Future Abhigya Scenes

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Way back when I was in the GHSP forums, and was extremely active, we used to have a thread in which everyone shared a scene that they wished to see in the show for their favorite couple.
I have noticed here that more then actual discussions on the show there are more fanfics, OSs, SSs, ect...actually to tell you all the truth I enjoy reading those then watching the show at times because the MU track is really baseless and irritating! I am sure most of us are still watchin the show because we want to see the guilty Abhi, we want to see the story after the truth comes out, and most importantly, Shabbir and Sriti are awesome together and have great chemistry! Their chemistry is the only USP in my opinion that I believe is holding the show together in some way or another.

So, come on guys are there ANY short scenes that you would like to see on Pragya and Abhi as they progress on with their married life? Lets see how many scenes everyone can come up with! There soo many things i am sure you would all like to see, and hopefully may even see similar scenes on screen. This way our time will pass, and before we know it, the phase of ABhigya we are all waiting for will come 😛.

This is where i start off with a short scene:
At the end of the party, Pragya was extremely tired and achy. After all, Abhi had dropped her twice today. She paced around in anger, wishing she can just be herself and shout, but her mom's face came up in her mind and she managed to calm down.

But there had to be a way to show that Abhi that she will not let him torture her. She looked in the mirror expressionless, taking off her jewelry and hiding the severe pain on her back. She remembered how harsh abhi was to her when she was whelping in pain this morning. Chashmish chashmish kept ringing in her ears like a constant play button going off, over and over again.

Yes I am a chashmish she thought, but you abhi, you are stupid, selfish, and a total brainless fool! He is a Ghadha, that is right, the biggest ghadha on this planet!! If he can call me chashmish, then I can call him a Ghadha! 😡

Suddenly she smirked a little, and something was going on in her mind.

***Abhi Scene***

He touched his head due to a little headache, and he certainly dreaded going in that room to see that chashmish, he howled to himself as he made his way up the stairs. He walked towards the door and noticed it was dark.

Abhi says to himself: Looks like that geek has fallen asleep, thank god, at least i won't have to see her face!

He opened the door, and immediately felt the ground on his back. The lights were flicked on, and he was there on the floor whelping in pain. Pragya looked at him gently smiling and softly said to him...

"That was 1 fall, 4 more to go." Abhi watched her walk away to the balcony to sleep.

He was left shocked, and couldn't react as it all happened too fast.

I really want Abhi to fall on his ass, hard for the amount of times he has dropped that poor girl! For the amount of times he has embarrassed her in front of everyone. Also i want her to give him a name, that describes how dumb he is, hence the name Ghadha!

Fingers crossed i get people to looked at this post some how...second time i have posted something here😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting idea...the way you have written your scene it's like a mini-ficlet or a drabble. Very good btw!!! Wicked naughty Pragya getting fair revenge on Abhi 😆 And thanks for posting, always good to have more members active here 😊

I dunno if I really think this way? When I imagine things I want to happen, I don't dare dream they'll be in the show, I consider them sort of an alternate universe wish...I think that's the impulse behind a lot of the recent OS and SS posts too. We don't have any really long FF posts yet! No one is invested in a long-ride alternate story yet, maybe because we're still waiting to see how far the show goes with this MU.

I agree it would be great if there were more posts discussing the show...

Hmmm so a scene I hope to see in the near future is any little hint at a future track where Abhi shows Pragya how to live in the moment and enjoy life as it is. Eg it's late night and Abhi has ordered in some junk food because he missed dinner while on a shoot. Maybe it's pizza, chinese, I dunno, but it's super-delicious and made by the best restaurant in the city, it's just not fine gourmet or traditional wholesome food. Pragya is a bit annoyed because she just wants to go to sleep and Abhi's food smells distracting and yummy. Abhi teases her and says he won't share, but then Pragya gives him a mini-lecture on unhealthy habits, eating at the wrong time, eating junk food etc, and Abhi changes his mind about sharing. Somehow he convinces her to try some...and she really loves it and has to take back her words, but instead of saying she was wrong she just eats more and gives him a slant look with her eyes; the scene fades as she's blissfully enjoying the food and he's giving a sort of triumphant/amused smirk because for once he scored a point against her... something silly and sweet, as opposed to all the silly and bitter that the show gives us nowadays! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi, yes I doubt we would see some of the scenes... But nothing wrong in dreaming right? Lol

Also your idea is superb, it would be great to see abhi loosening Pragya up a bit. Give her some fun in her life apart from just book adventures, but actually live some of the adventures in reality.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved your idea of a scene where tit for tat, Pragya makes Abhi fall hard on his behind. CVs seriously need to stop him dropping her, it has been one too many a time :( I would be happy if she made him fall at least once. Four times and I would be ecstatic.

