Raya-Adhuri Kahani thread 4 Part 51 page 95 - Page 68

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: joemahika

Sandy waiting kab update de rahi ho aap aankhein taras rahi hain update me life pls update soon

will update in the evening
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely u will be updating in evening!!!
Waiting!!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmmm I came ... 
Good evening bhi hogaya 
waiting for your update .. πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hmmm I came ...

Good evening bhi hogaya
waiting for your update ..πŸ˜›

Di sandy ka eve abhi nhi huaπŸ˜†Abhi uska morng hogaπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Di sandy ka eve abhi nhi huaπŸ˜†Abhi uska morng hogaπŸ˜‰



Lol .. 
yeahh 
might be for her its still mrg πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Simply superb update
will come with my detail  comment 

aww you ended the story so sad to hear πŸ˜­

* edited:*

Sandyyy .. It started with their unending cute knok jhoks .. 
aww talli priya is super cute while making puppy face 

and you know what ...While reading Ram making priya undressing her wet clothes ... 
I remebered your other Ff Ray love and lost .. in that Ram & Priya first meeting itself Ram chneged the dress for her ofcurse closing his eyes there πŸ˜† 
But here Pathi hai tho obviously he will loose his control 
still he didnt cross his limits .. 

Thats so super cute hai na .. 

Oh so madam got up in his embrace 
super cool .. how cutely he is saying .."priya sone do na " πŸ‘

Lol..she saw his jurtha buton open and her dres changed so she thought He moved ahead ..
Uff why didnt she think that  why she didnt remember hmm 
But in tat her fault is also not there na 

aw Ram didnt take any advanatage baby ... dont cryyy 
Ye Ram bhi na .. mrg mrg started his romance 


OMG priya said so many to him without knowing actual truth 
becharari Ram.. he might have fully upset with this ofcourse hurt too 


"mein ghar wapas kaise aayi...mein aapki bahoo mein kya kar rahi thi...mere kapde kisne change kiye..mein nighty mein kaise aayi...kahiye Mr. Kapoor"

Ram  could have been hurt so much by  hearing from her 
hayeee 
Ye Ram bhi na he can tell the truth na uff  

HMM Ram left in anger and hurt 
and after that Ye Neha phone kiya
atleast late tho sahi cal  tho kiyaa Godd
Priya came to know all the things one by one 
tHank go dshe realised her mistake ... and went to meet him
and Ram asked her .. cant you wait .πŸ˜† i  had smile hear but love their bantering bhi 

Bade achae lagte hai 

Priya kissed him and Ram left in shock πŸ˜†
So Ram also poured out his heart to her πŸ‘
Both are now in good terms 
So Ram dont waanna leave this chance 
office mai romance soo good 
but Ye Neha bhi na disturb kiya πŸ˜†

and Raya milan hogaya in fully terms 
now they deserve only happiness 
and they were in their love land 
superb simply superb 

and Aap ne end kiya .😭 
Ok this I will share in next comment .. 

Such a wonderful journey so far .. and Loved this to the core 
Edited by luvsakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sandy That was really a verry good story on Raya 
This ff is So close to me 
You might know how close its to me .

when i saw the end ..i was like felt very bad 

how i wil tease you reagrding your hero 
how i will ask for your updates 
How i will wait for your updates 
How i will make you write Romantic updates
How i will ask sometimes to send the update in Pm [unedited version ]

So many things very close to me in this story 
Im going to miss all those 

Very sad to hear its ending ..
Thank you .. you have told me before otherwise i would have been very upset 

I know you have taken up new challenges this time 
I hope everything will go smothly 
Love you so much 
All the very best for your future 
May God bless you 
Hopefully You will get a time to come witha  new story 
Hugs 
πŸ€—
Edited by luvsakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey di...lovely update...πŸ‘

priya misundrstd him...
bechare ram...!!! ...bina nasta k ofc gaye...πŸ˜†
priya get to know through nuts n neha...
awww!!! priya ram k ofc mai...too cute...πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
is neha na galat time pe ayi thi...kuch der baad nahi aa sakti hai kya...?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
beautiful moment missd ...hehehe...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

uhu uhu.😭😭😭...apne story end kar di...not fair...😊
but i hope aap continue kare is story ko...

Edited by jodude - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update..
ye kya
prriya ram ka jhagdaπŸ˜”
ye priya bhi na...
are chalo neha ne sb bata dia...
priya ram k office meinπŸ˜‰
office wala love
ye kyaa kia
😑
end kr dia😑
hate u😑😭Edited by Mini1991 - 9 years ago