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Posted: 11 years ago
oh so geet ready to go to party with boss
n harshar start feeling for her ..
harshad geet n maaan ek sath ek party mein
kuch na kuch to jarur hoga
waiting 4 the dhamaka or say dhamal😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
so harshad have feelings for geet & payal too knows about it
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 44
nice part...
so Harshad likes Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting teaser dear
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
mana k harshad like her but yeh payal ko match maker bana zarori hai
ufff some times friend r big problem
soo geet n maan going same party with other
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 45

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Maan & geet both are ready for party & descending the stairs from opposite sides...

He looks towards her, she really looks stunning... she feels his gaze own, but both said nothing & inform nakul & left in respective cars...

********

Maan reached to party venue & discusses about project with sasha... Another side geet & harshad reached to party venue...

Geet : harshad aap mujhe yuhi leke aaye

Harshad : geet ab mujhe is baare mein koi baat nhi krni

Chalo ab andher

She entering with him, her foot hit or stuck with/in something, for support she held harshad hand...

Sasha : Mk Mr.Harshad chopra aa gye

Maan turn & sees towards harshad & shocked to see geet here ... harshad held her hand...

Harshad : geet you ok

Geet : hmm

She taking her hand back, but harshad stops her...

Harshad : girne ka irada hai

He encircled her hand around own hand & enter into party hall...

Sasha : MK

Both look nice together...

Harshad : Hello Mr. Maan

Geet sees towards maan , many emotions going on both sides... Maan gaze on her hands, geet sees his eyes on her hands... she take hand back...

Harshad : Mr. Maan Are you ok

Maan nodded...

Harshad : aap kuch khoye huye lag rhe hai

Maan : nhi Mr. harshad

Maan talking with harshad but his eyes on geet...

Harshad : Mr. Maan meet geet

Aage aapko saari dealing aur jo bhi detail discuss krni ho

Aap geet se kr sakte hai

She is in charge of this project

Harshad looks geet & said "geet ye project tumhe hi handle krna hai aage"

geet : par

harshad : it's your boss order geet

geet nodded.

Sasha : you both enjoy the party

***********

Maan (think) : geet harshad ki company mein kaam krti hai

Mujhe bataya tk nhi

.

Geet ne toh mujhe job ka bhi kaha bataya tha

Jo ye batati

************

Geet (think) : Maan ke sath kaam krna asaan nhi honga

Abhi bhi gusse se dekh rhe the mujhe

.

Ab maine kya kiya

.

Jb dekho gussa krte hai

.

Khi unhe mera party mein aana acha na laga ho

Par kyun

.

Ye meri zindagi hai

Mein kyun party mein nhi aa sakti

Both stand far from each other but stealing glances in between... He not likes her closeness with harshad... & geet not getting now what she done, he glares her... he become angry on her... why?

Harshad : May I have dance with you

geet nodded...

.

From far maan sees geet dance with harshad...she laughs in between... & he busy in drinking ...in between geet placed her head on his shoulder...

Geet : mujhe yakin nhi ho raha payal

Itni naughty hai

Harshad : ye toh kuch bhi nhi hai

Har baar mujhe pareshaan krti hai

Harshad phone buzzed...

Harshad : geet mein abhi aaya

Geet : hmm

******

Music changed, & light dimmed, Maan come & encircled his hand around her belly... she gasped with sudden touch... he turn her...

Geet : Maan

Maan : sshh

He placed index finger on her lips... & come close to her ...

Maan : tum mujhe avoid kyun kr rhi ho

She tries to go from here, but he held her wrist & pulls her, her back hit with his chest ...

Maan : uske sath dance kr sakti ho

Par mere sath nhi

Geet : Maan abhi aap hosh mein nhi hai

Maan : tum mujhe hosh mein rne kaha deti ho

Maan : may I have dance with you

Without hearing her reply, he turn her, take her hand placed on his shoulder & entangles finger into her...

******************

Hashad come & not sees geet anywhere... his phone buzzed & receives a message from her...

"harshad am leaving"

Harshad : geet ase kaise chli gyi

He calls her ...

Harshad : geet tum thoda wait nhi kr sakti tha mera

Hum sath chalte

Geet : sorry harshad

Am not feeling well

Isliye bs

Harshad : mein tumhe drop kr deta

Mujhe kh deti

Geet : meri wajh se tumhari party kharab ho jaati

Aur mein asa nhi chahti thi

Harshad : apna dhyan rakhna

Geet : hmm

************

Maan hears his phone conversation... He closed both eyes & feeling something wet around his cheek... he touch & knows he crying ...his tears wetting his face...

.

He again hurt her today... why he doing this... he also not knowing... He forced her... now what she thinking about me...

*************

uske sath dance kr sakti ho

Par mere sath nhi

.

Today he so close to me... but am not feeling happy

Jb rishta nhi maante

Mujhpe barosha nhi krte

Toh ye haq kyun

.

Phle mujhe khud se door kr diya

Apni zindagi se bahar kr diya

Aur aaj

**********

She left dance floor...he held her upper arms & pinned her to the wall...

Geet : leave me

Maan : kyun mujhse door bhag rhi ho

Geet : aapne khud mujhe khudse door kiya hai

Fir aaj kyun

Aap mere karib aa rhe hai

He comes close to her, his forehead pressed against her

and she closed both eyes... he not liking her tears ... He

cupped her face & drink her tears & he come close to her

lips... she pushed him & runs from here...

Kya kahen hum kaise

Tujhse door ho gye

Halaat se, kuch khud se majboor ho gye

Mohabbat rula deti hai

Kb ye maana tha

Apne dil ke afsaane wohi dastoor ho gaye

Manzil jisse samjha

Bana wo meel ka pathar

Nayi manzil, naye raaste manzoor ho gaye

Had se bad jaaye...jo ghum

Deta nahi dard

Muskara rahe hain aise ...hum ranjoor ho gaye

Dil tera reza-reza hai

Kaise sambhale tujhko khudaya

Humse kaoise yeh qusoor ho haye...

Precap :-

He came close to her, sat near her and caressed her head, face and cheeks lovingly..

he wanted to talk to her once ...

he couldn't hold back and kissed her forehead and closed eyes

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful part... maan and geet have to work togather...maan cant see her with someone else...he wants to talk with her ..she is effecting him...nice precap..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: icskwt

beautiful part... maan and geet have to work togather...maan cant see her with someone else...he wants to talk with her ..she is effecting him...nice precap..


thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeh maan ka kya chakkar hai😡😡😡wahi divorce maanga aur jab geet harshad ke saath thi tho dekhnahi saktha aur aagaya beech mein forcefully uske saath dance karne

yeh saaf saaf kyun nahi kehtha😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! superbly written! Maaneet shocked seeing each other! Geet gng to wrk with Maan! Maan j seeing her wid Harshad! Maan dances with her! she leaves! Maan hurt her! She is in tears! Maan realised wt he did! update soon! lovely precap!

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