I want her to yank his hair, do something to hurt him physically like he did today when twisting her arm. She can offer him a head massage in front of daadi cos of his headache and instead of massaging gently, she should pull at his hair. It would soothe ruffled feathers to see him act as if he was enjoying the maalish for Daadi's sake whilst he was in pain.
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After a week of knowing Purab and Bulbul's truth, abhi lightened up a bit. Pragya decided to join her college again, so she can teach and keep her mind off of what was yet to come. It was obvious that Abhi was going to leave her sooner or later and she had to continue her old routine.
She quickly woke up and did her usual morning prayers, and was out the door trying to avoid Abhi. Lately he only stared at her and it annoyed her because she wouldn't know when he would burst. The thought of her mom would come in her mind, and the thought of him hurting Bulbul haunted her. She walked silently towards a bus stop with all kinds of thoughts running through her mind when suddenly Abhi showed up with his car.

He rolled the window and said "you are Abhi the rockstar's wife, there is no need for you to take the bus," he looked away waiting for her to sit in the car, but to his surprise she kept walking towards her stop. He got out of the car and quickly said " Pragya get in the car, I will drop you."

Pragya annoyingly retorted back "look, you don't have to do me any favor...let me continue to live my life in simplicity, as it is this marriage will soon end just like u wanted, so please just let me be!"

Abhi looked at Pragya about to say something when the crowd rushed to him for autographs, Pragya slowly slipped away and climbed onto her bus that had arrived.
Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 11 years ago
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Pragya's hand was covered with beautiful Mehendi for Aaliya's wedding.
She sat in silence in her balcony staring at the stars, recalling her marriage with Abhi, no matter how much she tried not to her eyes welled up with tears.

This moon and these stars were a witness to her miseries, she silently talked to them as though they were her life long friends.
It was dinner time, and yes she was hungry but didn't know how she would eat. Luckily Daadi had arrived with a plate full of food as Daadi gave her a warm smile Pragya for a while forgot her sorrows.

Dadi sweetly said "Pragya come on beta you have to eat, let me feed you" Pragya smiled as dadi fed her. Just when dadi was about to feed her a second bite, she was called for some work.

Dadi knew that her daughter in law was hungry so first she dragged Abhi in.

Daadi teasingly said " come in you fool Pragya has henna on can't you have some common sense and feed her? Is this your love for your kishmish?

Abhi quickly responded "dadi I don't have time to...

Dadi bit back " chup, not one word feed Pragya now!"

Abhi rolled his eyes annoyed and ready to scream...picked up some roti and shoved the piece in her mouth.

Poor Pragya smiled at Dadi showing her happiness behind the true reality... Abhi again picked up another piece and shoved it in her mouth, but this time she bit him!!

Abhi screamed "ouch"

Pragya innocently apologized as dadi shook her head once again mistaking this as their love for each other.
Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

Pragya's hand was covered with beautiful Mehendi for Aaliya's wedding.

She sat in silence in her balcony staring at the stars, recalling her marriage with Abhi, no matter how much she tried not to her eyes welled up with tears.

This moon and these stars were a witness to her miseries, she silently talked to them as though they were her life long friends.
It was dinner time, and yes she was hungry but didn't know how she would eat. Luckily Daadi had arrived with a plate full of food as Daadi gave her a warm smile Pragya for a while forgot her sorrows.

Dadi sweetly said "Pragya come on beta you have to eat, let me feed you" Pragya smiled as dadi fed her. Just when dadi was about to feed her a second bite, she was called for some work.

Dadi knew that her daughter in law was hungry so first she dragged Abhi in.

Daadi teasingly said " come in you fool Pragya has henna on can't you have some common sense and feed her? Is this your love for your kishmish?

Abhi quickly responded "dadi I don't have time to...

Dadi bit back " chup, not one word feed Pragya now!"

Abhi rolled his eyes annoyed and ready to scream...picked up some roti and shoved the piece in her mouth.

Poor Pragya smiled at Dadi showing her happiness behind the true reality... Abhi again picked up another piece and shoved it in her mouth, but this time she bit him!!

Abhi screamed "ouch"

Pragya innocently apologized as dadi shook her head once again mistaking this as their love for each other.



