I can cure you with my wounds||a sandhir TS||last part upadted - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Awww that was such a sweet chapter man...
update soon
Lots of Love
xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Awww that was such a sweet chapter man...

update soon
Lots of Love
xxx

thanks mariya thanks alot love uh for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
i really loved it.waitng for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Will update the last part soon with a chotu vm made by me ...woh ts se related nahi hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
😭AWH! I LOVED THIS!!! UPDATE SOON!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Seriosuly srry will upadte surely within two days ..srry guys exams the ..i couldnt pakka promise yeh wala kuch zada hi lamba aur more songs ka hoga ...promiseee till then one compensation from my side ...tell something uh wanna see in the last part ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

bhoot this time it is a pakka wala promise na😆

i m w8ing

for ur ts , vm , ss

so jaldi update karo😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Part-3
sees the eyes of readers ...dude what yaar mere exams the 🤣 ...noww have a happy readinga nd here i complete this ts ..and the vm on the end is about just snahdie and their journey ..happy reading and people who are asking ki can they post this or my ss anywhere then no need to ask guys if uh feel so then post it anywhere ..i have no objection baas cmmnt and like kardia karo 🤣 again i says puchne ki koi jarurat nahi hai
THE WHISPERS OF LOVE...


"OUR LOVE IS LIKE AN ETERNAL FLAME:NO ONE CAN TOUCH IT, IT CAN'T BE BLOWN OUT, IT CARRIES MANY COLORS, AND BURNS UNTIL THE END OF TIME ... "



she wepped her tears and afced her face after all in 5hrs she was going to get engaged ..she ahs to look her best *though her heart was crying*
Sanyu came out of the washroom and was about to go when a paper with stone inside it hits her head and falls down at her feet ...sanyu opnes the letter and reads it
"Miss sanyukta aggarwal agar 15 mins mein blue moon garden nahi ayi toh ...toh mein tumhe yahans euthake le jaunga ...and haaan dont be late ..uh better dont be"
She ended reading it ...and was shocked actaully surprised ki someone throws a stone in her room and asks her oh srry srry commandes her to come at a place alone like a personal property ..huh ...chalo chalke dekhti hun ki kiski itni heemat hai ..said sanyu to herself"
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BLUE MOON GARDEN 25 minutes later:
" huh mujhe i hate late comers bolke ..khudh late ata hai ..dekhti hun ki akun hai agar paanch mins mein nahi aya toh mein chali jaungi ..."sanyu though yo herslef when suddenly guitar chords started playing lights were dim and leds were lighten ...when suddenly a known voice came puring the his heart out through his wrds and making the whole setup more romantic .. [/brown]


Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal paas rehta nahi
Ye tujhse hi milne ko chaahe
Ye teri hi karta hai baatein
Kya tum ho..
Kya tum ho wohi
Kya tum ho..
Kya tum ho wohi
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Teri aankhon ke raste ye
Chale jaata hai
Jo bulaaun main
Kabhi laut aata nahi
Bekhabar ye zamaane se
Takraata hai
Bedhadak mujhse kehta hai
Main hoon yunhi
Ye tujhse hi milke hua hai
Jo teri nazar ne chhuaa hai


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The song was half done when petals of red roses fell on sanyus head and more leds were glowing ... [/brown]



Kya tum ho..
Kya tum ho wohi
Kya tum ho..
Kya tum ho wohi
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Hai hunar ek naya isko
tujhse mila
Muskura ke ye milta hai
sabse abhi
Aadhi raaton mein mujhko ye
deta utha
Mujhse pooche ye raatein kyun
kat te nahi
Ye tujhse hi milne ko chahe
Ye teri hi karta hai baatein
Kya tum ho..
Kya tum ho wohi
Kya tum ho..
Kya tum ho wohi
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..
Dil aaj kal meri sunta nahi
Dil aaj kal..



