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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Really yaar I eagerly waiting for ur update


Sorry sweetheart for the delay.. writing next part now.. Will update on completing.
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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome update dear šŸ‘


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Posted: 11 years ago

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nice update..šŸ‘šŸ¼


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Originally posted by: sasir

loved it

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plz update soon


Thank u dear.. Will update today pakka!!
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sorry for delay... will update today for sure.😊
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Originally posted by: fairylover


Sorry sweetheart for the delay.. writing next part now.. Will update on completing.

Thanks waiting for it
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Hello guys.. before I forget I am dedicating this part to Shonali164 aka Sonali or Shona..
@Shona.. This special RoKa scene for u which I have not planned in the beginning.

Now coming to the heart breaking news that Rachana is leaving.. Well guys it hurts a lot but we have to accept the reality and now EMA died for us and m not going to watch this show ever. But I won't leave the forum as I have found the fantastic friends here who encouraged me for writing.. I hope u will stay here to read it.

Ok guys.. one ques.. I was planning to write one more FF on RagNa but now many of u r leaving the forum so just asking whether I should write it or not.. But now that will be AshNa ff and not RagNa and m going to write it here only instead of Fanfiction forum as I feel Rachna will always be a part of EMA.

Now coming to the update.. I have completed part 35.Hope u will like it.. Will try to give double update today.. So sorry for the mistakes. Enjoy it..

Kalpi looks at the time and searches her mobile when she remembers it's with Roy.. On mention of Roy her face glows with love.. She blushes a bit and than starts packing her bag.. She has to leave... She thinks to express her love tonight but than remembers the way Roy always made her feel special.. She decides to make some special efforts for proposing him and for that she has to reach Delhi first.. With sweet memories of the trip she closes her bag and looks at Ritu.. She takes out her favorite scarf which Ritu liked a lot and gives it to her saying "Always follow ur heart.. U r a vhirpy girl and stay like this only.. If ever u need me than m just a call away." Ritu hugs her and thanks her.. Kalpi once again looks at the hostel and the time she spent there and leaves it with a smile.. Before leaving she meets warden and thanks her for making her realize her love.. Warden blesses her.. when they see Roy waiting near the car.. Kalpi runs to him and happily keeps her bag in the car but roy silently looks at her.. He fails to understand the glow on Kalpi's face but than remember Kapi talking about Raghav with warden.. He silently sits in the car and drives off..

Kalpi is surprised to see the silent side of Roy.. she tries to initiate the talk but Roy is too sad to reply.. He switches on the radio but it doesn't catch the network.. He slams his fist on the radio in disappointment.. Kalpi looks at him again.. She sits quitely.. On the way she looks at Kulfi vendor passing by... She screams Roy to stop.. Roy stops the car.. she jumps out and yells at kulfiwala.. "Bhaiya... give me two kulfis.." Roy looks at her and the smile on her face..

Roy(to himself) : What is happening to me.. Kalpi is my friend than why I am behaving rudely with her.. I have to control myself.. V are frnz and will always remain the same than why m I letting my love affect our relation..

Kalpi returns back with 2 kulfis in her hand and finds smiling at her.. She sighs a relief on seeing him happy again and silently thanks god.. She gives one kulfi to roy and tells him to drive and she will feed him.. roy drives the car.. She holds kulfi in front of him.. he opens mouth to eat it but Kalpi keeps it in her mouth and laughs a loud.. He too laughs on seeing Kalpi's antics..

Kalpi : So now.. u are laughing.. few minutes ago u were behaving as if someone died..

She makes angry face and imitates his action.. She slams her fist on radio and it starts working.. They again laughs on it.. He stops the car in side to have kulfi saying he won't let her have both kulfis..

He starts eating the kulfi when song starts playing on the radio...

Kahin To.. Kahin To

Hogi Wo,
Duniya Jahan Tu Mere Saath Hai..

Jahan Mein, Jahan Tu,
Aur Jahan, Bass Tere Mere Jazbaat Hai,
Hogi Jahan Subah Teri,
Palko Ki, Kirano Mein,
Lori Jahan Chand Ki,
Sune Teri Baahoin Mein..

Lyrics catches his attention..He looks at sky and says to himself, "I know we are not made for each other.. still I wish there is some place for me in ur heart.. I wish I could take u away from this world where there is no one around.. only u and me and our love.. But I know it's not our love but only mine.. Though my love is enough for both of us but I do not want u to lose ur love.."

Jaane Naa Kahan Wo Duniya Hai,

Jaane Naa Wo Hai Bhi Ya Nahi,
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse,
Itni Khafa Nahi..
Jaane Naa Kahan Wo Duniya Hai,
Jaane Naa Wo Hai Bhi Ya Nahi,
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse,
Itni Khafa Nahi..

