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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Wow

I just read it

This was brilliant

Superb work

Totally loved it

Awesome job

Sandhir were so perfectly portrayed

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winchesters

@winchesters

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: --Mahima--
Wow

I just read it

This was brilliant

Superb work

Totally loved it

Awesome job

Sandhir were so perfectly portrayed

Thank u mahima! 😊

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

I told you I'm gonna read all ur works now! Ystday it seems, u were on a posting spree xP

Now dis is the last warning ur getting! Next time se if I'm not the first one to b informed about ur post...ur gonna b dead xP

Res for now, but must say that I loved some of the phrases aka hilarious lines u used which I shall mention in an extensive comment as soon as I'm online from lappy xD

-----Unres----------

I am back!

Okay say I have one word for this OS: WOW!

No seriously..I mean it'd be so much fun to watch SH if this update was aired xP

Tightening his hold and looking straight into her eyes, he said,"Kyunki tum par sirf mera haq hai! You are my developed machine! My discovery! I have a copyright over u! Only i can use u, break u, repair u, keep u..and most importantly, u work at ur best efficiency only when i run u!"

^^That is my favorite paragraph xD

You work at ur best efficiency only when I run u...OMG!

Your brain does wonders. What lovely words u have used to make ur sentences come out as hilarious xP

I'm officially stalking you from now on.

Suddenly his expressions changed from soft to "I am in thinking process" to irritation and finally to anger, looking at which sanyukta bursted into fits of laughter!

^^Another favorite part of mine, in the OS xD

Expression chage----So true with Randhir!

''I am in thinking process'' expression..ROFL!

I'm awestruck by the way, you bring the hilarious tinge to your works along with the emotional portrayal of either character's feelings!

Really good work. Keep writing xD

Lots of love,

And admiration xP

Tanya

Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago