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He opened his eyes to the sight of his angel.
She was sleeping but her eyes had circles underneath, her expression sad.
She looked so tired. He thought.
A few hair were fanning her face.
He pushed himself a bit forward and brushed those hairs back that seemed to irritate her.
He noticed the dried tear tracks on her cheek.
His heart sank, his mind in a conflict.
Of course it was wrong for his mom to slap her.
She had no right whatsoever.
And it was wrong for her to give his dad those medicines.
And as he laid there thinking about the whole fiasco that was the last week,he was exhausted.
He just wanted her to kiss away the exhaustion.
His heart yearned for her.
His eyes fell upon the wound on her wrist. And the fact that he had physically hurt her tormented him.
What monster had he turned into?
He snuggled closer to her and wrapped his arms lightly around her sleeping form.
He kissed her wrist softly. And he caressed her cheek.
She opened her eyes slowly to meet with a dark,stormy chocolate brown ones.
He smiled slightly.
And whispered-" I am sorry"
She just hugged him tightly and that seemed to vanish his problems completely.
He hugged her air tight too.
He felt his tee getting wet.
"Shhh" he whispered, caressing her hair.
He pulled her back reluctantly and wiped those tears away.
"Aliya, why did you not tell me about mom slapping you?"
Her eyes grew wide and she looked down.
"Voh-"
He tilted her chin up and met her eyes which was growing wet again.
"There was already so much tension in this house. You would definitley have confronted mami. I just wanted to avoid another conflict."
His heart melted.
"I am so sorry" he muttered and kissed her cheek.
"It was the other cheek" he could her the smile in her voice.
He pressed his lips on the other one and murmered-"it feels as though mom slapped me."
He covered her cheek in kisses. He could feel her crying.
"Aliya" he breathed on her face,his eyes on her lips.
He flicked his gaze to her eyes and asked "can we pause our fight? For now?"
She did not reply.
"Pause?" He asked.
He was surprised when she smacked her lips against his. Teeths bit, lips clashed and tongues mated and when they both came up for air, Aliya nodded.
All she said was "yeah,pause."
And they kissed each other to oblivion.
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Written in 10 mis. Please excuse the typos and any grammatical error.
For #mission 600.
Even if its for 600, doesnt mean i excuse u from ur duties.
I want comments. You can critisize constructively.
Appreciation is wholeheartedly welcome :D
Sorry,no pms for this.
-Loads of activeness
Sanika :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Absolutely amazing n extremely emotional :)
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reswa (aaj maami ki badi yaad aa rahi hai😛)
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Lollipop!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Yaar...This was SOOO good!
now ur making me greedy! i want this in the show now!
each emotion of zain was soo beautifully potrayed
dude you are just amazing...
ILU
Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wohoo.Sanika this was AWESOME.Zain's feelings are beautifully written.

I loved this.OMG i can totally imagine everything.

Super se upar Sanika..!!😃
Write More..!!
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really sweet and romantic one.i wish it happened in show too.keep writing beautiful stuff like this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG ⭐️ Awesome. I am loving it and longing to see this type of emotional scenes in BI.
ZaYa❤️☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyakna

Absolutely amazing n extremely emotional :)


Thank u so much! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinu127

reswa (aaj maami ki badi yaad aa rahi hai😛)

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Lollipop!!!!🤗
Yaar...This was SOOO good!

Thank you
now ur making me greedy! i want this in the show now!
each emotion of zain was soo beautifully potrayed
dude you are just amazing...

Ikr? 😆
ILU


I love you too 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Res

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Wohoo.Sanika this was AWESOME.Zain's feelings are beautifully written.

I loved this.OMG i can totally imagine everything.

Super se upar Sanika..!!😃
Write More..!!


Thank you so much avi!! I will 😉 itni aasani se nai chodungi tumhe 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

its really sweet and romantic one.i wish it happened in show too.keep writing beautiful stuff like this.


i wish so too. Thank you. I will 😛 😃

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