Ragna ff: Equations of love; prologue & character sketch

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Hi friends. I thought of writing a story of love and only love. I just want to write the story for my satisfaction, though; I want your support and comments too. So I would like to have feedback about the prologue which follows below and permission to proceed if u guys like it. And it's my request for you guys to give your honest comments.

I don't know how many of you know me. But now I wish to make more friends.

Here it goes...

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Equations of Love

Prologue:

Love is the need of life, its heaven on the earth that every person is in search of. Some succeed discovering their real happiness and some fails. Not everyone can feel the warmth of love throughout their life. Love is infinitely spread all over like air, its everywhere and embraces every human at least once in his life time. But unlike air it is not handy; it's not at constant supply till our last breath. Is love constant? Immortal?, elevated by time?, eternal?, long-lasting?,. Okay let's find answers for the above questions by ourselves by going deep into love study, not by trial and error method, but by analyzing every cell of love in adverse human being get our universal equations for love and conclude the answers,

Here goes the story of two souls who are diverse in many things except love. They both are contradicting each other in mentality, nature, behavior yet born to be united as one and are connected by hearts. Fate plays its own fair games to get our two strong headed souls as one whole grain.

They both have the potential to love unconditionally, beyond their lives, to care for each other always even when their shadow fails to follow them.

One believes in himself and never wants trust people when it is pertaining to love. He wants which is eternal, unconditional, long-lasting and substantial. Hence he denies showing his love and has built huge lead walls around him to block the penetrations of radiations called feelings in and out of his heart. According to him, the love what he except is not there on earth, may be the true love which he wants to feel is imaginary as God. His one and only best friend from his childhood is his angel (I mean our angel of the story), who is unaware of her whereabouts and have only her childhood photo.

On the other side our angel is composed of love. Though people fail to understand her, she only knows to give love. Wherever she is, atmosphere always lightens, from chaos to happiness around. She wants to live life completely, shower everyone with love forgetting her own pain. For her once love happened, never ends; maybe she has never halted her love for anyone or allowed any situation /person to stop her loving.

Now the journey of love starts. Let's see how our angel achieves her success in the battlefield of love. Yes war of love, where people forget or stop or continue their love for their soul mates, where they get lost in responsibilities or not understand each other's differences. Love is not like nuclear fission, once bombarded with neutron can continue its fission chain, but it must blossom as a fresh flower each and every day and happiness must be persisting like the fragrance of the flower for the day.

Sorry for any spelling and grammatical mistakes...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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😊Hey, its nice please continue

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Oye Meena want to make more new friends? Am the old Mimi came to knock at ur door.. Equations of love.. Uff!! From where do u get such heart mesmerizing names..Am dumbfounded..I mean dumbstricken.. Hope u 'll not get angry as m interfering in the cmmnts of ur new friends.. Hope u remember me and love me as be4..Love u nd cont soon.. Otherwise u know m good in eating brains😆
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Pls update soon dear waiting for ur update
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luv it honey..touch my soul...plz continue soon...🤗
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Originally posted by: mi_cheeky_me...

Oye Meena want to make more new friends? Am the old Mimi came to knock at ur door.. Equations of love.. Uff!! From where do u get such heart mesmerizing names..Am dumbfounded..I mean dumbstricken.. Hope u 'll not get angry as m interfering in the cmmnts of ur new friends.. Hope u remember me and love me as be4..Love u nd cont soon.. Otherwise u know m good in eating brains😆

Urs
Mimi


How can i forget u mimi?
when i myself mad of ur stories n ur lovable comments..
now my next work is to resume ur story from where i have stopped.
i m very busy these days hence no time to read stories n i dnt evn have time watch ema..
i hv really missed ur updates..going to catch them soon..
u are lovable sweetheart so love u mimi😛😊
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Character Sketch:

Raghav Singhania:

Raghav Singhania is son and successor of the business tycoon Rajiv Singhania and elegant Sanghavi Singhania. It's very clear that Raghav is not only amalgamation of two souls but also their names. Raghav=Ra (from dad Rajiv) and ghav (from mom Sanghavi). He pretends to be arrogant, self-centered, callous, reserved and morose. But in real he has heart which is unseen, as precious as diamond; every girl will love the child in him, His humanity, his love in reserve for pure soul, our angel.

Kalpana Jadhav:

Kalpana, daughter of Vittal Jadhav and Kamla Jadhav, combined package of beauty and love. People love to be round her. She is the girl; every man would love to have as their best friend, lover and wife. She is highly talented in every field or at least has the basic knowledge on all sorts of things; this makes her unique from others. She embodies humbleness, politeness, innocence, smartness, simplicity, fun loving and creativity. She is pure like water flowing in stream.

Rajiv Singhania:

Rajiv, founder of Singhania group of companies and hold quarter percent share of the company. He is man of perfection; he maintains his living place as museum rather than a sweet home. He lives alone in huge bungalow, covering the vast area in the main region of the Germany. He is the renowned businessman in Europe, basically from Indian background. He has a series of different companies all over Europe. Love his son Raghav more than anything on world.

Sanghavi Singhania:

Sanghavi, wife of Rajiv Singhania, loves creativity, holds quarter percent share of Singhania group of companies. She lives in Paris with her friend Rancho Mehta. Her love for her son Raghav is like her heartbeat. She likes to be in her own boundaries, hardworking, simple and humble woman.

Vittal Jadhav:

Vittal Jadhav is father of Kalpana and Prashanth. He owns textile industries, the KPJ textiles, in main cities all over India. Famous public figure, honest businessman, serve the customers with great pleasure beyond making only profits, respects every common man he come across, loves his wife but never confessed it and most importantly best father.

Kamla Jadhav:

Kamla is Vittals' wife and mother of Kalpana and Prashanth. She is simple and innocent housewife, but strength of her husband, handle with any pain and gets solution for every problem and makes life easy. Her husband and children are her world; can do anything to keep them safe but will never support them when they are wrong.

Prashanth Jadhav:

Prashanth is baptized as "pakhya" by his parents. He is the man of self-respect, broadminded and loves his family, especially his sweet sister "kalpu", that's what he call her as. Handles his dad's business and contribute in extending the branches in small towns and villages to make the life of those people who live there, make easy.

Rancho Mehta:

Rancho is friend of Sanghavi from their college days and lives with her in Paris from past 12 years. She is common friend of both Rajiv and Sanghavi. She is unmarried, but never regretted her decision of being single. She loves kid and hence organizes orphanage for kids in Paris, Germany, Singapore and India. She loves Raghav and takes care of him like her own child.

Disclaimer:

This is a fan fiction with characters of Ema along with author's creativity. Characters may be added further to precede the story. Some of the characters will my imagination. If any discomfort with the story please let me know.

Edited by meena.mva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful prologue and awesome CS😛👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting...Nice CS...continue soon😳
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Hey Meena It's so great to see you back with a new story! I really missed you!
And regarding the prologue and the character sketch, I find this story so intriguing, I wouldn't mind reading more of it!
Please Please Please Please Please continue soon!

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