While thinking this Roy forgets to eat his kulfi.. it starts melting and about to drop in the car when Kalpi pushes his hand aside and it falls on the road.. He makes puppy face and Kalpi gives her to eat him.. They share it.. Kalpi gazes his eyes as if they beheld her..

Kalpi(to herself) : U were always with me.. At each moment of my life u were there to support me but I failed to see love in these eyes for me.. I do not know how I failed to understand my feeling.. I always thought the feelings I have for u is friendship but that was love.. now when I have realized it I can't wait to reveal my feelings to u.. I just want to come in ur arms.. This is the place where I get peace..

Saasein Kho Gayi Hai Kiski Aahon Mein,

Mein Kho Gayi Hu Jaane Kiski Baahon Mein,
Manzilon Se Raahein Doodhti Chali,
Kho Gayi Hai Manzil Kahin Rahon Mein..

Roy breaks the eyelock... Kalpi too looks at the other side to avoid embarrassment.. They remembers the moment when they were about to kiss.. Kalpi feels shy whereas tears come out of Roy's eyes.. He wipes it and again wears the fake smile just for his friend..

Kahin To, Kahin To,
Hai Nasha..
Teri Meri Har Mulaqaat Mein,
Hoton Se, Hoton Ko,
Chumti, O Rehte Hai Hum Har Baat Pe,
Kehti Hai Fiza Jahan,
Teri Zamin Aasmaan..

Jahan Hai Tu, Meri Hassi,
Meri Khushi, Meri Jaan...

He softly tells her to finish the kulfi but she goes out of the car and sits on the bonnet.. She waves her hand and tells him to come out.. He refuses but she gives a angry glare and he comes out.. Song finishes..

Jaane Naa Kahan Wo Duniya Hai,

Jaane Naa Wo Hai Bhi Ya Nahi,
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse,
Itni Khafa Nahi..

Kalpi gives him the last bite and clicks their selfie.. She looks at it and discards saying to give a nice smile.. He smiles again but can't hide the tears forming in her eyes.. Kalpi clicks the pic again and checks it when he snatches her mobile and tells her to sit in the car as they have to reach on time... Kalpi too smiles saying "I too want to reach as soon as possible.."

The car starts again.. Roy switches off the radio as he can't take the pain of romantic songs now,.. Kalpi dozes off while thinking about their future.. Roy drives while stealing glances at her face..

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It's morning.. Roy applies the brake which breaks Kalpi's dream.. She looks at sky and stretches her arms saying "Good morning.. u know such a sweet dream I was saying.. we were sitting...". She stops in the mid and thinks, "No I can't reveal my dream right now but will tell u after expressing my feelings.." She looks around and gets shocked on realizing that they are standing outside Raghav's office. She glare angrily at Roy..

Roy : Do not ask any questions Kalpi.. we are standing at right place.. this is the place where u belong.. And I think now u should listen to ur heart.. Do not think about anyone.. not even me.. just go and do what ur heart says.. I have called Raghav and he is waiting for u inside.. Just go and meet him..

Kalpi(stammers) : But.. I.. U..

Roy : I said do not worry about me.. we both know my feeling so it's better to accept it.. I love u.. I love u a lot.. N will always love u but that won't change the fact that we are only friends and ur heart belongs to Raghav.. So just go and live ur life.. Do not worry about dad, I will inform that u won't come for work as u have to attend Pakhi's marriage as well.. N I promise when u will return u will find ur friend at the airport.. We will always be the best friend and nothing will change in our life..

He goes out and takes out her bag.. Kalpi to steps out with tears in her eyes.. She stretches her hand to stop roy but words doesn't come out of her mouth.. She just stays back.. Roy gives her one last glance and drives off..

Kalpi(angrily) : Who gave u the right to decide on my behalf.. how could u do this to me..

she stands there with tears rolling down her cheeks.. She doesn't know whether to get angry on Roy for taking decision on her behalf or to feel happy to see Roy's love for her.. Raghav who was waiting for her impatiently come out of the office.. He looks at Kalpi standing there.. He runs towards her and hugs her.. Kalpi doesn't respond back.. She is too numb to feel anything..

Raghav : U came back Kalpi.. how are u.. where were u.. U dint remember me.. I am sorry Kalpi.. I am sorry for everything,.. I know what I did was unpardonable.. Punish me.. Slap me.. Do whatever u want but please do not leave me.. Talk to me.. I am dying to hear ur voice.. Speak up Kalpi plz say something...

Raghav breaks the hug to look at her face.. He sees tears all over her face.. He wipes them and hugs her again..

Raghav : do not need to say anything.. Ur tears are saying ur pain.. but now I will sort out everything.. Now u won't feel any pain.. I can see love in ur eyes..

Kalpi gets alert on this.. she breaks the hug and stares at Raghav angrily..

Kalpi : Yes.. there is love in my eyes.. lots of love but it's not for u but someone else.. I don't love u anymore.. I have moved on Raghav.. N these tears are not for u but him..

Raghav's can't believe his ears.. He feels his world fell apart in a second..