Lol, that would be good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@mysterygurl - lovely scenes!! i really like how pragya is able to slip away and avoid the ride, it seems like something that could happen in this early stage of their relationship. and the mehendi one was just perfect!!! LOL at her biting him! you'll notice that I have Daadi behaving a bit similarly in the scene below, but I had not yet read your scene when I wrote her that way 😆

@soapwatcher LOL great idea about the head massage!!! 🤣 That would be perfect fair payback!!! Even better if Daadi asks her to do it...! I tried to write that but it came out a bit differently...and a bit long...😛 Love your version of the scene though, wish I could've elaborated on that!! Here's my version:

Abhi walked in after a long day working with sponsors, doing shoots and rehearsals. He saw Daadi, Taiji and Tauji sitting in the living room. Mitali and Raj came in to join them.

Abhi went and sat with his family, collapsing on the sofa with a heavy sigh.

"Arre beta, you look so tired!" Daadi said.

"Hanh, woh, we were practicing stunts today. I am feeling very achy." Abhi said, rubbing the back of his neck.

"Oh, then you should have a massage, Daadi said brightly. She saw Pragya and Aaliya coming from opposite sides of the house. "Pragya bahu!"

"Ji Daadi?" Pragya came up to them. She gave Taiji the address book she had been sent to retrieve. Taiji loved asking Pragya to do little tasks that gave Pragya minor inconveniences like having to trek up two floors and to the other corner of the house to get an address book with phone numbers that Taiji didn't really even need until the next day.

"Come and give Abhi a head message. He is so tired, poor dear." Daadi waved her hand towards Abhi, inviting Pragya to observe his exhaustion.

"What, me?" Pragya exclaimed, her eyes widening in alarm. "Daadi, I don't think -"

"No, no, Daadi," Aaliya interrupted quickly. "You should do bhai's massage, like always. Aapke haanthon mein jadoo hain na?" she said in her fake syrupy sweet voice.

"I don't need a massage," Abhi added, glaring at Pragya while Daadi was looking at Aaliya.

"Chup kar!" Daadi retorted. "Abhi is married now. It is his wife who can do magic for him now."

Pragya and Abhi each internally winced at this remark, for different reasons, but only the slightest hint of their disgust crossed their faces.

"Go now, beta," Daadi said to Pragya. "Can't you see he is in pain?"

Pragya avoided looking at Abhi. "Umm, not here Daadi, let's -"

"Stop wasting time bahu! Nothing to be shy about, we are all family here." Taiji, Tauji and Mitali were sending each other hidden looks of amusement. Raj just seemed bored and ever patient as usual.

Pragya tried to convince Daadi that it was not a good idea, and Abhi insisted again that he was fine. But neither of them succeeded, and before Abhi could get up and walk away, Daadi had cajoled Pragya into sitting with Abhi.

"Very good beta. Abhi, now put your head in bahu's lap."

"Daadi!" they both exclaimed in horror. Pragya was so embarrassed she didn't know where to look, while Abhi was starting to have very mean thoughts about his beloved grandmother.

"Go on!" Daadi said, impervious to their objections.

Muttering about all the unceasing hassles in his life, Abhi shifted position. He looked up at Pragya and said in a low voice, "Don't get any ideas Chashmish. Just do what Daadi said."

Pragya rolled her eyes and set her hands to his temples. She tried to ignore the bizarre sensation of having his head on her thigh, and that too in front of the whole family. She tentatively began rubbing his forehead.

"You call that a massage?" Abhi taunted, for her ears only.

"I'd really rather not be touching you," Pragya whispered back in an angry undertone.

"Don't forget his hair," Daadi said. Then she engaged Taiji and Tauji in conversation. Aaliya had walked away with a resigned shrug of her shoulders, she couldn't do anything more to rescue her Bhai for the moment.

"Don't touch my hair," Abhi hissed, in the same way as he said "Don't touch my pillow" and "Don't touch my collar" at other times.

Pragya scowled at him briefly. "As if I could touch your hair," she answered under her breath. "What is all this gunk they put on it?" She poked at the hair brushed to the edge of Abhi's forehead. It was crusted solid with hair gel.

"Hey!" Abhi yelped. Immediately, Abhi and Pragya felt all eyes on them.

Pragya answered for Abhi. "Woh, kuch nahin Daadi, I just hit a good spot," she said sweetly, smirking down at Abhi after Daadi nodded her acceptance of this explanation.

"Just let bahu help you, beta," Daadi said to Abhi.

"Hanh, just help her torture me," Abhi muttered. To Pragya he said, "My hair is a work of art. My stylist spent an hour setting it like this. But you wouldn't understand."

"Right," Pragya said agreeably. His use of the word 'torture' gave her a new idea. She trailed her fingers further into his hair. When she finally found a less-gelled portion, she scraped her fingers against his scalp.

