No one can take my place....os updated

So here is the os..pls do comment and tell me how is it??you can also give negative comments!!!
Hello,today I am having time so an os..

No one can take my place!!!

Everyone was working in the kab and today the sponsors were to come to see there prototype..after knowing randhirs connection with the sponsors all of them thanked him..only three sponsors were to come today so everyone finished there work..and we're waiting in the lab for the sponsors..just then the sponsors came but wait a girl about there age wearing a black pencil skirt along with blue shirt tucked neatly came inside and passed a smile to us..we smiled back and then started our presentation !!! The sponsors were overwhelmed with their presentation and got very interested in being in association with the dream team so they walked our of the lab with Vardhan sir.. But wait that girl is walking towards us..no not us she walking towards randhir... Oh no!! She hugged him..
Sanyu(in mind)- bloody cheapster..aise koi chipakta hai Bala kisi anjaan ladke se..but wait randhir is also hugging her back...bloody hell they both our smiling..wait mujhe kya??
Randhir and the girl broke the hug and the girl said- hi I am naina..
We introduced ourselves and proceeded towards canteen..
Sanyu was damn jealous seeing randhir keeping his hand on her waist while walking..
Sanyu- kaustu randhir aur yeh itna chipak Kyu rahe hai??
Kaustu- hmm jaise made for each other ho!!
Sanyu- (in mind) kaustu yeh kya Bol Rahi ho!!friends tension kam karte hai yaa badate hai!!
They sat in the canteen.. And ordered themselves some food!!
Sanyu- naina how do u know randhir..and took a sip of water...
Naina - randhir and me dated in the last years of school..for 2 long years..sanyu nearly spitted out the water!!
Sanyu- what?????
Randhir- tum toh aise shock ho Rahi ho jaise main gay hui aur kisi ko date nahi kar sakta!!
Sanyu- got angry and told in mind then gay ban jao..mere ilawa kisi aur ko dekha na toh aankhe nikal dungi!! Naina- chalo guys I gotta go!! Randhir can u pls drop me??
Randhir- obviously ..
Everyone got up..and sanyu was just thinking how to stop them going together..
Sanyu- aaa!ouch mummy..
Randhir rushes to sanyu along with others..
Randhir- kya hua???dekh kar nahi Chal sakti..chalo medical room chalte hai..naina I am..
Before he could complete naina kissed on his cheek and bid good bye to eveyone.. Seeing her kissing randhir on his cheek sanyu shouted -aaa!!!!randhir and hugged him..randhir picked her up and went to medical room..and as usual doctor was not present ...sanyu told kaustu and parth to leave along with others!!
Sanyu- aaa!!! Randhir..
Randhir- sanyukta itna dard ho raha hai ???ruko dekhne do!!..
Sanyu-aa and keeps her hand on his shoulder..randhir mujhe nahi lagta ab main theek ho paungi!!( guys I hope u all know that she is doing acting but now it turns to overacting)
Randhir- sanyukta Ek dard se koi Marta nahi hai..
Sanyu- mujhe saas nahi aa Rahi hai!!!aaa!!!!!
Randhir- sanyukta dard hone ki wajah se saas mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha ..ruko main doctor ko phone karta hui..
Sanyu- nahi mujhe dawai khans se kuch theek nahi hoga..
Randhir(confused)- matlab..
Sanyu- mujhe saas nahi aa Rahi toh mujhe saas do !!
Randhir- ruko main pump dhoondta huin!!!and was about to go but sanyu shouts again...
Sanyu- nahii!! Itna time nahi hai..kuch aur socho.. Socho randhir..aaa!!!
Randhir- sanyu ruko main kuch sochna hui..tum ruko..
Sanyu- randhir aa sabse pehle tum room ka darwaza band kar do Bohot hawa aa Rahi hai Bohot thand lag Rahi hai!!
Randhir rushes and closes the door..and comes back..
Sanyu- socho na jaldi...main marr jaungi!!!plsss..aaa!!!!
Randhir- kya karu main..
Sanyu- mujhe thand bhi lag Rahi hai( giving more hints)
Randhir- huh ab thand lag rahai hai..randhir takes the blanket and cover sanyukta with it and lays her on bed.. Sanyu acts as if she faints and controls her breath..randhir checks her breathing rate..
Randhir- oh shit..ab main kya karu????
Randhir brings his mouth close to her and gives mouth to mouth breath..sanyu felt his lips on her and her hands automatically moved up on his head and pulled him closer..randhir feels her hands and gets with a jerk and says- thank god tum theek ho!!!
Sanyu (frustrated)-in mind yaar kya hai yeh waise toh rank no1 banta firta hai !!!and sanyu again shouts -aaa!!! And again faint..(acting)
Now randhir realizes that she is acting..now he also tries to make her confess..
Randhir- oh shit !!yeh toh fir behosh ho gayi..(acting ) meri mouth to mouth breathe se kuch nahi hua..sameer ko Bulatw hui..sanyu listens hima dn is shocked and curses him and says- aaa!!! Randhir mujhe saas nahi aa Rahi main marr jaongi kuch Karoo..plss tum kuch bhi kuch bhi kar sakte ho..main complain nahi Karogi..
Randhir- tension Matt ko sameer ko aane Mein time lagega parth ko Bulata huin.. Sanyu gets up with a jerk and pulls randhir by his collars down and kisses him passionately...randhir also gave in..
They broke apart..sanyu- aise dete hai mouth to mouth breath..
Randhir chuckles and says tum toh Marne waali thi..
Sanyu- ab main zinda hui na Khush raho!!and abhi bhi main Beemaar huin..mujhe thand lagi hai..
Randhir smiles understanding what she means...- tumhe abhi bhi thand lag Rahi hai ruko main aur chador lekar aata hui..sanyu gets up from the bed and pulls randhir closer and then starts making circles around his shirt buttons..
Sanyu - chadar laane Mein Bohot time lagega!!
Randhir- aur yaha par Karne Mein bhi him Pakde jaayenge.. And chuckles..
Sanyu- toh theek hai 8 pm in store room Mera dard shruru hoga theek hai doctor bye..and Haan I love you..
Randhir- I love you too..
Sanyu- and Haan no one can take my place


Janavi..
Pls read my ff http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4092390&TPN=23&#p110681742

Pls read an Unres them soon and others pls comment..although I was not happy but still I posted..

Its vry sweet ..

Nyc update it was funny n naughty keep wrtng dear 😊

Hey! Janavi