Raghav(amgrily) : No.. this can't be true.. u can't love someone else.. Raghav and Kalpana are made for each other and u can't leave me like this.. u can love me and only me.. U r my life.. my world.. I can't live without u.. I .. I..

Kalpi : Exactly Raghav.. u can't live without me.. u have all rights on me.. but what about me.. I am living without u for so many months but where were u.. u were busy in taking revenge.. Our relation was always about u.. It was always about ur happiness and ur priorities but what about me and my happiness.. Did u ever thought about that?? Can u imagine how I felt when u walked in front of me with another girl.. It was our wedding altar.. I was the bride waiting for my groom.. N my groom arrived but he arrived with another bride.. Did u realized how I felt..

Raghav : I know Kalpi.. It was biggest mistake of my life and I am still regretting but please do not punish me by leaving me.. I have come back to u.. I have divorced Pakhi and we can marry now..

Kalpi : There is a small correction Raghav.. U dint gave divorce but Pakhi asked it.. Else u would have married her for one year.. coz again it was about u..

Raghav : No Kalpi.. this is not true.. I was dying in that marriage and was about to leave Pakhi but.. Neways leave all that,... that was all past n I am ready to bear the punishment.. Punish me but tell me that u don't love anyone else n u just said all that for.. for.. U know Kalpi each day without u was a long year.. I have died several times in this few months.. I know what a big mistake I committed.. At every footstep I looked at the door in the hope that u would return some day.. please tell me that u r lying..

Kalpi : No Raghav.. I was not lying.. I love Roy..

Raghav : Roy.. u mean Rohit Oberoi.. how could u... U dint thought about me before falling in love..

Kalpi : Raghav it's love.. how can someone think before falling in love.. I dint want to love him but my heart dint listen to me..

Raghav : N what about my happiness Kalpi.. What about us..

Kalpi : There was no us in our relationship.,. It was only u.. It was only about ur happiness.. U know thats the difference between u and Roy.. he left me here.. He broke his heart just for my happiness.. He knew that he just have to ask me to marry him and out of gratitude I have accepted it but he chose my happiness and u.. u chose ur revenge over my happiness.. Till now u r worried about ur life.. I am sorry Raghav but I have given this heart to Roy and now I can't do anything.. But I want to tell u to move on.. Learn to live for others.. Do not use innocent people for ur selfish motives.. This life is too small to hate someone.. Live this life for love.. spread love and u will get one in return... When I meet u next I hope I will see a changed man and not this selfish and arrogant Raghav. Look Raghav.. I have come a long way from where I can't return.. I am not the same Kalpi who left the city but something have changed inside me.. I may not be the better person but I am the happier person now.. I love the way my life is going and in this I realized that our relationship never got time to evolve.. We are not made for each other.. I was always the submissive one and u the dominant one.. But now I have learnt to live my life on my conditions.. I have learned to fly and when i look back I do not find u anywhere.. but when I look at my side I see Roy supporting me.. So plz do not pull me back.. Let me live my life and u live urs.. Raghav u r a nice guy but u need to learn that world doesn't evolve around u.. For once.. forget that u r THE RAGHAV SINGHANIA and just live like Raghav.. u will find ur happiness..

Raghav nods in yes.. Tears are flowing from his eyes.. He has lost his love forever but he has realized his mistakes.. His heart wrenched on hearing that Kalpi doesn't love him but than he looks at himself and asked how could anyone love him.. He is the selfish arrogant and mean guy.. He vows to change himself and looks at the Kalpi for the last time.. but she runs back saying, "I have to stop Roy from boarding flight.. He can't leave me here..".. She goes to the road running and tries to stop a taxi but in vein.. She looks at her watch and cribs that she might miss the flight.. When a car stops in her front..

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P.S. : Please do not forget to tell me whether u will stay here to read my next FF or should I drop the idea.

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Regards
Vish
Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update..šŸ‘ raghav will come in that car isn't it??šŸ˜†

and i am here only not going anywhere...twitter pe bhi hoon šŸ˜‰

and yippee i am first šŸ‘šŸ˜†
Edited by Mihika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mihika

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amazing update..šŸ‘ raghav will come in that car isn't it??šŸ˜†

and i am here only not going anywhere...twitter pe bhi hoon šŸ˜‰

and yippee i am first šŸ‘šŸ˜†


Thanks Mihi.. I know sweetheart.. I am already following u on twitter.. but glad u r not leaving the forum.

Yep it's obvious.. Mana Raghav is in guest appearance in this FF but fir bhi let give him 2 parts at least..šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thanks Mihi.. I know sweetheart.. I am already following u on twitter.. but glad u r not leaving the forum.

Yep it's obvious.. Mana Raghav is in guest appearance in this FF but fir bhi let give him 2 parts at least..šŸ˜†

vip guest hai bhai give good treatmentšŸ˜†šŸ˜‰

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