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The song finished and a greek figure out of the blue came and stud before sanyu ..none other than randhir!!! Sanyu was shocked beyond limitation ..was he singing ..i mean rd singing thought sanyu to herself
"Randhir yeh sab kya hai? Tum yeh sab.." Sanyu asked to be cut by rd ...
"Shh farzi kitna bolti ho tum haan ..kabhi toh mujhe bolne do ..aaj mein bolunga aur tum sonoingi"said rd not breaking the eyelock for a moment ..
"Haan bolona kya bolna hai ."said sanyu thinking whats he upto
Rd went on his knees .held one of sanyus hand in his and poured his heart out ..." Farzi whenever i see ..uh remind me of that untouched dew on flower petal which gets reborn with every sunrise ...tum jab mere samne hoti ho toh time limited aur pyaar unlimited hojata hai ...and with thsi farzi i sign off and declare my heart officialy urs ..kyaa tum iss mcp ki farzi bonogi..."saying this rd took out a ring box from his pocket ..."so farzi will uh be mine forever?"...



Randhir was happy beyond but sanyukta ...she was numb ..just numb she didnt know what to say ...and what could she say ..ki she loves him but cannot be with him cause she is getting engaged with SOMEONE ELSE!!!! ..she knew he would be lobely all again ..cursing himself for being late ...but now telling him no ..wouldnt it break his heart ..her eyes started brimming with layers of tears ...but some how she managed ..and said ...
" kya bakwaas kar arhe ho randhir ..yumse ache se baat kya karli tumhe laga ki mein tumse pyaar karti hun .,then for ur kind infirmation .,i hate uh ..i hate uh more than anything else ...tumse jaise mcp se pyaar karne se pehle mein marna pasand karungi" spated sanyu ..killing her self into pieces and crying for each word she spoke just now


"Lekin sanyu ...ur love changed me mein aab woh rd nahi hunn" said rd to be cut by sanyu
"Dont call me sanyu ..its sanyukta and keep ur love with urself only ajj ke baad kabhi mere samne maat ana ..mein mar bhi rahi hungi tab bhi nahi " saying this sanyu keft the place ...
Randhir was broken ..no he was shattared ...he thought to himslef .. Wasnt he made for love
"Kyun mere saath hi kyun ...why god why ..kya mere liye koi khushi nahi hai ..." He was now just numb ..collecting his pieces of broken ..heart he went back to fite ..promising to never again make someone break the wall around him ...



But he was not the only one shattered ...another heart was broken it was of ...SANYUKTA ... Atleast rd could shout could scream but sanyu ..what could she do ..she was so..HELPLESS ...so helpless that she couldnt even speak the truth to rd ..that she wanted him to engulf her in his arms and never leave her ..but now ..her last hope also shattered she thought if not she then atleastrd could be happy with his life ..that was the reason..why she made his parents one ..but now she is the one to break him again...

Pehle kabhi, na tune mujhe gum diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
Gujare the jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
Toh phir tune badli kyun adaa
Ye kyun kiya ?
Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhu tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe, pehli baarish ki dua
Tere pehloo mein, rehloon
Main khud ko pagal, keh lun
Tu hum de ya khushiyaan, sehloon saathiyaa
saathiyaa
saathiyaa...


"Why rd why ...jab maine tumhe itna kuch kaha phirbi tum chup rahe ..kyun rd kyun karte ho itna pyaar ..why didnt uh screamed at me ..mujhe achse pata ki ..meine tymhara dil thoda hai ..phirbi tumhe ...paar main kya karun ..meine agar yeh shaadi nahi ki ...maa aur papa tut jayenge ..ho shake toh mujhhe maaf karna ..


Koi nahi, tere siva mera yahan
Manzilein, hai meri toh sab yahan
Mita de sabhi aaja faanslein
Main chahun mujhe mujhse baatley
Zara sa mujh mein tu jhaakley
Main hoon kya ?
Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhu tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe, pehli baarish ki dua
Tere pehloo mein, rehloon
Main khud ko pagal, keh lun
Tu hum de khushiyaan, sehloon saathiyaa


