Simply superb update
will come with my detail comment
aww you ended the story so sad to hear π
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Sandyyy .. It started with their unending cute knok jhoks ..
aww talli priya is super cute while making puppy face
and you know what ...While reading Ram making priya undressing her wet clothes ...
I remebered your other Ff Ray love and lost .. in that Ram & Priya first meeting itself Ram chneged the dress for her ofcurse closing his eyes there π
But here Pathi hai tho obviously he will loose his control
still he didnt cross his limits ..
Thats so super cute hai na ..
Oh so madam got up in his embrace
super cool .. how cutely he is saying .."priya sone do na " π
Lol..she saw his jurtha buton open and her dres changed so she thought He moved ahead ..
Uff why didnt she think that why she didnt remember hmm
But in tat her fault is also not there na
aw Ram didnt take any advanatage baby ... dont cryyy
Ye Ram bhi na .. mrg mrg started his romance
OMG priya said so many to him without knowing actual truth
becharari Ram.. he might have fully upset with this ofcourse hurt too
"mein ghar wapas kaise aayi...mein aapki bahoo mein kya kar rahi thi...mere kapde kisne change kiye..mein nighty mein kaise aayi...kahiye Mr. Kapoor"
Ram could have been hurt so much by hearing from her
hayeee
Ye Ram bhi na he can tell the truth na uff
HMM Ram left in anger and hurt
and after that Ye Neha phone kiya
atleast late tho sahi cal tho kiyaa Godd
Priya came to know all the things one by one
tHank go dshe realised her mistake ... and went to meet him
and Ram asked her .. cant you wait .π i had smile hear but love their bantering bhi
Bade achae lagte hai
Priya kissed him and Ram left in shock π
So Ram also poured out his heart to her π
Both are now in good terms
So Ram dont waanna leave this chance
office mai romance soo good
but Ye Neha bhi na disturb kiya π
and Raya milan hogaya in fully terms
now they deserve only happiness
and they were in their love land
superb simply superb
and Aap ne end kiya .π
Ok this I will share in next comment ..
Such a wonderful journey so far .. and Loved this to the core
Edited by luvsakshi - 9 years ago
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