Hi friends. I thought of writing a story of love and only love. I just want to write the story for my satisfaction, though; I want your support and comments too. So I would like to have feedback about the prologue which follows below and permission to proceed if u guys like it. And it's my request for you guys to give your honest comments.
I don't know how many of you know me. But now I wish to make more friends.
Here it goes...
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Equations of Love
Prologue:
Love is the need of life, its heaven on the earth that every person is in search of. Some succeed discovering their real happiness and some fails. Not everyone can feel the warmth of love throughout their life. Love is infinitely spread all over like air, its everywhere and embraces every human at least once in his life time. But unlike air it is not handy; it's not at constant supply till our last breath. Is love constant? Immortal?, elevated by time?, eternal?, long-lasting?,. Okay let's find answers for the above questions by ourselves by going deep into love study, not by trial and error method, but by analyzing every cell of love in adverse human being get our universal equations for love and conclude the answers,
Here goes the story of two souls who are diverse in many things except love. They both are contradicting each other in mentality, nature, behavior yet born to be united as one and are connected by hearts. Fate plays its own fair games to get our two strong headed souls as one whole grain.
They both have the potential to love unconditionally, beyond their lives, to care for each other always even when their shadow fails to follow them.
One believes in himself and never wants trust people when it is pertaining to love. He wants which is eternal, unconditional, long-lasting and substantial. Hence he denies showing his love and has built huge lead walls around him to block the penetrations of radiations called feelings in and out of his heart. According to him, the love what he except is not there on earth, may be the true love which he wants to feel is imaginary as God. His one and only best friend from his childhood is his angel (I mean our angel of the story), who is unaware of her whereabouts and have only her childhood photo.
On the other side our angel is composed of love. Though people fail to understand her, she only knows to give love. Wherever she is, atmosphere always lightens, from chaos to happiness around. She wants to live life completely, shower everyone with love forgetting her own pain. For her once love happened, never ends; maybe she has never halted her love for anyone or allowed any situation /person to stop her loving.
Now the journey of love starts. Let's see how our angel achieves her success in the battlefield of love. Yes war of love, where people forget or stop or continue their love for their soul mates, where they get lost in responsibilities or not understand each other's differences. Love is not like nuclear fission, once bombarded with neutron can continue its fission chain, but it must blossom as a fresh flower each and every day and happiness must be persisting like the fragrance of the flower for the day.
Sorry for any spelling and grammatical mistakes...
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