Abhi flinched, but managed not to shout out. "Watch it, Chashmish!" he warned Pragya. "Just make this fast, so Daadi will be happy and we can both leave."

"But what kind of wife would I be if I didn't give my husband a full, proper head massage?" Pragya replied with a dangerous grin.

"Chashmish, don't - OW!" Abhi tried to get off of Pragya's lap. Daadi or no Daadi, he was not going to just lie there and let the Chashmish pull his hair like a schoolyard bully. However, she held him down with just the gentle pressure of her hands...and the taunting look in her eyes that reminded him that they were on display.

"Ab kya hua?" Daadi demanded.

"Hanh, ab kya hua?" Pragya murmured to Abhi.

Abhi sent her a death glare with his eyes. "N-nothing Daadi. She's just so good at finding sore spots," he lied.

Then for the next 10 minutes, Abhi had to continue to endure Pragya's hands on his head. Every now and then she gave his hair a sharp tug or poked her fingers harshly against his skull, but he had to bear it in silence...while trying not to enjoy an otherwise surprisingly comfortable head massage. He tried to busy his mind with ideas of how to make the Chashmish pay for this.

For her part, Pragya enjoyed the small opportunity for revenge. Now if only she could find a way to drop him from her lap onto the floor without looking bad in front of Daadi...
Edited by -mina- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@mina wow u write very beautifully :) the way you describe even the smallest details, lovely scene.
@Soapwatcher1 lovely suggestions! Please do come back with more ideas :)!

To all the likers, come on and join us! Ur scene doesn't have to be a paragraph or page, even three sentences describing a scene will do!

How about even a simple necklace scene? Pragya does have beautiful long hair...imagine not being able to put on a necklace because of that. She struggles away trying to latch her necklace while Abhi is watching with annoyance, and finally marches towards her and silently puts the necklace, but gives her a very irritated look., and walks away.


Or a continuation of the engagement scenes

Both abhi and Pragya enter the room glaring at each other. Both wanted to argue and share a few taunts here and there, but they were too tired due to the engagement preparations. Abhi went straight into the bathroom, and Pragya walked straight towards her jewelry boxes to put her earrings and neclace away. Finally she started to take off her bangles one by one, her wrists were bruised due to Abhi's harsh way of making her wear the kangans her cousin daadi's gifted her.

Abhi from the back noticed her wince in pain and saw the marks. He had a flashback of the kangan scene and realized he did that. He closed his eyes in anger, and said to himself "this kishmish, I mean chasmish has turned me into a monster!" He looked away trying not to feel bad or any guilt.
Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Daadi wants to take Abhi and Pragya to a trip to a temple with her.
Abhi very reluctantly agrees, as a) it's God and b) he had to miss meeting Tannu yet again.

It's a few hours of journey in the car.

They all sit in the back row, Daadi-Pragya-Abhi.

Daadi is like there is so place for me and makes Pragya sit almost sticking to Abhi!!😆

Both Abhi and Pragya act uncomfortable and all.

A couple of hours later into the journey, Daadi is fast asleep and snoring. Pragya too is sleepy. She is trying hard to keep herself awake. But eventually her head ends up on his shoulder.

He tries to move her head off, but she falls back. He gives away eventually. But he doesn't understand why he just feels nice about it. He removes her glasses complaining they are poking his chest and hangs them on his T shirt.

Daadi's snores work as lullaby for Abhi. He ends up dozing off too and his head is right on Pragya's. A bit later, the car breaks suddenly to avoid hitting a dog waking Pragya and Daadi up. Pragya feels shy as well as annoyed realizing she is so close to Abhi and she tries to move away. But that ends up with Abhi's head falling on her lap!

Daadi looks at a baby like Abhi in sleep and smiles. She tells Pragya that he still sleeps the same way he used to when he was a 2 year old, the time his parents died and she used to put him to sleep. Pragya feels bad about him losing his parents at such a tender age. Daadi gets emotional and caresses Abhi's head blessing him.

Pragya can't help running her fingers through his hair. Abhi just sleeps so much better with that. After a while, Pragya is trying to find her glasses and sees that it's in Abhi's T shirt. She tries to get them but Abhi ends up holding her hand in his sleep. Pragya can't do anything and just stays like that. Daadi smiles at both of them and prays for them.

Car stops at its destination and Daadi gets out along with the driver saying she will buy flowers and fruits to offer the Deities. A minute later Abhi wakes up from his sleep and *Allah Waria* plays as his eyes meet Pragya's. But a moment later he just gets up and walks out of the car not believing himself to have ended up sleeping in her lap. Pragya follows him asking for her chashma.
Edited by -Tia- - 11 years ago

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