATs in their convo(just like u all 😆) and the food taking away all her attention. But soon she realized what pari is talking and looked at others for help as she knew its pari's revenge plan.

Ayush (hiding his smile) : haan geet...don't u know we always hav an option to choose contact lenses over spects...?

Geet gave angry glare to ayush and looked up pouting...😒

Shruti (came to her rescue) : oh come on yarr...we all know geet is fida on sir's spects wala look ever since we attended his first class (me thinking...savior aisa hota hai kya 😲 😆)

Now geet was fuming badly...and all were trying to control their laughter...!

Finally shruti and ayush seeing situation going out of control decided to apologise..

Shruti : You know I didn't meant in that way...(ayush nodded)

Obviously they cannot say sorry...it was not allowed between them 😃

Geet melted instantly but decided to show jhoota gussa...she twisted her lips and...


Geet : whatever...! In spects he looks like...umm...like (she was searching for right words...)

SIR....(she found it).

Pari : and without that...he looks like he's one amongst us (said pari dreamily and looked at MEET, who gave her one of his increlidious look)

Pari (snapped at him) : WHAT...not again that look please..!

And all laughed at them again.

Now the eating mood was over and all were interested in teasing parimeet again...as they were the only couple, and they can never run out of topics to tease them.

Ayush : so guys...what's the plan for future...?

MEET : future...as in..? 😕

Shruti : future, as in SHAADI..!

MEET blushed 😳 while pari chocked on water, and geet had hard time controlling her laugh remembering pari's idea's on SHAADI...


SHAADI..wait she remembered her own shadi...which is supposed to happen next month, and engagement day after tomorrow...should she tell them about it..? or she shouldn't..? after that day the topic had been closed and no-one talked to her about it, neither her papa nor mumma...!

What would she possibly tell them...that she is getting engaged, to some Mr. X...she made pouting face...

(st) : babaji...ye kaha fassa diya 😕

Pari thought geet must be laughing at her expense...and looked at her, but was confused to see her weird expressions and wishpered...

Pari : geet..that is supposed to be my expressions...yaha meri shadi ki baat ho rahi...!

That broke geet's trance

Geet : Huh...!

Pari : nothing...


But she desperately wanted to change the topic from this and was thinking what to say, that's when her eye's fell on maan and she spoke up..

Pari : yarr...spare me for now..waise what do you think about sir's marriage..?

Disha : What...! Pari tu pagal hai kya...? What have we got to do with his marriage..?

Pari : no yarr just think..he is young, intelligent, successful, handsome (now MEET was not liking that...she sensed and stopped) still he is unmarried. (she finished)

Ayush : well I heard he is getting married...

Pari : WHATTT...!! No that can't be... (she almost cried)

MEET : WHATTT..! r u crazzyyy...!

Their fight broke geet's trance too...and her attention shifted from her marriage to sir's marriage.

B4 they continued, ayush stopped them...

Ayush (was so proud to know such an intimate info about their fav sir) : well guys...u all knw my chachu is a CA too...and he knows sir well, infact they are more like friends, and 3 days back I heard him say he is getting married soon.

Pari (dreamily) : how lucky would that girl be...I envy her. [K]

Shruti : what lucky yaar...he will make her read the whole of income tax act on the first night itself.

Disha : shruti is right. I pity her.

Ayush : what if she's also a CA..?

MEET : than he will make her prepare all his audit reports 😆

Geet : and her sasural will become PAATHSHALA for her 😛

Pari : how mean..! 😳

And all started laughing...! Unaware of the future...!

While they were discussing and laughing...one person was continuously looking at geet, her every gesture, every expression...not only from now but since the time he entered the conference hall.

He was seeing her after 3 long years, he sighed, wanted to keep looking at her till eternity.


Precap : Maan's POV


note : i had thought soo many things to say,...but upd typ karte karte i forgot all...😕

anyways...

thanks for your patience and comments...and likes too...😳


Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Aina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





me first!!!!!!!!!!!




geart update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


its a mixture of surprise,fun and reasoning and suspense!!!!!!!!!!!! ⭐️


well written dear!!!!!!!!!!!👏


iam becoming impatient of sasuraal patashaala!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉



urs i mean pari's nautanki was lolz...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣


tum maan se zyaada i think meet pr dyaan de rahi ho !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡 😆



geet's dialogue was good "specs kaha hai"??????????



do cont soon






Uma/Basanti...
Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet aur pari ki kya jodi banai
aise lag raha hai main pari aur basanti
ko dekh rhai hu leg puling karte hui 😆


pari so excited her BF coming after 3
year and for that she brok geet sleep
or beuty sleep
wo mer babji hai that was too good pari
just love it

conference room oh they just pull
pari leg in front of meet that bad
but love it 😆

and big surprice for geet , maan is
speaker , Ye GEET bhi na are maan ko dekha
na he is so hot baabji itna pyyara muda
samane hai and she is worried about chasma
lakin ye geet hi kar sakti hai yaar 😉

maan all lost in geet and geet she
away from all like discussion on maan
marriage part its too good

and hight is

whatever...! In spects he looks like...umm...like (she was searching for right words...)

SIR....(she found it).



👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update
loved it
kon hoga MR X I think msk hi hogla
lolzzz geet prank qid pari qas damn awsome
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written

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