She weeped her tears and went down at the call of mother ...afterall she had a engagement to do !. She came down clad in a beautiful bridal wear ..
"Sanyu beta kitni pyaari lag rahi hai ..kisiki najar na lage tujhe" said sanyu's mother while putting a black mark on the back neck ...
"Maa sameer aur uski family kahan hai " asked sanyu .weakily
"Woh toh apne ghar mein hogein na" said sanyus dad comming from back
"Kya par saghai ka kya hua"said sanyu confused
"Saghai toh hogi par yeh kisne kaha ki un mittal ke bete se hogi !"said sanyus father giving a heartly laugh
"Kyaa main nahi samji"said sanyu
"Sanyu beta humein pata hai ki tu uss sameer se nahi balki .. Randhir se pyaar karti hai .."said sanyus mom giving a shock to sanyu
"Kyaaa appko kaise pata .aaur aap log saghai ..yeh kya bol rahe ho" said sanyu while tears were briming again
"Humne chod tu kya karne ja rahi thi ..humare liye apne pyaar ka gala goth ne ja rahi thi ..tu itni badi kab bangayi humein toh pata hi nahi chala...shukar hai randhir ka joh end waqt pe ake sari scahai bata dali ki tum dono ek dushre se pyaar karte ho ...humein maaf karde sanyu ...humein iss baar haad kardi thi ...teri marzi ke bina hi tujhe kisi ke saath jhod dia tha. ..aur rahi baat rd ki toh ladka khandani hai aur tujhe pasand bhi hai toh humein koi problem nahi hai" said sanyus brother!!!
"Kyaa rd ne ake sab khedia tha ...par kab ..."
"Jab tu apne kamre mein thi aur mein gaya tha phool lane ..tabhi useh wahan mila aur wahi usne apne pyaar ke bare mein bola ..pehle toh mujhe gussa par jab meine uski ankhen dekha toh mujhe sachai najar ayi aur meien useh bolne ka mauka dia ..ushne mujhe sab bataya tere sapne tumhara pyaar ..aur baap ka dil tha pighal gaya ...isiliye paar tu kyun itna chuank rahi hai ...usne tujhe abhi bulaya tha na apne pyaar ka ijhaar karne ke liye?" Said sanyus dad. Making sanyu shock to the core..
"Kyaaa ...papa mein apse baad mein baat karti hun abhi mujeh jaana hoga" saying this sanyu left hurridly in that bridal wear only towards tehir destination ...FITE
"Oh gawd yeh meine kya kardia ..he loved me so much ...usne mom dad ko bhi patalia mere karthir aur meine...gawd i really should hurry ..."
"Arey bhaiya jaldi chalonaaa "said sanyu to the driver .
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ROORKEE FITE :
She ran she ran like there is no tomorrow ..she searched the whole college ...she didnt acre about students .who were giving weird looks to her ...finally she stopped
"Arey yaar rd kahan ho shakta hai ...OH shit terrace ..mein bhi naa " thinkng this sanyu proceeded towards the terrace ..there he was sitting in a drak corner looking at the moon ...
"Randhirr"sanyu called in a soft tone ..making rd look at once at her ..
"Sanyu...srry sanyukta "those last wrds came as mere whisper..but still audible ..those last wrds just broke sanyu into pieces but his eyes broke her sole...one could say he was crying for hours they were bloodshot red...and still puffy ...
"Randhir ..i am srry ..."saying this sanyu broke down on her knees engulfing rd into a deep hug ..
"Leave sanyukta i said leave me alone" said rd in a weak voice
"I cant ..i cant leave uh alone" said sanyu tightnibg her grip oh him ..
"I said leave..."rd shouted ..
But snayu did the just opposite .
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She ..just kept her lips on his ..not finding any other way to make him shut ...
First rd was shocked ...he was just unable to know what was happening ...but then slowly he too started responding ...it was slow and full of love ..they were just pouring their heart ..in this kiss ...sanyus one hand was ruffling through rds hair while his hands had made their way to sanyus waist ...slowly feeling the shortage of air .they left each other ..still in the same position ...
"I love uh!" Said sanyu while breathing heavily
"I love uh more"said rd again engulfing sanyu into a tight hug ..
"Rd tum roh rahe the?" Asked sanyu inocently
"Someone tried to steal my heart ...kya lagta hai mein nahi rohta"said rd not breaking the eyelock ..
"I am srry randhir ..srry for everything"said sanyu ..while a lone tear escaped her eye ..but couldnt reach the grnd
"Dont shed these pearls tehy are very precious"said rd while catching the tear .
"I love uh randhir...mein tumse bahut pyaar karti hun" said sanyu tightening her grip
"Acha toh prove it"said rd with a mischeif in his eyes ...and leaning closer to sanyu .
"Okh.."said sanyu ..coming more closer to rd...
They were about yo kiss when ...a voice came
"Arey randhir bhai aur bhabhi"said jiggy 🤣 coming from the stairs
"Bhabhi!!!!!"said sanyu being shocked
"Arey rd bhai mere bhai uye toh unki gf meri bhabhi huyi naa" said jiggy
"Tumhe kaise pata chala...oh gawd randhirrr!"said sanyu looking at rd with anger
"Arey kya mein toh baas ..arey woh mujhe help chahiye thi propose ke mamnle mwin toh isiliye iseh kehna padha"said rd trying to be innocent
"huh ..tum kabhi nahi sudhroge ."saying this sanyu left ..(bichara rd 🤣 )
"Arey sanyu ...sanyu rukho toh"rd said standing up and running after sanyu
When jiggy came in middle and said "arey rd bhai mein kuch galat kehdia kya"asked jiggy stupidly
"Nahi mere baap mujhe maaf kar"rd joined his hands and left from there
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Here sNyu was upset ..that rd propodes her but it was not his idea...she was so upset when a voice came from back ...

Aww.. Jaane kab hothon pe
Dil ne rakh di dil ki baatein
Samjha nahi yeh dil
Isko hum toh rahe samjhaate (x2)
Maine dekha tujhe bhula ke
Har ek tarqeeb laga ke
Har nuskhe ko aazma ke
Par dil se kabhi na utre (utre.. utre..)
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka


rd statred singing and came near sanyu and went on his knees and asked sanyus hand for a dance ..sanyu couldnt ignore this sweet gesture of his and gave her hand and also SANG!!!
Jaane kab hothon pe
Dil ne rakh di dil ki baatein
Samjha nahi yeh dil
Isko hum toh rahe samjhate (x2)
Maine dekha tujhe bhula ke
Har ek tarqeeb laga ke
Har nuskhe ko aazma ke
Par dil se kabhi na utre (utre.. utre..)
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka..
Jaane kab meri neend udi
Soyi soyi raaton mein
Jaane kab mera haath gaya
Soneya tere haathon mein, aww.. (x2)
Chal badhte teri ore
Main jab bhi kadam uthati hoon
Jaaun tujh se door door
Toh paas tere aa jaati hoon
Maine dekha tujhe bhulaake
Har ek tarqeeb lagaake
Har nuskhe ko aazma ke
Par dil se kabhi na utre (utre.. utre..)
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka


They swayed to the music and rds hand were on sanyus waist making it go swirls after swirls and sanyu her hand were on rds shoulders just loosing herself in rds eyes


Ek jagah pe kabhi ruka nahin
Ek jagah pe kabhi tika nahin
Jaisa maine chaha mujhe
Waisa koyi dikha nahi, aww.. (x2)
Par jabse dekha tujhe
Jo huaa nahi wo hone lagaa
Dil mera mujhe jaga ke
Khud seene mein sone laga
Meri fitrat badal rahi hai
Jaise barqat koyi huyi hai
Bas ab toh duaa yahi hai
Ki dil se kabhi na utre (utre.. utre..)
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka
Hangover.. hangover.. hangover..


Finally their song ended ..but on a note to bind them together forever finally they cured each other with their wounds ...finally farzi and mcp were one ..for life long



Yo finally completed ...hope uh like it
Love,
Sweta

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Hey! Sweta
my cute lovely Sis
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely written dear⭐️
Love it to the core...❤️❤️
Thanks its my favourite song dear
Love you😳😳

Sweta ur an amazing, fantastic,
fabulous, lovely, and
experience writer dear⭐️👏😳
Love all ur work❤️

Keep it up👍🏼
Do write more
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
RES
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will comment tomorrow, after I read this through. 😃

UNRES

That was so cute!! And her parents? OMG! I never imagined them to do something like this.

Good work! 😃

Love,
Sush
Edited by Sush94 - 11 years ago

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